Hey man, this one's a little different and less psychedelic than your usual tracks. I gave this a few listens and I would consider this a blues track more than jazz. The chords and structure and even the instruments remind me of classic old blues songs. You've gone and added you style and jewelry to the track but imho it reeks of the blues in a personal and unique way though. I hear some jazz stylizing in there but it's done in a blues context. I don't get too hung up on genres so you can heave my opinion in the trash if you like. I just like it when people break the rules and do something different and you do and you are.:)
Even though I thought the slower parts were pretty good I thought the parts that were built up really stood out. The first transition around 2:55 was cool, was that where the electric cello gets it's mojo on? The theremin sounding instrument was scary, a different texture to mix it up. The chugging guitars were about right for the track, that def worked.
Good length and a definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you. I liked it. A good change of direction musically and an overall cooool track. Mix top notch!
Yeah, I guess a bit less psychedelic - perhaps just a different type of psych vibe rather than my more usual beautiful, funky psych stuff. Darker and weirder this time though I never like to go too weird. Gotta keep it melodic and groovy.
I was really planning to disagree with you about the blues thing but I've listened more since your comment and thought hard about it and now partly agree. There is some cool blues playing from guitar (comes naturally to me) but I still hear the Rhodes as being much more jazzy. I have no idea how to play jazz or any other style as I'm a self-taught feel player who doesn't read music or really know any music theory. Give me a good swing groove and I can play in a jazzy way, otherwise I won't/can't.
I like the "jewelry" term. I guess my use of effects and stuff is a bit like jewelry. Hopefully effective and not just pretty adornments with no susbstance underneath.
" I just like it when people break the rules"
That's pretty much my aim with every track. I'm only really interested in creating something new that I can't hear anywhere else. Even if it's not brilliant, I can still be proud of its ambition and intent to do something different.
2:55 is where the big, evil synth horn sound comes in. I think that's what inspired the metal in this as that is a big, badass sound and just screamed "metal" to me. Well, that and the emphasis on the tritone (flattened fifth) in many parts of the track. See - I do know a tiny bit of music theory ie a few note names (oh, and major and minor scales, that's it).
No cello at 2:55. See my reply to Evisma about that so that I don't have to type it again. The new instrument is not gong too well, which is a shame (most expensive instrument I've ever bought but it does look nice) but hopefully it'll come alive when I get a bow. Only subtle cello in this track and it sounds more like double bass (as it's plucked).
" theremin sounding instrument" is a string part plus filtering and delays. Pretty evil and just playing the main horn theme. Haunting stuff. Also returns in the penultimate track section though Evisma didn't like it.
" definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you."
Hey, you know that my tracks have definite endings. I still haven't done a fadeout. They don't have endings at all on Looperman when they're over 11 mins. But I almost always put a link up to the full thing elsewhere.
Yes, I think the mix on this pretty good. A rather beautiful-looking waveform (and you can clearly see where the metal is). I'm not quite sure why it looks like that but there seems to be some real balance in sounds or something. People who know more about the technicalities of audio might be able to explain it to me.
Nice finishing track to an album. I've always thought the order of tracks was important to the flow and listeners experience while listening to an entire album. Very pretty song, nice singing, well played bedrock of sound to support the vocals. Nice touches with some great guitar fills. Mix sounds nice as well.
Sounds like you spent a great deal of time on the tracks, it shows, nice job!
Hi Wayne,
Good to read your words.
I also believe that the track sequence in a record is very important: I usually listen to music in "albums"
And for me the songs are "chained" together to form the whole picture.
So this was my humble attempt to realize something along these lines.
Take care,
Domenico
I could def hear this in a film and in a number of genres of films. The loops certainly do their job and are nicely arranged to create a couple different settings and moods. Being creative with what ya got is the key to having fun with music. I'm smiling listening to it, hope you were making it!
I always dig your mixes, they are very clean and your choice of panning here makes me think deep about such things. Great guitar and wah effects. There is so much to listen to in your tracks but they never seem crowded. Always a pleasure!
Thanks allot for checking it out. I appreciate your comment about my tracks never seeming crowded. I do realize I put allot of stuff in my tracks and sometime think I may be overdoing it, so it's good to hear I'm not.
