really interesting track, amazing beat! like this trippy approach in this one
Sound is clear and mixing is clean! I shall take pleasure to come back later for a new listening!
congrats!
Bleep
morceau sympa avec sa touche electro jazz. Seul regret: le sample de guitare aurait merité d'etre retravaillé pour ne pas être à l'identique du début jusqu'à la fin. Je conçois que c'est un sample et qu'il est donc difficile d'intervenir sur les accords en eux meme mais après il y a mille effets possibles et imaginables pour apporter des variations meme légères :)
Personnellement, c'est la seule ombre au tableau car la rythmique est excellente, l'ambiance générale est festive et les riffs de cuivre sont variés et plein de chaleur! pour etre plus précis, ce riff de guitare fonctionne comme pourrait le faire une ligne de basse, sauf que... c'est pas une ligne de basse :)
Merci de commenter. J'ai été limité avec le cpu car mon pc est très vieux donc je ne pouvais pas rendre la guitare plus intéressante du début à la fin avec tous les effets et l'automatisation, mais je comprends parfaitement le problème.
As i told you, i have more time now to let a complete comment!
First , i like the linearity of your drums; it gives the track a tech house spirit.
When i read you worked with steelyvibe, i was curious to listen the result! Effectively, i appreciate a lot the acapellas from this artist. I already worked with some too.
You make a brilliant compisition and the vocals get married marvelously with the instrument part!
Wellplay for the break at 02:00, that boost the resumption of the rhythmic! very good job, a real pleasure to listen to this one
this track is really really cool! like the eighties feeling in it! and your voice is not so bad! nice result! hope you will find people for your collab!
will have a look soon for the final version!
great work :)
Bonjour, Bleep. et merci pour vos commentaires. Je vais continuer a chercher pour le chanteurs et aussi pour quelqu'un qui peut écrire des paroles en français, et en allemande. Je pense qu'il peut être plus difficile d'écrire des mots en musique que de la musique aux mots?
Actually, i like the direction you gave to this project. I saw it was in progress, i will wait the final version but what i can say now is i really like the intrusive aspect of the synth, it creates a question/answer with the other synth which is lower. This approach is really interesting.
i noticed the volume level was a little low, may be you will change it at the final mixing? at the opposite, the drum kick crushes the other instruments.
Except these small aspects, the piece is particularly mesmerizing, highly-rated sound stabbing and soft create a kind of very pleasant hypnosis.
It promises a brilliant track at the final result! really good work!
This is the unmastered version. Usually I leave a ton of headroom during the mixing process so I have a lot more room to work with when mastering. So it does start out sounding quiet. And on that same note, that kick needs to be turned WAY down Haha Thanks for commenting
You fetched tones which are rather atypical and which ring tremendously well! I adore this kind of exploration in which incoherence and coherence get tangled marvelously.
By moment, the melody reminded me a group in the same vein as your musical production, it was called "Morphine". The bass player had the peculiarity to play only with two ropes and relaxed, I let you imagine the obtained tones!!!
there's madness in this track and i like it! Congratulation for this high composition in color!
"incoherence and coherence get tangled marvelously"
Haha - that's a nice phrase and idea. Yes, I like to do that whenever possible. I'm always looking for unusual tones and sounds.And I do like to introduce some madness into what I do. You have to find a way to keep things interesting.
I think the cello bassline right at the start probably reminded you of Morphine and Mark Sandman's 2-string bass. Morphine are one of my favourite ever bands so I know their tones very well.
The first 40 seconds of the track below by me sound a lot like Morphine (but not the rest of the track) as there's real saxophone. And cello. I hope you like it.
Hey Joe! "what are you doing with this gun in your hand?" lol
nice remix but for me, if it's a dance sound, it needs a kick in the drums, i didn't hear it during the track ^^ is it a personal choice Joe?
Without this detail, it's a really good work! i didn't listen to the original, i'll do later :)
Hello Bleep
Thanks for your friendly words. Always nice to see people like you around who listen to some stuff i made and write some words to it. I am on your side with this kick drum in a dance track but i have to say that Dan hadn't a kick drum in his steems and i only used his stuff. But in fact i tried to bring one into the track but i failed and couldn't find a good sound and or a good way to handle it. So i said to myself - just take it as it is cause it sounds good in the way it is - :)
Magnificent production, very air, very melodic and which has small new wave touches.
I shall take pleasure to iron for other listening and to dig my feeling! Musically it is very well kept, and the mixing is also at the top!
that's remembered me my youngness when i used to go into teknivals! it sounds like "spiral tribe". Nice work!
this kind of sound needs to be listen with a speakers wall lol
Your last track is awesome! aerian and vaporous in the introduction! the rythmic is delicious with trip hop tone! it's like gloss on lips if you catch this image lol
i really the underground atmosphere is your work! respect and congratulations for this piece :)
Thank you so much Bleep ... love the glossy lips!
Thank you everyone else too.
I am too knackered at the moment to reply to everyone.
Doped out my head ... legally of course.
Had a bad few weeks with pain and opiumed out my head can hardly type!
