Dear Doctor,
I just listened to some of your stuff.
So much potential!
People are listening to your stuff and hardly any comments.
I'm sure it's because you're not mixing things down.
All the tracks in each tune seem to be playing at the same level.
No breaks no pauses no changes.
When you get something going you stick with it and keep it repeating.
I know that place.
It's because your enjoying that moment so much.
There are some great sounds coming from you.
Stop enjoying yourself so much in those headphones.
Stop with the self indulgence and edit your work.
If you do I think more people will stop by and leave comments.
Seriously some great sounding stuff but too chaotic.
Thanks for your considerate input.I actually do this to be self indulgent
as I don't receive pay and just do it for my pleasure,I'm not that concerned
about folks leaving comments and there may not be any listeners that enjoy
my edits. Minimalism-inpressionism is sometimes a tedious genre to listen
to and not all will enjoy it.I am grateful to Looperman and the members
for allowing me to express my "art" in my own way and appreciate any
and all input.....Doc
This is truly an honor to receive a comment from you, further that you've
listened to more of my stuff is more than I would ask for.You have been one of our favorites,we wait to hear your creativity,thanks for your great input....Doc
With determination I got three quarters of the way through but it was unpleasant to be honest.
Calm it down.
It needs mastering.
There are some great possibilities but no one in or out of their minds could .... I might be wrong.
Lets see what others think.
Whoaaaaa!
Psychedelic for sure but but but it's completely mad!
Somewhere in there is a great track but at the moment it's just a huge onslaught a wall of noise!
There needs to be some breaks some pauses some changes to the wall of sound that is so overpowering I can't get to the end of this!!!!!
Of course you are right.This is like other of my tunes "minimalistic"
not really edited to separate(but edited).Not for all to listen, but I appreciate
your input....thanx,....Doc
I know this pella!
I downloaded it and tried so hard to fit it into all manner of things and failed.
I think you've done a great job with it.
113 plays 6 downloads and no comments!!!!!
I fail to understand that.
I think you've done a pretty nice number here.
The only thing I don't like is that naked hit ending.
Other than that nice tune. Very nice.
I can find little wrong with these lyrics mate.
The little I can find is they are a little muted.
Apart from that this is a great little number.
Leonard Cohen the king og gloom never took anyones advice about his lyrics.
Been a fan of his for getting on fifty years I think.
One of the greatest lyrisists ever in my book and no .... never been depressed in my life.
His pain is wonderous to behold. Magical even.
Keep doing what comes natural to you.
This is pretty cool stuff.
Where does the vocal come from?
There's a lot to be said for keeping it uncomplicated and getting this slick clean sound.
Old man music rules!
I have never heard anything like this before.
Is there stuff like this out there?
Excellent job.
Very enjoyable experience and to be honesyt I hear no flaws.
This place and the people here never cease to amaze me with the quality of stuff that gets produced.
Very different for me this one and I like that.
Same old same old gets a bit boring.
Great little number.
Nice little number this.
The whole thing sounds good to my ears in cans.
I like a little dissonance in fact I often like quite a lot!
When I'm listening to other peoples stuff I often play those silly pc card games and that's what I was doing when ... it finished!
Way to short.
This can easily remain enjoyable at twice the length it is at present.
Blood and death seem to be the request of the day for this track. Can't say I was thinking of doing vocals for this one but stranger things have happened.
Do I need some killer lyrics or would serial killer lyrics on this track be better? I mean what would Nick do?
Very enjoyable track.
Love that synth work that comes in around the 1.05 mark. Had to do a replay a couple of times on that bit but am still undecided as to whether it was a vocalised synth or a guitar synth or a vocalised guitar synth.
Nicely put together.
Just curious what BPM?
2.14.
At the 2'14 mark my brain flipped.
Not sure how to describe the effect.
The information coming from the headphones seemed to trigger a message that I was now out of breath.
Of course I wasn't because in reality I'm sitting still in a comfy chair enjoying a beer but that's not the message my brains getting.
There's a slight panic in the background when my brain realises that no I'm not out of breath.
Amazing when a piece of music through cans can have such an effect.
Good while since it last happened and I think that was to do with breathing too but can't remember it now.
Great little ride thank you!
