The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar - Sheensheep

13th Jul 2016 23:23 - 10 years ago
Description : Recently I've been quite into future bass and this my first real try at making it.

Looking forward to some constructive criticism. Hope you enjoy

You'll find the artwork for this track here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vaLe8kXM9fg

Update - This is the updated completed version of the song featuring Eshar on the vocals.This is a very experimental track and hopefully you'll be pleasantly surprised by it.

I don't know where else to put this, but I really want to thank the Looperman community for giving my track a chance. It's almost hit 800 plays and it's got so many favorites, it's insane. Thanks to everyone who made this the song it is right now.

Comments (44)

If you have time take a listen and give sheensheep some feedback.

Auvusya
Auvusya 21st Jul 2017 16:57 - 9 years ago
very nice!!
topclass
topclass 21st May 2017 03:02 - 9 years ago
This is really fantastic I really loved it a lot
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 15th Jun 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks! Appreciate it.

-Sheen
BatFoy
BatFoy 24th Sep 2016 02:31 - 9 years ago
dope as hell brother...really killed it fam
lets work...i got project files....FUTURE BASS project files ;)
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 15th Jun 2017 - 9 years ago
Finally getting back to replying to old comments on my tracks so I'm a little late Haha Anyways I'm currently busy on a lot of projects, so maybe in the future we could collab! I'm really glad you liked the track.

-Sheen
44FORE
44FORE 3rd Sep 2016 11:26 - 10 years ago
Wow this is amazing!, how did you come up with such great sounding track with good rhythms i love every part of it,
P.S the kick is crazzyy man!!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 4th Sep 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. I wanted to make a track in triplets, so I did Haha. Glad you liked it.

-Sheen
GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic 2nd Sep 2016 13:05 - 10 years ago
love it! simply amazingg! you mixed those sounds pretty damn well.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 4th Sep 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks Haha I'm glad it sounded good and you liked it.

-Sheen
Rhodesy
Rhodesy 27th Aug 2016 11:58 - 10 years ago
This is a trip from start to finish Sheen.Lots of great ideas and big compressed sounds,dirty, almost nasty! but it draws the listener in.Great job dude.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 27th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.

-Sheen
EazyBeatz
EazyBeatz 23rd Aug 2016 03:06 - 10 years ago
This track must have wizardry in it! Superb , First love type of situation, Def. Fav. for sure!! - EazyBeatz :)
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 24th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Haha no wizardry, just lots of practice and a little bit of luck.

-Sheen
NateJMusic
NateJMusic 23rd Aug 2016 03:06 - 10 years ago
Simply fire...
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 27th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Really glad you like it.

-SHeen
beerling1970
beerling1970 22nd Aug 2016 23:21 - 10 years ago
HOLY ##### this is a work of art I have just fallen in total love with this and had a vision of someone dancing to this while I was listening to it.

Steve
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 23rd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. Really glad this song resonated with you.

-Sheen
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 21st Aug 2016 18:42 - 10 years ago
AMAZING TRACK!

Every second of the track is total eargasm xD

Loved the LFO automations in the drop. Very perfect!

I thought the second drop would be identical to the first but I was wrong.
Second drop was really a twist for me. Nice trap stuff there too!

Amazing work on vocals. Takes the track to another level.

The dreamy synths and leads throughout the track were nice. Nice reverb on them.

Mixing is on point. Great work.

Any tips for making future bass would be helpful.

Regards,
Aviat
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 23rd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Haha Thanks for all your points and I'm glad you really liked the song.

By the way I only recently found this out, but the bass on the first drop is barely audible on speakers, but can be heard on earphones and headphones. I wonder if that's a problem I need to look out for next time.

As for tips, I don't really have that many I'm learning as well Haha But for future bass, there's a lot of focus on melody and harmony. Try learning about 7th and 9th chords.

-Sheen
ArchaicDreamz
ArchaicDreamz 21st Aug 2016 04:05 - 10 years ago
cool tune
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 21st Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks, glad you liked it.

-Sheen
GregVincey
GregVincey 11th Aug 2016 17:47 - 10 years ago
Yey! Looperman future bass take over. Need a catergory for this sound on looperman. So everybody will know the future bass take over ^-^

Dope LFO saw with noise! Those 808's goes in hard tho! Congratz dude, your skills are getting there.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 11th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Haha definitely. Future bass is gonna picking up some serious traction soon. I'm glad you liked my song.

