Girl In Indiana - ImproveWithError

Musically the song is awesome. (Neil young like). Mixing wise it could use a slightly different touch. The guitars are well panned, but I think there could be a bit more stereo seperation or widening. I agree with static about the kick. (maybe eq the kick by lowering the mid range) I think with the vocals I would double them with a bit of chorus for strength. But as a song this song is beautiful.
Cru

This is done really nicely with lots of good taste....thanks for sharing!

Compliments______Orlando

i really eff with this

Hi. This isn't really my type of vocal song but the music is well made and arranged so I'll focus on that instead.

The drums are good and effective but I'm not that keen on your kick drum. Not that big a deal - I'd just swap it out for another. Maybe it's a bit "too rock", just not quite a suitable timbre for this track.

Nice little fading in intro with some harmonic beauty before the gently strummed guitar arrives. Then lead electric work is effective before the first verse. Piano also sounds and I think there's probably also a cello so quite a full arrangement within 20 or so seconds.

Left panning on the hat adds a good stereo spectrum.

The lead guitar breaks work really and then the same sort of playing is sat well behind your vocal. No clash at all. The whole thing seems well mixed. Acoustic guitar well recorded.

Good length and a gentle end with a bit more high string work.

Overall: fine work and my only gripe is with that kick drum. But keep it if you really like it.

Glad you got around to doing this one Kyle...nice job on the lyrics & delivery...love the acoustic accompaniment & the little electric guitar bit work a treat in support...fantastic bit of musical work...fav....Ed

Kyle,
Fav'd. This could be a classic dude! You have a gift with your voice and I can hear you have really been practising that guitar. I am sharing this to my Facebook page if it works from Looperman.
Mark.

P.S. You should be very happy with this one brother.
M.

You always have great stuff, IWE. I like the emotion you carry in your words man. Beautiful piece of art here, no critiques I can offer at the moment.

ER

I smell real music here...very cool and moody track Kyle...the small. lead guitar's harmonies like Frusciante's from RHCP...grilliant...awesome melodies with a bit Tom Petty feeling...hope, it's no problem, I mentioned these names...:-)

Thanx for sharing, instant fav!

Danke