Evisma

Evisma

Better Than You Since 82
Middle America, United States
Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 13 years ago
Last Online : 4th Apr 2025 - 1 year ago
Evisma comments on tracks

Evisma has posted 317 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Evisma
Evisma 18th Feb 2014 02:27 - 12 years ago

on NO to child labour Behnam ZanDi deciBel by deciBel
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Evisma 18th Feb 2014 02:22 - 12 years ago

on your name is a mystery that I know by ElenaSatine
Much better than the Dwarves, which I liked as well. The bell seemed a bit odd at the end, but this track has a great direction.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 17th Feb 2014 06:12 - 12 years ago

on Distractions creating anger by evilarmy83
Your sound here is much better than some of your older things, drums sound better as well. The only thing that sounds odd is the tone the guitar changes to. Sounds too thin for what you're playing. Overall, a friggin sweet piece of riffage!

Evan
evilarmy83
evilarmy83 replied 18th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks Evan! I have one or two more tracks that Id love to get your fingers and strings on....Ill b in touch....

-Kev
Evisma
Evisma 4th Feb 2014 05:06 - 12 years ago

on Dont let me go - Larry Wiggles aka Mark Jeffries by larrywiggles1
I like the acoustics. Not a fan of auto tune. This one was impressive. Liked it more and more as it went on. Vocal outro is awesome!!!

Evan
larrywiggles1
larrywiggles1 replied 4th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Hi Evan,
A big thanks for listening and for your positive comments, especially about the outro.
Thanks again,
Mark/Larry
Evisma
Evisma 31st Jan 2014 06:57 - 12 years ago

on no love for orange starbursts by StereoMathematics
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Evisma 29th Jan 2014 04:04 - 12 years ago

on NO to child labour Behnam ZanDi deciBel by deciBel
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Evisma 28th Jan 2014 04:39 - 12 years ago

on What does it take to get you in the mood by evilarmy83
More crunchy badassery. I like the progression, sounds like if would be very interchangeable in other tracks from you. Very nice.

My only real beef is with the effect on the drums. It makes the kit sound like it's under water. Doesn't compliment your six-string prowess.

Evan
evilarmy83
evilarmy83 replied 28th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
I'm going to try Eds' advice and mess with sony acid and see if I get better results. The crappyness/decrease in quality happens when I mess with the tempo and pitch, pretty cheesebally. But ya duderino im slowly but surely inching closer to investing in a more professional and organized set up and hopefully from there things will be more badasser :) Thank you for commenting,

-E.A.83/Kevin
Evisma
Evisma 23rd Jan 2014 02:45 - 12 years ago

on Go Wonder by xpekt
Goo Goo Dolls is what this reminds me of. They've made millions.

With vocals, this could have a lot of character. Now it is a solid place for a good vocalist to start. Very nice indeed.

Evan
xpekt
xpekt replied 23rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Hi evisma!!! First off thanks for stopping by and taking a listen...

I'm really glad you've liked :) And I agree, if anyone feels comfortable adding some vocals, please go ahead!!

XpekT.
Evisma
Evisma 17th Jan 2014 02:41 - 12 years ago

on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
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Evisma 17th Jan 2014 02:39 - 12 years ago

on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
27 Favorites!?!?

I have 38, and each track of yours blows all of mine away. Superior sound quality, much more creative and experimental, a ridiculous array of instruments and some very well thought out programming.

Something seems very wrong. I'm calling Shenanigans here.

My only guess is that it's because sometimes,(more often than not, actually) the ending is missing due to upload restrictions. That's all.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 17th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
"each track of yours blows all of mine away. Superior sound quality, much more creative and experimental, a ridiculous array of instruments and some very well thought out programming."

Well, I'm hardly going to disregard that, am I?

Thanks very much. I've given quite a bit of thought to what my music would sound like if I only had a bass guitar and OKish drums to program. I can't imagine I'd do as good a job as you, not least because I can't play the bass as you do. But I guess I'd be a lot better at it if that's pretty much all I had.

Just as well I don't have those limitations on my party barge.

Regarding the "ridiculous array of instruments", you know I only play guitar, bass, banjo and keyboard? The other instruments are all synth-based. Would like to get and play more actual instruments but never seem to get round to it.

I'd never thought about how many times people have favourited my tracks before you mentioned it though I do have a lot of tracks on here and some have about 6 or 7 favourites so maybe it's a 100. Not sure and it really doesn't matter.

I call shenanigans on you!
Evisma
Evisma 16th Jan 2014 17:31 - 12 years ago

on Starting todaY- Brandon Michelle ft Behnam Zandi by deciBel
Almost a lullaby. Very nice strings and arrangement here and it left me wishing the track was longer. Every one of your tracks is at least an 8 on a scale from 1 to 10. I envy that. My tracks are almost hitting a 5 on that scale. You impress me always.

Best wishes, and safe futures.

Evan
deciBel
deciBel replied 19th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
oh no be fair man , U=5 an me=8 ? wished U were my teacher when I was an studenT ! :) .
Evan I am gratefull of your attention,time to hear & friendly kind words .take care .____Behnam
Evisma
Evisma 16th Jan 2014 04:30 - 12 years ago

on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
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Evisma 10th Jan 2014 02:43 - 12 years ago

on Win or lose DEMO by Kikajon
The songwriting is solid. Recording has some unneeded static and fuzz, possibly from the guitar, and things are not as clear as they should be, but it was a solid song. Vocals sound best when they are not straining, in the verse parts. Good song, keep it up!

