Listen To Cyberspace Version2 - 016 Pop Song By Joecramer At Looperman.com

18th Jul 2014 21:14 - 11 years ago
Description : NEW - 2014 - Ok community, this is a track i am working on right now. Not in the main time but offten. It is a remix rework, with some new parts, from an older song from myself. Now i am on a point where i think i should produce it right in this way, that i share here. But maybe someone think i should do some changes or else. Please tell me.
ANY comment is welcome!!! Would be nice if you take yourself some time to listen. Thanks

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give joecramer some feedback.

DJSTEFKO
DJSTEFKO 18th Aug 2014 08:47 - 11 years ago
good music bro. Only you're a little voice amplifier to be heard. but the song is not bad
joecramer
joecramer replied 18th Aug 2014 - 11 years ago
:) Hey DJSTEFKO

Nice to hear that you found the song not bad.

And like sayed befor - this mixing thing ....

stay tuned
joe
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 24th Jul 2014 21:45 - 11 years ago
This is really great and i like the way you switch between German and English. I disagree that the mix needs sorting out as it sounds fine to me. It could be filled out with some pads or something just to give it another layer of depth but you've done marvels with the vocals.
This was a really good listen.
FR
joecramer
joecramer replied 25th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks alot for youre comment FR.

Nice to hear that you enjoyed the listen
and that you like vocals

Maybe the track needs some smooth synthy improvisations
behind all ...... but not now .......

now i will go into hollydays - 2 weeks on the beach

so stay tuned
joe
RiceChrisB
RiceChrisB 24th Jul 2014 18:11 - 11 years ago
could deff be mixed better, but its okay.
joecramer
joecramer replied 24th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey RiceChrisB

You are right. Could sure be better mixed.
And i think it will sound better after i done the real production.

Thanks for the comment
joe
EricMilligan
EricMilligan 23rd Jul 2014 02:56 - 11 years ago
Joe, i really liked this track. Vocals were excellent! Just right for the feel of the track. it reminded me of Lou Reed a bit, probably because of the chord progression, but also because of the laid back feel to the vocals. This is one of the more interesting and engaging tracks I've heard on Looperman. Very nice work!
joecramer
joecramer replied 23rd Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks a lot for this friendly comment Eric.

That a song from me would remind someone on Lou Reed - wow
Cool to hear that you like the vocals, cause deep inside i am just more a singer then a producer, so your words make me realy happy.

thanks again
stay tuned
joe
RenzWilde
RenzWilde 20th Jul 2014 09:34 - 11 years ago
Great track Joe! Love the spacy Chorus. Great retro sound with the reverb. This track has it all. Im a fan of your work, i think i said this before.

As for changes, I like the minimal style you have know. But in my mind, I heard Kraftwerk underneath this. I know, i know, i hear Kraftwerk in everything, LOL. But if I remixed this, it would try to produce it Kraftwerk style.

But thats just me, probably not what you imagined with this track. But the way it is now, its very very cool!

I faved for sure! Keep em coming Joe
RW
joecramer
joecramer replied 20th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Renz

Always nice to hear something from you.
And, yes you said it already befor but that dosend matter at all, cause it sounds every time you say it, extreme cool in my ears! :)

mmmmmm ..... Kraftwerk ..... I love them also a lot and all starts with there cool song - Ruck Zack - to me and not with the "younger" pur electronic stuff :) .... but i am not sure what kind of Kraftwerksounds you "hear" in your head when you listen to this piece of music.
But feel free to do a remix :) - If needed, i could make a acapella ....

Nice that you enjoy this version and give it a fav.

So thanks for the comment and the time u invest.
stay tuned
joe
DESTERO
DESTERO 19th Jul 2014 07:37 - 11 years ago
Hey Joe,
much better ambience around,nice listen too,maybe you could give it a little burst by adding some bass drum not that much just a little,keep on bro*,DRO
joecramer
joecramer replied 19th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey DRO

Thanks for your time you give to this track.

I had this - there could be a little more drums thing - already in my head but i didnt found any "loop" that fits. Maybe i should try a little life recording with my old yamaha DD11 (i am not sure when i used it the last time)

Always nice to get a comment from you DRO.

And the sun will be hot today for sure ... yippy!
stay tuned
joe

PS: Das ist nicht der "neue song bei dem ich mir so richtig viel Mühe geben wollte" sondern einer der schon in der Mache ist/war. Aber ich denke ich werde alles nocheinmal einsingen .....

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