Tags : | Pop | 6.07 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : Another of my early efforts from January 2013 using Magix Premium. It is not great and have since lost the wav files to it so I decided to see what my fellow looperpeople think. Not even certain what genre it fits, its more hip pop than hip hop so have put it under pop. As usual your comments good or bad welcomed.

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  1. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Tue 27th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey matey

    Very nice catchy tune, everything clarity wise sounds great as have come to expect of your works when reviewing, love the vibe of the vocal in this works so well with instrumental, Track has a pop house funk sound about which I am totally loving...Excellent work man...Fav'd...Peace n Respect Mark...Mosaic...

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hiya Mosaic,

    Always good to hear from you and your opinion is very valued so I am really pleased you like this one. Thanks as always for your honest comments, very much appreciated.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  2. GalanticMusic
    GalanticMusic on Tue 20th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    I honestly enjoyed this! Those horns/ brass :) very nice!

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Thanks for that, its really appreciated.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  3. crucethus
    crucethus on Thu 15th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    I liked this tune of yours , it's catchy and a nice arrangement of percussion, vox and instruments. great work Mark!

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Steve,

    Thanks for listening and your great comments. As always your opinion is valued so this means a lot.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  4. ShortBusMusic
    ShortBusMusic on Thu 15th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    So, I think you are this incredibly talented mad scientist who is able to assemble these awesome tracks from loops.

    Something I cannot do.

    Really good work Mark, and I think the mix sounds pretty good. I have nothing constructive to add, just a big congratulations on a job well done. Tell Larry hello, hahahaha.

    Bear

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Bear,

    Well mad, and scientist minus the shock of grey or any hair is spot on!!! Thanks for the compliment and larry says can you teach him to play!! Great to hear from you Bear, and thanks again.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  5. AnalogDisc
    AnalogDisc on Wed 14th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    I didn*t know this is possible with Magix... lol! Nice one really, works fine, the vocal is really good, fits to the other samples well! Good work! Cheers!

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi AD,

    Thanks for listening and your great comments. To me Magix is such a great tool for producing music, but I also use Dance 6, a great budget music making tool if you are prepared to work at it. Thanks again.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  6. DESTERO
    DESTERO on Wed 14th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey you2,
    nice Work,like the ambience around,wish i could listen to the one Sound fusing my Mind with the Track, travelling through my Brain, but that´s in my Opinion.:)
    The Vocal´s nice and smooth, fits very good. Well done You2,
    keep on
    all the best,Destero

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Big thanks, know what you mean and I learnt a lot from this track and comments like yours really help with the new stuff I am producing, thanks so much.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  7. FreeRadical
    FreeRadical on Wed 14th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    This is cool and funky mate, Love the vocal work, the music is excellent especially the wah guitar.
    I like the way you incorporated a little bit of acid and there's some clever skills going on in this track.
    I think this is my favourite one of your i've heard so far.
    FR

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi FR,

    Thanks as always for giving us a listen and glad you like, there were a few bits in this that I messed up, but I still love this track too, thanks again.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  8. Darkreine
    Darkreine on Tue 13th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Love this one Mark!!!

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Kenny,

    A big thanks, that means a lot.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!!!!!!!!

  9. radioilluminati
    radioilluminati on Fri 9th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Well done. It sounds clear and has a good vibe. I did notice something that sounded strange at 1:04.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Thanks so much for listening and liking, really very much appreciated, and yes there are couple of bits that don't sound as they should! Lesson about backing up WAV files learnt! Thanks again.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  10. johnnyproducing
    johnnyproducing on Fri 9th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    hey mark,
    Stumbling across this track and this beat has totally got me
    haha, but seriously though nice job these acid punchy basses sounded pretty cool though they both sounded a bit off like they should be timed a little different

    Further the subtle use of the sitar and the strings on the background make up for a nice arrangement of different sounds.
    I don't know for sure though if it's a sitar or not

    thanks for sharing this with us

    and keep them coming ;)

