mudhoen

well. thanks for your comment
yea it took me less than a hour thats a simple track, actually I put myself in challanges to make creativity. ehm.
actually that parts are the dubdrop that vocals should fall away cuz FM basses and leads should lead the music and vocals will change their places with other stuffs like pads and etc which are playing low and just making the track busy, noisy and populated which we need in dubdrops, thanks for your feedback btw.
hats off

Thanks mudhoen. For some reason I was writing a lot of bug sounds and tracks for the past few months. This was sort of a grand finale. Glad you had a chance to check it out and that you enjoyed. Best regards - Dan

thanks alot bro,very motivating to hear coz i was going through a tough time then..music is my drug.

Thanks dear mudhoen, initially the choirs starts with the "space" synth who you could heard at ends. Im happy to make the good choice to use only the choir.

I do not remember to put bells in my music you may confound with harp :P and originally its intended to have a low profile in the track I even thought to remove it but once done I feel about something missing so I reintegrate the harp.In the mixing part making the harps fitting with the rest was harder that I thought maybe I did something wrong.

I managed to coordinate chaos wow ! Seriously, the guitar part contains 3 different choir parts (bass strings, Piano, Brass)all with random velocity and volume. Im happy about you approve the result.

Like I wrote in the description you may have to consider this track for 3 different track that why there are a lot of things happening.

Thanks for your constructive comment I will check out about the harp if I can give him more room.

Peace from master Byleth

p.s im looking forward for your reply of the comment i posted on your latest track.

Thanks mudhoen.
I wouldn't say the mix it's loud but i agree that one of the elements you just mentioned shoud be more in the background and not as loud as it seems to be.
Thank you for your constructive comments.
Very much appreciated.

Nelson

Thanks for the feedback. I'll be a little more natural in upcoming productions.

Thanks! This track was aimed to be one of my most melodic tracks I've constructed. The hats really helped me with the feel of the track! Cheers!

~GO

Hi.

"Very soulful sound"

Yes - I try to make deep music that might move people emotionally and perhaps even physically. I don't make pop music though perhaps I could if I had to. But would I want to?

"vocal glitches in it really gives it great atmosphere."

That's just cut-up vocal loops with lots of delay. They really add to the atmosphere and kind of merge with the pad sound (which merges with the synth bass).

0:50 is my favourite vocal. That's an 800% timestretched one from another track of mine. In that track it was heard at the original tempo. It sounds better here.

"guitar coming in at 1:50 give it even more flavour."

Yes - I cannot resist playing lots of blues guitar over this type of laidback shuffle groove. It's really easy and you can do heavy or gentle playing. Or fast. Anything, really.

"Was interesting for the whole track even if it took almost 9 minutes"

That's my aim. It's unacceptable to me if any of my sections are boring so I have to keep doing all sort of things, big and small, to maintain listener interest and justify the length. I assure you I could have made this a lot longer and a couple of people have said they wouldn't have minded if I had.

Thanks.

Thanks for ur feed back bro..its Neely finished it I just have to master it..XD

Thank you!
You have a point... That melody is really a bit louder than optimal, but his balance is not too smooth. With some decreased volume, some notes of the melody is a bit lose into another instruments sometimes, furthermore some background guitar loop's rough cut's clipping (dozens if not hundreds!) will be lot more audible and like that, the track sounds on the whole less enjoyable. So this is a compromised resort after all. :)

Regards, traz

I'm not sure what shots you refer to, but I'll defer to your judgement. I'm surprised to hear the reggae hook up but I've been told it is a 6/8 beat....is that the same thing? Thanks for your listen and critique and what yo liked about the track. vic

Thank you mudhoen.
I really had fun remixing this song.Yes,Spivkurl has his very unique style and a very distinctive one.
Thank you for taking the time.

Nelson

Yo there Mud.
There's a few longish empty bits not much happening but they were there to accomodate the lyrics which I might try again to put in there.
Thanks mate.

Thanks man, appreciate it :)

Hey dude, thanks for listening! :)

Thank you i will try to edit that ! :D.

Thanks.

I have to work hard at getting that clarity. And I'm sure there's always room for improvement. I think I've finished a track, upload it to Looperman and then find loads of small (sometimes big) ways of improving it. I'm not even talking about things that people have suggested in comments. I just notice loads of problems so I go back and fix them.

I'm not hearing many obvious problems with this one but I bet I can find some.

Good to hear you enjoyed it.