Blood and death seem to be the request of the day for this track. Can't say I was thinking of doing vocals for this one but stranger things have happened.
Do I need some killer lyrics or would serial killer lyrics on this track be better? I mean what would Nick do?
Very enjoyable track.
Love that synth work that comes in around the 1.05 mark. Had to do a replay a couple of times on that bit but am still undecided as to whether it was a vocalised synth or a guitar synth or a vocalised guitar synth.
Nicely put together.
Just curious what BPM?
2.14.
At the 2'14 mark my brain flipped.
Not sure how to describe the effect.
The information coming from the headphones seemed to trigger a message that I was now out of breath.
Of course I wasn't because in reality I'm sitting still in a comfy chair enjoying a beer but that's not the message my brains getting.
There's a slight panic in the background when my brain realises that no I'm not out of breath.
Amazing when a piece of music through cans can have such an effect.
Good while since it last happened and I think that was to do with breathing too but can't remember it now.
Great little ride thank you!
As one who likes to respond to comments in the order they appeared, it was difficult to wait for this one. It was a very entertaining and interesting read!
Your words made me feel entirely confident that my artistic goals were achieved in this song, and that you also have excellent ears for detail. It is exhilarating to read the response to my "message," and one which fits the bill nicely for my intentions.
The panic which you felt is probably a fitting response as well, since panic can often lead one to examine themselves deeply and initiate evolution. I do apologise if it was disconcerting though.
I have definitely realised that this song is intended for headphone listening, though I think it translates acceptably to a system... I have not heard it uncompressed on my hi fi though.
I always appreciate hearing you response to my songs, so thank you very much for this, and for the favorite! Have a good day!
Very captivating piece right from the off!
Love it.
To me this has commercial possibilities.
Reminds me of a huge hit from the early 70's called popcorn. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjxNnqTcHhg
i always liked that song but never knew the title, thanx for that. Don't think the track will be comercial useable in it current form; bad mix and stuff.. but.. i dont have the file anymoere so all hope's lost there : )
Sorry for using junk word 'pro-living'. I meant 'you work as professional', because your comment says that 'I would love to create the next BBC news opening'. I don't get angry at all. I hope you to listen my next tune. Thank you.
I would love to create the next BBC News opening.
The current one which they've had for years now is the usual punchy on edge beep of emergency surrounded by swirly synths.
Not really any music in it.
It does the job very well.
This little piece wouldn't work.
It's a great little piece of music in it's own right but doesn't have that urgency required by news.
I'd love to hear a longer version of this as it simply develops into a nice tune which it has certainly started out as.
Oh!, I really surprised by the comment from pro-living musician! I never thought of the urgency which news requires, when I compose this song, I thought only Jazz functionality of hybrid codes and key changes that I like other than ease of intuitiveness and conveying the news program requirements. Composing this kind of song is very difficult especially on short length. Thanks for your pro comment.
Thank you Silverman! I have those moments too. I'm happy my music was able to transport you somewhere else for a short period time. That makes me happy as an artist.
This is a very interesting piece and I've not heard anything like this on here before.
In fact I don't think I've heard anything quite like this anywhere.
This has to be a fave.
Thanks Silverman! It's always good to be different i guess, no point making something generic when i could make something weird and unique right? haha
Anyways, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the feedback! :D
I think this sounds fantastic!
There is a problem with the vocal.
Ever thought of panning it to the left or right so it sits in a safer place?
It could always be moved around the whole panning spectrum where needed to dodge clashes.
I too have always found slotting vocals in very difficult.
I'm typing this as I'm listening and the voice has suddenly panned to the right making it much clearer but ... it has stayed there when a clash has arrived. At that point you need to switch the vocal to the left?
Great sound this though. I love stuff like this.
It has a darkness and other worldly touch to it.
Nice.
It is crying out for vocals.
Give Ozzy a ring.
The ending was a bit delicate for such a heavy piece. Not sure about that bit but great rock sound.
So much potential!
Sounds great apart from the vocal.