As one who likes to respond to comments in the order they appeared, it was difficult to wait for this one. It was a very entertaining and interesting read!
Your words made me feel entirely confident that my artistic goals were achieved in this song, and that you also have excellent ears for detail. It is exhilarating to read the response to my "message," and one which fits the bill nicely for my intentions.
The panic which you felt is probably a fitting response as well, since panic can often lead one to examine themselves deeply and initiate evolution. I do apologise if it was disconcerting though.
I have definitely realised that this song is intended for headphone listening, though I think it translates acceptably to a system... I have not heard it uncompressed on my hi fi though.
I always appreciate hearing you response to my songs, so thank you very much for this, and for the favorite! Have a good day!
Very captivating piece right from the off!
Love it.
To me this has commercial possibilities.
Reminds me of a huge hit from the early 70's called popcorn. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjxNnqTcHhg
i always liked that song but never knew the title, thanx for that. Don't think the track will be comercial useable in it current form; bad mix and stuff.. but.. i dont have the file anymoere so all hope's lost there : )
Sorry for using junk word 'pro-living'. I meant 'you work as professional', because your comment says that 'I would love to create the next BBC news opening'. I don't get angry at all. I hope you to listen my next tune. Thank you.
I would love to create the next BBC News opening.
The current one which they've had for years now is the usual punchy on edge beep of emergency surrounded by swirly synths.
Not really any music in it.
It does the job very well.
This little piece wouldn't work.
It's a great little piece of music in it's own right but doesn't have that urgency required by news.
I'd love to hear a longer version of this as it simply develops into a nice tune which it has certainly started out as.
Oh!, I really surprised by the comment from pro-living musician! I never thought of the urgency which news requires, when I compose this song, I thought only Jazz functionality of hybrid codes and key changes that I like other than ease of intuitiveness and conveying the news program requirements. Composing this kind of song is very difficult especially on short length. Thanks for your pro comment.
on WARRIOR by GoTyBeaTs
Magical.
One day the poets and musicians will take over from the warriors!
on WARRIOR by GoTyBeaTs
Superbly put together.
Faved.
This is stoner music!
on Taking All My Time by T0mmyy
Thanks for sopping by and listening all those months ago :)
on Turn The Lights Down MUST HEAR by DynamiteSkye
Cool.
Pro.
on Younger Dolphins by DrCoolest
I just listened to some of your stuff.
So much potential!
People are listening to your stuff and hardly any comments.
I'm sure it's because you're not mixing things down.
All the tracks in each tune seem to be playing at the same level.
No breaks no pauses no changes.
When you get something going you stick with it and keep it repeating.
I know that place.
It's because your enjoying that moment so much.
There are some great sounds coming from you.
Stop enjoying yourself so much in those headphones.
Stop with the self indulgence and edit your work.
If you do I think more people will stop by and leave comments.
Seriously some great sounding stuff but too chaotic.
as I don't receive pay and just do it for my pleasure,I'm not that concerned
about folks leaving comments and there may not be any listeners that enjoy
my edits. Minimalism-inpressionism is sometimes a tedious genre to listen
to and not all will enjoy it.I am grateful to Looperman and the members
for allowing me to express my "art" in my own way and appreciate any
and all input.....Doc
on The Party At The Pond by DrCoolest
listened to more of my stuff is more than I would ask for.You have been one of our favorites,we wait to hear your creativity,thanks for your great input....Doc
on Younger Dolphins by DrCoolest
Calm it down.
It needs mastering.
There are some great possibilities but no one in or out of their minds could .... I might be wrong.
Lets see what others think.
on Younger Dolphins by DrCoolest
Psychedelic for sure but but but it's completely mad!
Somewhere in there is a great track but at the moment it's just a huge onslaught a wall of noise!
There needs to be some breaks some pauses some changes to the wall of sound that is so overpowering I can't get to the end of this!!!!!
not really edited to separate(but edited).Not for all to listen, but I appreciate
your input....thanx,....Doc
on Pawel S Ft Apollodor Your Heart At Mind by pawciolo
I downloaded it and tried so hard to fit it into all manner of things and failed.
I think you've done a great job with it.
113 plays 6 downloads and no comments!!!!!
I fail to understand that.
I think you've done a pretty nice number here.
The only thing I don't like is that naked hit ending.
