Thank you Silverman! I have those moments too. I'm happy my music was able to transport you somewhere else for a short period time. That makes me happy as an artist.
This is a very interesting piece and I've not heard anything like this on here before.
In fact I don't think I've heard anything quite like this anywhere.
This has to be a fave.
Thanks Silverman! It's always good to be different i guess, no point making something generic when i could make something weird and unique right? haha
Anyways, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the feedback! :D
Nice.
It is crying out for vocals.
Give Ozzy a ring.
The ending was a bit delicate for such a heavy piece. Not sure about that bit but great rock sound.
So much potential!
Sounds great apart from the vocal.
It's buried or the musics playing in the living room and you're singing in the bedroom upstairs .....
Hi man, thanks for the listen, as I said to Danke, I am also not happy with the way the vocals are being pushed from all possible sides, specially during the Chorus.
I find something very appealing about this.
A little magical.
The mix is all to ##### though.
Didn't understand much of what you were singing about but since when was that a problem in modern music?
I think this is a great little number that needs some tidying up.
Very nice.
Thank you very much for constructive comment. Yes, mastering of the tracks is the field where I need to practice a lot.
By the way, the singing one is Newshoes.
I guess you mean the modern lyrics that in some ways very "free". Well, that's a reason why I still haven't recorded my own song yet. I am not sure about the quality of my lyrics if I will try because of poorness of my english level.
Thank you again for your comment, very appreciate it. I will continue work on this one track, so.
Weird!
Very basic growl.
But it works.
That is not a heavy metal voice.
But it works.
In fact the whole thing works pretty good.
Does need a bit of work doing on it.
I actually think the voice is quite wonderful against the growl.
There's a deathly pale hovering over this.
The grim reaper maybe.
The voice makes a refreshing change from the same old same old that metal seems to have fallen into.
Keep on keepin on.
That would be the ultimate dream. My tracks on a rave party. I have been to a lot in my younger days and it was always a goal to make people hit the floor on my tunes :p.
Many thanks!
Don't know what it is maybe the vocals not sure but it first thoughts were Van der Graaf Generatorr who I haven't listened to in years now.
Doesn't sound anything like them but it took me to them for some reason.
Nice little number.
This is not what I think of as industrial.
Not shop floor industrial anyway.
Maybe more office or management.
You need to grow this because it's got so much potential.
Very nice listen
Please water it.
First descriptive word that came to me right at the beginning was .... slick.
This is a superb track.
Very professional.
I love the fact that voice isn't up front but is understated in the mix.
No blaring glaring loud things either .... unlike a lot of what I do.
Inspirational.
You are creatively unique which is so refreshing and as always very listenable. Remember Devo? You sound nothing like them but definitely mine a similar creative vein. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4-2onb62y8
Hey friend, thanks for stopping by to hear this. I realise I may have fallen short of my goals, aside from the personal goal of expressing my reactions to experiences of the time. I still enjoy the song, but may need to continue work on it.
I would call myself a fan of Devo, especially these days, although I tend to enjoy Mothersbaugh more most of the time. My devo stuff is pretty much all on tape, which is cool since I am in love with magnetic media lately! Listening to the song you linked to, definitely one of their cool pop songs!
Sounds like a great tune to me.
My only criticism is you seem to be making the same mistakes I keep making .... not getting the levels right.
You need to add raise and lower some volumes here and there.
Thanks! The vocals were the easiest part of the song to put together, but I understand the problem you have. Sometimes you just gotta make them off beat a little in order for them to fit in.
on Syren call by Zivonmusic
Great little tune.
Nicely put together.
on Modnex - Daddy Dead - Demons by Modnex
Went back for a second shot.
Brilliantly atmospheric.
Thanks for stopping in, much appreciated!
on Nova x Vena - So Much of Me by XyIlent
In fact I don't think I've heard anything quite like this anywhere.
This has to be a fave.
Anyways, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the feedback! :D
on Ron Flemming x kittytrillah Nature by kittytrillah
on Ron Flemming x kittytrillah Nature by kittytrillah
Very well put together.