It's buried or the musics playing in the living room and you're singing in the bedroom upstairs .....
Hi man, thanks for the listen, as I said to Danke, I am also not happy with the way the vocals are being pushed from all possible sides, specially during the Chorus.
I find something very appealing about this.
A little magical.
The mix is all to cock though.
Didn't understand much of what you were singing about but since when was that a problem in modern music?
I think this is a great little number that needs some tidying up.
Very nice.
Thank you very much for constructive comment. Yes, mastering of the tracks is the field where I need to practice a lot.
By the way, the singing one is Newshoes.
I guess you mean the modern lyrics that in some ways very "free". Well, that's a reason why I still haven't recorded my own song yet. I am not sure about the quality of my lyrics if I will try because of poorness of my english level.
Thank you again for your comment, very appreciate it. I will continue work on this one track, so.
Weird!
Very basic growl.
But it works.
That is not a heavy metal voice.
But it works.
In fact the whole thing works pretty good.
Does need a bit of work doing on it.
I actually think the voice is quite wonderful against the growl.
There's a deathly pale hovering over this.
The grim reaper maybe.
The voice makes a refreshing change from the same old same old that metal seems to have fallen into.
Keep on keepin on.
That would be the ultimate dream. My tracks on a rave party. I have been to a lot in my younger days and it was always a goal to make people hit the floor on my tunes :p.
Many thanks!
Don't know what it is maybe the vocals not sure but it first thoughts were Van der Graaf Generatorr who I haven't listened to in years now.
Doesn't sound anything like them but it took me to them for some reason.
Nice little number.
This is not what I think of as industrial.
Not shop floor industrial anyway.
Maybe more office or management.
You need to grow this because it's got so much potential.
Very nice listen
Please water it.
on Under the Waves by theHumps
Within seconds I was thinking Nick Cave.
Yep we want blood and death.
You need some killer lyrics on this .......
Do I need some killer lyrics or would serial killer lyrics on this track be better? I mean what would Nick do?
Cheers man!
Wayne
on TTAG - Hollowed Happiness by mashio123
Love that synth work that comes in around the 1.05 mark. Had to do a replay a couple of times on that bit but am still undecided as to whether it was a vocalised synth or a guitar synth or a vocalised guitar synth.
Nicely put together.
Just curious what BPM?
on Pavement Hitter by Spivkurl
At the 2'14 mark my brain flipped.
Not sure how to describe the effect.
The information coming from the headphones seemed to trigger a message that I was now out of breath.
Of course I wasn't because in reality I'm sitting still in a comfy chair enjoying a beer but that's not the message my brains getting.
There's a slight panic in the background when my brain realises that no I'm not out of breath.
Amazing when a piece of music through cans can have such an effect.
Good while since it last happened and I think that was to do with breathing too but can't remember it now.
Great little ride thank you!
Your words made me feel entirely confident that my artistic goals were achieved in this song, and that you also have excellent ears for detail. It is exhilarating to read the response to my "message," and one which fits the bill nicely for my intentions.
The panic which you felt is probably a fitting response as well, since panic can often lead one to examine themselves deeply and initiate evolution. I do apologise if it was disconcerting though.
I have definitely realised that this song is intended for headphone listening, though I think it translates acceptably to a system... I have not heard it uncompressed on my hi fi though.
I always appreciate hearing you response to my songs, so thank you very much for this, and for the favorite! Have a good day!
on Boss 80 by dumarecht
Love it.
To me this has commercial possibilities.
Reminds me of a huge hit from the early 70's called popcorn.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjxNnqTcHhg
on TV News program opening by MasanoriMurabayashi
I have no idea what that means.
You sound angry.
on TV News program opening by MasanoriMurabayashi
The current one which they've had for years now is the usual punchy on edge beep of emergency surrounded by swirly synths.
Not really any music in it.
It does the job very well.
This little piece wouldn't work.
It's a great little piece of music in it's own right but doesn't have that urgency required by news.
