Listen To Beat012811 Rap Song By OneEightySevenEnt At Looperman.com

hey nice track, i really like the bass on it, its sick as hell, a little too repetitive at first, but not too bad, would be more interesting with vocals or something, but still its a really good track, my biggest grievance about this track though, is it lacks originality, feels like i've heard this track a thousand times before, and not just on looperman, but even in main stream music. i think you just need to experiment more and find "your" style. also change it up a bit. take like a section such as a bridge or break down as a chance to keep the listener more interested. change the beat, change the melody, slow it down, speed it up, anything really. it's cool to keep or change a beat for a chorus or hook section, but the melody definitely should have more attention drawn to it in certain sections, such as, a bridge or chorus.

but you definitely have some raw talent that could use a little refining, though music isn't really science, it is a formula and reading into music theory or analyzing your favorite songs could really help refine that raw talent and give you the key to that magic formula

best of luck