hey it's very good to hear from you Evisma . I know you because of your collabiration with Behnam and tonality and i like your music and your idea about this music of mine too . it's great if you look at this way to this track and appreciated by me .thank you very much.
As Billydragon1 has said, very energetic. I was hoping to hear some bass guitar on this as that is the only thing your profile says you play. I'm a fellow bass player and I like to hear other peoples playing. Bass is almost all I use.
This is a solid song and it could definitely go places. Thank you for the mood, and welcome!
there are alot of bass guitar in what you heared ! i wonder to read a bassist hasn't heared bass .i listened you track and you play bass verywell , and you know some of basses in my track were synth bass and you can easily find it out .thank you very for taking time to dropping these words and for wellcome .i appreciate .
Hello Behnam, I've been off looperman for about 3 weeks, spent evenings recording and I finally uploaded something new. Hope you got my e-mail response last week.
I really like this track of yours. Jazzy at parts and very smooth and dreamy in others. The horns sound very live and I am curious as to what you used. The slow-down part is very cool as well and I would like to know how you did it. Impressive indeed!
Take care my friend
How R U Evan ?wish all is well around U both .
yes I have recceived your mail , buT seems U haven't recceived my last mail .no problem , I'll send it again.
about this trial I'm glad to see your positive idea .
personalY I saw this as a subordinate nlevel trial of mine (as U can see I had told to other friends before U too )buT if U remember this is the same insight that I had about that other trial ''1 muntes classical guitar flamenco taste ''if U remember (I told U I made that as a training , not a serious track ) ...and I have some times when I ask myself:
can a composer recognize better which one of his traX is working good , or a listener can recognize which one are better ...We'll talk in mail & would be interesting to know your idea too .thanx alot for attention , and perception & time for commenting on this trial of mine , and Evan , as U can see in Chris(Brillbilly) comment , he has wanted me to send him a line of materials which he has liked ...I mean to say U too can tell me if is there any special sound in this which U're minded to have it fr any usage , to send iT for U buddy.best wishes of mine .____Behnam
Ha! I found you! The vocals I have been listening to on Redi Mindtrick are great, Thank You!. This is a beautiful song you have here. I will be adding it to my morning playlist along side Behnam's works. Thank you.
hello evan.thank you very much for your kind words.evan i am a wellknown singer and composer and have album and this is a track from my album . working with Behnam was an unbelievable exprience for me .he is a strange tallent and mscary guitarist and best musician and also best vocalist i have ever known . he did everything and composed that melody vocal and i just used this chance of that day . rightnow it's my causin writing this for you ,and that was my first time for sing a rock song .have you added Behnam's works to your playlist ? it's a joint point between me and you .Behnam is a very good man , just very serious and never smiles when working .
Loving it!!! I agree with StaticNomad almost entirely, and was almost thinking of it just being in the parts where I go down to the low C#. I tune to drop D and then everything down a half step. Drop C#. But you were not off any notes at all and I don't want you to redo what you have. Would like the track on it's own to fiddle with also. Your tone is sweet as HELL! Thanks again for taking your time and laying some awesomeness on it!
Gladja like it dude. OK so now ya got a good start so now ya gotta find the right people to do fill in the other parts so we can blow this tune up to the big time. We need top of the line drums - a superb producer/mixer, and of course lyrics and vocalist. Don't think I can help w lyrics on this one. Just nothin' comes to me. Someone else is apparently meant for that. If ya don't got any better ideas, ask Crucethus to see what me can do. He does great drumlines and production.
OK, as I said below - I'm done here. Will follow with the other tune. And then - whatever's next! :-) At some point I suppose I oughta work on my own stuff, huh? Haha! :-D
Love the tone you put onto this one. At about 0:47 is when it gets too busy, but it's pretty sweet to hear some blazing fretwork ripping up the air. You did this justice!
I really like the drums in this, and the guitar lines have a very nice tone. Bass is simple but well done, doesn't sound like it came from a bass guitar. Like the electronic effect as well. Could hear a saxophone solo about two thirds of the way through.
This one surprised me. The song and the writing is rather good. Very positive, I like that. Vocal idea is very high in the mix, could be lowered some, hits hard when it comes in. I'm only saying this because I like constructive criticism. This one could be very nice if it's given enough time. It's going in the right direction.
You are one of the ones I watch for. I'm always liking the aggressive guitar riffs, and it's one of those things you don't see much of here. That's why I look for you, you always have some good aggressive and abrasive stuff. This one is no different. Like the progression a lot. Drum volume seems a little low, but so what, I wanted the crunchiness and got it. Another good one! Thank you for doing what you're doing.
Thank you, I appreciate that you enjoy my music! A year ago my stuff wasn't so "acceptable" but thanx to looperman.com and all the users that share, I have been able to find good drum loops to unleash to :)Thanx again man, peace
I agree with cyberson. The whole track has a "majestic" feel to it, then the bass comes in with a "good mood walking down the street" feel. Both are done well and sound good, just not together. I am being pretty picky, as that is what I want done to me. But I did enjoy this. Thank you. You came up on Random, by the way. Kinda cool.