Reminded me a bit of The Cure's "Killing an Arab" and some of their other tracks. Really wished there were some vocals like that on this one. It is broken down musically which I like but in my opinion Spiv needs to lay down some awesome lyrics!!
Hey Wayne, thank you for stopping by! I hadn't thought of it, but you are right about the comparison with that Cure song. I guess my feeling was more along the lines of Joy Division/New Order sort of stuff, but early Cure is definitely only a stone's throw away from that style. I agree this needs vocals, and I have a little bit of lyrics written for it. Have a whole list of things to get done, and recording vocals is not on there sadly... so we'll see if it gets done. I'd like to maybe redo the patches on this one, as people have complained about tuning/detuning issues. I did a recalibration of my main VCO, and I should be able to adjust the korg melody as well. This would probably make the vocals easier. The only unfortunate thing is the bass part was done on the modular, and while I can control it with the same MIDI info, I will need to set up the patch again from memory... ha ha... so probably this will change shape. I appreciate the comment my friend!
This has such a cool 70's classic rock sound, almost reminds me of Peter Frampton in some weird way!:) The keys, big reverb vocals and cool funky blues feel to it just brings me back to a very cool time where r n b, rock, blues, soul, funk were all experimenting with each others sound. Very well put together, love the guitar, great wah and some nice clean rhythm played. Well done Domineco, great track!
Very nice song Domenico. I like the opposing vocal styles, one talking and one singing, it works well with the music, a ballad pop/rock song. Every song needs that gut wrenching guitar to pull at the heartstrings a bit. Nice tone and phrasing on the guitar, really helps build the song and create emotion. Great use of strings and piano which to me can set that ballad feel on their own.
Your vocals could cut through a bit more, maybe too much bass on them. Seems like you plan to adjust the bass a bit. That would be my only suggestion, other than that this is a very pretty song, well done!
Thanks Wayne: the problem with my "vocals" is that I don't trust my voice that much...so it is very hard for me to have it "clear in the mix" :-)
I am working on reducing the lows: I usually work with earphones and there the "natural low cut" is hiding the problem.
Thanks again for the input!
Ciao, Domenico
##### you love playing that mando! Banjo too? Well it looks like you have been having some fun the months you've been gone. Good to hear a new one Kyle, love the song. It has all my favorite instruments and packaged just like I like 'em!
Great job singing. The mix sounds pretty good here in my studio set up. The instruments are well recorded. Well done man!
This was quite enjoyable Alex. Such a nice laid back rnb groove. Both of your talents work well together, the song sounds great! The low tones of the keys almost go unnoticed but they add a lot, nicely mixed!
Thank you Wayne for nice words! I played the keys on plugins (MrRay22 is my favourite), lots of effects. Ferryterry's guitar part is quite short in here - it was something from our older project but I noticed some fragments may fit here.
I have a new track ready to go (again a collab with ferryterry) - I will upload it today later. It is a chilled jam track over a minor blues with some nice soloing he just recorded.
Very interesting approach and I liked the track. I felt the kick in the end could use a change like ZankFrappa mentioned, if anything just for some variation. In Ableton's orchestral pack the timpani sounds are great, just used some myself.
Mix sounds pretty good. It is creepy and a bit weird but cinematic no doubt. Well done!
Hello Wayne, Thanks for this comment I have the new version who I changed a bit the kick pattern and adding the Ochestra kit for the "melody" parts at end this is now better and way less repetitive has beat
Again thanks for this feedback and I do used a Timpani in this track it is in the past "middle" part with the Ochestra kit
Pretty cool rock track. Certainly liked the tempo change, that is not an easy thing to do, I concur. I thought the marimba and the synth shared similar freqs or are close so I might suggest eq or something to separate those two sounds a bit, maybe panning would work?
The tune cranks and the bass really steals the show, your usual means of musical destruction. I wish you knew a singer in your parts that would lay down some cool vocals for you, it would really bring your tracks to a new level.
I like the main chord progression the song has, it is easy to like. As well as the vocals, something familiar about them I like. They sound like Graham Parker a bit, he has a great voice I think. Your delivery is clean and the words are easily understandable.
