Sounds like a song to me! I like what you've done so far, decent idea. I don't get too hung up on arrangements, I listen to hear if the idea flows right along, if there are any instruments that just sound out of place or if a change is or isn't working in a track and also if the transitions between the parts are decent. It could use a vocal track(s) but the bones are in place. I like the space in the song, the instruments all seem to be sitting in their spot nicely and the space is there to add some.
I would suggest to keep working it out till you feel more sure of it, hopefully with the response you're getting you should be feeling good about it. I think with a vocal melody you can then add, remove, change anything that might need to be adjusted to it. I often add an instrument to help compliment the vocal track in some way, like a response to the vocal in the form of a guitar lick, piano or pad... You have the guitar, piano/keys already so a singer may be able to fit the singing with what you've already have recorded. Good luck!
Hey man, summer keep you busy? Sounds like someone's been practicing!
I do like what you were doing during the bridges, were you finger tapping the strings on the neck of the guitar or picking it? They were good changes that lead to built up guitar expressions that sounded pretty damn good if you ask me! Let it all out Evan, Hell Yeah!!
I knew a Celeste once. Didn't sound like her. Where do I send the check again? I'm a believer. ;)
Summer has kept me a bit busy. I've taken up bass fishing, which has become an unhealthy addiction.
Bridges were picked on an acoustic with my fingernail. They are very short, but I write nearly every riff fingerstyle on an acoustic, then assign lines to different roles. I've never gotten into tapping.
I have a pretty scratched 45 rpm of Buffet's version, I've always loved this track! Overall, Sam Cooks music is great and I liked Jimmy's version and I totally forgot about Cat Steven's. The backups work, I think they could be even louder. The lead was very cool and unexpected, liked the tone and how it built up. Long live percussion instruments! Vocals are strong all through, nice job with the vox too!
Waye,
Good to see you my friend. TYVM for the cred.
Backing vocals, yeah....I played with them a lot during the mastering and finally decided to drop them into the back because I found myself listening to them and not the lead vocal line. lol
Mark.
Hey Kyle, nice track! Big feeling, cinematic ballad with some singing that fits in with the music well. Interesting processing you have going on, the vox sound good with what you put on them. I can hear you doubling the vocals or is that part of the processing too? Either way it sounds good!
Hey Wayne, I have been pretty busy the last few months and have not had as much time as I would to create anything new or at least what I liked. I made the mistake of trying to write songs that I thought other people would like which didn't work well. Anyway,the chorus has some doubling but the rest is just the fx. Thanks for checking out the track, its always nice to hear your opinion.
Hey Dave! Surfing is a big thing here where I live and so are the shark bites, ouch. Any day you can walk down to the beach and watch people surf on a board, wind surf using a kite, paddle board, body surf... I can totally get the theme and feel of what you have going on. I love watching the surfing vids on you tube of these surfers and the music that accompanies them can be as good as the surfing itself and can set the tone, whether it's wipe-outs or successful big wave, the music always adds a sense of being there.
Endless Summer feel to the track, hot sun and blowing sand musically created helps to set the mood. Need to wipe the sand and sweat off my brow and head back in the water to cool off. ;)
I liked the vocal track, good strong voice. Wish there were more lyrics and singing. There is a cool groove to the track, the bass has a definite presence in the track. To me it has a more of an early new wave feel to it, with your instrument choices, drums and production. The genre really has nothing to do with the quality of the track which has a very even mix and is quite catchy. Upbeat and danceable, very cool!
Hello Wayne,
unfortunately, i only have the voice sample! believe me, if a singer want to add her own voice on this track, i will accept it immediatly :)
for the genre, i wasn't sure! at the beginning, i wanted to make a disco track and the bass line is oriented like this but and you wrote it, the others instruments took me far away from my first purpose... so what genre is it? i don't know! easy listening may be? :)
thanks for yours friendly words Wayne, i appreciate your feedback :)
Your description was certainly helpful in understanding how you approached the concept of this track and went about it's execution. A listener can sink his teeth into a romantic, cinematic, vampire ballad which has me oozing blood out of every pore, it's really neck and shoulders above what I expected.
Thank you so much mate for truly positive reaction on my one and only 'halloween'(?) tune. Maybe it shouldn't have been put in this context but now it's done and who cares.:)
Very grateful for the fav as well !
