Description : I am not happy with this track, not sure why... please let me know what you think of. All your +ve and -ve feedbacks are welcome!
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Comments (7)
If you have time take a listen and give Camy some feedback.
Honestly, it's a beautiful melody that would require additional elements, such as a "string ensemble", or a "light flute", which could emphasize the poetic side of the set.
This is how I feel, in this composition.
You have a great talent who needs to express themselves even more.
Thank You, Dan! I did not know how to enhance this one until i read your comment. I like your suggestion alot :) When ever time permits i will do an updated version! Thank you Much :)
I like it. Maybe some strings like a cello doing a nice counterpart to the foundation...idk. I like at how it rains softly in with that change up around 2:20... the underlying hook set in the back. It's nice girl, don't be so hard on yourself! Walk away for a little while and come back to it on a rainy day and BOOM, it'll hit ya like a ton of bricks!
nice sound.i'm really impressed with what you did with this track...you said you weren't happy with the track.what do you think its wrong with it?I think it's cool,it has nice melody and rythm..i just expect the track to pick a different rythmical pattern as it progresses..just a thought.
I am not able to figure as what exactly bothers me with this trac, however, one of the strong feeling I have about this song is that it is flat from the beginning to the end :(
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This is how I feel, in this composition.
You have a great talent who needs to express themselves even more.
Dan
Camy
let more PERC. speak on this track
i enjoy your music.......
cheers
Honestly this is a very good track,excellent piano,I like it!
Maybe try to make more contrast in drums,just a thought..in any case, great work!!
Keep up
9R
Sure, will do another version with more of drums. Thank you very much for the feedback:)
Regards,
Camy
I am not able to figure as what exactly bothers me with this trac, however, one of the strong feeling I have about this song is that it is flat from the beginning to the end :(