You really have something there... i agree with helix on that you have come up with some interesting melodies... like any song there is room for improvement but in my opinion buff it up a bit and make a few adjustments and its good to go.. XD
There's some really good melodies in there, I didn't really like the blown flutes sorta thing around 1:30ish, I just felt the sound was a bit strange, but that's just me. As for the length, if you bulge it out a bit to get it up to 2:30ish you could leave it at that. Good luck.
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