Population growth is the worlds biggest problem, hands down. Political songs have always interested me. Whether it's folk, rock, punk, electronic or whatever genre, it's relevance to societies issues will appeal to some demographic of it's society and people will listen and totally get and spread the message. My latest track brings up how Americans are living in their yards in Puerto Rico and our prez thinks that he doing a great job. ?????
Your music has always stood alone in my opinion unique, intriguing and well worth listening to. Well put statement in musical form. Right on!(product of the 70's,ha)
Wayne, your comments often make my day, and this was definitely one of them! I apologise for being so behind in responses. It's been a difficult couple of months, and I'm sure you understand.
I too enjoy songs with a political edge, especially when compared to all of the questionable political items present on social media platforms. At least when it comes to music, and looperman specifically, when someone disagrees or is offended it will usually lead to a responsible discussion. So often when I make my views obvious elsewhere, there is an instant reaction of paid political shills, fake news, and questioning of my understanding of scientific method. Life in Amerikkka I guess.
Art and music seems like one of the few hopes for getting messages across which would otherwise be met with defensiveness. Even if I intend an album to lack political objects, it still creeps through. I suppose the only ways to avoid this would be to burn my microphones or start taking the medication again. ;)
Your opinion of my music means a lot to me, especially since I know that you have a hugely varied listening catalog. Thank you for listening! I look forward to visiting your profile today!
Sounds good man! I like the mix the phased instrument and overall feel of the track. The electronic elements and effects to the song really add to the atmosphere and groove. It drives forward like a Queens of the Stone Age song. YUP!
Interesting conceptual piece of music. I envisioned taking a nap on a warm, rainy summer day as a mosquito buzzed in your ear while dreaming of traveling through space with Stephen Hawkins on his time traveling wheelchair.
Guitars, guitars and more guitars, I have no problem with that! Nice to hear a full sound and you didn't have to crush it with a limiter or too much compression. The instruments seem to have more breathing room in the mix, good job! This peaceful, soothing track is fighting my morning coffee buzz. ha!
You can't imagine how many times i had to record these simple melodies and how much time had to cut and edit them in my daw, lol.. I'm the worst guitar player ever (right after Lil Wayne of curse, but he is disqualified for this title :D) and need a few years for improve this to an acceptable level. :)
I haven't seen the new movie yet, I have seen the previous film. This is a very cool production, certainly suites the first one and sure it works for the new one too. Great emotion and tension throughout the track, the arrangement lets it build and fall and tells quite a story.
Neat track. Mix sounds pretty clear, sounded good. Kept stopping during playback, not sure why, my internet connection, site updates, i dunno. Good trippy stoner music...man. he Like others mentioned I liked the piano intro too, nice buildup. Familiar style and instrument choices that separates your music from others.
Good music to listen to when I do a painting to or a chore, rhythmic and abstract and interesting to let the mind wander. World music sorta, kinda, a bit...
Donovan? You mean the 60s acoustic guitar pop music guy? I've barely heard any music he's made but have a feeling I wouldn't like it.
Mix took ages on this, as usual. So much stuff to trim and work into place.
Interrupted playback is rather unfortunate for you. Try listening again with a fully working connection.
"Good trippy stoner music"
I agree. Kind of dark and far out. Maybe a little like world music. It's got some edge and mystical elements that are hard to place. A slightly unsettling vibe but all held together by tight, fat grooves.
"instrument choices that separates your music from others."
That's always the idea - to do something that no one else is doing. That's always my aim but it doesn't always work out.
I watched all the seasons of Gold Rush, found it interesting, learned a lot. I'm not remembering the theme song being quite like this. ;) It's fun when you start with a plan and you end up with something totally different. I paint too and sometimes the peaceful meadow landscape scene in my mind turns into a bustling cityscapes, he. To me, that is the wonder and surprise of being creative and letting yourself take chances, letting the music or artistic endeavor take you in a certain direction rather than force it to go where you want it to go.
I give people a lot of credit who use loops and can create real interesting and unique pieces of music out of them. I thought the track was as good as any other electronic or loop based songs here. I'm not well versed in dance music so I can't get all technical with you about that but I thought this was pretty good. Sounds like something I would hear in an 80's Eddie Murphy movie, it has a cinematic aspect to it, in my opinion.
