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Thank you so much for your time to listen and comment on my track. It is good to know it was a mind trip.
Best regards, Anthony

Thank you Richard, thank you so much for your appreciation and your kind manners. I like it when you say the poem makes the reader reflect, then it is the time of our communication. Then it is when you give and take.
Best wishes, Anthony

I love Spanish, due to the vicinity to the Italian (that lets me understand a bit) and the temperament of this language, so vivid and melodic. I will soon upload this poem (El sol del silencio) and of course I would like it in Spanish. I think you will better understand it from the Italian narration and it would also be great if you could narrate the poem, so I can add it to the existing ones. Thanks a lot for the visit and your comments, I am really glad that you want to collaborate on this.
Best regards, Anthony

Hello Rita
Thank you for being so supportive.
I do understand it is difficult to narrate or sing properly in a foreign language. And it is not just spoken words, it is with music which means you have to achieve a certain level of integration to the music. That needs extra skills and so on.
It is an effort of communicating my thoughts.
A small book that would contain my poems would have the beauty and charm of paper and the chosen typing characteristics. Maybe a picture or two.
Here on LM we use sound and I have to copy with that.
I will try with AI voices (actually I have prepared a beautiful poem named "The sun of silence" with three differnet voices, each one for the Greek, the English and the Italian language). Their narration is reeally clear. In some cases one needs to intervene to the text in various ways so that things would sound as natural as it could be .
But it is fascinating, really interesting and enjoyable, at least to me. When I get the message that the community liked, one way or another, what I presented, I am realy pleased.
Of course I listen to every member that took the time to write to me, this is the other interesting thing that happens during this procedure. Very, very interesting.
We are among the lucky ones that time is given to them to spend it on these things. True luck Rita. Thanks again for the visit and the beautiful comments.
Best wishes, Anthony

Hello Verdi
I think it is a bit messy too, with the two voices but honestly the intention is to read the lyrics. It is a poem and I am very satisfied when is read. I am not a narrator or a vocalist. To tell you the truth I've been working on another poem and I have used AI voices. The dilemma is if I should try to accompany the voice in Greek or not, just because I wrote the poem and the music. It is creative and I enjoy the fact that these poems reach an audience, it is not strictly in written form. I agree with you though that this one is a bit messy. I also do not know if the idea of just writing the poem in the lyrics section escorted by the music written upon it, would be an acceptable way of presentation.
I really hope the written form did the job (you see it is a translation and in such casrs there is always a distance from the native language).
Tutto O.K, come dicono gli amici Italiani !
Best wishes, Anthony

Thank you Dan
It is do pleasing to know you liked it. It is pleasing because I do know it is dark at some point but you do see the light too, which is why I do this stuff .
Best regards, Anthony

Hello Fanis
Thanks a lot, after so many years these poems live again. It is a new way, it is not ink and paper but it is a way and I enjoy the procedure. I am tought by the A.I in translating and rendering these poems in the English and Italian language. It is something that would have taken way more time and perhaps with inaccurate results. Now I discuss with sophisticated creation and all I need to transfer to the new language version of the poem, is really transferred. There is an exchange of opinions and this makes the whole thing fascinating. Then it is the music...well here the rhymes give the pace, it is clearly a matter of emotions and mood you are in.
Much love brother!!

Hello
They are of course personal thoughts of a certain period of my life, so yes they may be provoking and poignant, even aphoristic, but by now I see things less critically for not being the judge. It is not that the world and people changed, it is rather I' ve changed. We don't have to be caustic for being understood, at least by those who we want to come in touch.
In cases silence may give better results.
Best regards, Anthony

Thank you so much for all istening and commenting. I am glad enjoyed it.
Best regards, Anthony

Thank you Glenn
I really appreciate the fact that you listened to my spoken thoughts and something interesting came up. This way I get a message to continue and this I like a lot.
Best regards, Anthony

Thank you Mark
I am so glad that it gave to you a cinematic feeling along with honesty and transparency in this effort.
Best regards, Anthony

Thank you so much for your comments V, it is a real pleasure to see that you liked my work here.
Best regards, Anthony

Thank you Robin
i appreciate your interest and your friendly approach to what I do. I am really glad you like it.
Best regards, Anthony

Hello Paul
You know I am really glad to read your comments. You always listen with care and your advise is thoughtful. I will say I can't really see it like some kind of a competition. I do not want to see it this way. I try to be accepted as a creator something that gives me joy. Competition brings anxiety and I've had and still have enough in other parts of my life. Let it be a bit loose on LM. I always love my country and I try not to be considered as a non good example but I do not know if representation is accepted since not chosen and approved. Let it be loose Paul, after all I strongly believe we all stand with dignity here on LM representing ourselves or our band (if any). I am so glad you liked my thoughts my friend. It has been a reason for a nice conversation.
Best regard, Anthony

Hello Zoot
It is part of my emotional and rational world, I mean the rhymes and music...they accompany me in various ways.
Thank you for your time to listen and comment on my music and my thoughts.
Best regard, Anthony

Hello to both of you
Thank you for your kind words. This Oriental vibe, as it reflected on you, has not been intentional. Let's say it is raw material. I am really glad it brought to your mind wise words. It is a good sideeffect..!
Best regards, Anthony