Evan
Kikajon
Kikajon replied 11th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks for listening and för your feedback. Still trying to learn how to use the new version of GB. noise gating guitar is hard to find. Thank you for taking the time and reviewing.
/pmk
Evisma
Evisma 8th Jan 2014 04:28 - 12 years ago

on Raise Hell and PTL by ScottB55
Bass line and tone is fantastic, as well as the guitars. This is like Prog Gospel. Drums are very Portnoy. Snare sound is a bit muffled sounding. If Liquid Tension Experiment did a gospel it would be close to this. Love the ending. Very nice.

Evan
ScottB55
ScottB55 replied 10th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Hey, thanks allot, Evan. That's a good description for it, Prog Gospel! Thanks for the Mike Portnoy reference. Quite high praise. He's one of the greatest. Yeah, the snare could be stronger, but it was already peaking at this level, so didn't want to push it to overdrive.

Cheers,
Scott
Evisma
Evisma 2nd Jan 2014 15:35 - 12 years ago

on Death Valley by DerSkizm
Very Korn inspired, yes? Surprised there are no comments on here. Good job.
Evisma
Evisma 29th Dec 2013 05:44 - 12 years ago

on Be My Baby by BearAustin
The vocal style at times reminds me of Claudio Sanchez and this is a GOOD thing. Production is quite good. Spoke word stuff seems a bit odd, but overall I enjoyed this very much.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 24th Dec 2013 03:52 - 12 years ago

on Still Sovereign by ConstantGodRap
Very Slim Shady vocals. Nothing NEW being done here. You are doing a very good job of talking down to the listener and discrediting human potential.

The music is solid. Nothing wrong with it at all. Sounds like a drum loop and a single keyboard setting. Simple yet effective.

I have no problem with religious lyrics when they are uplifting and about life, not when they're judgmental.

Looperman has a lot of good people who care enough to help you make your music better, they've helped me. My bit of constructive criticism is more positive, praising lyrics instead of a better-than-thou approach. Turns the listener off.

Evan
ConstantGodRap
ConstantGodRap replied 24th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Wow! Thank you so much Evan for listening. God Bless, brother.
Evisma
Evisma 21st Dec 2013 05:10 - 12 years ago

on DJ-WaPer - Ballad Of Dying Sunset by WaPer
No comments on this in two years, shame. This is a good one.

I enjoyed the choir sounds and the guitar.

2:01 has a great lead line, very fitting.

The whispering is a little creepy, nice!

Love the sustained note in the ending.

This is a solid track that deserves solid vocals. Kudos.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 18th Dec 2013 18:49 - 12 years ago

on Between The Lines by anthonyabutler32
Not a fan of any rap, but your delivery is VERY pleasing to the ears. The lyrics are a bit non-sensical at times. I believe that your voice is capable of conveying some very deep and "Felt" lyrics. The beef stick stuff cracked me up, but the serious, thought provoking lyrics is where you shine.

Evan
anthonyabutler32
anthonyabutler32 replied 18th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks it's nice to hear from people who listen and really hear. And thank's for the feed back, means alot.
Evisma
Evisma 15th Dec 2013 04:32 - 12 years ago

on Happy Happy Merry Merry by JacVanBee
This will be stuck in my head now for a few days. Different for sure. No criticism.
JacVanBee
JacVanBee replied 15th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
hahaha, mission accomplished! Thanks for listening ;)
Evisma
Evisma 12th Dec 2013 15:40 - 12 years ago

on Yeah Yeah by BeatKraks
Why link this in Spivkurl's comments? This has no relevance to his track what so ever. Seeing the comments with BMXjimmy, I'm surprised anyone bothers to give ANY feedback. His offer to help would be answered with a simple "No thanks". This is not the place to be hateful. Just say no if you don't want help from someone, it's understandable.
Evisma
Evisma 10th Dec 2013 06:58 - 12 years ago

on Field Effects by VineSt
Very, very nice. You may have just got a fan.

It's refreshing to hear something here that is mind expanding and not about how much money a person has, or just how "reelz" said person is keeping it. Thank you.

Evan
VineSt
VineSt replied 10th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Glad you dig it. David Bohm is a bonafide genius. I'm still very much enjoying learning this craft.
Evisma
Evisma 10th Dec 2013 06:45 - 12 years ago

on Back In Bed -Demo less Vocals- by VineSt
Something about this reminds me of a cross between Riders On The Storm and the Pink Panther song. The bass sounds like it's clipping a few times. The bass tone is the only problem here. Well written, just clips from plucks and drive. Like what you have going here, well balanced and cleaner sounding than what I get.

Evan
VineSt
VineSt replied 10th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks Evan, I'm hearing digital clip too. I'm putting of tracking the bass again until I put down some vocals this weekend. Thanks for the input my guy who was going to mix this didn't hear what you and I are hearing so good notice and thanks for lending your ear.
Evisma
Evisma 9th Dec 2013 01:16 - 12 years ago

on Ode to my mom by musiclover38
Just beautiful. This is something to be proud of. Tugs on the heart strings. You did a true honor. You honored your mother, and took a step towards healing yourself. Head high.

Evan
musiclover38
musiclover38 replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you so much! Your words are too kind, but they fall at right time and place, and I take them to heart! :-)
Evisma
Evisma 8th Dec 2013 04:53 - 12 years ago

on Animals With Eyebrows Cat Mustache by SteveStepp
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