No guts no glory! Love that show. Is it just me or is Parker a real a-hat sometimes? Just treating your crew with a little respect goes a long way, but he's young and foolish I guess. Still like him though. Thanks for the feedback! That's what I need to keep doing, just play around and have fun, and not worry to much about doing stuff the "right" way.
Not enough guitar music on the loop these days so this is a cool rockin' track to fill the void here. I read your reply to Neo about how certain movie soundtracks like the ones you mentioned influenced you. I totally get what you are saying about music in those flicks. The song Sabotage by the Beastie Boys in the first Star Trek film(in the new series)when the young Kirk steals the convertible car and takes it on a joyride, I was so pumped when that song started! lol Harold and Maude, A Nightmare Before Christmas both have music in them that I enjoy hearing as much as I like to watch the movie. Too many to mention with great meaningful soundtracks.
The song rocks, nice tone on the git, thick and meaty. I think this idea has a cinematic aspect to it, has a passage of time feeling to it to me. Mix sounds pretty darn good as well!
Wayne thanks for your comments i love the looperman site where i get my musical education. I was always very conservative musically as a young man and now i am opening up my mind to every genre i have now checked out beastie boys sabotage lyrics which are awesome made my hair stand on end, there was a fab bass run in it too. thanks bro respect peace out Robbie
Yup, I concur with all the comments so far. Wonderful concept going with a classical approach and what you've done so far would be considered a final project to most people. Can't wait to hear it finished! Maybe some timpani drums, you can never have enough of them! lol
You hit the mark with this one! What can I say that hasn't already been said. Danny Elfman comes to mind instantly! Nice choice of instruments and production elements. Very cool!!
I love Danny Elfman! My track isn't nearly as manic and complex as his arrangements. But it does have that offbeat playfulness. I'm off to listen to some Elfman now. Perhaps I can steal something from him. hehe
Hey Mos, I'm here, late to the party once again! Good to see you making music again!
To me this genre suites you and the loop misses your contributions in this style of music. Some very cool effect and vocoded vocals. With my early morning coffee kicking in and this music playing almost makes me want to pick up around here and do some cleaning. Almost! lol
Hey my friend, since back I better respond to some reviews, have a few to do, will keep me busy for an afternoon.
Very pleased you enjoyed this one, just uploaded my first trance piece since return, hope you get chance to have a listen, think you should enjoy, email you tomorrow when get chance through the day..mos
Nice practice recording Domenico, we miss you're music around here! I like the song, it reminds me of a song from the 90's and like Spiv I can't put my finger on it. That must mean it has a professional sound, the real deal.
I've been down my friends house recording his band live a few times. His room is an echo chamber so the drums are big and lost, they sound awful when we record them. We use a set of mics designed for the small kit using 3 mics, one at the kick, one under the ride/above floor tom, one near the snare/hihat/crash. How important to you is making the rehearsal space sound proofed and a bit dead sounding to get the drums better? Any help would be appreciated!
Thanks for the nice comment Wayne.
I also believe that this song has a "90s commercial" taste but I cannot point a specific song.
Regarding how to record, I'll send you a PM with my contacts if you want to get more details.
I also recorded the drums with 3 mics only and in these cases the "room sound" makes a huge difference: you can get good results only if the drums have a good "live sound". This mic configuration captures what you are hearing and it's hard to improve this.
Thank You for the Ear and Comment.
I'm glad you enjoyed the track and I hope that you have a chance to hear some of my other track.
Again Thank You for listening
Happy Halloween
Dirtzilla
From reading all the comments, this track has gone through several changes in it's short life. Good to see your spirit rising to work out any issues and make your productions better. I lack that quality, lol.
I like the idea and feel of the song. There is something to this idea. I often tend to do a lot of shorter compositions by taking an interesting idea and doing a 1-2 min musical treatment rather than a full length track. It keeps from repeating loops and musical phrases, I can add leads, pads, rhythm instruments just like any long song and the listener can get in and out quickly and hear interesting things all through the short but full production song. Plus you don't spend hours mixing many verses and chorus parts, bridges and all that and get all the benefits of learning production skills as you do it. I feel maybe if you took this approach here it might benefit the idea. Take the cool riffs and changes, sounds and any midi instruments and effects and rearrange it but shorten it up. Just my 2 cents. :)
Cool, dark themed song, certainly with lots of energy. Club music for ghouls and creatures that lurk in scary places on Halloween. A monstrously good listen! Makes me want to go trick, no treats this year!
on Demo Feedback by Mario
I would suggest to keep working it out till you feel more sure of it, hopefully with the response you're getting you should be feeling good about it. I think with a vocal melody you can then add, remove, change anything that might need to be adjusted to it. I often add an instrument to help compliment the vocal track in some way, like a response to the vocal in the form of a guitar lick, piano or pad... You have the guitar, piano/keys already so a singer may be able to fit the singing with what you've already have recorded. Good luck!