This disability I suffer aint going to kill me but the dope might! I'm due a few good weeks soon.
Hi!
i don't have any knownledges in heavy metal so i can't produce any technical advice! just as a common listener, i can say i took pleasure listening to it: it's punchy and energic!
wow really good track! the organ bring an old school touch in the render! i liked of courses the guitars play but i'm more attentive with the bass whose line is obsiouvly brilliant.
really good work Evan, congrats!
Bleep
hello
it's an unusual sound for me! it gave me a strange feeling like there was a religious touch in it. what kind of synth did you use?
it's special and i like it ^^
particular track with a surprising result! congrats!
Bleep
j'espère que tu ne m'en voudras pas mais mon feedback je vais le faire en français :)
pour moi ton morceau, en son état actuel, il tient carrément la route! c'est une bonne petite ballade pop rock (je parle en fonction de ma sensibilité musicale et de ma perception personnelle bien sur)
Le choix des instruments est cohérent, ils fonctionnent bien ensemble, la basse je la verrai plus ronde, plus chaude pour occuper plus de place dans les basses justement. A l'écoute, d'aspect global je dirai que tu surfes en grand partie sur medium / aigus.
En tous les cas, pour moi ce morceau il marche et il marche bien! joli boulot! félicitations!
Bleep
ma critique va etre très dure: j'adore :)
j'ai écouté plusieurs fois pour etre sur mais j'ai encore un doute: y a bien une wah wah légèrement en retrait?
pour sur une voix plaquée sur ta partie instru va définitivement habiller le morceau! après je pars du principe ou une version instru a son propre cachet aussi et je suis pas forcément d'accord pour établir une sorte de classement genre "mieux, pas mieux"... c'est juste une autre vision quand tu plaques une voix ou des choeurs sur un morceau, enfin c'est mon opinion lol
en tous les cas, super bon feeling dans ce shot!
Bleep
Héhéhé ! Salut camarade
Il me faut réécouter le morceau pour voir un peu de quoi tu parles, mais non je n'ai pas pas utilisé de wahwah, par conter sur une des boucles j'ai utilisé un step(quelquechose) pour donner cette sensation d'aller/retour
Oui une voix n'est pas forcément necessaire et de part mes activités (music sur de la vidéo) les voix sont pour le coup inutiles. Après j'aime bien l'idée qu'une voix peut être traité comme un sample. 2 phrases répétées par ci par là peuvent bien fonctionner. et le phrasé hip hop peut devenir vraiment efficace En tout cas merci pour le feedback et je tenterai de commenter tes tracks en français à l'avenir ! :)
on Ezio instrumental by OdotZED
Sound is clear and mixing is clean! I shall take pleasure to come back later for a new listening!
congrats!
Bleep
on WSKooper - To The Moon by Perko93
Personnellement, c'est la seule ombre au tableau car la rythmique est excellente, l'ambiance générale est festive et les riffs de cuivre sont variés et plein de chaleur! pour etre plus précis, ce riff de guitare fonctionne comme pourrait le faire une ligne de basse, sauf que... c'est pas une ligne de basse :)
Félicitations
Bleep
on Consume Carbon by adamms
First , i like the linearity of your drums; it gives the track a tech house spirit.
When i read you worked with steelyvibe, i was curious to listen the result! Effectively, i appreciate a lot the acapellas from this artist. I already worked with some too.
You make a brilliant compisition and the vocals get married marvelously with the instrument part!
Wellplay for the break at 02:00, that boost the resumption of the rhythmic! very good job, a real pleasure to listen to this one
Bleep
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tOI8xqzZtzo
on Waking World final version by sheensheep
unexpected, surprising, unusual, really interesting how you melted genres. Really modern approach, i was totally absorbed during the hearing!
Congrats for the great work
Bleep
on Consume Carbon by adamms
Bleep
on Silent Whispers by EricMilligan
will have a look soon for the final version!
great work :)
Bleep
on Everything Where It Should Be by StaticNomad
Congrats
bleep
Yes, thee's a touch of Morphine in the first minute.
Thanks for listening.
on Untitled by BeatzFactory
Actually, i like the direction you gave to this project. I saw it was in progress, i will wait the final version but what i can say now is i really like the intrusive aspect of the synth, it creates a question/answer with the other synth which is lower. This approach is really interesting.
Nice work
Bleep
on You Make Me Sick by sheensheep
i noticed the volume level was a little low, may be you will change it at the final mixing? at the opposite, the drum kick crushes the other instruments.
Except these small aspects, the piece is particularly mesmerizing, highly-rated sound stabbing and soft create a kind of very pleasant hypnosis.
It promises a brilliant track at the final result! really good work!
Bleep
-[ Sheen ]-
on Trypt by StaticNomad
By moment, the melody reminded me a group in the same vein as your musical production, it was called "Morphine". The bass player had the peculiarity to play only with two ropes and relaxed, I let you imagine the obtained tones!!!
there's madness in this track and i like it! Congratulation for this high composition in color!
Bleep
Thanks for listening and commenting.
