Really pro work, kudos.

nice work. top EpicRecord quality. won`t judge anything `cuz you won`t judge Michaeal Jackson right? :) Cheers!

Once again, FANTASTIC! You boys are a Pheenom! Keep up the great work!

Great job on your first. It's almost spoken word in some places which is why I feel it works so well. With the the proper mix and mastering plus a little polish on the vocals I truely believe you have potential Hit Material. Keep up your great work and experimentation and be your self , not sounding like someone else but your God given self . *(Best Kept Secrete)* 5stars. Look foreword collaberating on some Amazing tracks/Songs.

Blessings,

Sean "Mystro" Mather

I agree with the comments on the mix and mastering. Frankly, I'd have preferred to hear this with acoustic guitars backing I think. And perhaps some "interesting" additional instruments like a trombone, or accordion, or .. I don't know. I'd experiment to forge a new sound. I like the song. I thought the rap worked well. I wasn't crazy about the "wall of sound" on this one. Based on the other two tracks you've posted here, I'd say that you definitely have upped your production chops. If you still have the audio tracks from this one, I think you should consider tackling a re-make some time in the future. I'm currently reading the book by Ken Caillat, the audio engineer who produced the "Rumours" album by Fleetwood Mac. They worked and reworked their tracks many times over and some of them changed significantly from the original versions recorded in their initial sessions. I'm guilty of getting fixated on my first attempts at tracks and not making the hard decisions to just dump a drum track or bass line that really isn't working. Or, not dropping all the faders down to null and re-starting a mix from scratch. You and your brother have got something really good going on here. Keep on pushing yourself for excellence.

Great song. Excellent technique. You should be proud.

Yeah this is very good, and belongs in the POP genre. You have a nice voice and those are very good harmony textures.
good Work
cru

This sounds like stuff i hear on the radio all the time. What are you doing posting stuff on line when you could be selling this stuff and making a mint from it.
You've got some serious talent.
FR

Very easy listening quality pop song...could be a loved one for nearly every radio station...superb guitar tone and chord progression through the whole track...made for 2015 expectations...:-)brilliant...

Respect and shake hands, Danke

great track man! :), who does the vocals?

I like it. The song itself is solid, the vocals are great and apart from a few tweaks in the mastering, nothing else is needed. I'd gladly play this on Loop Radio.

Hi. This actually sounds like a pretty decent track and I can hear what you're going for.

However, the mix is so very loud that I'm finding it uncomfortable to listen to. So, in that sense, it's definitely not chillout music.

Have a look at your waveform - it's a pretty thick tube of toothpaste so there's a real lack of dynamic variation.

Ask me if you're not quite sure what I mean by that. Maybe you just boosted the levels far too much at the end as you were finishing things off.

It's also much more like pop music than chillout (even if were not such a loud master).

Remix it and make it less loud and I'll give some more detail as there's some good work going on here.

I think this is to be placed under the pop genre. Anyway it's a great track. Good work!

/Anders

belle realisation attention au mixage mes tres bien fait domr