The Storm Outside (V2) - StephenPotter

Very cool and provocative work here. Like jahknow, I'm totally enamored with that arpegiated key running throughout. I find there's kind of a melancholy vibe going on here that really connects to a common human experience that's both powerful and inspiring.

My constructive criticism is this - please consider using this as a proto-draft, or as a inspirational launching point. In other words, consider not revising this one, but using everything you've learned to do another more polished and lengthy piece as I think it'll be a personal masterpiece.

Have to fave it despite myself (it's way too short to be satisfying), as it's really that inspired and that good!

Hey Ste

Mate what a intro, so loving it, hey could just listen to the intro all day just on its own, very nice laid back beat mate, nice synths or Fx's, another excellent piece from the talent dude call Ste...instant fav from you my friend...Peace and respect Ste...Estefano...ONLY downside IT'S NOT LONG ENOUGH sorry for shouting but man this needs to be longer, so love it...:-(

I like the slow windy intro,its has a feeling of relaxing in a room on a cold winter night but its nice a toasty on the inside.

very chill out and good to listen too.

well made

PEACE LOVE AND SCREEPLAYS FOREVER

i like chill out and i like this song nice mellow intro you should try using a big ping pong pan on the echos of the start synth.. the beat is good decent amount of reverb but you should try layering the kick with a deeper one then break the song down to a good outro insted of it just ending or add more stuff like pianos and strings etc :)

I liked the track a lot. One thing perturbed me though, I thought it ended too soon lol. Seriously, it is a pleasant piece to listen to and I look forward to listening to more of your tracks in the near future.

Peace

John

A man after my own heart. I love that arpegiated key riff. That makes for a nice song in itself. Like the minimalism you kept in tact here. Ambient doesn't need a femal Enya vocal overdub or a cheesy string pad played over it all. This weird ambience that I love a lot.

Nice work mate.

im getting some clicks on the left side, it cuts off short, and it sounds a bit empty at times (though maybe thats a chillout thing, or maybe just me). its got some good ideas though, the guitar and "wind" are good examples

this is a good chill tune man......i dont make chill stuff so i dont know how to give advice....but its cool nonetheless

nice, trippy guitar. love it when the drums kick in half through.

Cool track, some good melodies in here. Keep at it star.