Original.
Pro.
To be honest, I was afraid about sound clipping in the end
on Cloudless by Orlando51
Nothing more to be said.
With maximum appreciation_____Orlando
on Offbeat Earthquake by srob1234
Genuine question because I never have a clue about these things.
Sounds like a nice tense tune for a tv scene.
Nicely done.
on Empty Vessels by Evisma
It is crying out for vocals.
Give Ozzy a ring.
The ending was a bit delicate for such a heavy piece. Not sure about that bit but great rock sound.
Ozzy cares not about my little track, and upon inquiry, I was told to go do many harmful things to my body.
He's not into it.
Yes, delicate ending, but I dig it. I see your issue though.
Thanks for the listen and feedback.
Evan
on Not Your Extra Everything ft Steklo by Eighteen
Sounds great apart from the vocal.
It's buried or the musics playing in the living room and you're singing in the bedroom upstairs .....
Thanks for you honest opinion :)
~Eighteen
on NEWsHOES - FYF prod kittytrillah by kittytrillah
A little magical.
The mix is all to ##### though.
Didn't understand much of what you were singing about but since when was that a problem in modern music?
I think this is a great little number that needs some tidying up.
Very nice.
By the way, the singing one is Newshoes.
I guess you mean the modern lyrics that in some ways very "free". Well, that's a reason why I still haven't recorded my own song yet. I am not sure about the quality of my lyrics if I will try because of poorness of my english level.
Thank you again for your comment, very appreciate it. I will continue work on this one track, so.
on Faith-dust-bones by FatalDecline
Very basic growl.
But it works.
That is not a heavy metal voice.
But it works.
In fact the whole thing works pretty good.
Does need a bit of work doing on it.
I actually think the voice is quite wonderful against the growl.
There's a deathly pale hovering over this.
The grim reaper maybe.
The voice makes a refreshing change from the same old same old that metal seems to have fallen into.
Keep on keepin on.
on Mimic Pod by mudhoen
Real tree shaker.
Many thanks!
on like uhhh and such by dumarecht
Doesn't sound anything like them but it took me to them for some reason.
Nice little number.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDmhP6YiN6s
on Machine by sqrtofneg1
Not shop floor industrial anyway.
Maybe more office or management.
You need to grow this because it's got so much potential.
Very nice listen
Please water it.
As a rule, I don't go back on pieces I've completed, so I don't think I'll revisit this.
Feel free to remix it yourself if you want!
on Japanese Funk by Lorbemzo
Some of my openings are longer than this.
Sounds good and look forward to you growing this thing.
on Brave New World by Nodog
The consumer societies being the most powerful and persistent terrorists going.
on Michael Mayo Dont need by mike0112
on The Fortress by Anubis
Very bleak dangerous and worrying place.
I wouldn't want to sleep there.
Very powerful little piece.
cheers
on Lank Frampard FT Apollo Leppard - AMERICA by imakebeatsLF
This is a superb track.
Very professional.
I love the fact that voice isn't up front but is understated in the mix.
No blaring glaring loud things either .... unlike a lot of what I do.
Inspirational.
on The Other Way Around by Orlando51
I prefer this one.
Thanks alot mate....much appreciated !:)
Cheers____Orlando
on Not Yet - Vocal Mix C by Spivkurl
I would call myself a fan of Devo, especially these days, although I tend to enjoy Mothersbaugh more most of the time. My devo stuff is pretty much all on tape, which is cool since I am in love with magnetic media lately! Listening to the song you linked to, definitely one of their cool pop songs!
Much appreciated!
on The Wolf and the Ice Planet by Zivonmusic
My only criticism is you seem to be making the same mistakes I keep making .... not getting the levels right.
You need to add raise and lower some volumes here and there.
on Christmas Carol by ChangDakiid
on Kaoz Bad Chick ft Lokka by KaozOfficial
Spot on.
on he is funny by ElenaSatine