Sunshine - Deltaaah

12th Nov 2010 04:51 - 15 years ago
Description : EDIT!!! OMFG i've had a new version of this song for a while now and I just got reminded to upload it... SOOOOO here's the finished version.. with "aaaaaahs"

EDIT: Little bit more to finish up with the master.

EDIT: New version engineered by Streets of Neon.
Wondering what you all think about the chorus.
It's a little busy.
Thank you for all the awesome feedback! Big help

This song is about the only girl I ever loved. Happy birthday Janelle.

Comments (15)

If you have time take a listen and give deltaaah some feedback.

StreetsOfNeon
StreetsOfNeon 10th Jan 2011 00:12 - 15 years ago
Your melodies are ridiculously catchy which is why I dig your electro pop songs the most. Catchiness is always important, even in your ##### tracks you're doing lately but when I listen to the chorus in this song in my car, it's impossible to not sing along. Then the techno jamfest takes over the last part of the song and the bass shakes you and it's so easy to get into the music. I hope you let me mix more tracks similar to this in the future (but with less reverb on the vocals haha).
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 9th Jan 2011 01:16 - 15 years ago
Well whatya know this is a cool tune too! lol(I like continuity)...you know Delta you've got a marketable voice,whatever anybody ever says about your music just keep doing your thing....I don't give a toss about whether we're proto aliens or what..but I always like good music in any shape or form and you've got it happening here....cool stuff man cheers planet :)
DylonFisher
DylonFisher 3rd Jan 2011 15:55 - 15 years ago
ahhhh.... the timing is perfect in this one. i see you cut a lil from the origional. nice nice. i just finished a track of my own.it had timing issues too. lol had to change it... ended up doing like 16 versons... lol GOD DA## OCD!! lol.... nice nice.
Influx
Influx 1st Jan 2011 22:20 - 15 years ago
Very nice track! Loved the vocals, the melodies, the drums.. Everything sounded great! Did you do the singing yourself? Wish I could sing haha. Fav'd the track. Good job!
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks you dude, yep all the singing is me, quite effected as you can hear I'm sure. BTW, love your MorphSuit!!
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 1st Jan 2011 15:34 - 15 years ago
This is a very soothing track! It seems like you've put a lot of work into it to get it this perfect. Really good vocals! Awesome melodies! The bass is really cool too! Definitely a pop track! Well done!
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you good sir
DylonFisher
DylonFisher 1st Jan 2011 14:18 - 15 years ago
omfg!!!!! i want to make magic like this!!!!! im only 16 but i cant get enough of music. i sleep breath and love only for music... i have OCD so when i make a track it has to be 1500 perctent perfect. oh...i just heard a timing issue... its towards the end... on the words "cant change the fact that that".... right after the vocal break...between the 3:35-3:50 second mark... if you bring it back 1/4 of a second it will be right on q..... not a long one... maby its supposed to be that way???idk.... i examin the music too much...ny way.nice track. got a boy band feel to it tho..... lol pce , MmillieMilo
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
DUUUUDE!!! I have redone version of this i havent uploaded yet! Thank you for listening and reminding me. I think the vocal part is fixed in this new version. UPLOADING Noooooow. Your OCD will be the ticket that makes your music awesome!
ChrissG
ChrissG 14th Nov 2010 16:50 - 15 years ago
great vocals, i had a go at a pop track and i think yours has a really nice edge to it.. love that synth melody, although it reminds me of something.. anyway really catchy track great work man...
Mosaic
Mosaic 14th Nov 2010 07:26 - 15 years ago
G'day deltaaah

Mate notice you up dated this one after my last review, have to say this is so much better now with the beat changed, like it alot man...adding to fav's now, well done on this one...Peace n Respect...Estefano....
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thats why i love this site man, you guys hear stuff that i don't and that keeps me on my toes when its time to sit down with the engineer. thank you again
inspire_nung
inspire_nung 13th Nov 2010 17:33 - 15 years ago
i like it,
vocal is great but the vocal FX, i think you can try down your FX on normal verse and then up on hook, i think if full of vocal FX all track is too much : just my opinion

good work nice vocal

Inspire_Nung
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 12th Nov 2010 14:58 - 15 years ago
Good vocals on this, I think the advice given is good advice, just wanted to let you know this is great pop track, I think if fix what has been said the song will be perfect.
theHumps
theHumps 12th Nov 2010 10:56 - 15 years ago
Catchy track, liked the vocals a lot, I'm assuming you are remixing this(with the comments you recieved so far)but the idea is cool. Nice job with this one!

Wayne
Alen9R
Alen9R 12th Nov 2010 08:39 - 15 years ago
Hey Deltaaah!

Nice song buddy!
I really likes the tunes and your voice,about beat,yeah its bit heavy,well try put on that kickbass good EQ and compressor and then sidechain your vocals with beat!
Anyway good,good work!

Keep em coming!
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
more great feedback. thank you much
Mosaic
Mosaic 12th Nov 2010 07:14 - 15 years ago
G'day Deltaaah

Not a bad track at all, like your vocals, have to agree with the other reviews about the beat, it does distract from a good track,some of the beat goes well, where is other parts not so good, it makes it sound little disjointed, I think if you change the beat in the mix, it would sound so much better, like the arrangement and the synths etc that you have used, clarity of your track is very good, like I said like the track, I would consider changing the beat, but overall a very good piece, good work matey...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
excellent feedback and thank you. Writing this all down for the new version
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk 12th Nov 2010 06:48 - 15 years ago
This is a pretty good track, i love the melody. I love the beginning, it plays in your head. You have a unique voice. Vocals could be louder and wider, the drums are a touch heavy overpowering your voice.

This is a great song.

Peace...
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
great advice and thank you. Taking notes now for my audio engineer to remix this.
TheStoryteller
TheStoryteller 12th Nov 2010 05:02 - 15 years ago
I think the beat when way harder than the vocals
deltaaah
deltaaah replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
yeah i made this beat with the intention of rapping over it. But I was really feeling something else. As you can hear.

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