Evisma

Better Than You Since 82

Middle America, United States

Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 13 years ago

Last Online : 4th Apr 2025 - 1 year ago

Evisma comments on tracks

Evisma has posted 317 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments 251 - 275 of 317

Evisma 7th Dec 2013 05:44 - 12 years ago

on Lust from XmafaX by XmafaX

Again you impress. Is that accordion!? Lead at 0:57 is a bit too loud to my ears. Would like to hear the heavy stuff come in about twice as soon as it does. 15 sec or so. Very tasty stuff going on here. Love the crunch of the guitars!

Evan

XmafaX replied 7th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago

Many thanks again. and thanks for your sugestion
Regards
Paulo

Evisma 6th Dec 2013 14:50 - 12 years ago

on without you by domr30

Le songwriting est grand(super). La qualité du son est mauvaise. La chanson excellente, doit juste être refaite.

Evan

Evisma 6th Dec 2013 06:09 - 12 years ago

on without you by domr30

Singing and songwriting is fantastic.

Sound quality is atrocious. Lead guitar sound quality is a little better.

Voice sounds like it could be janis71. Very nice. Lacuna Coil feel to it.

Solos are pretty tasty. Again, great songwriting.

Evan

domr30 replied 6th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago

merci pour ce com mes je ne comprend pas ce que tu veut dire domr

Evisma 4th Dec 2013 01:45 - 12 years ago

on Things That Have Never Been by StaticNomad

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Evisma 3rd Dec 2013 05:49 - 12 years ago

on 100 haters by espasio

Well, you have two E DMS songs here, so I don't know which one you are referring to. I just thought the vocals went with the music best in this one.

Evan

Evisma 2nd Dec 2013 05:53 - 12 years ago

on 100 haters by espasio

Of the five tracks you have here, this is your best vocal delivery.

Evan

espasio replied 2nd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago

why you think that Evan ? i think DMS is the best :)
all i try is to sound deferend from lot of uniform

Evisma 2nd Dec 2013 03:05 - 12 years ago

on The Lonely Toreador by theHumps

This very much sounds like it came from Desperado, or Once Upon A Time In Mexico. The whole thing is great, but I like the intro the most. The sounds of preparation, always a nice addition.

Evan

theHumps replied 3rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago

I write a lot of western/latin sounding songs and this one is just like you described it. That intro blew me away when I was putting it together. Then I asked myself, "where do I go from here?" lol

I appreciate that you stopped by. Thanks Evan!

Wayne

Evisma 1st Dec 2013 22:09 - 12 years ago

on Black Rose by XmafaX

Not sure if this falls under heavy metal or not. Rocktronica seems to be fitting, that's what most of my songs fall under I suppose. I like what you are doing with this. Guitar at 1:14 needs to be louder. Piano seems to be a touch early each time, starting at 1:43. I like the quick vocal sound at 2:00. "No", "Yo", whatever is said, nice timing.

Evan

XmafaX replied 2nd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago

Hi, many thanks for your comment and sugestians.
Paulo

Evisma 27th Nov 2013 06:12 - 12 years ago

on Religious Titles by SDUB1

I also question the statement in your description

"The goal is to make you think."

SDUB1 replied 27th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Well did I not succeed in my statement? You came with feed back that is greatly appreciated to say the least. Just note I am a ambassador for CHRIST. I am not the standard for anyone, but someone who appreciates what CHRIST has done for me and I just want to share the good news with the rest of the world. Again thank you for your time. I hope GOD HIMSELF will shed light on the subject. Grace and Peace!!!

Evisma 27th Nov 2013 06:08 - 12 years ago

on Religious Titles by SDUB1

Wow, do I look small from up there?

The production is rather good, a few gaps between samples, but my problem lies in the message, and I mean no disrespect. Your lyrics, well intended I'm sure, are basically saying that a person has no worth to you in this world unless they are of the same beliefs as you. This is a bigoted stance. I am in no way offended by it, I just don't understand it. Saying everyone is tainted who does not believe as you do. This is some very "Look down the nose" music. As I said before, production if fine, just don't like the message of worthlessness without fairy tale adherence. We are all the same, an atheist's blood could save your life one day. Hope it never comes to that.

Evan

SDUB1 replied 27th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Hello Evan

The point of the song is this. Every one is tainted with sin and everyone has to come to CHRIST to be cleansed from sin. Some people think because they have a religious affiliation, that qualifies them into heaven. I too had to come to CHRIST. Before that I was an unconverted roman catholic. Until I received from GOD the revelation of salvation. As the saying goes if you commit a crime you must do the time, but in the case of CHRIST HE paid it for you. The point is to be born again and be reconciled to GOD and have a relationship with HIM. Not just claim a title as the song states. We must call on GOD to saved from HIS righteous judgement. Not my opinion. Grace and Peace fam. And thanks for your thought.

