The Ghost Of King Robb - Rpcvlawson

6th Mar 2011 06:58 - 15 years ago
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Description : The king is dead...or is he? The first song I've written with my new PRS electric guitar. The drum loop is stock from GarageBand.

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give rpcvlawson some feedback.

goosemeyer
goosemeyer 10th Mar 2011 00:21 - 15 years ago
I gotta say that you really have something there. Has a great "Garage"ey feel to it.. I agree with the others about thickening it up, but that will come with experience. this is another track that I would really love to get my grubby little Hands on.. You're starting out with a great song, so it can only get better. The three esteemed gents who reviewed before me don't lie, and they wouldn't tell you to waste your time polishing this if it wasn't worth it..

I will check on this one periodically because it has a great feel and I'd like to see how it progresses.

well done,

The Goose.
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
New Version at: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/98771

Wow. Thank you! It really means a lot to me that people liked this track. It's one of my favorites that I've done--I'm doing a whole EP of rock songs with lyrics based around a fantasy fiction novel I'm writing.

I actually did "remaster" the track followed everyone's great advice. I'll be uploading it tonight. Is there any way that I can alert all of you to the new file? I'd like to hear what you think of the changes.
Vicen
Vicen 6th Mar 2011 17:11 - 15 years ago
Good song with great lyrics and rhythm guitar groundbreaking. A good music to listen.
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
New Version: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/98771

Thanks for the kind words. It's was a fun song to do. I'm looking forward to doing the next one this week (I do one a week).
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 6th Mar 2011 16:22 - 15 years ago
I agree with humps about doubling the rhythm guitar, I would also add that on the one side you could change the octave of the guitar. Gives a three dimensional sound.

In any case, the track is bloody awesome as it is.

Love it

Faved

John
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
New Version at: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/98771

Thanks so much for the review! I'm going to revisit this song very soon to try the doubling and the octave switch. I'm going to play around and see what I come up with. Thanks so much for the encouragement!
theHumps
theHumps 6th Mar 2011 11:51 - 15 years ago
So how do you like the new guitar? PRS, nice! Not a bad listen man, great job singing, nice story.

You might want to try to double the rhythm guitar track and pan them left and right, it will fill the space better and your vocals will sit in the mix better and the bass will stand out more too. Also try adding some stereo widening to the tracks, they will sound fatter and thicker if you open them up a bit.

Cheers,

Wayne
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
New Version at: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/98771

Excellent advice. I'm going to try everything you've just mentioned. I'm new to this game, so any tips are greatly appreciated.

As for the guitar--honestly, I'm in love with it. I've always had cheap $150 guitars. Now that I have this one--which wasn't astronomical but is definitely of better quality--I can see a huge difference in tone and the way I can access the fret board.

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