Evisma

Thank´s Evan ,sounds delicious, maybe there is a peak to much at the End, than,and thats for sure , you can have :)I´ll take care for it, i promise. THX for Review hope to see you again in here.
Cheers,DRO

Hey evisma, i the deeper scream is actually a whole seperate recording of me, and may be a bit distracting dto the volume level issues, but im glad you think im making progress :) hope to hear from you again on future tracks

your words are very welcome.

Thank you for taking the time to listen to this piece.
I appreciate your comment =]

have a nice Day

Hey Evan

Mate thanks for the review of this one, one track I still really enjoy listening to myself, never heard of the band you mentioned, but googled them, will give them a listen too later when home from work...Will head your way over next day or two to see what you have up....Again thank you Evan...Peace Mosaic....

Hey , thank´s for your Comment.
DRO

Thank you so much!

Thank you Evan, I shat myself when a played it all the way through cuz I wasnt sure where to use it again so with the final playback to hear it conclude so sexy like was cool.I appreciate and enjoy your comments and interaction man, thank you.

-Kev

glad you liked it for the most part evisma haha

And i like my hair :)

Many thanks for your comment
Paulo

Yo. This may be me at my heavy finest and it is my heaviest track so would appeal to people, like yourself, who like a bit of a musical face slapping. I wonder if that means metallers are masochists?

Was thinking of you when making this which might seem odd as we've never met and probably never will but I do know your music well so I think that counts for a lot. I was sure you'd like it and there's also quite a bit of bass guitar here (there's little or none in many of my tracks).

A real life friend said "its still a little too light, for me" which surprised me as I think some of it (eg 6 mins on) is pretty damn heavy. He doesn't only listen to extreme metal so I don't get that!

This Mean Motor Scooter is a potential track title though this track is more of a Harley or perhaps Batman's bike in the recent films. The one with the ridiculously wide tyres. That's the kick drums in this track!

You need to get better drum software and play around with combining multiple kits and multiple types of drumming. I have many layers on the timeline of awesome MIDI files and fills and spend ages combining and tweaking them. I take most riffs and audition beats covering many, many styles (in real time using Superior, so much fun) and then use the ones that work to drive changes. Different grooves make me play instruments in a different way.

2:25-2:46 I have tabla underneath the snare hits. Listen and you'll hear the subtle difference it makes. Would like to get more tabla in this track, especially as there's not much tabla metal about.

I cheat big time using all this awesome drum software. But, I think a creative musician such as myself deserves a kickass drummer. I don't have one (or the facility for recording a real kit, multiple mics, room etc etc) so software cheating is fine.

Yes, one of my greatest ever titles. See my first track reply to learn how I came up with it.

Finally, here's a new treat for you. The most guitarey bass sound you've ever heard (must be using an octave pedal to blend the signals).

Royal Blood - Little Monster - Later... with Jools Holland - BBC Two

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PHBJpCjq50E

Thanks Evan
Sorry for the late reply

evisma,
ty for your honesty.
mark.

Sorry for the late reply. I was just putting off dredging up the depressing Ratridge incident. I wondered if anyone might notice that and comment on it. Glad you found it hilarious - I didn't. What happened is that, last year, I gave my one and only 'thumbs-down' review on this site to a track of his, which was his guitar and vocal additions to an interesting electronic version of Sweet Home Alabama. I didn't insult his playing - just mostly said the addition of the guitar and vocals just made it another of thousands of covers of that famous song.

So, he proceeded to check out my music, leaving a bunch of straight insults/ intelligent constructive criticism on three or four of my tracks, including this gem of a track review:

"After your extremely demeaning comment you left on my track, I expected you to be some kind of musical prodigy. WTF?"

Since having to deal with his childish, spiteful insults (including speculation about the size of my head) I've decided to essentially never again give a 'bad' track review on here. If I don't like something, I don't comment, even though I might even have some useful suggestions. I just can't be bothered to deal with unpleasant losers who can't take even mild criticism.

However, I have since commented on some other Ratridge tracks but only said good things and made, for instance, no mention of not liking his vocals. I have indeed heard his backlog but it didn't make me zzzzzzzzzzzzz. My way of dealing with childish people is not to come down to their level (doesn't always work). I've had to deal with someone much more unpleasant on this site though he seems to have given up on insulting me.

It's ironic that Ratridge chose to leave his deep and insightful 'too repetitive' analysis on a track with so very many changes.

"an over-sized cranium"

Maybe. I'm just an odd guy who thinks a lot, especially about music, and is bored by so much conventional stuff so have to work out how to combine things that I like in ways I've never heard before. I have huge musical limitations so cannot combine anywhere near as many sounds and styles as I would like. I do what I can, which is still a fair bit.

"a hill-billy in a tornado"

That could work nicely for a music video to this track. Maybe the metal band are out in the open and kicking up a tornado with their playing. And the tornado drops a hillbilly with a banjo into their midst and then whisks him away after his 30 seconds are up. I like it but then it is partly my idea so no surprise there.

good to hear from you again Ev,:) I wasn't completely happy with the one you heard either, but its all a learning process for me and this one shows how much im improving, and imk glad you stopped by for a listen and saw the improvement.

Hope to hear from you again :)

Thanks Evan. I like your music too. I am first and foremost a guitarist but I just purchased a Fender VI bass guitar, so of course I wanted to give it some air in this composition. I'll post another "bass forward" track today called "Take The High Road". Check it out and give me some feedback. Your opinion matters.

"nobody mentions that" yeah, thats quiet the thing.
I wantedto do something spiecial.
wich nobody mentions.
And I did it :D
Thanks!

Thanks much! Glad you liked it.

Thanks, I appreciate the kind words Evan. I also appreciate you taking the time to give it a listen and leaving a comment with some feedback.

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I take advice and criticism to heart, good or bad, because it all lets me see what i can do to be better, and what im doing right. I thank you for your feedback :)

thanks for the input, i'll take the radio friendly thing as a compliment, and the auto tune is only towards the end , like i said in my other reply it was meant for the build up in the little rap part at the end because every rap song you hear anymore is auto tuned and i want my stuff to be mainstream so i'll follow that.