Evisma 25th Nov 2013 03:17 - 12 years ago

on The 80s by XmafaX

The song writing does not seem to be the issue at all. As said before it's timing. Very impressive playing ability, just not worked out quite enough. The bass break is very out of time. If this is a live drummer you are using, have him re record the drums to a click and have everyone play off of that, or each use a click. It's my best friend.

Very impressed with the writing and the sweet guitar. Excited to hear it with improvements.

Evan

XmafaX replied 25th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Hi,
Many thanks for your comment!
Paulo

Evisma 23rd Nov 2013 05:52 - 12 years ago

on Bend for Hell by aknin

Now this is pretty sweet. Like the lead lines, wish they went longer at times. Seems very progressive. Everything sounds pretty tight, I don't know what yourock guitar is. Is everything being played or is it samples?

Evan

aknin replied 23rd Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

thank's ! yourock guitar is an electronic a

Evisma 19th Nov 2013 05:27 - 12 years ago

on Dwarfts singing by ElenaSatine

OK, this needs to be said. This track should come with a warning. It's way to catchy. Gets stuck in your head easily.

I listened to this around 730 this morning before work. Loved it. It's great.....Got stuck in my head.

Around 12 o'clock, the luster had worn off. Four hours of dwarves singing an odd version of Wipe Out. Still, in my head it remained.

By the time I was driving home at 5 o'clock, I was ready to open a vein. I could not shake it.

There is absolutely nothing wrong with your track. It's like an entity that creeps in and decides to stay a while.

But do not fear!!! I used the old fail safe. I played My Sharona really loud through the headphones. It has a way of replacing stuck songs!!!

Let this be a warning to you all!!!

Evan

ElenaSatine replied 26th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

lol-Evan oh goddd this was coolest comment i get .lol.
thank you very much .
i liked this story very much but good advice .
I will offer our studio write it on identification tag of this one as a description and caution.lolll
very cool .
thank you very much for comment.
it's nice to hear from you.
Elena

Evisma 18th Nov 2013 02:51 - 12 years ago

on Beautiful Story ver 1 by MisterBloodworth

Oh yes, my friend. I like this a lot. Big fan of progressive anything, just so long as it is in a state of constant flux. This is a very impressive translation, and seems like the instruments are writing a song, and the guitar hops off the stand and lays the smack down, shows them how it's done. The guitar sounds like keyboard though. No matter. The writing here is just great! You are now one I will be watching,..... not in a creepy way though. Loved it.

Evan

MisterBloodworth replied 18th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Haha. That's alright to be watched. I'm into that....joking. Anyhow, I'm glad you checked out this track. It was very thought out and fun to do. I believe the last half, which is the Jazz guitar to the end is my favorite. And yes, it was done with a keyboard. It was my first attempt at using FL studio along with my keyboard along. I'm very pleased to see that you, a friendly and awesome listener, thought it was great. Perhaps I shall make a better version of this soon. Thank you, Evan!

~Ookami

Evisma 18th Nov 2013 01:30 - 12 years ago

on we were supposed to be there instrumental by Tonality

Was not expecting Silent Night. Your guitar tone is very fitting. Backing tracks could use some definition.

I never know what to expect from you and Behnam, and that is what I love about you both!!!

I would like to hear your finished version when it is done!

Evan

Evisma 16th Nov 2013 05:01 - 12 years ago

on Johnny Sounds feat Romy Harmony One Way Street by MadZo

Why has no one commented on this! I'm the seventh play, you should have had 5 or more praises before me! I like this very much. The acoustics give it a nice fairytale feel toward the end. I was disappointed when it started to fade out. Loved the listen!!

Evan

Evisma 16th Nov 2013 04:51 - 12 years ago

on Soul With a Capital S by ScottFranco

Man, that bass guitar is killer!!! I saw it was MIDI, but I had to change my ears' pants after 5 seconds! I wish I could play like that, but I cam at the bass from the wrong direction. As a guitar rather than foundation and percussion.
Enjoyed this a lot.

Evan

ScottFranco replied 18th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks allot, Evan. Yeah, that is a cool bass line. It works well with my drums. I've worked with many good bass players and some guitar players make very good bass player, but you have to approach both instruments differently. When you do this, your bass playing will improve. If you play a bass like a guitar, you are just playing a very low guitar!