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi JP,

    Thanks for stopping and listening, and yes there a few bits that I would change if I was remixing or mastering again, but really pleased you liked. It is indeed a sampled and messed about with Sitar. Thanks again for your valued comments.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  11. deciBel
    deciBel on Fri 9th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark/larry .
    as usual of yours this one too is a cool & interesting track .
    who is this singer ? she sings so good ...a bit similar to our colleague Camilla alvey here ..
    Mark has anyone told U ,there is an eastern taste in many of your traX?...but U compose more beautifull than majority of asian composers..best wishes.___B

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Benham,

    Thank you as always for your honest comments. The singer is unknown to me ( I am still trying to find out who she is!) It was a sample from Magix and I just loved her vocals. I hadn't thought about the eastern connection before, but you are right having listened again to some of my previous, and a real big thank you for the kind compliment. Great to hear from you and thanks again Benham.

    Take care and best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  12. soundhound
    soundhound on Thu 8th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Cool track put together in a solid way...

    Nicely done....

    TG.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    A big thanks for the listen and kind comment.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  13. aelmen
    aelmen on Sat 3rd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Wonderful funky beat and a great job with the organ in co-operation with the piano!

    Your music is all but predictable!

    Cheers!

    /Anders

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Anders,

    Thanks for listening and your great comment, really appreciated.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  14. Billydragon1
    Billydragon1 on Fri 2nd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    This is such a brilliant and simple track.
    Loved the arrangement and that catchy piano riff.

    I'm sure I heard a sitar in there! Loved that distorted basslike synth that comes in every now and then, gives the track an edge.

    Sorry that you lost the original file. Know how you feel as that has happened to me a few times (computer crashing, accidental delete). Which reminds me, we must always backup our data! Right? - Blessing Mark. - B

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Billy,

    Thanks for listening and spot on it is a sampled sitar!!, thanks for your great comments and glad you like.
    I have started to back up files now!! I also have so many tracks labelled WIP that its time for a spring clean!!
    Take care my friend.

    Very best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  15. aDawon1285
    aDawon1285 on Tue 29th Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Good track Im feeling this.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    That is great to know, thanks for listening and your kind comment.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  16. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Tue 29th Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Like many of us...you are likely your own harshest critic Mark...this is good stuff mate...I know...I listened through to the last note & enjoyed every funky hopping pop minute,,...an eclectic mix of instruments and nicely produced....keep them coming...you obviously had a lot of gems you were keeping to yourself....well done...Ed

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Ed,

    A big thank you as always for your kind, positive but always honest comments. I am really pleased you liked and yes I have a store of earlier work, but feedback at the time was negative so I mothballed them and saved most as mp3's but have lost a lot of the original wav files. I decided to give them an airing on looperman so I could have some constructive feedback!!

    Great to hear from you again Ed and take care.

    Very best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  17. beerling1970
    beerling1970 on Mon 28th Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    VERY FUNKY VERY RETRO SOUNDING AND CERTAINLY VERY CATCHY TOO :)

    FAVED AND DOWNLOADED

    Steve

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Steve,

    Thanks as always for your positive comments, and especially for the fav and download.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  18. MagneticRecords
    MagneticRecords on Sat 26th Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark. Once again a great song from you. I love the power and creativity that was put into this song. A fantastic work.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi M R,

    Great to hear from you and so pleased you liked this track, a big thanks.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  19. dansjoy4
    dansjoy4 on Sat 26th Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Wow Larry! This is excellent!! Really enjoyed this piece. The voice is lovely and the music is slammin! A plus job! Thanks for the download.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Dan,

    No worries, and a big thanks for the listen, love to hear that you thought is was slammin..much appreciated.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  20. cosmicinfluence
    cosmicinfluence on Fri 25th Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    you were right to say more pop than hip hop but thats not a bad thing in terms of pure musicality.
    I rate this track for its diverse range of instruments used and that vocal is very nice too.
    Not to mention it is ofcourse very catchy too. good potential here for sure

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Thanks for the listen and for your kind comments, glad you agree with the genre. Thanks again.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  21. Bathers
    Bathers on Wed 23rd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark/Larry

    I like it because of the Rytmus the piano and because of the voice, everything fits in the mix very well together.

