I'm surprised that the vocal seems under-emphasized. That is usually one of my own pet peeves! But I am returning this morning for one more go at a mix. Thanks for your listen, your thoughtful comment, and really happy you enjoyed.

Dan

Hey, Orlando

It means a lot that you know my stuff enough to recognize this is new territory for me. I am happy you had a chance to listen and glad if it was working for you.

Regards,

Dan

If you felt that aspect of 'taking the time' for growing this song then I'm happy, MG. Even so, have a few more things in mind for this one.

Thanks very much for your positive comment, MG.

Dan

She seems special in several ways. beautiful voice, musical, and apparently an astute business woman. I am happy to have heard back from her now in a positive way. Thanks, Trippy. Dan

Very much appreciate these specific comments OViea901. What might be done to brighten vocal? What is your thought on structure? Thanks and have a good one! - Dan

Hey Pat. Glad you had a chance to check this one out.
Yea - it was quite the departure for me. As far as vocal goes - there was some editing needed and working with a pre-recorded a capella is never ideal. Generally the reaction to her voice has been that it's sexy, nice.

I am looking for guitar or synth fills, then a new mixdown. What elements do you think would be needed for this to work in the club? I suppose we would ask the singer to record again against a track to get vocal up to par?

Any interest in taking this one the distance with me?

Regards, Dan

I'm happy Silverman that you connected with this one. I guess it could work as the intro to a film. Look forward to connecting more. Dan

Really happy you like the sound kingmadi. sometimes work falls into place without too much stress. I enjoyed working out the changes for this one. I am hoping my collab will take one more crack at mixing. Thanks again. Dan

Glad to hear it Magnetic! It's venturing into somewhat new territory for me. I am fortunate to have mindhiest collab on this one. A few final touches to go and we will call it a wrap. Regards - Dan

means a lot that you tune in to the changes. that's really my contribution here. she's got the voice for sure. thanks for stopping by Lank. See you round cyberhood. Dan

Hi, dachopdocta!

Thanks. Yea - her voice is sweet. Mindheist really felt the phrasing of my changes and that, along with his changing up the sounds, is working well. If my brave venture into this genre has inspired you I'm happy. Thanks again. Dan

Hey Jamid

Just sent you a pm. Dan

thanks roland. i am liking the simplicity of the rhodes sound but not necessarily married to the other synth sounds although having some pluck in there seems dancy. pm coming. Dan

Thanks Burt. yea. i think it makes sense to build around what is available in the way of pellas on looperman rather than write something and figure out how to get a vocal into it. i'm feeling less intimated about writing with voice now that this one is under my belt.

LOL! Can't help it. I've turned into a chick singing yearning songs for dudes.

Actually - I haven't been following anybody lately. In fact I turned off the site!

I appreciate it Jamid. Having some fun messing with different synths and hopefully will land on some interesting sounds and effects when it is all said and done.

thanks for the listen. the chord progression took a minute but I'm happy with it. now for more variety with the synth, some effects, and some solos/fills! thanks again.

I appreciate your checking it out Billionz. Definitely in a raw state. Looking for sounds, variety, trying to dip my toes in a new genre. so any input is much appreciated.