Very original and interesting start. The track sounds like a big build up to a musical climax. But the climax is not there at the moment. I think you could make a nice drop at the 1:35 mark. Maybe introduce a new synth or add an extra layer to the existing sounds. A very nice start of a potential great track...
thank you very much for the kind words .
agree with you about 1:35 too , but according to this my only track all & all made by loops , I haven't written any note for this , and I won't .
24 people have downloaded this and maybe one of them can add another synth layer to it .
I really appreciate your comment .
thanks man , no i busted up some envelops in a malstrom tweeked some noobs and came out with this sound that almost has a loop to it when i hit the key and sounds wicked
no arps nothing and that is one key making all that noise
Man Orlando, your musical learning curve has gone up a few levels I hear. You definetly know how to create some great musical expression. The first part is an almost classical piece of art. Very nice and warm instruments combined with a great melody in the first part with the guitar ramping up a bit of tempo in the second part. The only thing I personally would leave out ist the drum part at the end. I think less is more here. Nevertheless big complemnts for ccreating this very nice piece of music!
Very nice ambient chill out music. A very mystical ambient sound that really captures your trip to Bali. The eastern sound with all the background sounds turn this track into a deep layered quality sound. The choir at the end is unexpected but fits well into this piece.
Very nice start with the guitar....a real tensionmaker! A good mix between electronic music and soft rock. YOu managed to keep the sounda very clear and full which makes this track stand out. You can hear this is not your first track...very well done!
Well....a nice preview it definetly is. Nice timing on the vocals. You might turn the bass a notch up when you start your vocals. Then it will sound a bit more full. But great stuff overall. Looking forward to hear the whole track.
Damn this track is a journey on its own. From the hasty highway through the industrial part of the town straight to the central station and back again!The constant flow of the modulation gives this track a lot of energy. The vocal breaks are very smart implented to keep teh track interesting all 6 minutes long. Nice work!
Hey mudhoen! Thank you for taking a listen to this one and leaving your words! Had a blast recording this one, and it was quite cathartic as well. The song captured a moment in time pretty successfully, which is not always easy to do within the confines of a DAW. Been having an interesting time rehabilitating from all the years of virtual sound, and I think it is helping me grow as an artist. I really appreciate you stopping by!
Fun track to listen to. Very nice saw sound in the synths. The vocals are funny and keep the track very vivid. A little variation like a break or a drop would give it a boost. Nevertheless good job!
Good solid track! Like the vocals although they dont come out very clear. Just skip the autotune if you used it. Your vocals are definetly strong enough to do without. I will send you an email for the track i made. We can try to make some banger if you want.
Very smooth and great production. I agree on the fact that your voice has been processed a bit too much as I think that your original voice sounds ore than good enough on its own. But for the rest solid sounds and great timing on the vocals! Great job!
I think this track has a lot of potential. The sounds are fun and the vocals are fitted in nicely. The only problem is the mixing. The sounds dont reach its full potential as they are undersnowed by all the other sounds. You might change the volume and panning of teh sounds to make the track much richer as it is in its current state.
Thanks, I didnt even realize there was a whole world or technique to mixing having to do with panning, Im looking into it, Ill investigate it and try to do something
Nice to hear some hardcore on LM. Fun to see these old tracks come by when pushing the random button on here. It sounds a bit more like hardstyle but the melody is very catchy!
Very nice and epic sound! Love the genre especially for the big boost it gives. You made a very solid track with some nice build ups and drops. At the 1:30 you really step it up a notch and turns into a real banger! Very good first try. Maybe you could turn up the sound of the synth a little bit. Definetly worth the favor!
Nice dark sound with some nice Cramer-vocals are good inmgredients to make some great music. And this one is not an exception. Very well mixed and executed. Sehr schön!
First i have to say sorry for the late reply.
Always good to read some nice comments on a song like yours!
Good to know that you liked what i did and that you believe that i done it well.
I am happy that i don't disappointed you.
Thanks for the listen and the friendly words Mudhoen.
