Your sound here is much better than some of your older things, drums sound better as well. The only thing that sounds odd is the tone the guitar changes to. Sounds too thin for what you're playing. Overall, a friggin sweet piece of riffage!
Orange are the best. Songs a bit repetitive but not bad at all,... just disappointed with your citric hating. Next you'll say the green Jolly Ranchers suck as well.
You filled this one with maelstrom of sweeps and cascades. LOVE IT!! Your guitar tone is fantastic, the tone I will chase forever. It's just awesome.
If your music is a waterfall, mine is the guy off to left pissing in the lake. After listening to this, I turned off my DAW for the night. Can't top that.
I'm going to try Eds' advice and mess with sony acid and see if I get better results. The crappyness/decrease in quality happens when I mess with the tempo and pitch, pretty cheesebally. But ya duderino im slowly but surely inching closer to investing in a more professional and organized set up and hopefully from there things will be more badasser :) Thank you for commenting,
I have 38, and each track of yours blows all of mine away. Superior sound quality, much more creative and experimental, a ridiculous array of instruments and some very well thought out programming.
Something seems very wrong. I'm calling Shenanigans here.
My only guess is that it's because sometimes,(more often than not, actually) the ending is missing due to upload restrictions. That's all.
"each track of yours blows all of mine away. Superior sound quality, much more creative and experimental, a ridiculous array of instruments and some very well thought out programming."
Well, I'm hardly going to disregard that, am I?
Thanks very much. I've given quite a bit of thought to what my music would sound like if I only had a bass guitar and OKish drums to program. I can't imagine I'd do as good a job as you, not least because I can't play the bass as you do. But I guess I'd be a lot better at it if that's pretty much all I had.
Just as well I don't have those limitations on my party barge.
Regarding the "ridiculous array of instruments", you know I only play guitar, bass, banjo and keyboard? The other instruments are all synth-based. Would like to get and play more actual instruments but never seem to get round to it.
I'd never thought about how many times people have favourited my tracks before you mentioned it though I do have a lot of tracks on here and some have about 6 or 7 favourites so maybe it's a 100. Not sure and it really doesn't matter.
Almost a lullaby. Very nice strings and arrangement here and it left me wishing the track was longer. Every one of your tracks is at least an 8 on a scale from 1 to 10. I envy that. My tracks are almost hitting a 5 on that scale. You impress me always.
oh no be fair man , U=5 an me=8 ? wished U were my teacher when I was an studenT ! :) .
Evan I am gratefull of your attention,time to hear & friendly kind words .take care .____Behnam
This one almost seems to sum up your sound. The triplet sisters together would probably be and great demo for getting a studio behind your music and mastering your stuff.
There are some pretty dense walls of sound in this one, almost too much at parts, but it is quite, quite good.
Can't add much to what Crucethus said, I think he nailed it, as did you. Blatant Bad-Assery.
Yo. Who the hell are the triplet sisters? Are they three sisters who all do mastering? Conjoined triplets who ride the faders of a massive mixing desk? That's thirty fingers they've got there.
Damn dense shit in the first few mins. Some of my most intense ever though I do have a way heavier track than this that I could upload now to cause maximum brick-shittery but I'm waiting to extend it a bit more (it's kind of what I do).
Thought you might like the metal drums and some of the big tom work in those first few mins.
I agree that this kind of sums up my sound, though it's not very electronic - more psychedelic rock. And no real hip hop though there is funk.
Quite possibly some dark, guitarless electro will be the next upload.
Thanks you for listening and commenting, and for forgiving my faults. I like autotune sometimes because of the artificial sheen which it adds to things. I'm going to try to use it less in the future though. I appreciate the feedback!
The songwriting is solid. Recording has some unneeded static and fuzz, possibly from the guitar, and things are not as clear as they should be, but it was a solid song. Vocals sound best when they are not straining, in the verse parts. Good song, keep it up!
Thanks for listening and för your feedback. Still trying to learn how to use the new version of GB. noise gating guitar is hard to find. Thank you for taking the time and reviewing.
/pmk
Bass line and tone is fantastic, as well as the guitars. This is like Prog Gospel. Drums are very Portnoy. Snare sound is a bit muffled sounding. If Liquid Tension Experiment did a gospel it would be close to this. Love the ending. Very nice.
Hey, thanks allot, Evan. That's a good description for it, Prog Gospel! Thanks for the Mike Portnoy reference. Quite high praise. He's one of the greatest. Yeah, the snare could be stronger, but it was already peaking at this level, so didn't want to push it to overdrive.
The vocal style at times reminds me of Claudio Sanchez and this is a GOOD thing. Production is quite good. Spoke word stuff seems a bit odd, but overall I enjoyed this very much.
Very Slim Shady vocals. Nothing NEW being done here. You are doing a very good job of talking down to the listener and discrediting human potential.
The music is solid. Nothing wrong with it at all. Sounds like a drum loop and a single keyboard setting. Simple yet effective.
I have no problem with religious lyrics when they are uplifting and about life, not when they're judgmental.
Looperman has a lot of good people who care enough to help you make your music better, they've helped me. My bit of constructive criticism is more positive, praising lyrics instead of a better-than-thou approach. Turns the listener off.
Not a fan of any rap, but your delivery is VERY pleasing to the ears. The lyrics are a bit non-sensical at times. I believe that your voice is capable of conveying some very deep and "Felt" lyrics. The beef stick stuff cracked me up, but the serious, thought provoking lyrics is where you shine.