I like all of this. I'm a bass player so it's nice to see it in the foreground at times.
The only thing I could say, is Crossfades would help with a lot of the abrupt changes. You can hear the cuts and hear where things are butted up to each other, and a crossfade at the transitions is so fast that you wont notice it, but turns the hit into a swell. More like a naturally struck string.
All that aside, songs like this are why I have fallen in love with looperman. Originality is priceless, please retain yours for the betterment of mankind.
The Killers is what this reminded me of. It's in your vocal tone more than anything. Even if someone is not into The Killers, the resemblance gives it subliminal credibility. Your vocal timing and phrasing gets better after the two minute mark. I agree that the drums and the synthie thing don't work perfect, the synth has an extra beat or something.
Overall, like it a lot. The NIN thing got me interested in your work and I'm liking it all!
Thanks for listening and leaving your comments! The synth/drum timing was mostly intentional, I was trying to induce some syncopation. I deleted that NIN cover, because I thought the verse vocals were pretty weak, it was more of an inspiring experiment. Thanks for coming back for more though!
There is a very nice "Nightwish" feel to the middle that I liked very much. It almost sounds like the low frequencies are maxing out for some of the track. Like what you have here.
yuppp?i wonder ! i don't denial about being a fan of nightwish , but i find no relevance to nightwish in this track .anyway i am happy to read you have liked this music .i really appreciate it.
Evan , my friend , I'm so glad to see your possitive idea abouT iT , and man , for sure it's downloadable for U & U can have iT .Evan , almosT 80% of these 23 comments before U are my friends who We have email swap & I used to send all my traX which are noT downloadable for my friends .even there are friends whom U may don't see their comment buT I'm glad to send them my trials & ask their worthwhile idea about my trials . and no doubT when someone let me sing in my moherhood language on his track , there's no track of mine which he/she can't have iT .& for sure I'll be honoured to can send any trials of mine which my unseen friends like them to them .even if U were noT this new unseen friend whom I think is almost as old as myself too , there was no track of mine which someone like to have it & he/she can't have it ( this is something like a self rule for me ).. take a look to comments & my answers in any of these links below & U'll underestand me better : http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/138325#comments
I mean Colleague Adiere & Noelle Comments...or in this one too: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/139714#comments
or last coment i this one : http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/141793#comments
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Best wishes Evan. & thnx for your presence , attention & commenT .
______Behnam
Can totally hear what the idea is, and there are some nice lead lines within. The issue is the timing of the drums and the rhythm guitar track. Try moving the drum track over a 1/4 note later. Like where you are going with this.
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This is a solid song and it could definitely go places. Thank you for the mood, and welcome!
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I really like this track of yours. Jazzy at parts and very smooth and dreamy in others. The horns sound very live and I am curious as to what you used. The slow-down part is very cool as well and I would like to know how you did it. Impressive indeed!
Take care my friend
Evan
yes I have recceived your mail , buT seems U haven't recceived my last mail .no problem , I'll send it again.
about this trial I'm glad to see your positive idea .
personalY I saw this as a subordinate nlevel trial of mine (as U can see I had told to other friends before U too )buT if U remember this is the same insight that I had about that other trial ''1 muntes classical guitar flamenco taste ''if U remember (I told U I made that as a training , not a serious track ) ...and I have some times when I ask myself:
can a composer recognize better which one of his traX is working good , or a listener can recognize which one are better ...We'll talk in mail & would be interesting to know your idea too .thanx alot for attention , and perception & time for commenting on this trial of mine , and Evan , as U can see in Chris(Brillbilly) comment , he has wanted me to send him a line of materials which he has liked ...I mean to say U too can tell me if is there any special sound in this which U're minded to have it fr any usage , to send iT for U buddy.best wishes of mine .____Behnam
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Evan
OK, as I said below - I'm done here. Will follow with the other tune. And then - whatever's next! :-) At some point I suppose I oughta work on my own stuff, huh? Haha! :-D
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Evan
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The only thing I could say, is Crossfades would help with a lot of the abrupt changes. You can hear the cuts and hear where things are butted up to each other, and a crossfade at the transitions is so fast that you wont notice it, but turns the hit into a swell. More like a naturally struck string.
All that aside, songs like this are why I have fallen in love with looperman. Originality is priceless, please retain yours for the betterment of mankind.
Evan
on Dark Sky by Spivkurl
Overall, like it a lot. The NIN thing got me interested in your work and I'm liking it all!
Evan
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I feel you need something else going on in the background to not get incredibly repetitive.
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Evan
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/138325#comments
I mean Colleague Adiere & Noelle Comments...or in this one too:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/139714#comments
or last coment i this one :
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/141793#comments
.......
Best wishes Evan. & thnx for your presence , attention & commenT .
______Behnam
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Evan
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