Shine - FrenchKid18

Funking freshness. It is a great track man. The bass line is awesome. Vocals sound good too. Nice work.

This sounds cool, the bass goes nicely with the beat/percussion you used. Still lovin the guitar sound. I think the bongos could be a little louder. Like the panning of the guitars. gonna fav!

Nice refresh of this classic track! I'm sorry to hear that you and your wife broke up after making this track. It's good you can still go back and work on it though. Lovin the new mix and beats! Really awesome work! I love your style!

can i ask you another one? how does it become a funk genre? is it because of the guitar pattern or loops or you just made it like an ideas in collaboration of other song and coming from the other artist, i like your so track much. :-)

nice track. can ask you on how to record my own loops or pattern using an acoustic guitar and putting in in fl9 co'z im using fruity loops 9.... thanks :-)

Nice one, I love it, I can't stop singing it.
very nice giutar and the flow is a really nice funky.
Good one, as usual!!!

AND I have just found out in your profile that you are a lover of Depeche Mode and the Line 6 ux2! Good man!

I have some pellas just going through clearance at the moment if you fancy a bash or a cover version?!

Nice concept. Stay Ill

i think its really great - at first i thought perhaps it was too "demo" and wanted it to kick into some kind of fat sound - but by the end I had changed my mind about that and appreciate as is!

Frenchkid, I've listened to 4 or 5 of your tracks and this is my favorite so far. The vocals sound great and well-integrated with the music, and the lyrics are good and melody is hooky. I love the simplicity and cleanness. The funk is hot. This is just personal opinion and probably bs, but I would have liked - sort of expected - a transition in the rhythm guitar for the chorus, a little faster maybe, more dry strumming (or whatever the term is, where the friction on the strings is greater than the sound coming out). That said, I like this so much I faved it halfway through.

-reply to your reply-
Hey Frenchkid, no, sadly, I don't play piano, or anything as a matter of fact. I'd be lost without loops. My friend and collaborator, Lisagaye, plays piano though. She's not a member, but I just emailed her and told her she should join. You can hear her awesome voice on our track "Reaper's Claw" which is on my page. Besides piano, she also plays guitar and violin. I hope she does join so that we can get collabs going perhaps with some of the awesome members like you. I'll let you know.

Clean track this....12 bar's have been around for ages and it's probably one of the hardest things to make one stand out...a cool vocal presence here makes this one special...uncluttered, which lets the voice project strongly...nice one! cheers planet :)

I enjoy the way you revised and modernized a 60's sound without a lot of instrumentation. Great Job!

Just uploaded a xmas song..check it out.....

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/49848

Smooth playing you got there lol. Seriously downloading this right now. :)

I like how you make the simple chord progression really funky and cool. I thought the bassline was set and played real well. Vocals sound good, nice melodies to complement the music. Sweet tune

Cool bluesy tune, like the sound of your guitar, especially the lead. Nice ending!

Wayne, the Humps

now then,this is class,makes me wana learn how to play guitar man im jealous

Nice work frenchkid, you are producing lots of music recently - keep it up.

i love this , it inspires me to do something like that for my boyfriend

@Hyperone i agree , i was wondering how it was going to progress lol

This song is very soothing. I like how it jukes you out at the begining. I was actually thinking of it as a rap song until the guitar came in, and still I was kinda iffy. Then you came in with the words, and by the end of the guitar solo, i was sold brotha. Good work

I love this kind of funk, it's got soul. The guitar playing is really good, and compliments your vocals really well. Great guitar solos by the way. Nice job! Thanks for sharing!

Noce guit there...Tres beau son ..man...keep them comin man Peace Dvibe...I also play my own instruments check it out ...

oh yeah - you have the groove, mate!
the track is sort of mixture of great old school blues and new-wave feeling - not an easy #####!
what if you simply put some effects on vocal - simple compression will add more drive.
but i can imagine that your wife (and any other women in the world) is dreaming to hear something like this! great!

What can I say? Your tracks are great.
This one has some highs that cause my headphones to crackle at times... actually, thats pretty common across your music... As far as the music goes, love it! The mastering side is quite good too, with just a few moments of 'audio stress'... I don't know the right word to use for it, but listen to it with different speakers/headphones at a decent volume and you'll see... maybe its just at my and and its an EQ problem?
Doesn't matter much - your music is great!

Love this track !! unusual phrasing with the tempo of guitar which works very well. The piano man I know of to add to this groove if he hasn't allready done so is the mighty BChris

you know that's a special song for your woman. and if she's the only one that can keep your 'head from turning' that all that matters.. When i listen to the song i don't really listen to the technical aspect of it..but it sounds really great the way it is. to me the important thing is you have a great song and it's message is loud and proud and it's all put in a great, upbeat tune... she's love it. i love hand claps....