EVISMA IMMTU2 - Maalox Version - TheNewWaveGroup

24th Sep 2013 18:18 - 13 years ago
Description : Well the saying goes "Give the people what they want" - and who can argue w Ray Charles, right? Haha! So by popular request here it is - IMMT2U - way less acid! After listening a bit I can see how you guys got distracted by both guitars chattering at once - sorta like one trying to shout over the other. I compared both - I like the original. But maybe that's cuz I'm kinda schizo so I can deal. I think of it as sorta like f-ing two b*itches at once, but I can see how it may distracting to other folks. So anyways, here's to clean and deinsanitized version. Pack a bowl. :-D

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give TheNewWaveGroup some feedback.

crucethus
crucethus 28th Sep 2013 05:49 - 13 years ago
Ohh yeah we could make this work...thanks for the name-drop. this has potential!
topvega
topvega 28th Sep 2013 01:15 - 13 years ago
Dude I could totally see Maynard James Keenan all over this bad boy. I also agree it's too short and could definitely use another part or two. Honestly with what you have this could be a 5 minute song easy with the right interlude. Maybe a tear down of the riffs and then build it back up or go off on another tangent and then bring it all back together at the end. And yeah, all of us guitarists mix our guitars way too hot. :)

Nice job with this so far, solid track that can be expanded a bit.

tv
TheNewWaveGroup
TheNewWaveGroup replied 28th Sep 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks for the comments Vega. Yes, the track above is very Toolish - that's how Evisma writes - and yes it it just a partial track. Here's the whole track which I just added a riff at the end.

http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/146842
Evisma
Evisma 25th Sep 2013 03:15 - 13 years ago
Loving it!!! I agree with StaticNomad almost entirely, and was almost thinking of it just being in the parts where I go down to the low C#. I tune to drop D and then everything down a half step. Drop C#. But you were not off any notes at all and I don't want you to redo what you have. Would like the track on it's own to fiddle with also. Your tone is sweet as HELL! Thanks again for taking your time and laying some awesomeness on it!

Evan
TheNewWaveGroup
TheNewWaveGroup replied 25th Sep 2013 - 13 years ago
Gladja like it dude. OK so now ya got a good start so now ya gotta find the right people to do fill in the other parts so we can blow this tune up to the big time. We need top of the line drums - a superb producer/mixer, and of course lyrics and vocalist. Don't think I can help w lyrics on this one. Just nothin' comes to me. Someone else is apparently meant for that. If ya don't got any better ideas, ask Crucethus to see what me can do. He does great drumlines and production.

OK, as I said below - I'm done here. Will follow with the other tune. And then - whatever's next! :-) At some point I suppose I oughta work on my own stuff, huh? Haha! :-D
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 24th Sep 2013 19:12 - 13 years ago
Yo. I commented on your previous attempt. I think this one's better and it's a decent, crazy lead part. However, I think the solo goes on for too long. From 0:56 to 1:13 I think it's just a bit too much and a bit too intense and also overshadows the bass and drums.

If you could come up with a less intense 20 or so seconds, I think it might help. Maybe some sort of soaring, heavily delayed, simpler part or just tasteful, delayed chords that ring out. That would also allow the bass to be heard again.

Also, the track is too short and doesn't feel like a full track.

The Toolesque stuff starting on 1:13 is cool (drums too) so lots more could be made of that.
TheNewWaveGroup
TheNewWaveGroup replied 25th Sep 2013 - 13 years ago
Your observations are pretty much on target. This clip is actually only half the song. It's really just the part where the guitar break needs to be. And yeah, the guitar is too loud - don't all guitarists mix the guitar too loud? 8-D In the DNA I think. He'll mix it right or we'll get somebody who knows what the hell they're doing with mixing (like Crucethus maybe). I got my talents, but mixing ain't one of 'em.

One thing I'm not sure I agree about is the "soaring delayed simpler". Might work. Might not though. Sounds kinda like Ice cream with jalepenos to me - but hell - maybe! I just do tracks by what I feel. If I feel something compelling in a tune, that's what I'll contribute. My work here is done. And dude, if you got ideas for the track, by all means, show us whatcha got. Might be a good fit or a smart new direction.

The only thing I wanna do is work with some good artists, make some great tunes, and split a couple mil between us. A good artist can produce good work alone - but bands make much much better productions. The way I feel is let's all work together - let's see what we can do.

Frankly I think if the talent on Looperman all worked together - we would become a major label. Tasty food for thought, eh? :-)

Salaam.

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