DJ DragoN-Un Giorno In Venezia - DJsDragoN

submerged and tranquil welcome all to aquatic mind traverse as eye will be the one that shall venture your eyes through this place of mystique and wonder now.... on left we witness a matrimonial of sound and art oh how beautiful and there just to right.... wait..... what is this?.... woah....... now that is the first time such gorgeous has ever come this close to any vessel now do not fear just reach out and let the feelings overwhelm you in body and spirit....... aaahhhhh feel that?...... translucent crystalline and pure .....enriched travels..... as the eyes close and it is as though time itself is forgotten .....splash the waves.... as we pull into port and eyes open ...please do come back anytime .....ahhh yes..... welcome to aquatic mind traverse.....peace ...absolutely beautiful track and experience ...immersed into enjoyment

whoa i like the depths of the whole thing. the rhythm sounds unusual but catchy, somehow a tiny bit disturbing with them accents here and there. It's cool how there's a wall of atmos to it, but this track doesn't captivate me until around 3.20-3.30, there the rhythmic section distracts me while the ambiance does it's job, and well. With a great job on it's quality and massiveness I wish for more dynamics in this, but that's personal taste. Also it sounds good when the wall sort of drops off near the very end, would be cool if that happened once or twice during the rest of the track, it could make room for some excitement. Gonna check out some more of your work now, good job on the mood in here, to keep happiness spread and equaled. After listening to this my mind constructs fitting synth play which might've been there, like a ghost effect, nice artwork by itself this is.

different but nice so that is what makes it cool

alright i like the beats but not sure about that squelling noise and the choir is just one long note but overall beats pretty cool

Really conjures up a mysterious atmosphere really nice,although I would have made it a bit shorter,but overall a good track.

Didn't like it at first, cuz I couldn't get relaxed, but I stuck with it and enjoyed the second half, and that really relaxed me.

I've said to a lot of people, the drums in the beginning need reverb, and so does that chime synth, and I can see why you said It had the mystical feel to it.

I think disorganized at the beginning would be appropriate because of being in a different place, different culture, different language, etc. However, I didn't think it was disorganized. I liked it from beat 1.

Transitions - great
Instrumenation - great
Concept - great
Execution - great

A great track. If you get the chance, I have a track you might like (being from Greece, by the way, next time you see the statue of Leonidus, please tell him John from Canada says thanks for preserving freedom for the rest of the world), the track is called Xerxes Advance. I hope to do one called "The Spartans Prepare for War", but I have no classic Greek samples.

Anyways, loved your track

John

Hi man! Very cool atmosphere, very mysterious :)
I think it's a bit to long
Good job!

Such an interesting interpretation - a Renaissance city sonically painted into an electronic Trance soundscape! Neon lights at night on 500 year old walls.

I think I understand why you have the intro as it is, and the previous reviews and advice for revision really got me thinking. My offering for some kind of compromise is this: consider adding some delay to the off-tempo tuned percussion.

If you can time the delay correctly, (delay at same bpm as track) you'll retain the original effect and bridge or merge it into the solid beat that it floats over. It will soften it a bit, but it'll still feel like that "old forgotten memories" that it reminds me of. Nice work here!

i didnt really understand why you made the beginning that way. its off tempo and unorganized. didnt listen the whole way through, but from what the other people say in their reviews it seems apparent. you need to fix the beginning of this track, its ok though just trying to tell you what i think. im not trying to get you down, i just appreciate people who dont care what people think, they make a song, no matter what others input is on it and just let it ride. to do that is a feat in its own right, nice job and keep flowing

Honestly, I didn't really like the beginning of the track at all. It's a bit unorganized I was just really confused. As soon as it started transitioning, I began to like it. It still seems like a rough copy, I think a little bit of mastering and mixing up would be beneficial.

haha i like that one synth that sounds like a dolphin u painted a nice picture in my head with this one. i would love to go to italy.

hey DJsDragoN
I like the percussion and fx with this one
very atmospheric with a hint of tension
well done
Trax

this track has a small problem those bells that come in throw the track of,the paino doent really go well this either.try to focus on the frist three sounds then u got a hit.

Hey DJ

Man very nice track, love the build from the beginning, the drum choice is very good, like the tinkering glass affects also, very nice progressive type trance track, good work..adding to Fav's...Peace..

Estefano

I've never been to Venice, but you've captured the atmosphere that I would imagine there. Those drums you've put together kind of put me into a trance! I really like what you've achieved with this track, you've done well translating an experience into music. Very creative!

Has a mystical sound to it...

ElecTonicPro

wow man the quality of the track is amazing...so crisp and clean..great work man...if only i could capture that kind of mastering. good job brother.
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