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Tags : | Pop | 6.67 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : NEW RE-MASTERED VERSION - I think this is is a fun song. I had the bare bones of a guitar rhythm that I liked and I sent it to darkreine to see if he could add to it. Well he went one better than that and came up with the melody and the lyrics and sang them and sent it back to me. I then recorded in the bass, violin, and electric guitar bits and synth. The only loops used is the drum loop and it's by Chrisbeats2012 All the rest are live instruments. Thanks Chrisbeats2012. Just a fun number that evolved as darkreine and I went along. Hope you all like it as much as we enjoyed creating it.

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  1. anthonyabutler32
    anthonyabutler32 on Fri 20th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    Off the hook! who ever sing's in it had that old school sound to his voice. Id love to do a track with you guy's

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Hey Anthony good to hear from you again. You are welcome to collab with us, we do it all the time. Go to https://www.facebook.com/groups/collabwithme/
    and leave a message for me or Kenny and we will get cracking on some new covers or new songs.

    You will find our songs here


  2. Rats
    Rats on Fri 2nd Aug 2013 - 8 years ago

    i fuckin LOVE this! i hear a bassline in my head when i listen to this, i know it already has one though, the one im hearing is different...watch your levels though, seems a bit overamped on the vocals but it might be my speakers, or my penchant for recording vocals really low

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Hey rats, thanks for your comments. Yea I know we screwed up on the levels a bit lol. When I get round to it I will fix it all. I love the idea of a different bass line. If you have a different Bass line in your head why don't you record it and send me it and I will put it on the track and if it fits ok I will put it up on looperman. Just a thought. Cheers Rats for dropping in.

  3. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Mon 15th Jul 2013 - 8 years ago

    What a good song!
    I think it could still be polished a bit, but this is good stuff!
    I am always surprised by Kenny's voice: he should sing more.
    Good work.

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Thanks for your kind comments mrwolf. Yea the recordings kinda suffered between our daws. Kennys
    magics and my Ableton seemed incompatible timing wise and sound wise. But we did our best lol. Almost lost the whole lot at one point when Ableton crashed and all the recordings vanished for some strange reason. Good job we made it just for fun. As people actually like it I might re master it and try to make it better.

  4. Planetjazzbass
    Planetjazzbass on Mon 15th Jul 2013 - 8 years ago

    Dang...hit the wrong button before my review was finished!lol....cool song guys,a crowd pleaser for sure...cheers Dave :)

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    I love buttons! Especially BIG RED ONES.

  5. Planetjazzbass
    Planetjazzbass on Mon 15th Jul 2013 - 8 years ago

    Man this has a lot of the iconic 60's vibes running through it,almost like stepping out of a Greyhound onto Haight Ashbury (not that I've done that,just years of American indoctrination!lol)...great song...at the start I thought this isn't pop it's more folky,but it's actually

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Cheers for the review planetjazzbass. Always appreciate good unfinished comments from the masters lol. We just did this for fun and we made it up as we went along never knowing how it would turn out. 60s vibe is ok. Not sure what to call it. It's ok I guess. It would be an album filler for a famous e band I figure. The mastering sucks , I will get round to that eventually lol. Thanks for your comment mate. I will go to the next part now hahahah.

  6. ScottB55
    ScottB55 on Mon 24th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    Really cool track, 12string. I like the song, itself, but I think you may be overdriving a bit on volume and possible compression. Musically, you are on the right track. I'd like to her the vocals a bit clearer. Just MHO, though.


    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Happy you find we are on the right track musically. Always good to know. And yes, I suck at mastering but I am getting better. Honest!

    KIESERSAUCER on Sun 23rd Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    Nice smooth melody. All the sounds blend very well!

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Thank you for your kind comment happy you found it smooth.

  8. JoeFunktastic
    JoeFunktastic on Sat 22nd Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    You and Kenny on man! It does get any better than this. Like to two nicest and talented people on this thing. You guy sure do know how to make a feel good song! This kids today know nothing like this wonderful piece of work. We need to get this one on radio! When to mega talents combine forces magic happens! I got nothing but respect for you two amazing musicians. Great work 12Strings! You know you are way overdue for some FUNK! Anyways great classy tune! The Strings and vocals are awesome! Joe

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Joe! You are too kind mate. We are humbled by your comments.

  9. DesignedImpression
    DesignedImpression on Fri 21st Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    I think it's a great song. The music is perfect IMHO. The vocals fit right in there. Uplifting tune guys, like everything that is going on. Felt as if you two were in the same room and we that listen are there hearing, watching life express itself. A great collab, Much enjoyed and thank you for sharing with us all. A fav from you. Peace.

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Thank you so much for your comment it made my day.

