Woooooow

Well this has plenty of atmosphere. Nice layering of the vocals with the big reverb going off all over. It almost has a kind of dub sound to it except with pianos rather than bass.
This is a well chilled track and it compliments the spliff i've just smoked perfectly so cheers for that!
FR

Beautiful intro .. typing as I listen !! moody . nice beat . up the main vocal ? drop the piano or put extreme wide . sax perfect . slight string missing ? lovely flow . bass thump !! here and there ? Love It :) Peace & Light

Very nice SJ. I noticed you used one of my collaborator's loops (Franco,) so I wanted to chime in and give you an "Atta-Girl" for your creation of a very cool, haunting track.

Cheers,
Scott

I like this track, man. The feeling makes you want to move... no watch someone else move. I guess you hit the nail on the head with the dance genre here. Keep it up, man.

I loved the piano, the sax(?) and the voices!
Reminds me of Nelly Furtado, just a little... I don't know why.
I really like your song! :D

I like your Creative thinking, very pollished. I like the spaces because it gives this production a very big studio feel and sound :)

This is a good track. Tone the piano down a touch, the vocals are fine. Can you add a little bass to carry it along? Up the kick a littl more. I think that some times the percussion could do with some shake or ride just add to the quiet sections with no beat. But that is just my take and in no way reflects on your track. I like it as it is actually and you have done a great job apart from the piano been a tad loud. Well done.

Fantastic, you got the mix where it needs to be. Worthy of a download!

I really liked this!

For me it's going in my Chillout file, as i found it real chilled more than Dance,but thats just my personal liking!

Great use of loops,I can tell your working hard to refine things,so dont worry as its sounding great.!

The main thing is the enjoyment you get,and not always how perfect music has to sound.!

No Track is perfect ever even for famous artist's,
as music is never static.
It breaths what ever life you put in to it.!.

Good Track man!

dear S.J, glad to hear a new track of yours after a while , and byond everything this new track of yours make me ask myself how would be if I become a father someday & can I compose like now & myself or like U ?!?
uuumm...I'm noT sure if I can ...!
oh I speciallY reallY love those SaX loops by FrancO , & U've used them so considered . & those drum lines by our tallented colleague Sprikuval , and as Patrick has told himself too , I also like those pianO too so much . vocal line's voice too was impressive . & totalY U had make a reallY remarkable package .welldone .thnX for sharinG .best wishes.___Behnam

sweet and smooth! good work!

Impressed!
Very good: I second Steve's suggestion.
And I am looking forward to hearing the new version: this stuff is good!
Fav'ed
Domenico

Nicely done SJ...agree the piano can be toned down a bit but other than that fabulous work. =B-)

This is cool! I like how you've used the vocals! Thanks for incorporating one of my loops! The mix sounds pretty good to me, except I would lower the piano a bit. Awesome track!

Wow sister, you just keep getting better and better!! Just a few tweaks needed to boost this. Steve's right, the song looses momentum around 2.19, then picks up again after the bridge at 2.57. The vox needs a volume boost, but apart from that, you is on to a winner with this one.

K;)

Really Good stuff. (and you call me eclectic ;-)) I agree with you on the vocals there is a part where it gets too soft in the mix. But you have created a nice minimalistic sound-scape for these pellas to thrive in. I might think about backing down just a tiny bit on the mix with the piano, and maybe consider using very sparsely a pad (like vickydan uses) softly fading in and out around the 2:20 area, just like a whisper of a hint of ambience. Otherwise I think you have the workings of a great song here, I'm impressed!
Steve