Wayne
on Northern Flicker by Evisma
I do like what you were doing during the bridges, were you finger tapping the strings on the neck of the guitar or picking it? They were good changes that lead to built up guitar expressions that sounded pretty damn good if you ask me! Let it all out Evan, Hell Yeah!!
I knew a Celeste once. Didn't sound like her. Where do I send the check again? I'm a believer. ;)
Take care.
Wayne
Summer has kept me a bit busy. I've taken up bass fishing, which has become an unhealthy addiction.
Bridges were picked on an acoustic with my fingernail. They are very short, but I write nearly every riff fingerstyle on an acoustic, then assign lines to different roles. I've never gotten into tapping.
Give Celeste my warmest regards.
Take care.
Evan
on Another Saturday Night Tribute to Jimmy Buffet by MWRatridge
Wayne
Good to see you my friend. TYVM for the cred.
Backing vocals, yeah....I played with them a lot during the mastering and finally decided to drop them into the back because I found myself listening to them and not the lead vocal line. lol
Mark.
on The Fall by ImproveWithError
Good to hear a new one, take care!
Wayne
Kyle
on Requiem for a Surf Movie by Planetjazzbass
Endless Summer feel to the track, hot sun and blowing sand musically created helps to set the mood. Need to wipe the sand and sweat off my brow and head back in the water to cool off. ;)
Well done there Dave, hang ten if you can!
Wayne
on Burning in my soul by DubSmockers
Wayne
unfortunately, i only have the voice sample! believe me, if a singer want to add her own voice on this track, i will accept it immediatly :)
for the genre, i wasn't sure! at the beginning, i wanted to make a disco track and the bass line is oriented like this but and you wrote it, the others instruments took me far away from my first purpose... so what genre is it? i don't know! easy listening may be? :)
thanks for yours friendly words Wayne, i appreciate your feedback :)
Bleep
on Le Vampire Romantique by Orlando51
Fangs a lot for posting this!
Wayne
Thank you so much mate for truly positive reaction on my one and only 'halloween'(?) tune. Maybe it shouldn't have been put in this context but now it's done and who cares.:)
Very grateful for the fav as well !
Cheers and take care_____Leon
on Lank Frampard X Jehst Nightbreed Remix by imakebeatsLF
Wayne
on Open Season by Spivkurl
Your music has always stood alone in my opinion unique, intriguing and well worth listening to. Well put statement in musical form. Right on!(product of the 70's,ha)
Wayne
I too enjoy songs with a political edge, especially when compared to all of the questionable political items present on social media platforms. At least when it comes to music, and looperman specifically, when someone disagrees or is offended it will usually lead to a responsible discussion. So often when I make my views obvious elsewhere, there is an instant reaction of paid political shills, fake news, and questioning of my understanding of scientific method. Life in Amerikkka I guess.
Art and music seems like one of the few hopes for getting messages across which would otherwise be met with defensiveness. Even if I intend an album to lack political objects, it still creeps through. I suppose the only ways to avoid this would be to burn my microphones or start taking the medication again. ;)
Your opinion of my music means a lot to me, especially since I know that you have a hugely varied listening catalog. Thank you for listening! I look forward to visiting your profile today!
on Window Lickers by topvega
Wayne
tv
on Dismal Drizzle by sqrtofneg1
No really. ;)
Well done!
Wayne
on The end of the Game by traz75
Cheers! Wayne
You can't imagine how many times i had to record these simple melodies and how much time had to cut and edit them in my daw, lol.. I'm the worst guitar player ever (right after Lil Wayne of curse, but he is disqualified for this title :D) and need a few years for improve this to an acceptable level. :)
Regards, traz
on blade runner trib by mindhiest
Now I can't wait to see the new one!
Wayne
on Man Of Many Limits by StaticNomad
Neat track. Mix sounds pretty clear, sounded good. Kept stopping during playback, not sure why, my internet connection, site updates, i dunno. Good trippy stoner music...man. he Like others mentioned I liked the piano intro too, nice buildup. Familiar style and instrument choices that separates your music from others.