P.S. Just as a tip for anyone else reading this, the saw really isn't an LFO. It's sidechained to silent drums so I can get the rhythm I want easily and I used a utility (basically a volume meter for Ableton) to make it sound cleaner. Just using sidechain sounded a bit messy.

-Sheen
Lorbemzo
Lorbemzo 11th Aug 2016 04:03 - 10 years ago
Hey! I've been working on my version of this song, and I'd thought that you would like to hear what I've been working on! This track is not yet complete and is not my entry to the constest, and I've thinking about starting over. Thanks! https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/178616
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 11th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Sadly I can't give feedback on the song until the competition is over. It would be unfair to others. Based on what other people think of your post and your intuition, you must decide if you want to change it or not. Just remember to complete it and send the final song to me by the deadline on August 31st.

-Sheen
mudhoen
mudhoen 10th Aug 2016 20:00 - 10 years ago
You cant hear that this is your first try on this genre. It sounds more like an experienced production. You seamlessly fit teh vocals and synths together as a whole and have a lot of variation in the melody and beat. It was and is a joy to listen to and cant give you any hints as it is perfect in my ears! Respect and favoured!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 10th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
I still feel like I've got a lot of work to do when it comes to my future productions, but I'm glad it sounded spot on to you.

-Sheen
milesatdenver
milesatdenver 10th Aug 2016 10:20 - 10 years ago
CRAZY! if you ever wanna collab on some future bass that is my favorite genre ever! really trying to get into the fundamentals of it, the bells around 1:20 are fantastic!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 10th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
I'm happy you loved it. Sorry I'm getting ready to start college in a week and as a result, I'm too busy to be working on collabs atm. Maybe some other time.

-Sheen
athousandmarias
athousandmarias 10th Aug 2016 09:57 - 10 years ago
Love this, sheensheep. The piano keys and Eshar’s soothing voice brings me to a meditative state then as the beat kicks in.. I’m suddenly possessed to do some popping kind of dance with a fierce look on my face. It's crazy! (But you wouldn’t want to see it. Hehehe.) That’s the power of your track. I want to share this to my dancer friends and see what they can choreograph out of this. Great track artwork too. It reflects what I experience as I listen to the track. Looking forward to more future bass tracks from you! :)
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 10th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Just Sheen is fine Haha And I'm glad you enjoyed the song so much. If a product does indeed come out of this, don't hesitate to share it.

-Sheen
Yoboya
Yoboya 9th Aug 2016 03:20 - 10 years ago
Since i cant reply 2 ur reply :/ i have 2 make new a comment, sorry. But foley is ordinary everyday sounds like opening a can of soda, or picking up your keys to go Pokemon hunting. A song that i heard recency thats uses foley well is > https://soundcloud.com/ujico/ramune. Ignore the weeaboo background, but like the squeaky bed, the glasses clinking together and what i think is a gun are all examples of foley.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 9th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Yeah, one of the disadvantages of Looperman I wish would change is definitely being able to thread replies on comments.
And I'll look into that for my next song. Thanks.

P.S. Really liking the song you showed me

-Sheen
Kiwf
Kiwf 9th Aug 2016 03:09 - 10 years ago
By colorful, I mean plucky. Your synth is very smooth, but I think it could've used a pluck in the drop.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 9th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Understood. Thanks for the feedback.

-Sheen
Kiwf
Kiwf 8th Aug 2016 23:47 - 10 years ago
Love the trippy-ness of the track, but the synth could have been more colorful. Just my option ;) Probably going to enter.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 9th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. What do you mean by colorful? And I hope you do end up joining the competition.

-Sheen
Lorbemzo
Lorbemzo 8th Aug 2016 17:05 - 10 years ago
Quick question, is this track going at 60 BPM? I just want to know for my take on it :) Thanks!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 8th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
118 BPM to be exact.

-Sheen
Yoboya
Yoboya 8th Aug 2016 05:56 - 10 years ago
Lay off on the crunch kick and go for more of a house/dance kick, and try to use some foley. besides that i like day track u got
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 8th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. I'm considering this track as done and move on, so I'll keep the criticism about changing the kick around for my next song (the kick has been mentioned a few times).

And can you tell me what foley is by the way? Do you know any good songs which used foley well?

-Sheen
austinmusic
austinmusic 8th Aug 2016 00:35 - 10 years ago
Not normally my type of music but I started listening and couldn't stop. Love this! Super well done, sounds really professional and clean, definitely something special here. Good work!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 8th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks for your opinion. I'm really happy you liked it even though it's not really your type of music.

