The tone at 1:52 seems out of place but the rest is solid. Would like to hear some bass doing it's own thing under it. I like the choppiness at the end.
Sounds like the vocalist is afraid of the microphone. Vocal phrasing needs help, along with the general execution of the vocals. Music is not bad at all, needs clarity. Vocals are what broke this one. Lyrics are passable, it's the phrasing, notes and delivery that hurt this so much. I hear what you are trying to get at here, just have someone else with more experience do the vocals. Not wanting to hurt feelings, but coddling only hinders us after age 3.
Friggin sweet! The aggressive guitar is something I've always wanted in my tracks but it doesn't translate to my hands. Your solo tone was about as perfect as it can get. Great feel and flow, Like it a lot!
Very nice. Reminds me of some Davenport Cabinet with a voice like Drive-By Truckers. Solo's have an awesome tone as well. I have nothing but good things to say about this track.
The music is great, drums could be louder. Lyrics are sound, but the vocals feel out of place. Would have liked to hear a cleaner sounding voice on top of this music, but still a great expression. Has a Drive-by Truckers vibe. Nice.
Reminds me of some Govt Mule. Your guitar riffs seem very set and not an off the cuff attempt. Sounds weird, but I appreciate a guitarist who can play the same thing 8 times and not change it. Diggin it.
Funny you say that, I have to try real hard to repeat a riff over and over again. I tend to get bored easily and wind up with a more off the cuff take. I appreciate the kind words and your taking the time to listen.
Thanks again.
Like the offset guitars. They're the only thing that sounds "Country". Horn parts at the end are nice, love horns, they didn't seem to go over each other in parts, though. When the effects came through, I was surprised. Wasn't expecting that. Nice.
dear Colleague evisma ,first appologY for latency in replY and then regarding your true analysis I'm agree with U & abouT Horn usage of mine glad if U've liked iT . best wishes._____Behnam
The bass shouldn't be panned left. Disorienting. There's not alot of clarity in the guitars either. The drums, while off in parts, were very good. Nice double bass. Not to complain, but I feel you put your stuff on here for constructive criticism, just like me. Keep it up!
Good music. Good vocals. Need more of the music in the mix. Wavelengths are very short so you have plenty of headroom. Enjoyed listening to this one. Please proceed.
Awesome. A few clips and a few abrupt notes that sounded like they should "swell" instead of "hit" ,but I could never do such a free formed expression like this. Very impressed.
Like it alot. The phaser or whatever modulation you have on the drums is a bit distracting. The guitar at 2:53 has a very good tone for this track, sits well with the rest. The effect on the vocals at the beginning was a bit too much, like the drums, but once it got heavy you couldn't notice. Like it alot, please continue!
Great Guitar tone. Slides could be cleaner. Sliding on 1st beat when it would sound better as pickup notes, slide a beat earlier,.... but I really enjoyed it, love to hear this stuff instead of all the hip hop.
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