Melancholy Life (Track Redone) - MeganONeill

24th Jul 2011 04:14 - 15 years ago
Description : Track is re-done, changed up a bit, took critiques to consideration and recreated it a bit, chopped it up, and tried to make it flow better. Hope you like it!

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give MeganONeill some feedback.

madeen
madeen 7th Nov 2011 02:44 - 14 years ago
I really like the seperate parts of this track and i really, really love your singing (its really different), though every different part of this sounds like it really should be a seperate song rather than a huge mashup of sounds, when i heard the music box intro i was like "This is gonna be so sick" and then i was kinda dissapointed when it cut to the guitar. Good try really, i was really hoping for more music box! if you have a link to that loop id love to use it for something
Perhaps we could collaborate on something?
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied 27th Nov 2011 - 14 years ago
Hey there! thanks for the critique, i get some of the same thoughts for this, track. it's pretty old, one of my firsts in this category, and I've definitely been working on that , I can drop you an email and send you the music box tune if you'd like. My email is on my profile. Let me know via email if you still want it and also email me if you'd like to collaborate. Thanks! :)
thymeandlime
thymeandlime 28th Jul 2011 20:01 - 15 years ago
hey jda great intro really nice track i think turn your voice up that is making the track along with the music box sample, it sounds like you have a great voice would love to here it on your next track! great work
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thank you!
bbelle
bbelle 24th Jul 2011 19:00 - 15 years ago
The beginning was great but you lost me as the song went on. The song needs quantization badly. You sound like you have a really nice voice and you need to amp up the vocals.
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
okay, thank you for the critique, I'll take it into consideration!
retronical
retronical 24th Jul 2011 18:04 - 15 years ago
i hear a really nice voicing. like the direction with the guitar and am thinking a Paul Van Dyk style dance track with some acoustic. keep at it
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you!!
NeonStrawberry
NeonStrawberry 24th Jul 2011 17:24 - 15 years ago
The melody is super, appeals to me a lot. I'd add more thickness to the vocals or just volume, but its all together beautiful, and when the drop comes its wild. A well put together, engaging track but my ears lack depth, perhaps a layer or two of something to accenturate what you got going here would constitute for all the tips i can give. The mixing of the hip hopish break with the housy feel is well done -really captivating. Nevertheless I'd love to hear more meat to it, its well done, keep it up.
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you! and I'll take that critique to heart and see what I can do! Singing obviously is more of my strongpoint than making music haha! Thanks again!
TaraToxic
TaraToxic 24th Jul 2011 17:08 - 15 years ago
i looooooooooove the intro! made them hairs stand up!
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you!!

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