  10. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Sun 16th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    Oh Yeah....what great Sunday afternoon listening going on here....great collab guys...its the catchy kind of tune that carries you along for the ride with it and those cool vocals by Kenny fit the bill to a T...way to go.....more please....Ed

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Cheers Tumbleweed, I always appreciate comments from great players like yourself.

  11. djkillapaul
    djkillapaul on Sat 15th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    Thank you both, 12 and Dark, for getting together and working on this track. Loving it. Agree fully with Brillbilly's comment, great song to seat dance to at a live gig. Lovely atmosphere running through and I cannot begin to tell you how much this reminds me of a past girlfriend


    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Thanks djkillapaul for your kind comments. Glad you liked it.

  12. Burtsbluesboxes
    Burtsbluesboxes on Fri 14th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    !2 String, I saw your name in lights with the floodlight passing over it and had to stop to check this out, Very nice, You and Darkreine did a wonderful job here! Downloading this for my player, thank you for sharing.

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    phatKatz4. Yea! name in lights lol. Thanks for the compliment. We had a great time doing this collab and we got to know each other well. darkreine is a darkhorse and has many hidden talents. Happy you like it.

  13. DanGoldstein
    DanGoldstein on Fri 14th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    it's really neat when a collab flows as this one did. you can feel the positive energy and the natural flow of it. the strings are a nice touch and give it a nice lyrical quality. nice guitar work. always a big fan of bringing the voice up in the mix. always something more to do of course! nice work!

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Cheers midisparks glad you enjoyed the vibe. I tried the track with and without the violins and it won hands down with.
    Yea I always like the vocals upfront especially if the vocalist is good like darkreine. Glad you like the guitar. I was trying to capture the guy crying over his lost love. Don't know if that worked but it sounded good lol.

  14. mickey1160
    mickey1160 on Fri 14th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    a good collaboration here, you can hear that you guys enjoyed putting this together, those are good moments, thanks for sharing. Mickey

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Glad you enjoyed it. Yea, we had great fun putting this one together apart from the trouble I had with my PC crashing and buggering up some of the recordings of the guitar and synth. I had to record them again and you can never quite get them the same lol.

  15. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Thu 13th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    A pleasant song! Nice performances from both of you! I still think this is a bit distorted, but it's still an enjoyable listen!

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Thanks spivkirl glad you like it. We had fun doing it. I really enjoyed doing the bass line as I don't often get to do bass. We have re-mastered the song and it sounds way better. However, I have to wait 24hrs to upload it lol.

  16. brillbilly
    brillbilly on Wed 12th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    This is a real nice number 12 stings!

    It has a great feel that reminds me of the verve!...lush!

    Love the way this feels like a live session,something that I would love to pull a chair up and join in with you guys!.

    Its a real nice easy listening feel,that I think sounds great!

    Very good work to all involved!

    thumbs up and front row seat from me! ;)

    Great vocals from Kenny,beautiful guitars

    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Cheers mate. darkreine and I did it together. Recorded all the instruments in live so that is why it has a live feel to it. Re-Mastered it as it is a bit bad.

  17. Darkreine
    Darkreine on Wed 12th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    Hey man, you're the real deal you know. When a part didn't fit, you just went off and played it again!!

    Wayne's probably right about the mix, perhaps someone else would like to master it.

    Thanks for the inspiration.


    Reply by ElectronBlue

    I re-mastered it again. I think it's a bit better. I think it got messed up swapping it between our DAW's

  18. theHumps
    theHumps on Wed 12th Jun 2013 - 8 years ago

    Since we have been discussing waveforms in the forums, might as well take a look at this one. : ) In my opinion, it looks a bit over compressed and sounds a bit flat. If you cut back on the compression you will start to hear the kick drum and snare start to pop out a bit more and the acoustic will sit better and well, everything else will stand out more. There isn't much dynamics here and it almost sound distorted. Now I'm just giving you some constructive criticism, don't hate me, lol!!

    Cool track, it has everything in a track I love, acoustic guitars, cool lead fills, great singing and catchy beat. And it's a great collab as well so congrats on that too. I think you could get a smoother sounding mix, that's all!


    Reply by ElectronBlue

    Cheers theHumps. I have re-mastered it again lol. Hope it is better. Shame to spoil a good track with naff mastering. Still learning so all the help I can get my friend is greatly appreciated. I love all your stuff so thanks for the compliment.

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When you're out there on that road tonight

Wishing you were holding her tight

Think about the things you said to her

The way the fire just died in her eyes.

You cannot see, You cannot see

You might as well be blind

You cannot change, cannot change, cannot change

The things you left behind

You took away your love from her

And you know it was wrong

Don't waste the love you left behind

When your lying in your bed tonight

Dreaming of her hair in the light

Just remember it was you who left

And now she's at another man's side

You cannot see, You cannot see

You might as well be blind

You cannot change, cannot change, cannot change

The things you left behind

You took away your love from her

And you know it was wrong

Don't waste the love you left behind



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