Good music to listen to when I do a painting to or a chore, rhythmic and abstract and interesting to let the mind wander. World music sorta, kinda, a bit...
Cheers!
Wayne
Donovan? You mean the 60s acoustic guitar pop music guy? I've barely heard any music he's made but have a feeling I wouldn't like it.
Mix took ages on this, as usual. So much stuff to trim and work into place.
Interrupted playback is rather unfortunate for you. Try listening again with a fully working connection.
"Good trippy stoner music"
I agree. Kind of dark and far out. Maybe a little like world music. It's got some edge and mystical elements that are hard to place. A slightly unsettling vibe but all held together by tight, fat grooves.
"instrument choices that separates your music from others."
That's always the idea - to do something that no one else is doing. That's always my aim but it doesn't always work out.
Thanks again.
on Trick Room by PortraitOfABlackHole
Wayne
on Golden Day by neuromancer56
I give people a lot of credit who use loops and can create real interesting and unique pieces of music out of them. I thought the track was as good as any other electronic or loop based songs here. I'm not well versed in dance music so I can't get all technical with you about that but I thought this was pretty good. Sounds like something I would hear in an 80's Eddie Murphy movie, it has a cinematic aspect to it, in my opinion.
Cheers!
Wayne
on Rideout of the hells angels by Nodog
The song rocks, nice tone on the git, thick and meaty. I think this idea has a cinematic aspect to it, has a passage of time feeling to it to me. Mix sounds pretty darn good as well!
Wayne
on I Still Believe ft ShAiDawn by JohnnyHunter
Well done man. The piano is killer, btw!
Wayne
on Loves Fool by toastedavalanche
Wayne
Thanks for listening,
TA
on TranceFormers by Mosaic
To me this genre suites you and the loop misses your contributions in this style of music. Some very cool effect and vocoded vocals. With my early morning coffee kicking in and this music playing almost makes me want to pick up around here and do some cleaning. Almost! lol
Quality mix, upbeat and trancefastic!
Wayne
Very pleased you enjoyed this one, just uploaded my first trance piece since return, hope you get chance to have a listen, think you should enjoy, email you tomorrow when get chance through the day..mos
on Silence - Live from the rehearsal room by mrwolf14
I've been down my friends house recording his band live a few times. His room is an echo chamber so the drums are big and lost, they sound awful when we record them. We use a set of mics designed for the small kit using 3 mics, one at the kick, one under the ride/above floor tom, one near the snare/hihat/crash. How important to you is making the rehearsal space sound proofed and a bit dead sounding to get the drums better? Any help would be appreciated!
Thanks!
Wayne
I also believe that this song has a "90s commercial" taste but I cannot point a specific song.
Regarding how to record, I'll send you a PM with my contacts if you want to get more details.
I also recorded the drums with 3 mics only and in these cases the "room sound" makes a huge difference: you can get good results only if the drums have a good "live sound". This mic configuration captures what you are hearing and it's hard to improve this.
Ciao, Domenico
on Inspector Gaget Halloween by Dirtzilla
Wayne
I'm glad you enjoyed the track and I hope that you have a chance to hear some of my other track.
Again Thank You for listening
Happy Halloween
Dirtzilla
on Jeden Tag - version 2017 by joecramer
I like it, cool idea, great atmosphere and instrumentation.
Wayne
I just listen to this PJ Harvey's song "Down By the Water". Cool song for sure but i never heard it before.
Good to know that you like what i had done.
stay tuned
joe
on Bliss by neuromancer56
I like the idea and feel of the song. There is something to this idea. I often tend to do a lot of shorter compositions by taking an interesting idea and doing a 1-2 min musical treatment rather than a full length track. It keeps from repeating loops and musical phrases, I can add leads, pads, rhythm instruments just like any long song and the listener can get in and out quickly and hear interesting things all through the short but full production song. Plus you don't spend hours mixing many verses and chorus parts, bridges and all that and get all the benefits of learning production skills as you do it. I feel maybe if you took this approach here it might benefit the idea. Take the cool riffs and changes, sounds and any midi instruments and effects and rearrange it but shorten it up. Just my 2 cents. :)
Cheers!
Wayne
on Mortimus by crucethus
Cheers!
Wayne
;-)
thanks
Cru