-Sheen
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 7th Aug 2016 19:40 - 10 years ago
Very cool and interesting piece! I liked the minimalism of it, which kept the loudness of the mix at a good level, while still being able to hear the intricacies. Fun arrangement and sequencing as well! So, can you explain what I should look for which differentiates "future bass" from "trap" or "dubstep?" I've never really figured it out. I like the song a lot, I'd just like to learn more about what makes this genre what it is. Thanks for sharing the piece!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 7th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I'll see to keeping my future productions minimal to some extent and intricate. And I'll give you a quick rundown for each genre and give you an artist to look into so you can clearly listen to the difference.

Dubstep - Loud and dirty (Excision)
Trap - Minimal and more focus on bass (Troyboi)
Future Bass - Much more melodic and synth focused (San Holo (my fav artist rn))

The first drop for the song I made can be considered future bass (more focus on melody and synth) while the second drop is pretty much trap (more focus on bass). Hope this helps clear things up.

-Sheen
himazika
himazika 7th Aug 2016 15:48 - 10 years ago
So far 14 users have left a comment on this track.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 7th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
And so far, only 14 users have left constructive comments with their opinion. Next time, when you comment on someone's track, please make it worth their time.

-Sheen
onlyhits
onlyhits 6th Aug 2016 01:51 - 10 years ago
Wow I didn't think you could have improved on this track but you just did it! I love the intro and the vocals only add to the track. Great job!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 6th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks, I'm glad the song resonated with you. Couldn't have finished it without Eshar.

P.S. Interested in joining the remix competition for this song?

-Sheen
Gnasty
Gnasty 5th Aug 2016 20:42 - 10 years ago
Yo this is banging! I love this track, sounds incredibly professional and is a great first (or any) attempt at future bass. Im loving the breaks in the synth and the overall vibe of the song, the vocals are super fitting too. Sounds like Blackmill or something. Keep on killin it!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 6th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks I'll make sure I keep working to improve myself.

-Sheen
Lorbemzo
Lorbemzo 5th Aug 2016 17:51 - 10 years ago
I will start working on my remix of this track, this will be super fun!!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 5th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
That's great. Looking forward to hearing your take on this track.

-Sheen
MisterBloodworth
MisterBloodworth 5th Aug 2016 01:36 - 10 years ago
Oh hell. This is definitely heavy and crisp. Future Trap, yeah? I love the various sfx, and leads you have all throughout the track. Very calm in certain places like around 1:37. Your mixing is really sharp, and your use of the fat 808's are hella full. Nice man!

~GO
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 5th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks, appreciate it, GO.

-Sheen
eshar
eshar 4th Aug 2016 21:17 - 10 years ago
Thank you for adding my vocals to the track. I really like this and like I said before you have a natural talent. It will be interesting to see how others re-interpret your vision. I might even have a go at the remix comp myself lol.

Elaine
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 4th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. It was great having your vocals. The track really feels complete now. And if you do take part, good luck!

-Sheen
7venth12
7venth12 4th Aug 2016 07:51 - 10 years ago
Love to hear more future bass on here, future bass is my specialty and it excites me to hear more artist produce it!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 4th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks, you should be expecting some more experimental future bass music like this from me soon.

-Sheen
rustlemyjimmies
rustlemyjimmies 4th Aug 2016 01:29 - 10 years ago
Probably one of the best track I've heard lately. I'm nitpicking here but maybe it'd sound better if the vocals were more wet. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 4th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks appreciate the kind words. You should check out the updated version with proper vocals this time.

-Sheen
Lorbemzo
Lorbemzo 3rd Aug 2016 22:00 - 10 years ago
From 0:50 onward, it made me think about my future lmao. This is great, and I look forward to your future tracks!

By the way, do you have a soundcloud? If so, could you link it to me?
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 3rd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks Haha There's an updated version coming soon with lyrics, so there's gonna be more to think about.

And my Soundcloud link is https://soundcloud.com/sheen-the-sheep

You won't find tracks like this there though. They're older and I've been changing my style to fit something more like this track: future bass/experimental. Hopefully you'll stil find some enjoyment in the old songs I've made.