"incoherence and coherence get tangled marvelously"
Haha - that's a nice phrase and idea. Yes, I like to do that whenever possible. I'm always looking for unusual tones and sounds.And I do like to introduce some madness into what I do. You have to find a way to keep things interesting.
I think the cello bassline right at the start probably reminded you of Morphine and Mark Sandman's 2-string bass. Morphine are one of my favourite ever bands so I know their tones very well.
The first 40 seconds of the track below by me sound a lot like Morphine (but not the rest of the track) as there's real saxophone. And cello. I hope you like it.
Everything Where It Should Be
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177063
Thanks again for the thoughts.
on My baby may by avasuzanne
really nice track
bleep
on NEON DRIVE by jaythechance
a kind of dream music (like robert miles if you see what i mean? :))
Bleep
Thank you!
on Midisparks - Stephanie Kay Hussar - Stars collide by joecramer
nice remix but for me, if it's a dance sound, it needs a kick in the drums, i didn't hear it during the track ^^ is it a personal choice Joe?
Without this detail, it's a really good work! i didn't listen to the original, i'll do later :)
Friendly
Bleep
Thanks for your friendly words. Always nice to see people like you around who listen to some stuff i made and write some words to it. I am on your side with this kick drum in a dance track but i have to say that Dan hadn't a kick drum in his steems and i only used his stuff. But in fact i tried to bring one into the track but i failed and couldn't find a good sound and or a good way to handle it. So i said to myself - just take it as it is cause it sounds good in the way it is - :)
stay tuned
joe
on Emotion Less by BlancFroid
I shall take pleasure to iron for other listening and to dig my feeling! Musically it is very well kept, and the mixing is also at the top!
Congrats
Bleep
on Dont wanna hurt by Ludwigbroo
congratulations!
Bleep
on Limbo by BeatzFactory
Bleep
i made It Just for fun.. Ja
So glad you liked It!!!
Peace
on DJ The Observer VS PinHead- PAIN by djtheobserver01
this kind of sound needs to be listen with a speakers wall lol
Bleep
on icecream by silverman
Your last track is awesome! aerian and vaporous in the introduction! the rythmic is delicious with trip hop tone! it's like gloss on lips if you catch this image lol
i really the underground atmosphere is your work! respect and congratulations for this piece :)
Bleep
Thank you everyone else too.
I am too knackered at the moment to reply to everyone.
Doped out my head ... legally of course.
Had a bad few weeks with pain and opiumed out my head can hardly type!
This disability I suffer aint going to kill me but the dope might! I'm due a few good weeks soon.
on Dreams vs Nightmares - Instrumental by DeaDResT
i don't have any knownledges in heavy metal so i can't produce any technical advice! just as a common listener, i can say i took pleasure listening to it: it's punchy and energic!
congrats
Bleep
on Whats Love by KnightHeir
Bleep
on Northern Flicker by Evisma
really good work Evan, congrats!
Bleep
on Black by Dumbasswolf
it's an unusual sound for me! it gave me a strange feeling like there was a religious touch in it. what kind of synth did you use?
it's special and i like it ^^
particular track with a surprising result! congrats!
Bleep
and omnisphere
on Demo Feedback by Mario
pour moi ton morceau, en son état actuel, il tient carrément la route! c'est une bonne petite ballade pop rock (je parle en fonction de ma sensibilité musicale et de ma perception personnelle bien sur)
Le choix des instruments est cohérent, ils fonctionnent bien ensemble, la basse je la verrai plus ronde, plus chaude pour occuper plus de place dans les basses justement. A l'écoute, d'aspect global je dirai que tu surfes en grand partie sur medium / aigus.
En tous les cas, pour moi ce morceau il marche et il marche bien! joli boulot! félicitations!
Bleep
on And you don t Stop NEEDS VOCAL by Indieground
ma critique va etre très dure: j'adore :)
j'ai écouté plusieurs fois pour etre sur mais j'ai encore un doute: y a bien une wah wah légèrement en retrait?
pour sur une voix plaquée sur ta partie instru va définitivement habiller le morceau! après je pars du principe ou une version instru a son propre cachet aussi et je suis pas forcément d'accord pour établir une sorte de classement genre "mieux, pas mieux"... c'est juste une autre vision quand tu plaques une voix ou des choeurs sur un morceau, enfin c'est mon opinion lol
en tous les cas, super bon feeling dans ce shot!
Bleep
Il me faut réécouter le morceau pour voir un peu de quoi tu parles, mais non je n'ai pas pas utilisé de wahwah, par conter sur une des boucles j'ai utilisé un step(quelquechose) pour donner cette sensation d'aller/retour
Oui une voix n'est pas forcément necessaire et de part mes activités (music sur de la vidéo) les voix sont pour le coup inutiles. Après j'aime bien l'idée qu'une voix peut être traité comme un sample. 2 phrases répétées par ci par là peuvent bien fonctionner. et le phrasé hip hop peut devenir vraiment efficace En tout cas merci pour le feedback et je tenterai de commenter tes tracks en français à l'avenir ! :)
on Bring The Beat by BeatzFactory
Congrats
bleep