Cheers,
Scott

Evisma 15th Nov 2013 04:57 - 12 years ago

on 100 Seconds spanish guitar dueT of Me ft Mysef by deciBel

And again, I am impressed. And available for download!!!
I have mentioned before that I am a big fan of progressive. This is certainly qualifying. Never know where the song or you are going to go with it. Thank you for giving us another piece to marvel at.

Evan

deciBel replied 17th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

how are U Evan? thnx for all kind words& thnx alot for attention and if I really want to answer I should say as usual I was talking to myself or thinking but with guitar's strings in this reflective free style diaaphragm to run away through a notional deserT to a free style execution somewhere between Flamenco & A tonalitY .Evan I'm almost convinced that your mail is similar to god's mailbox .both never recceive my senT letters..!anyway please inform me about reception to send the other lines of that too to U .take care & best wishes.___Behnam

Evisma 15th Nov 2013 04:40 - 12 years ago

on Dwarfts singing by ElenaSatine

Very Donald Duck acid trip. I swear that has to be Donald in there!! I like this one very much. I must have it.

Evan

ElenaSatine replied 15th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

lol.you are very funny-in a good way-
i liked your comment very cool
thank you for listening and comment
i really appreciate you

Evisma 13th Nov 2013 05:24 - 12 years ago

on Sik Style - Voice in the wind by SikStyle1

I'm hearing 90 percent from left and 10 percent from right in headphones. There is still some signal in the right, just very little.

Evan

SikStyle1 replied 13th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks man guess fl studio needs to be recorded in MONO only no matter the mic

Evisma 11th Nov 2013 03:33 - 12 years ago

on Rain Pt 1 and 2 Demo 10-1-13 by TheNewWaveGroup

Man, love the guitar tone in the second half. That's what I hear on my stuff. If you would like any of my kind of bass style, let me know and I'd be glad to do something.

The first few seconds' mix almost made me skip it, but I heard vocals and stayed and heard that you have a pretty good idea here! The first half bassline doesn't sound bad really, but you need a more present one in the second half, less repetitive and more freestyle. Liked it!

Evan

Evisma 11th Nov 2013 01:52 - 12 years ago

on Land of jade by janis71

I have never been disappointed with a track of yours! This is great as well. The vocals clip a bit early on but they are easily overlooked. Thank you for the good vibes.

Evan

janis71 replied 18th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

So nice you felt those vibes, Evan :D
That's what mattered most to me while making this .
Thx for your criticism about the clips placing . I confess I didn't have ears any more by the end :S

Cheers,
Carole

Evisma 11th Nov 2013 01:41 - 12 years ago

on Nomad by Sherris

I agree with "best so far". I enjoyed this very much. Better transitions and interplay than before. I would have downloaded it for my work playlist. I'm impressed, keep it up!

Evan

Evisma 5th Nov 2013 04:02 - 12 years ago

on Dreaming Suicide by FaridHumanoid

Oh hell yes!!!! This is what Looperman has been lacking. I've been looking for the heavy stuff on here, then I saw that you are a friend of Behnam and Tonality. You are now a friend of mine. I love what you do. The changes are refreshing, though not very consistent in volume, energy and clarity. The ending it just great. Thank you for this.

Evan

FaridHumanoid replied 8th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

TanX a lot my dear friend.
I'm so honored to be ur friend.
I'm agree with u that is problems in volume.
TanX afain

Evisma 2nd Nov 2013 04:09 - 12 years ago

on 100 seconds pianO for thinking to deaf people by deciBel

I love the delay here, but the fast run you do in the middle of this would benefit "automationing" the delay out for that second or two. I never know what to expect when I hit play on one of yours!

deciBel replied 2nd Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

yes,true matter U've pointed Evan .althoughT that's not dalay , I've added a considered echo that maybe sounds like delay because U can't imagine how horrible sounds piano in final 2004 (as U can read in description it's written by final 2004..and in those years ago)! ...and withouT that echo & 2 sort of reverb that pianO sounded like a toY ! but if U've used this word='delaY' for I forgot to send U that mail, I just can say : ''oh oh ! oops! I forgot , sorry ,this wacky mind & busy head of mine makes me forgot to see myself in mirror too !oops & aakh(We say Aakh or vaay in persian instead of your oops),I'll send that now after leaving looperman ''.
and about what U can expect to hear when U play on one of my trials , I tink U can excepT to hear me thinking loudly & talking to myself & my beloved one..but by instruments .
thank U very much Evan for usefull comment & worthy attention & true worthy critical point abouT delay(echo).best wishes for U Evisma both .___Behnam

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