-Sheen
Darknives
Darknives 3rd Aug 2016 17:01 - 10 years ago
Maybe I would just de-compress it or (de-limit) a little. The wave form seems peaked in some parts, probably would be nicer on the hears and more dynamic if you lowered it just a bit.
Darknives
Darknives 3rd Aug 2016 16:59 - 10 years ago
Nice one man, didn't expect it when I read "trap". Way different than average. Has a really nice flow and rythm.
I have some different trap tracks too, would like your opinion.
Keep them coming
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 3rd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Haha yeah, It's a very experimental track, so genre-wise, even I'm not sure. And I'll be sure to check out your tracks. And thanks for the feedback.

-Sheen
pimikol
pimikol 3rd Aug 2016 12:27 - 10 years ago
Your track is dope dude! Well done, keep going!

3Styler
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 3rd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks!

-Sheen
eshar
eshar 2nd Aug 2016 22:03 - 10 years ago
I like it...very imaginative and I can understand why you gave it the title you did. I disagree about the comment that you didn't need the vocal fx....the track has been well thought out and it all works well. You asked in the forum for someone to do spoken word and I have done a few....whereabouts in the track would you use the spoken word?
Anyway....I'll message you and give you my email and you can send the passage you have in mind. I'll record it and don't worry if you don't use it.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 2nd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the kind words. Appreciate it and glad that you liked it. I've sent you an email.

-Sheen
onlyhits
onlyhits 21st Jul 2016 13:35 - 10 years ago
Beautiful, well-pieced track. Personally, I think that you should have used some different drum sounds but you could have been going for a different feel than I was thinking.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 2nd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. I wanted the kick to sound dirty for this track so it had more impact, since it was very minimal at certain points.

-Sheen
StylesBM
StylesBM 20th Jul 2016 17:30 - 10 years ago
THAT WAS GODLY M8 HOLY #####!!!!!!!!!!!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 21st Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Haha Thanks

-Sheen
highpoint
highpoint 20th Jul 2016 16:27 - 10 years ago
great beat, my dude! That drop is so clean and engineered exactly like a big-name future bass song. I love the vox chops, and the melodies to accompany it :]
Overall sounds great. Loved it
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 21st Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks. Hopefully I'm consistent with my engineering in future tracks.

-Sheen
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive 19th Jul 2016 16:59 - 10 years ago
This track is a great production. In my opinion, the kick Sounded Good With Its Powerful Feeling, But I Don't Think It Fits With The Beat. The Vocal FX You Used Here And There Don't Really Need To Be In The Beat, But It Still Fits Well & Sounds Good. The Transitions were amazing & really keep me drawn into the beat to want to know what's coming next. Keep putting up more work I'd love to see more tracks from you. Also, if you wouldn't mind checking out my tracks, and leaving some feedback I'd appreciate that.

- Billion
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 21st Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks, I appreciate the comments. And of course I'll check your tracks.

-Sheen
TayaliJeffrey
TayaliJeffrey 17th Jul 2016 19:43 - 10 years ago
trust my guy love the beat please put out more projects and do stay in touch always a pleasure to chat to like minds
TuneDef
TuneDef 17th Jul 2016 01:12 - 10 years ago
Crisp...Clean...Classic Mix!
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 17th Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks!

-Sheen
Art0fficial
Art0fficial 17th Jul 2016 00:34 - 10 years ago
(Something I wrote to this beat)

.cataract smoke
.battle - axe stroke
.thems fighting words dope
.im aiming my scope
.-1 punch k-o to the throat
.plant the flag and
.then stand and deliver you mad?
.mad arrows out the quiver you gasp...

Dope beat homie, keep it up. Liked the drums transitions and the screams.
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 17th Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Those are some good bars. However I didn't imagine this as rap piece, I have another vision for it.

Thanks for the feedback. And what screams are you talking about? Like what time?

-Sheen
TayaliJeffrey
TayaliJeffrey 15th Jul 2016 20:35 - 10 years ago
wow nice hella trill beat love the sounds the builds,drops
the mix was nicely done that kick is smacking hard good stuff mate that reverb on that vocal as it pans and fades out good stuff that was a highlight for me
kindly share some mixing tips
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 16th Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. In terms of mixing, I did quite a bit of layering. The kick for example, I wanted it to sound dusty, so I found a hip hop type kick with more of a high end and layered it with a low end kick to give it some punch. Also, use volume levels to choose which parts you want to focus on (for this one the dusty kick was the focus so it was louder). I guess training your ear to what you like and think sounds good is the best tip I can give.

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