Knnetic - Etheral Realism - Yerite

love the drums

Hey, no problem as regards feedback.

I almost always write fairly long and detailed reviews. This one is qute short for me. That’s probably because there wasn’t that much variation in the track so I didn’t have so much to say.

I’d suggest going back and auditioning some new parts. You could probably do more with the piano parts. Maybe chop them up and re-order them as I’m sure other good melodies can be made out of them. Also, audition some other d’n’b drum loops to find the basis for another section you can take this into.

I’d also try having the same bass part played by another bass synth as that can give it quite a different character. Then vary that a bit and you’ll have a nice, new, strongly related part.

So many ways to make more of what you have – something I do all the time in my music work.

Good luck and I look forward to hearing an improvement some time.

Greetings. Nice ambient intro and the crackly record scratch stuff works well. Beautiful piano.

Then we get some light drums and heavy long, bass notes. Sort of delayed voices in the background.

Drum removal and we're sort of back to the intro but it's a just a break until that fat bassline returns.

Now I want it to really build to something more. Maybe bigger and better or just something else melodically. But it doesn't, which is my only complaint about the track.

I just felt it should have gone into some other sort of theme but you just spent the last 45 seconds doing the same sort of stuff as before.

Overall: good work and lots of beauty here but I know it could be better.

excellent work.
I enjoyed the ambience, and the simplicity of the elements, the piano melody is also one of the nicest things mixed environment.
is hard to find songs of this genre with that same feeling that you managed to convey in this song.

you used some Vst?