I like this kind of rock, rhythm based with some great melodies along side a cranking lead. Cool bass, liked the acoustic guitar a lot, just the right amount of each guitar and mixed well. The song is quite catchy, I gave it a few listens and plan to dl this one. Once again you guys hit the mark with this track!
Great job Bear and Mark for putting this together and thanks for sharing Guys!
That is cool you gave this a go and tried Joe's funk style mixed with an element of your influences. Some cool changes and breaks. Sound like some retro/disco funk-alicious dance music from the 80's. I would have to say your mission was accomplished, sounds like Free Funktastic music to me!
Not only did you create the music but the instruments to play the music on, too cool man.
Can't say I have any cd's or albums with music like this on it but it doesn't mean I don't like it or can't appreciate what went into putting this track together. It's upbeat and fun and unique, perfect! nice one Spiv!
Hey Wayne, I appreciate the feedback! I don't know if I can lay claim to playing the music on this synth, more like creating the sounds, but I know what you mean (and not all my instruments are like that). I'm not sure if I even have any albums with stuff like this on it, but I wouldn't mind finding some! I wanted it to be a fun song, so that makes me happy. Thank you very much for taking a listen!
Hey Mr. Darkrein, been a while since I've seen you, hope all is well!
I think the singing added quite a bit to the song. Nice voice too, nice big reverb/delay on them. Ed is a great musician and the song as an instrumental stands on its own.
Yeah he is still about but he said one of his arms isn't working too well so he can't really play at the moment. Hopefully he'll make a full recovery.
As for the track, I like the idea but i didn't mix it down very well (it's a bit to trebble saturated) I'd love to do it again some time.
Cheers for dropping by and commenting.
FR
Right off the bat the snappy snare made me happy! Nice track overall, everything from composition to performance to production is top notch. This has a great relaxed feel and a positive vibe. Nice keys as well. Way to go TG!
Glad you enjoyed all of it, not everyone can hear it all, let alone understand it...
That means what you say matters, out here in this world of Music that's a
good thing...Anything positive bring a feel of pleasure with it...That's a good
thing to...
You old softy. Trying to pluck people's heartstrings, aren't you?
My opinion is that keeping things fresh, new and different is the key to making music and growing as an artist. This track would be a perfect track in a set or album list that gives the listener a break from your usually more rambunctious style and then sets up a return to a more rockin' track. It can't always be at 10, can it?
Thought the drums could have had a bit more punch, maybe some more variety as well. I am very guilty of using only one drum loop through a song so it's like I'm throwing stones in a glass house. It's cool to keep things simple though and let other things shine.
I wouldn't say this is the best work I've heard from you but I like that it is different from your other work and incorporates some of your particular sound you have. Keep experimenting and trying new things and start wailing on that ax!!
Gotta do something different every now and then. I did not sit down and intend to do a track like this. I got the first bassline down and then everything else just happened. Seemed like it was supposed to go as it did. But like I said, sounds like something that gets played at a school dance.
The ax will be wailed upon soon! Next one will be heavy.
Has a very new world music sort of feel to it, carefree and a light mood. The transition at 1:27 seemed like too much of an abrupt change happening there. Maybe slowly dropping some things along the way and a smoother transition into the percussion part like maybe adding of a pad or something. Pretty cool idea though, liked the overall feel to it.
Very well constructed song. Lots to keep me interested with the build up of dynamics and the subtle nuances of the piano. Great playing and nice mix, inspirational track, just wonderful!
Thanks for the props .....much appreciated...haven't composed anything new in a few years but trying to get back...been away too long...thanks for stopping by...
This kept me so interested, what was I going to hear next? The horns were a nice touch but the drums, for me, stole the show. Cool percussion as well. I like big band music so this was a cool cross-genre bonanza!
Pretty cool track, gonna dl this one so thanks for sharing PiiiE!
Pretty sweet track already Mr. Wiggles! Great build up and emotional aspects to create a powerful track so far. Strings and vocal pad are so nice, well it all is actually!! Great track to listen to on Christmas morning, gave it an uplifting feeling!
Hi Wayne, thanks for listening and really pleased that it was a good Christmas morning listen for you, and you liked it, that means a lot to me. Hope you are having a good Christmas.
