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29th Mar 2017 21:07 - 8 years ago
Description : Hello! I have been silent on the site for a few weeks. I had some studying to do, unfortunately.
I have tried to make a song that a vocalist could use. Maybe to make some money to pay for the Korg Volca FM that I want to buy. Any feedback on what could be improved is highly appreciated!

(For now I will not allow downloads, if this track cannot be sold, I will open up downloads for the song)

The style is a combination of future bass, vaporwave, trance and I guess a bit of sleep deprivation.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give Allochtune some feedback.

thephilosofist
thephilosofist 21st May 2017 22:58 - 8 years ago
Hey, this is cool. Very easy to listen to. Harmonies are interesting enough and match up well.

I like the use of portamento with the gated(?) synths toward the end of the track. Really cool space-beach vibes. Windsurfing on neptune!

Cheers
Matt
Allochtune
Allochtune replied 22nd May 2017 - 8 years ago
I have made this track some time ago. It's funny, here in the description I still wanted to buy the Volca FM hahaha. I still really like the 80's plucky sounds though. I must say that this site has taught me a lot. If I personally compare this song to my newest song 'Neon Tokyo', the quality has gone up considerably. This has been from all the feedback I have gotten over these past 3 months.

I have used gating heavily throughout the track. This track was basically the first time I was really experimenting with it. I have used 'Gross Beat' to get those gated synths towards the end. I am glad you like the space-beach vibes! And windsurfing on neptune is a really cool way to describe it! Thanks for taking the time to listen to it!

- Tom
bitronix
bitronix 31st Mar 2017 13:27 - 8 years ago
Mixed and mastered well! I like that soft, mono-legato-ish tune going in the background. The variation of patterns, automations and arpeggios gives that space and electronic vibe. Even though ascending arps are always repeated, it doesn't get old to hear! Which means, i love it!

Cheers!
Allochtune
Allochtune replied 1st Apr 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks a lot for your feedback! I appreciate it, this site has taught me a lot this way. Thanks for listening :)
This track has also taken me longer than I would care to admit, but I have learned some new things, so that's good.

Cheers back!

-Tom
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 30th Mar 2017 14:45 - 8 years ago
Relaxing tune, with some awesome synthetic interest! Nice representation of the various ranges as well. I am thinking of something as listening which might add to my enjoyment of this, which is a second bass for certain sections which would be less "fundamental." This one sounds very sine wave, or possibly heavily low pass filtered. Maybe it would add some sonic depth, I don't know. This had a very "down to earth" feel, which left me nicely calm. Now for some coffee... ha ha. Either way, very nice piece! Fave!
Allochtune
Allochtune replied 30th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
The bass is heavily low pass filtered :)
I do think that the fundamental bass is necessary for the future bass genre.
Even though I have put a lot of time in this song, it somehow felt rushed. I just wanted to be done with it and start a new project. As a fellow producer, I think you probably understand this feeling. I have put a lot of work in it, but it didn't feel finished, in a sense.
Some projects never do, I guess.

I have never considered adding a different, lighter, bass in the song. I do think it would influence the range of the song positively. I will look into it! Thanks for the advice.

Glad you enjoyed it ;)
imakebeatsLF
imakebeatsLF 30th Mar 2017 10:08 - 8 years ago
love that song title

intro has some nice vibes, likin the synth

that beat fits well too I like the subtle build

PEACE

(LF)
Allochtune
Allochtune replied 30th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
I have made that synth from scratch. It is not entirely based on a plug-in, I have used my KORG Monotron and sampled it. Then I put it in Directwave and voila. Just put a lot of reverb on it and you have a dreamy sounding synth.
My biggest problems were rises, build-up and the beats, so I am glad you liked the points that have been my biggest flaws! :D
Thanks for your time and your comment!

Peace ;)

Tom
novaspace
novaspace 30th Mar 2017 07:59 - 8 years ago
nice not bad! regards Friso
Allochtune
Allochtune replied 30th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks for listening!
Deathbot
Deathbot 30th Mar 2017 04:49 - 8 years ago
Great flow! so spacey. it made me feel like a robot.
Brilliant job.

DB
Allochtune
Allochtune replied 30th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks for listening! I am glad it has a good flow according to you, that was one of the things that I tried to work on (having good risers etc). Personally, I thought that the midpart was a bit too long, but I am glad that you liked the whole song :)
Thanks!

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