    I think: fine work

    Bathers

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Great to have you listen, even better that you liked this track, thanks so much.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  22. VickyDan
    VickyDan on Wed 23rd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hello Mark ....

    I join with all that has been written here, to confirm that this track is very attractive, and well mixed .... There is a lot of diversity in this production, and the addition of the female voice is the icing on the cake, if I put it that way ....

    Dan

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Dan,

    Thanks for listening and love your colourful comments be them good or bad. Glad you like this one.

    Very best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  23. arashsinghbagri
    arashsinghbagri on Wed 23rd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    good job sir .......nice beat.nd synths....

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Thank you so much and glad you like.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  24. ScottB55
    ScottB55 on Tue 22nd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Cool track, Mark. Everything is quite cohesive. Groovy vocals. All n All...Good job!

    Cheers,
    Scott

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Scott,

    Thanks for listening and your comment, glad you like and much appreciated.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  25. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Tue 22nd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark !

    This is an interesting mixture of styles and it's pretty catchy. Reggae was the first thing that came to my mind, but ofcourse it's much more than that. There are even some eastern influences coming in at around 1:48. Vocals are nice here...who is singing?
    You've made a good decision to share this on LM....it's a very welcoming addition to your Looperman collection!:)
    Waiting for the next one...^^

    Best wishes____Orlando

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Orlando,

    Gosh you are so right with the mixture, I had originally set out to do a fun hip hop track, but then got carried away with various styles and only stopped short of putting the kitchen sink in!! Glad you like though and always look forward to your comments. The vocals were a Magix sample but haven't been able to find out who they belong to, I will though because they have a fabulous voice.

    Take care my friend and best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  26. RichieWinn
    RichieWinn on Tue 22nd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark

    Lovely feel to this and the breakdowns wonderfully times. Always keeps your interest all the way through. Excellent.

    Richie

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Richie,

    Great to have you stopping by and having a listen, and even better that you like it, a big thank you.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  27. danke
    danke on Tue 22nd Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Very vintage felt track Larry...I enjoyed it from start to finsh except the short synth part from 1.09 to 1.14 which is in my humble opinion is slipped away a bit...

    Super voice of the Lady and the instruments are on the top...groovy little chill pop...

    All the best, Danke

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Danke,

    I know exactly what you mean with the 6 secs of mush!! Glad that it didn't spoil it for you to much and thanks for you usual honest comments.

    Best Wishes and take care,

    Mark/Larry!

  28. theHumps
    theHumps on Mon 21st Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Cool groove(s), it has it's dance beat and a reggae sort of feel at times with the scratching guitar. The vocals are great. The mix sounds pretty good as well, nice job putting this one together. Kinda pop/dance/hiphop.... it's good, that is all that matters.

    Wayne

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Wayne,

    Thanks for that, I didn't quite know what I was trying to achieve when I started, and still didn't when I had finished!! So glad you liked it though.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  29. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Mon 21st Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    I think it's pretty cool and catchy.

    Gets quickly into that essential beat with those offbeat groovy piano stabs. Wah's a classic sound and vocals are relaxed and strong.

    0:28 brassy chords are an interesting and unusual change. I think you've also got some high pizzicato stabs in here.

    Quite an early 90s feel to this.

    1:13 what is the vocally lead sound? Moves nicely with the beat.

    1:40 with no beat it's still damn groovy.

    1:48 which lead instrument is that? Slightly odd but I like it.

    I liked this the more I listened to it and don't have any particular improvement suggestions.

    Lots of other people will also like it.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi S N,

    Thank you for your valued comments as usual and I am so pleased that you liked it. 1.13, I messed with the vocal sample and came up with that, the same with 1.48 which was supposed to be a sampled sitar, but I came up with elastic band sound!! The shame is I lost the original wav tracks and haven't been able to replicate since!. Once again thanks for your comments, they really are much appreciated

    Best wishes Mark/Larry!

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