Very odd but fun combination. I imagine it must have been a lot of fun to creat this track. Very fun sounds blended together in a nice mix. The sounds are overlapping eachother which cause some of teh sounds dont come out perfectly clear. But nevertheless a fun track to listen to. Well done!
Very nice track! You can really feel the motion of the midnight express and teh sounds come out very clear. I like the hook you used. It really sets up for the rest of the track. Well done!
thank you for sharin your personal feeling! i probably work again on it (some details) but i need before to finish an other track, a dub sound in the spirit of High Tone :)
Really good track with top notch vocals. Very soulful and warm. The instrumental is backing the vocals great and stand out next to her beautiful voice!
Love to hear some dnb for a change especially made as well as this track. Very sick low beat with nice change in the rythm. The effects are subtle and fit perfect to the dark atmosphere created by the bassline. Well done!
You cant hear that this is your first try on this genre. It sounds more like an experienced production. You seamlessly fit teh vocals and synths together as a whole and have a lot of variation in the melody and beat. It was and is a joy to listen to and cant give you any hints as it is perfect in my ears! Respect and favoured!
Very nice track. A very promising intro turning into a laidback sound which really gets you going. I definetly agree that some good vocals could turn this already good track into a banger. Hope you can find a good singer!
Nice track. Your vocals sound like a mix between bone thugs and outkast and that is a big compliment. I understand the most of what you are saying so clear enough for me. The beat is good and fits the vocals nicely!
Great melodic intro. The drop is very energetic and makes me shake my head up and dwon :p. After the climax you start very little again. the sudden synth that comes back again is a bit too sudden. You might be automate the volue there a bit to let it glide in a bit more. The 2nd drop is well executed again and gives a good feel to the track. Maybe you could lower teh bass sound just a notch. But overall hats off. Cool track!
Thanks for the tips and guidances man ...
Sorry for bad mixing , its a demo
After uploading this , I mix and master it and it to hardwell reveald and avicii as a demo track ... IDK they will answer me or not . Im not real pro but I have energy and head full of melodies ... I wish they answer me .
on the heartbeat by Prelude
agree with you about 1:35 too , but according to this my only track all & all made by loops , I haven't written any note for this , and I won't .
24 people have downloaded this and maybe one of them can add another synth layer to it .
I really appreciate your comment .
on RD 8 - LX jay by LXjay
no arps nothing and that is one key making all that noise
on Post War Etude by Orlando51
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on Good Morning Bali by EtherBlu
Great job and thanks for posting.
Glad you like the track and appreciate your detailed feedback! :)
Cheers!
-EB
on Synthesiz3r - Beach Cruise 84 by Synthesiz3r
on Titan - Preview by kingmadi
on FiveCar SmileUp by Spivkurl
on Marnie Grant - The Meaning Of Love by MarnieG
on SupernovaMusique and New5ense - Say Yeah by IGS
on THC - SAVE U by TrippyHippyCrew
on In The Future by RogueAi
on Billion - One And Only by BillionaireExclusive
on Psychedelic Funk by igorsamanski
on Tonight by TaraToxic
on New generation by Aftalyfe
on The Joker by Madorian
Also thanks for the comment, I really enjoyed making Big Room so I started a new Big Banger :v Will upload it in 1 hour approx ;)
on Standhaft bleiben - electro version by joecramer
Always good to read some nice comments on a song like yours!
Good to know that you liked what i did and that you believe that i done it well.
I am happy that i don't disappointed you.
Thanks for the listen and the friendly words Mudhoen.
stay tuned
joe
on Break You Off Tonight by igorsamanski
on Yokosso Najimura by DubSmockers
on When You Are Here Music by Rakia by FullCapicityMuzic
on The Knowing by swindla007
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
-Sheen
on Bad Times by PapaNelson
on Billion - Passion by BillionaireExclusive
on Alone by MGproduct
Sorry for bad mixing , its a demo
After uploading this , I mix and master it and it to hardwell reveald and avicii as a demo track ... IDK they will answer me or not . Im not real pro but I have energy and head full of melodies ... I wish they answer me .