Just Trying - Camy

5th Nov 2010 20:45 - 15 years ago
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Description : I am not happy with this track, not sure why... please let me know what you think of. All your +ve and -ve feedbacks are welcome!

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Camy some feedback.

VickyDan
VickyDan 23rd Jul 2011 09:25 - 15 years ago
Honestly, it's a beautiful melody that would require additional elements, such as a "string ensemble", or a "light flute", which could emphasize the poetic side of the set.
This is how I feel, in this composition.
You have a great talent who needs to express themselves even more.

Dan
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank You, Dan! I did not know how to enhance this one until i read your comment. I like your suggestion alot :) When ever time permits i will do an updated version! Thank you Much :)

Camy
jermaineOO9
jermaineOO9 11th Jan 2011 06:09 - 15 years ago
defnitly unique style to it but not weird, probly shuld use a harder snare towards the end as a build up,,,but im feelin it!!!
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Sure will keep that in mind! thank you very much :)
zappo
zappo 11th Nov 2010 11:13 - 15 years ago
i dont know why this is wired
let more PERC. speak on this track
i enjoy your music.......
cheers
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for the review:)
Alen9R
Alen9R 6th Nov 2010 08:55 - 15 years ago
Hey Camy!

Honestly this is a very good track,excellent piano,I like it!
Maybe try to make more contrast in drums,just a thought..in any case, great work!!

Keep up

9R
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot for the reviews!!

Sure, will do another version with more of drums. Thank you very much for the feedback:)

Regards,
Camy
DJSchmeeJ
DJSchmeeJ 6th Nov 2010 03:53 - 15 years ago
I like it. Maybe some strings like a cello doing a nice counterpart to the foundation...idk. I like at how it rains softly in with that change up around 2:20... the underlying hook set in the back. It's nice girl, don't be so hard on yourself! Walk away for a little while and come back to it on a rainy day and BOOM, it'll hit ya like a ton of bricks!
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you so much!! this means a lot to me :-)
Gbenga
Gbenga 5th Nov 2010 22:52 - 15 years ago
what are you gonna do to get a better feeling about the track?do you consider trying adding some more melodies and a little rythmical change.
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I plan to do another version, with more drum beats to it :)
Gbenga
Gbenga 5th Nov 2010 21:53 - 15 years ago
nice sound.i'm really impressed with what you did with this track...you said you weren't happy with the track.what do you think its wrong with it?I think it's cool,it has nice melody and rythm..i just expect the track to pick a different rythmical pattern as it progresses..just a thought.
Camy
Camy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you very much for your reviews :)

I am not able to figure as what exactly bothers me with this trac, however, one of the strong feeling I have about this song is that it is flat from the beginning to the end :(

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