Proper Grime Instrumental - Conor8

Alright mate, few things.

You need to quantize the drums in this. If you don't know how to do that or what that is I mean you need to straighten them up. Get them running in time. But then it's always good to push a few of your drum notes a touch out of time to give your drums a bit of feeling. But you only want to do that to percussion in general, the odd snare maybe but keep your kicks constant. Also the synth line and notes aren't grimey enough yet, I'd go back and chance the notes and not have it coming in all the time.

You need to think about structure more, make a 8 bar into a 8 bar chorus and then a 16 bar verse for example.

Also think about what's doing what in the song, as in.... You need to really think about what notes are doing what to make the movement in the song. What won't do is just throwing more ideas and notes over the top to compensate for a half arsed beat. Go back and listen to your fav grime choons and think about what makes them move the way they do.

Most of all mate you need more time. I can tell you've just started off producing, it's just a question of time, patience, thinking and practicing.

Good luck mate, and keep going.