Listen To Girl In Indiana Acoustic Song By ImproveWithError At Looperman.com

28th Apr 2015 14:47 - 10 years ago
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Description : I wrote this song about 8 years ago, I just now got around to recording it. If you like it feel free to download it. Thanks for listening!

Kyle

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

crucethus
crucethus 15th Jun 2015 21:17 - 10 years ago
Musically the song is awesome. (Neil young like). Mixing wise it could use a slightly different touch. The guitars are well panned, but I think there could be a bit more stereo seperation or widening. I agree with static about the kick. (maybe eq the kick by lowering the mid range) I think with the vocals I would double them with a bit of chorus for strength. But as a song this song is beautiful.
Cru
Orlando51
Orlando51 15th Jun 2015 21:13 - 10 years ago
This is done really nicely with lots of good taste....thanks for sharing!

Compliments______Orlando
lowmusik
lowmusik 29th Apr 2015 14:49 - 10 years ago
i really eff with this
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 1st May 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey thanks for listening!
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 29th Apr 2015 11:54 - 10 years ago
Hi. This isn't really my type of vocal song but the music is well made and arranged so I'll focus on that instead.

The drums are good and effective but I'm not that keen on your kick drum. Not that big a deal - I'd just swap it out for another. Maybe it's a bit "too rock", just not quite a suitable timbre for this track.

Nice little fading in intro with some harmonic beauty before the gently strummed guitar arrives. Then lead electric work is effective before the first verse. Piano also sounds and I think there's probably also a cello so quite a full arrangement within 20 or so seconds.

Left panning on the hat adds a good stereo spectrum.

The lead guitar breaks work really and then the same sort of playing is sat well behind your vocal. No clash at all. The whole thing seems well mixed. Acoustic guitar well recorded.

Good length and a gentle end with a bit more high string work.

Overall: fine work and my only gripe is with that kick drum. But keep it if you really like it.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 30th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Static,

Thanks for the comments, I am glad that you found the track to be good.

Kyle
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 29th Apr 2015 04:30 - 10 years ago
Glad you got around to doing this one Kyle...nice job on the lyrics & delivery...love the acoustic accompaniment & the little electric guitar bit work a treat in support...fantastic bit of musical work...fav....Ed
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 29th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Ed,

Thanks for listening to the track I am glad that you liked it. I always appreciate your comments.

Kyle
MWRatridge
MWRatridge 29th Apr 2015 00:12 - 10 years ago
Kyle,
Fav'd. This could be a classic dude! You have a gift with your voice and I can hear you have really been practising that guitar. I am sharing this to my Facebook page if it works from Looperman.
Mark.

P.S. You should be very happy with this one brother.
M.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 29th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks listening Mark. I am glad that you like the track. I really appreciate the compliments. Thanks for sharing the track as well.

Kyle
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 28th Apr 2015 22:00 - 10 years ago
You always have great stuff, IWE. I like the emotion you carry in your words man. Beautiful piece of art here, no critiques I can offer at the moment.

ER
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 29th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
ER,

Thanks for listening, I appreciate you taking the time to listen. Thanks for the compliments as well!!

Kyle
Danke
Danke 28th Apr 2015 15:48 - 10 years ago
I smell real music here...very cool and moody track Kyle...the small. lead guitar's harmonies like Frusciante's from RHCP...grilliant...awesome melodies with a bit Tom Petty feeling...hope, it's no problem, I mentioned these names...:-)

Thanx for sharing, instant fav!

Danke
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 29th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Danke, thanks for the compliments and taking the time to listen. I am glad you liked it enough to download, I really appreciate it!!

Kyle

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