Other than that nice tune. Very nice.
on ILP - New Babylon Remix by hashmet
What more can I say?
I'd be perfectly at home driving through the night and this coming on the radio.
on Dungeon Story by Manfromstars
Uncluttered clean clear matches your description well.
The heavy guitar is a nice touch to this otherwise gentle piece.
Thumbs up.
on Caroline by teamrufeless
The little I can find is they are a little muted.
Apart from that this is a great little number.
Leonard Cohen the king og gloom never took anyones advice about his lyrics.
Been a fan of his for getting on fifty years I think.
One of the greatest lyrisists ever in my book and no .... never been depressed in my life.
His pain is wonderous to behold. Magical even.
Keep doing what comes natural to you.
on feat - Shingmagikarp - Kelsey re-mastered by teamrufeless
Where does the vocal come from?
There's a lot to be said for keeping it uncomplicated and getting this slick clean sound.
Old man music rules!
on When Ya Hear My Flow by kingmadi
All the tracks are playing at the same volume.
Go have a twiddle with it.
on Sweet Farewell WIP by bitronix
Is there stuff like this out there?
Excellent job.
Very enjoyable experience and to be honesyt I hear no flaws.
This place and the people here never cease to amaze me with the quality of stuff that gets produced.
Very different for me this one and I like that.
Same old same old gets a bit boring.
Great little number.
Thanks man! I appreciate the compliment. Cheers!
on Volkano Remix - The Alexx Marie by hashmet
The whole thing sounds good to my ears in cans.
I like a little dissonance in fact I often like quite a lot!
When I'm listening to other peoples stuff I often play those silly pc card games and that's what I was doing when ... it finished!
Way to short.
This can easily remain enjoyable at twice the length it is at present.
yeah maybe i will try to make it a lil bit longer
on One Final Night with Shota by Judah76
Sounds confusing.
There's a good voice there somewhere.
on Fin by Kurt
on Angels Dream of You by HappyIdiots
Nicely put together.
on Under the Waves by theHumps
Within seconds I was thinking Nick Cave.
Yep we want blood and death.
You need some killer lyrics on this .......
Do I need some killer lyrics or would serial killer lyrics on this track be better? I mean what would Nick do?
Cheers man!
Wayne
on TTAG - Hollowed Happiness by mashio123
Love that synth work that comes in around the 1.05 mark. Had to do a replay a couple of times on that bit but am still undecided as to whether it was a vocalised synth or a guitar synth or a vocalised guitar synth.
Nicely put together.
Just curious what BPM?
on Pavement Hitter by Spivkurl
At the 2'14 mark my brain flipped.
Not sure how to describe the effect.
The information coming from the headphones seemed to trigger a message that I was now out of breath.
Of course I wasn't because in reality I'm sitting still in a comfy chair enjoying a beer but that's not the message my brains getting.
There's a slight panic in the background when my brain realises that no I'm not out of breath.
Amazing when a piece of music through cans can have such an effect.
Good while since it last happened and I think that was to do with breathing too but can't remember it now.
Great little ride thank you!
Your words made me feel entirely confident that my artistic goals were achieved in this song, and that you also have excellent ears for detail. It is exhilarating to read the response to my "message," and one which fits the bill nicely for my intentions.
The panic which you felt is probably a fitting response as well, since panic can often lead one to examine themselves deeply and initiate evolution. I do apologise if it was disconcerting though.
I have definitely realised that this song is intended for headphone listening, though I think it translates acceptably to a system... I have not heard it uncompressed on my hi fi though.
I always appreciate hearing you response to my songs, so thank you very much for this, and for the favorite! Have a good day!
on Boss 80 by dumarecht
Love it.
To me this has commercial possibilities.
Reminds me of a huge hit from the early 70's called popcorn.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjxNnqTcHhg
on TV News program opening by MasanoriMurabayashi
I have no idea what that means.
You sound angry.
on TV News program opening by MasanoriMurabayashi
The current one which they've had for years now is the usual punchy on edge beep of emergency surrounded by swirly synths.
Not really any music in it.
It does the job very well.
This little piece wouldn't work.
It's a great little piece of music in it's own right but doesn't have that urgency required by news.
I'd love to hear a longer version of this as it simply develops into a nice tune which it has certainly started out as.