Six-- - Tinka0

Very cool track! It's got a pretty original sound really, so that's a good thing! I like your guitar playing, and it's inspiring because I'm just getting back into guitar too. Mind if I play this on loopradio.net? Faved for sure! Thanks for the DL!

Thanks for the info. Yes, I should have guessed there was some tremolo arm action going on there. Seems obvious now I think about it when remembering that scream. You can get something kind of related using pitch bend on a foot pedal -something I have done at various times over the years.

I do it quite a bit in a track on Looperman called Trial By Ordeal. Another, much heavier track of mine worth checking is one called Debt Black Hole. Possibly the heaviest track I've heard containing so much slide guitar. Those two tracks were originally one 15 min track but I split them in two and they now sound much better and more distinctive.

I also do a lot of bass playing on guitar and really like it. I do it much more than bass guitar playing (it's in loads of my tracks on here) though I do that too (bass was the instrument I started on). I'm really not sure how common it is for people to use guitar detuned down an octave for bass but I'd like to know. I use an ElectroHarmonix POG2 octave pedal that allows you to blend five signals together. So you can go 2 octaves above or below and create some interesting, ethereal sounds, especially when using the attack and cutoff controls as well as adding some delay.

I agree your track could use some extra power in the bass, though you could just beef up the bass synth. I like to do that and can definitely get way bigger bass sounds from synths than bass guitar.

Good luck with this as it's definitely worth improving.

Good riffs - has a soundtrack quality - I can see this getting traction with vocals.

Hello. Some pretty big riffage here. It is all a bit noisy, though - mostly on the guitar.

As regards Crucethus wanting to hear a bassline - there already is one. Maybe he just means a bigger one that more closely follows the guitar But I think the bass that's there is OK and does a decent supporting role.

This is short but there are lots of changes so it feels like a good length.

I like the first drum fill and then the shuffle drum groove. That's pretty funky stuff. Massive guitar scream at 0:18 is cool. I'd like to get some of that into my own music though I'm not quite sure how to do it. Maybe you can tell me.

I quite like the end drums, especially the syncopated, awkward stuff. The cutoff ending I guess means this is not finished yet so I look forward to hearing an improved version.

Maybe it's not such a mixing problem here but instead the guitar sound and the noise on it. Tell me what your setup is for this and I might have some suggestions. Are you using a real amp/preamp or is it software ones?

Good stuff.

Evocative & agressive , right as it should be . as a guitarist I enjoyed the way your guitar sounds , & yes , Bass make this find a more strneghT musical texture .respects.___Behnam

Nice, can't wait to hear it with a bass line now!

Hey...

This so pure and clear...reminds me a bit of C.O.C.'s metal works...dirty riffin and tones of weight in it...

Super (but what's that electro drumming at the end?...:-)

Danke