Tags : | Spoken Word | 2.81 MB

Description : Spoken Word with Rhythm. It's a song about dedication and being there for the one you love. People can easily say what they are going to do but not really mean any of the words. I learned a hard lesson in that today.

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  1. CaptainSour69
    CaptainSour69 on Fri 6th Nov 2020 - 1 year ago

    Wonderful Song. Makes me think of a girl who wants to stay happy while her lover wants to stay sad. Good job, keep it up!

  2. sorayapietersz
    sorayapietersz on Fri 11th Mar 2016 - 6 years ago

    feel you...

  3. Eighteen
    Eighteen on Tue 1st Dec 2015 - 6 years ago

    Very nice piano,
    I like your voice a lot!
    Beautifull track.



  4. Billydragon1
    Billydragon1 on Mon 30th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    Very simple and very effective. The traits of every great song!
    Well done. And i enjoyed the spoken word too. Keep it up.
    Blessings - B.

  5. CitizenMofo
    CitizenMofo on Mon 30th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    Ain't it so true - what you said? Love this one. Love the trancey repetition of the beat and the spoken vocals, and then the singing comes in right at the right time. Great work.

  6. jaryani
    jaryani on Sun 29th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    you did a very good job, i wish i could work with you some day:D

  7. crucethus
    crucethus on Sun 29th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    Hey , nice work, sorry about the emotional pain you might be feeling at this time, I know relationships can be hard sometimes. As a producer and artist as I listen too this, I think that we could do much more to build the emotional cascade that needs to be expressed. For instance, If I had your acca-pella I would just use the piano and maybe a pad at first and build it until later in the song then using percussion and drums towards the end in an explosion of emotion, and then end it by bringing it all back down to just a piano and your voice. In that beginning section I would also add some interesting stereo delay to show the wide scape of the emotions being presented. But that's just me hearing something sweet and wanting to take it too the Nth degree.

  8. NitramBeatS
    NitramBeatS on Fri 20th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    Yes totally agree with the comment below. You could make some good track out of it. It sounds very interesting

    Reply by Jeffierenee

    Thank you so much for listening

  9. JasonCroft
    JasonCroft on Thu 19th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    First of all
    respect for this mindset
    the glory of humanity, is dedication
    to loose something you want for someone you love
    it doesnt matter
    the "thing" can be everything even your life
    and a dark world can be bright with this light

    however lets back to the bussines :D :

    the track is just a loop I think it would be better if you add some FX and etc on it

    on 1:19 we have a beautiful choir that can be better with adding a chorus effect

    nothing more
    Kind regards

    Reply by Jeffierenee

    Thank you! I really wanted to just do a spoken word with a low melody. I didn't know it would turn out like it did. Thank you for the feedback. I will definitely try to take your advice and see if I can do more with this.

  10. larrybarrow31
    larrybarrow31 on Thu 19th Nov 2015 - 6 years ago

    Very poetic and soothing to the soul, a song that creates balance.Nice!!

    Reply by Jeffierenee

    Thank you

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