Listen To Trance All Night Trance Song By Bleinweb124 At Looperman.com

I liked this one right from the beginning! I like the beautiful melodies! I was disappointed when it was over, maybe it could be a little longer. Siensystem gave you some nice advice too, so maybe you can update this track, as I'd like to hear more. Keep it up!

The high-pitch sounds were quite bubbly on this one. I think you did a nice job on this one. I like the way the string at 24s plays, very nice one. All the elements do well with each other and they mesh well to create a favorable combination. I also like that you perform a nice combination of transitions which play well as the track goes on. I'm not a Trance expert or anything but I do want to suggest a few things:

1. At 20s: add a kick (1 step) to go along with the noise burst. That will end the previous section and the kick adds that last thump while the noise burst makes for a cool effect. You can also do this on a few other sections, especially with the crash and noise. It just adds a bit of presence with the bass area that goes well. Experiment.

2. At 1m45s: you end with nothing. :) This really makes the track feel like it's completed. I'd suggest you try to fill that in with something. May it be just the drums playing or a pad/string.

3: Overall: Add some strings that can be somewhere on the background. So that it fills the emptiness that is felt from the melodies when they are not playing. Probably the same that you used at 24s.

3: I really liked the elements that you brought in almost toward the end of the track: 2m22s and on. Those are some really solid ideas that I think you should focus on and bring them more into the beginning sections. The bassline there is well sequenced and the melodies perform nicely.

Lastly, your structure is a bit un-structured :) Again, not an expert but I've found a trance structure that works to be:

1. Intro (kick, maybe bassline, closed hats + clap): 8 bars or so.
2. Intro melody (something to add to bassline) + additional percussion to change-up and add to the first section): runs for 4 or 8 bars.
3. Intro strings (a string section or pad that fills the track for the intro): runs for 8 bars.
4. Break (not just a stop, but gradually remove elements, filter them down, until the kick and some basic hats play) then completely break into silence (if preferred) and introduce the main lead.
5. Main melody sequence - bring it all together (main melody, drums, etc) so that it runs as the main section of the track. This can run for 16 bars or more if required and depending on the melodies used and variation.
6. Outro start/end - Remove the main melody and perform something similar to the break. Leaving simply the drums and bassline is a good way to outro the track structure.

Anyway, a nice track that has allot of potential and just needs a bit of tweaking to get right. Again, I'm no expert and don't claim to be one, but a few things that have worked for me and hope they can help you.

Keep up the great work!