Listen To Light - Six Feet Under -Feat Monroe- Rock Song By Lightward | Looperman

It's been a while since I last visited Looperman. Saw your track in the "featured". I rather liked your track. I read the review by Fayz - he said something's missing, so I listened again. I suppose you could bolster it here and there. Sometimes I fill out my tracks with a short visit ( a bar or two ) with something unexpected like a barking dog - if someone hears that and says something, then I know they've paid attention. What I like is character in music - you have that. Anyhow, I like your track and will download it, thank you.

reminds me alot of Hollywood Undead, not normally my type of music, but i dig it! lots of work went into this and i can tell. i like the beat, its pretty grooving and the vox aren't too bad either. i can guess and say they have been altered a bit but its not totally obnoxious like most songs. the track sounds pretty good as is, of course i feel like there is something missing from it, but i cant be entirely sure. i think it might be the melody in the music, it has alot of rhythms but i couldn't hear a defined melody aside from the vox. maybe its something to think about.
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also try to be really creative, do something weird with it, make it stand out, for example in linkin park's "given up" they used car keys as a percussion instrument in the intro.
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im not saying that you should do something just like it, but try to find simple ways that make your track stand out from on the rest.
-- much respect, fayz