I'd love to hear a longer version of this as it simply develops into a nice tune which it has certainly started out as.
on Substances by BLEEP
Half three in the morning and I can't sleep!
on Syren call by Zivonmusic
Great little tune.
Nicely put together.
on Modnex - Daddy Dead - Demons by Modnex
Went back for a second shot.
Brilliantly atmospheric.
Thanks for stopping in, much appreciated!
on Nova x Vena - So Much of Me by XyIlent
In fact I don't think I've heard anything quite like this anywhere.
This has to be a fave.
Anyways, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the feedback! :D
on Substances by BLEEP
There is a problem with the vocal.
Ever thought of panning it to the left or right so it sits in a safer place?
It could always be moved around the whole panning spectrum where needed to dodge clashes.
I too have always found slotting vocals in very difficult.
I'm typing this as I'm listening and the voice has suddenly panned to the right making it much clearer but ... it has stayed there when a clash has arrived. At that point you need to switch the vocal to the left?
Great sound this though. I love stuff like this.
It has a darkness and other worldly touch to it.
About the vocals, i made adjustments! i hope it's better now ;) i reloaded my track with modifications :)
glad you enjoyed this song and thanks to Modnex and you for your advices ;)
Bleep
on Ron Flemming x kittytrillah Nature by kittytrillah
on Ron Flemming x kittytrillah Nature by kittytrillah
Very well put together.
Original.
Pro.
To be honest, I was afraid about sound clipping in the end
on Cloudless by Orlando51
Nothing more to be said.
With maximum appreciation_____Orlando
on Offbeat Earthquake by srob1234
Genuine question because I never have a clue about these things.
Sounds like a nice tense tune for a tv scene.
Nicely done.
on Empty Vessels by Evisma
It is crying out for vocals.
Give Ozzy a ring.
The ending was a bit delicate for such a heavy piece. Not sure about that bit but great rock sound.
Ozzy cares not about my little track, and upon inquiry, I was told to go do many harmful things to my body.
He's not into it.
Yes, delicate ending, but I dig it. I see your issue though.
Thanks for the listen and feedback.
Evan
on Not Your Extra Everything ft Steklo by Eighteen
Sounds great apart from the vocal.
It's buried or the musics playing in the living room and you're singing in the bedroom upstairs .....
Thanks for you honest opinion :)
~Eighteen
on NEWsHOES - FYF prod kittytrillah by kittytrillah
A little magical.
The mix is all to cock though.
Didn't understand much of what you were singing about but since when was that a problem in modern music?
I think this is a great little number that needs some tidying up.
Very nice.
By the way, the singing one is Newshoes.
I guess you mean the modern lyrics that in some ways very "free". Well, that's a reason why I still haven't recorded my own song yet. I am not sure about the quality of my lyrics if I will try because of poorness of my english level.
Thank you again for your comment, very appreciate it. I will continue work on this one track, so.
on Faith-dust-bones by FatalDecline
Very basic growl.
But it works.
That is not a heavy metal voice.
But it works.
In fact the whole thing works pretty good.
Does need a bit of work doing on it.
I actually think the voice is quite wonderful against the growl.
There's a deathly pale hovering over this.
The grim reaper maybe.
The voice makes a refreshing change from the same old same old that metal seems to have fallen into.
Keep on keepin on.
on Mimic Pod by mudhoen
Real tree shaker.
Many thanks!
on like uhhh and such by dumarecht
Doesn't sound anything like them but it took me to them for some reason.
Nice little number.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDmhP6YiN6s
on Machine by sqrtofneg1
Not shop floor industrial anyway.
Maybe more office or management.
You need to grow this because it's got so much potential.
Very nice listen
Please water it.
As a rule, I don't go back on pieces I've completed, so I don't think I'll revisit this.
Feel free to remix it yourself if you want!
on Japanese Funk by Lorbemzo
Some of my openings are longer than this.
Sounds good and look forward to you growing this thing.
on Brave New World by Nodog
The consumer societies being the most powerful and persistent terrorists going.
on Michael Mayo Dont need by mike0112