I have a point? lol... Thanks for listening to my strange outburst! I've been trying to learn how best to effect my vocals in different situations, so I'm glad you like the sound of it! I appreciate you stopping by!
Why link this in Spivkurl's comments? This has no relevance to his track what so ever. Seeing the comments with BMXjimmy, I'm surprised anyone bothers to give ANY feedback. His offer to help would be answered with a simple "No thanks". This is not the place to be hateful. Just say no if you don't want help from someone, it's understandable.
Well done my friend. Love REM. Automatic for the people is still their best in my opinion. Night Swimming is the highlight. If you're a fan, check out Lacuna Coil's cover of Losing My Religion. Fantastic.
Hey thanks for the positive comment my friend! I'm listening to that cover right now, and it's pretty cool! Thanks for the suggestion! Night Swimming is a great song! It's kind of interesting to hear different people's opinions on their favourite REM stuff. I really appreciate your support and continued involvement in Looperman!
It's refreshing to hear something here that is mind expanding and not about how much money a person has, or just how "reelz" said person is keeping it. Thank you.
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-Kev
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A big thanks for listening and for your positive comments, especially about the outro.
Thanks again,
Mark/Larry
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I agree 100 percent with earlier 2 posts.
You filled this one with maelstrom of sweeps and cascades. LOVE IT!! Your guitar tone is fantastic, the tone I will chase forever. It's just awesome.
If your music is a waterfall, mine is the guy off to left pissing in the lake. After listening to this, I turned off my DAW for the night. Can't top that.
Excellent, even more so than usual.
Evan
on What does it take to get you in the mood by evilarmy83
My only real beef is with the effect on the drums. It makes the kit sound like it's under water. Doesn't compliment your six-string prowess.
Evan
-E.A.83/Kevin
on Go Wonder by xpekt
With vocals, this could have a lot of character. Now it is a solid place for a good vocalist to start. Very nice indeed.
Evan
I'm really glad you've liked :) And I agree, if anyone feels comfortable adding some vocals, please go ahead!!
XpekT.
on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
Damn... Disregard last comment.
I very rarely listen back to any of them though I still think they're all good or very good.
Here are some of my favourites that you should check and show some love:
Tool-esque riff you may recognise(see my track comments):
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148830
Easily the best comedy song I've heard this year:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148650
Some fucking cool chill(hip)hop:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/151763
If you don't like even one, I shall call shenanigans on you...
on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
I have 38, and each track of yours blows all of mine away. Superior sound quality, much more creative and experimental, a ridiculous array of instruments and some very well thought out programming.
Something seems very wrong. I'm calling Shenanigans here.
My only guess is that it's because sometimes,(more often than not, actually) the ending is missing due to upload restrictions. That's all.
Well, I'm hardly going to disregard that, am I?
Thanks very much. I've given quite a bit of thought to what my music would sound like if I only had a bass guitar and OKish drums to program. I can't imagine I'd do as good a job as you, not least because I can't play the bass as you do. But I guess I'd be a lot better at it if that's pretty much all I had.
Just as well I don't have those limitations on my party barge.
Regarding the "ridiculous array of instruments", you know I only play guitar, bass, banjo and keyboard? The other instruments are all synth-based. Would like to get and play more actual instruments but never seem to get round to it.
I'd never thought about how many times people have favourited my tracks before you mentioned it though I do have a lot of tracks on here and some have about 6 or 7 favourites so maybe it's a 100. Not sure and it really doesn't matter.
I call shenanigans on you!
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Best wishes, and safe futures.
Evan
Evan I am gratefull of your attention,time to hear & friendly kind words .take care .____Behnam
on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
There are some pretty dense walls of sound in this one, almost too much at parts, but it is quite, quite good.
Can't add much to what Crucethus said, I think he nailed it, as did you. Blatant Bad-Assery.
Evan
Damn dense shit in the first few mins. Some of my most intense ever though I do have a way heavier track than this that I could upload now to cause maximum brick-shittery but I'm waiting to extend it a bit more (it's kind of what I do).
Thought you might like the metal drums and some of the big tom work in those first few mins.
I agree that this kind of sums up my sound, though it's not very electronic - more psychedelic rock. And no real hip hop though there is funk.
Quite possibly some dark, guitarless electro will be the next upload.
Good to hear from you, more advice coming soon.
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/pmk
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Cheers,
Scott
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The music is solid. Nothing wrong with it at all. Sounds like a drum loop and a single keyboard setting. Simple yet effective.
I have no problem with religious lyrics when they are uplifting and about life, not when they're judgmental.
Looperman has a lot of good people who care enough to help you make your music better, they've helped me. My bit of constructive criticism is more positive, praising lyrics instead of a better-than-thou approach. Turns the listener off.
Evan
on late night excursion with honeyoil by evilarmy83
This is rougher than a mummy's vagina, but you can tell where it's going and what it is meant to be.
Your music deserves better software for recording. The potential is staggering.
Evan
on DJ-WaPer - Ballad Of Dying Sunset by WaPer
I enjoyed the choir sounds and the guitar.
2:01 has a great lead line, very fitting.
The whispering is a little creepy, nice!
Love the sustained note in the ending.
This is a solid track that deserves solid vocals. Kudos.
Evan
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It's refreshing to hear something here that is mind expanding and not about how much money a person has, or just how "reelz" said person is keeping it. Thank you.
Evan