Take care,
Mark
on Emperor Tritone by StaticNomad
Even though I thought the slower parts were pretty good I thought the parts that were built up really stood out. The first transition around 2:55 was cool, was that where the electric cello gets it's mojo on? The theremin sounding instrument was scary, a different texture to mix it up. The chugging guitars were about right for the track, that def worked.
Good length and a definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you. I liked it. A good change of direction musically and an overall cooool track. Mix top notch!
Cheers!
Wayne
Yeah, I guess a bit less psychedelic - perhaps just a different type of psych vibe rather than my more usual beautiful, funky psych stuff. Darker and weirder this time though I never like to go too weird. Gotta keep it melodic and groovy.
I was really planning to disagree with you about the blues thing but I've listened more since your comment and thought hard about it and now partly agree. There is some cool blues playing from guitar (comes naturally to me) but I still hear the Rhodes as being much more jazzy. I have no idea how to play jazz or any other style as I'm a self-taught feel player who doesn't read music or really know any music theory. Give me a good swing groove and I can play in a jazzy way, otherwise I won't/can't.
I like the "jewelry" term. I guess my use of effects and stuff is a bit like jewelry. Hopefully effective and not just pretty adornments with no susbstance underneath.
" I just like it when people break the rules"
That's pretty much my aim with every track. I'm only really interested in creating something new that I can't hear anywhere else. Even if it's not brilliant, I can still be proud of its ambition and intent to do something different.
2:55 is where the big, evil synth horn sound comes in. I think that's what inspired the metal in this as that is a big, badass sound and just screamed "metal" to me. Well, that and the emphasis on the tritone (flattened fifth) in many parts of the track. See - I do know a tiny bit of music theory ie a few note names (oh, and major and minor scales, that's it).
No cello at 2:55. See my reply to Evisma about that so that I don't have to type it again. The new instrument is not gong too well, which is a shame (most expensive instrument I've ever bought but it does look nice) but hopefully it'll come alive when I get a bow. Only subtle cello in this track and it sounds more like double bass (as it's plucked).
" theremin sounding instrument" is a string part plus filtering and delays. Pretty evil and just playing the main horn theme. Haunting stuff. Also returns in the penultimate track section though Evisma didn't like it.
" definite ending, which we don't hear all the time from you."
Hey, you know that my tracks have definite endings. I still haven't done a fadeout. They don't have endings at all on Looperman when they're over 11 mins. But I almost always put a link up to the full thing elsewhere.
Yes, I think the mix on this pretty good. A rather beautiful-looking waveform (and you can clearly see where the metal is). I'm not quite sure why it looks like that but there seems to be some real balance in sounds or something. People who know more about the technicalities of audio might be able to explain it to me.
Take care and glad you like the jazetal.
on I Am Here ft Stacy Robinson by mrwolf14
Sounds like you spent a great deal of time on the tracks, it shows, nice job!
Wayne
Good to read your words.
I also believe that the track sequence in a record is very important: I usually listen to music in "albums"
And for me the songs are "chained" together to form the whole picture.
So this was my humble attempt to realize something along these lines.
Take care,
Domenico
on As Cherry Blossoms Fall-A Samurai Tale by ReignStorms
Wayne
on Sing To Me by ScottB55
Wayne
Thanks allot for checking it out. I appreciate your comment about my tracks never seeming crowded. I do realize I put allot of stuff in my tracks and sometime think I may be overdoing it, so it's good to hear I'm not.
Cheers,
Scott
on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
Well done, interesting as usual!
Wayne
on All the Hell I Have Caused ft Antranita by mrwolf14
Wayne
You are always (too) kind with my work.
Ciao, Domenico
on The End of The Night ft 3v3sound by mrwolf14
Your vocals could cut through a bit more, maybe too much bass on them. Seems like you plan to adjust the bass a bit. That would be my only suggestion, other than that this is a very pretty song, well done!
Wayne
I am working on reducing the lows: I usually work with earphones and there the "natural low cut" is hiding the problem.
Thanks again for the input!
