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Description : NEW - 2014 - Ok community, this is a track i am working on right now. Not in the main time but offten. It is a remix rework, with some new parts, from an older song from myself. Now i am on a point where i think i should produce it right in this way, that i share here. But maybe someone think i should do some changes or else. Please tell me.
ANY comment is welcome!!! Would be nice if you take yourself some time to listen. Thanks

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  1. DJSTEFKO
    DJSTEFKO on Mon 18th Aug 2014 - 9 years ago

    good music bro. Only you're a little voice amplifier to be heard. but the song is not bad

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    :) Hey DJSTEFKO

    Nice to hear that you found the song not bad.

    And like sayed befor - this mixing thing ....

    stay tuned
    joe

  2. FreeRadical
    FreeRadical on Thu 24th Jul 2014 - 9 years ago

    This is really great and i like the way you switch between German and English. I disagree that the mix needs sorting out as it sounds fine to me. It could be filled out with some pads or something just to give it another layer of depth but you've done marvels with the vocals.
    This was a really good listen.
    FR

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks alot for youre comment FR.

    Nice to hear that you enjoyed the listen
    and that you like vocals

    Maybe the track needs some smooth synthy improvisations
    behind all ...... but not now .......

    now i will go into hollydays - 2 weeks on the beach

    so stay tuned
    joe

  3. RiceChrisB
    RiceChrisB on Thu 24th Jul 2014 - 9 years ago

    could deff be mixed better, but its okay.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey RiceChrisB

    You are right. Could sure be better mixed.
    And i think it will sound better after i done the real production.

    Thanks for the comment
    joe

  4. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Wed 23rd Jul 2014 - 9 years ago

    Joe, i really liked this track. Vocals were excellent! Just right for the feel of the track. it reminded me of Lou Reed a bit, probably because of the chord progression, but also because of the laid back feel to the vocals. This is one of the more interesting and engaging tracks I've heard on Looperman. Very nice work!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks a lot for this friendly comment Eric.

    That a song from me would remind someone on Lou Reed - wow
    Cool to hear that you like the vocals, cause deep inside i am just more a singer then a producer, so your words make me realy happy.

    thanks again
    stay tuned
    joe

  5. RenzWilde
    RenzWilde on Sun 20th Jul 2014 - 9 years ago

    Great track Joe! Love the spacy Chorus. Great retro sound with the reverb. This track has it all. Im a fan of your work, i think i said this before.

    As for changes, I like the minimal style you have know. But in my mind, I heard Kraftwerk underneath this. I know, i know, i hear Kraftwerk in everything, LOL. But if I remixed this, it would try to produce it Kraftwerk style.

    But thats just me, probably not what you imagined with this track. But the way it is now, its very very cool!

    I faved for sure! Keep em coming Joe
    RW

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey Renz

    Always nice to hear something from you.
    And, yes you said it already befor but that dosend matter at all, cause it sounds every time you say it, extreme cool in my ears! :)

    mmmmmm ..... Kraftwerk ..... I love them also a lot and all starts with there cool song - Ruck Zack - to me and not with the "younger" pur electronic stuff :) .... but i am not sure what kind of Kraftwerksounds you "hear" in your head when you listen to this piece of music.
    But feel free to do a remix :) - If needed, i could make a acapella ....

    Nice that you enjoy this version and give it a fav.

    So thanks for the comment and the time u invest.
    stay tuned
    joe

  6. DESTERO
    DESTERO on Sat 19th Jul 2014 - 9 years ago

    Hey Joe,
    much better ambience around,nice listen too,maybe you could give it a little burst by adding some bass drum not that much just a little,keep on bro*,DRO

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey DRO

    Thanks for your time you give to this track.

    I had this - there could be a little more drums thing - already in my head but i didnt found any "loop" that fits. Maybe i should try a little life recording with my old yamaha DD11 (i am not sure when i used it the last time)

    Always nice to get a comment from you DRO.

    And the sun will be hot today for sure ... yippy!
    stay tuned
    joe

    PS: Das ist nicht der "neue song bei dem ich mir so richtig viel Mhe geben wollte" sondern einer der schon in der Mache ist/war. Aber ich denke ich werde alles nocheinmal einsingen .....

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