Tags : | Pop | 4.22 MB | Adult Content

Description : EDIT!!! OMFG i've had a new version of this song for a while now and I just got reminded to upload it... SOOOOO here's the finished version.. with "aaaaaahs"

EDIT: Little bit more to finish up with the master.

EDIT: New version engineered by Streets of Neon.
Wondering what you all think about the chorus.
It's a little busy.
Thank you for all the awesome feedback! Big help

This song is about the only girl I ever loved. Happy birthday Janelle.

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  1. StreetsOfNeon
    StreetsOfNeon on Mon 10th Jan 2011 - 9 years ago

    Your melodies are ridiculously catchy which is why I dig your electro pop songs the most. Catchiness is always important, even in your hardcore tracks you're doing lately but when I listen to the chorus in this song in my car, it's impossible to not sing along. Then the techno jamfest takes over the last part of the song and the bass shakes you and it's so easy to get into the music. I hope you let me mix more tracks similar to this in the future (but with less reverb on the vocals haha).

  2. Planetjazzbass
    Planetjazzbass on Sun 9th Jan 2011 - 9 years ago

    Well whatya know this is a cool tune too! lol(I like continuity)...you know Delta you've got a marketable voice,whatever anybody ever says about your music just keep doing your thing....I don't give a toss about whether we're proto aliens or what..but I always like good music in any shape or form and you've got it happening here....cool stuff man cheers planet :)

  3. DylonFisher
    DylonFisher on Mon 3rd Jan 2011 - 9 years ago

    ahhhh.... the timing is perfect in this one. i see you cut a lil from the origional. nice nice. i just finished a track of my own.it had timing issues too. lol had to change it... ended up doing like 16 versons... lol GOD DA## OCD!! lol.... nice nice.

  4. Influx
    Influx on Sat 1st Jan 2011 - 9 years ago

    Very nice track! Loved the vocals, the melodies, the drums.. Everything sounded great! Did you do the singing yourself? Wish I could sing haha. Fav'd the track. Good job!

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    thanks you dude, yep all the singing is me, quite effected as you can hear I'm sure. BTW, love your MorphSuit!!

  5. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Sat 1st Jan 2011 - 9 years ago

    This is a very soothing track! It seems like you've put a lot of work into it to get it this perfect. Really good vocals! Awesome melodies! The bass is really cool too! Definitely a pop track! Well done!

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    Thank you good sir

  6. DylonFisher
    DylonFisher on Sat 1st Jan 2011 - 9 years ago

    omfg!!!!! i want to make magic like this!!!!! im only 16 but i cant get enough of music. i sleep breath and love only for music... i have OCD so when i make a track it has to be 1500 perctent perfect. oh...i just heard a timing issue... its towards the end... on the words "cant change the fact that that".... right after the vocal break...between the 3:35-3:50 second mark... if you bring it back 1/4 of a second it will be right on q..... not a long one... maby its supposed to be that way???idk.... i examin the music too much...ny way.nice track. got a boy band feel to it tho..... lol pce , MmillieMilo

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    DUUUUDE!!! I have redone version of this i havent uploaded yet! Thank you for listening and reminding me. I think the vocal part is fixed in this new version. UPLOADING Noooooow. Your OCD will be the ticket that makes your music awesome!

  7. ChrissG
    ChrissG on Sun 14th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    great vocals, i had a go at a pop track and i think yours has a really nice edge to it.. love that synth melody, although it reminds me of something.. anyway really catchy track great work man...

  8. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Sun 14th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    G'day deltaaah

    Mate notice you up dated this one after my last review, have to say this is so much better now with the beat changed, like it alot man...adding to fav's now, well done on this one...Peace n Respect...Estefano....

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    thats why i love this site man, you guys hear stuff that i don't and that keeps me on my toes when its time to sit down with the engineer. thank you again

  9. inspire_nung
    inspire_nung on Sat 13th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    i like it,
    vocal is great but the vocal FX, i think you can try down your FX on normal verse and then up on hook, i think if full of vocal FX all track is too much : just my opinion

    good work nice vocal

    Inspire_Nung

  10. ImproveWithError
    ImproveWithError on Fri 12th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    Good vocals on this, I think the advice given is good advice, just wanted to let you know this is great pop track, I think if fix what has been said the song will be perfect.

  11. theHumps
    theHumps on Fri 12th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    Catchy track, liked the vocals a lot, I'm assuming you are remixing this(with the comments you recieved so far)but the idea is cool. Nice job with this one!

    Wayne

  12. Alen9R
    Alen9R on Fri 12th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    Hey Deltaaah!

    Nice song buddy!
    I really likes the tunes and your voice,about beat,yeah its bit heavy,well try put on that kickbass good EQ and compressor and then sidechain your vocals with beat!
    Anyway good,good work!

    Keep em coming!

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    more great feedback. thank you much

  13. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Fri 12th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    G'day Deltaaah

    Not a bad track at all, like your vocals, have to agree with the other reviews about the beat, it does distract from a good track,some of the beat goes well, where is other parts not so good, it makes it sound little disjointed, I think if you change the beat in the mix, it would sound so much better, like the arrangement and the synths etc that you have used, clarity of your track is very good, like I said like the track, I would consider changing the beat, but overall a very good piece, good work matey...Peace n Respect...Estefano...

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    excellent feedback and thank you. Writing this all down for the new version

  14. bmw2000uk
    bmw2000uk on Fri 12th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    This is a pretty good track, i love the melody. I love the beginning, it plays in your head. You have a unique voice. Vocals could be louder and wider, the drums are a touch heavy overpowering your voice.

    This is a great song.

    Peace...

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    great advice and thank you. Taking notes now for my audio engineer to remix this.

  15. TheStoryteller
    TheStoryteller on Fri 12th Nov 2010 - 9 years ago

    I think the beat when way harder than the vocals

    deltaaah
    Reply by deltaaah

    yeah i made this beat with the intention of rapping over it. But I was really feeling something else. As you can hear.

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