Ciao, Domenico
on You and Me by ImproveWithError
Great job singing. The mix sounds pretty good here in my studio set up. The instruments are well recorded. Well done man!
Wayne
on Joyful Magnification ft ferryterry by promenade2239
Wayne
I have a new track ready to go (again a collab with ferryterry) - I will upload it today later. It is a chilled jam track over a minor blues with some nice soloing he just recorded.
Thanks again! Alex
on Razing Chronos by Byleth
Mix sounds pretty good. It is creepy and a bit weird but cinematic no doubt. Well done!
Wayne
Again thanks for this feedback and I do used a Timpani in this track it is in the past "middle" part with the Ochestra kit
-ant4505
on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
The tune cranks and the bass really steals the show, your usual means of musical destruction. I wish you knew a singer in your parts that would lay down some cool vocals for you, it would really bring your tracks to a new level.
Well done Evan!
Wayne
It doesn't help that I've got a distorted guitar line in there that is also pretty close. I'll be going in soon to fix stuff.
Thanks again! Always good to hear your thoughts.
on Familiar Ground with ShortBusMusic by MWRatridge
I like this kind of rock, rhythm based with some great melodies along side a cranking lead. Cool bass, liked the acoustic guitar a lot, just the right amount of each guitar and mixed well. The song is quite catchy, I gave it a few listens and plan to dl this one. Once again you guys hit the mark with this track!
Great job Bear and Mark for putting this together and thanks for sharing Guys!
Wayne
on Mr Funk by FreeRadical
Wayne
on Taking Two by Spivkurl
Can't say I have any cd's or albums with music like this on it but it doesn't mean I don't like it or can't appreciate what went into putting this track together. It's upbeat and fun and unique, perfect! nice one Spiv!
Wayne
on Black Snake Moan by ScottB55
Cheers,
Scott
on Waiting for the Sun by Darkreine
I think the singing added quite a bit to the song. Nice voice too, nice big reverb/delay on them. Ed is a great musician and the song as an instrumental stands on its own.
Hope all is good on loop radio, see you around!
Wayne
on Chunky and Funky featuring Allen V by FreeRadical
This still rocks out! Great electronic and live music combined, this works!!
Wayne
As for the track, I like the idea but i didn't mix it down very well (it's a bit to trebble saturated) I'd love to do it again some time.
Cheers for dropping by and commenting.
FR
on What My Heart Needs--Instrumental by soundhound
Wayne
That means what you say matters, out here in this world of Music that's a
good thing...Anything positive bring a feel of pleasure with it...That's a good
thing to...
Peace...TG.
on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
My opinion is that keeping things fresh, new and different is the key to making music and growing as an artist. This track would be a perfect track in a set or album list that gives the listener a break from your usually more rambunctious style and then sets up a return to a more rockin' track. It can't always be at 10, can it?
Thought the drums could have had a bit more punch, maybe some more variety as well. I am very guilty of using only one drum loop through a song so it's like I'm throwing stones in a glass house. It's cool to keep things simple though and let other things shine.
I wouldn't say this is the best work I've heard from you but I like that it is different from your other work and incorporates some of your particular sound you have. Keep experimenting and trying new things and start wailing on that ax!!
Wayne
Gotta do something different every now and then. I did not sit down and intend to do a track like this. I got the first bassline down and then everything else just happened. Seemed like it was supposed to go as it did. But like I said, sounds like something that gets played at a school dance.
The ax will be wailed upon soon! Next one will be heavy.
Thanks Wayne.
Evan
on Beautiful Stranger by musiclover38
Wayne
:-)
on Emotions by RealProblemShuckers
Look out, next year you will be a teenager!
Wayne
Actually i'll be a teenager this year (so scared hahaha) on December 30th....
not looking forward to it :)
on Passionate Existence by DSA3098
Wayne
on PiE - Broken PaJamas by PiiiE
Pretty cool track, gonna dl this one so thanks for sharing PiiiE!
Wayne
on My Beautiful Lady by Ranmann45
Still pumping out your sound, cool sounding guitars and a recognizable vocal style. Good to see you!
Wayne
Thx. a lot and my best wishes for 2015 !
Ian
on back into the light by larrywiggles1
Wayne
Take care,
Mark