Potential is endless with this. I found myself singing along trying to make lyrics. This has potential to be built into a good song my friend. It just needs some layers of arrangement. Pan-spacing is just fine . I wanna hear your slapping bass in this more though.. Oh and in my favourite key of Fminor may have caught my attention as well!
Steev
Upon listening back, I'm missing some changes and variety. Additions are planned. I heard lots of vocal lines in this, and will probably use piano to do those after removing it from a section. First piano section is not my favorite, so it is expendable.
Hey Steve,
the art of putting a string of loops together is musical in the sense of a composer or arranger. I do both..loops and play my instruments and both give me great satisfaction. You have a great talent for mixing loops and that should not be diminished by any stretch of the imagination. Why? because it's pure creativity that you can immerse yourself in without the limitations of musical playing talent. I enjoy your work..and look forward to more compositions.
from your friend and the best name in the universe
Steve
WOW Steve thanks for such a great comment I do love what I create and there nothing better than someone liking what I have put together. Its not the easiest thing in the world to do as my 18year old daughter is finding out as now she is doing this as well and I hope she does well with it.
Thanks again mate
Hi crucethus and thanx for your comment. I'm working on a new solo and writing a new sound to my Boss GT-100. Going for a mor soft approach, Less is more and If I put some feel into it,it might sound better.
Hey IxCxE.. nice work. truly a nice commercial piece artfully mastered and mixed ...kudos props etc.
Downloads...that's easy for us in the know of the web..
I'm glad your dad likes this as it's important to include your family in the process.
What I would like to see from you is more diversity in the song. It's just the one theme that can get boring after a while. Change keys, make a new melody line.. you want to stand out against the competition make it really really diverse...in my humble opinion ;-)
Steve
Hey Steve.
Beautiful piece in CMinor. One of my fav keys to write in. and then the F makes it very interesting and eighties eclectic. I think. I was jamming to this on the keys tonight. nice work. good percussion.
Steve.
you know what I never herd of Giorgio moroder before I had to go on youtube and do some research on him and wow for his time (1977) I would have to say that music is very progressive. it seemed to me to be more techno-ish then funk but I didn't listen to everything of his. I dig that man making me do some homework lol
really really good evan. I agree with evil army that you need a breakdown section. my suggestion musically is to make that breakdown start with a pad that switches from C#minor(Key of the song) to C#major and you can do some wonderful wild things with the key switch then re build it back up to the frantic pace you have set with your bass.
Steve
Tried to go with your idea here, no pads though. The closest this came to anything electronic was the drums and an Auto-filter on the drum break in the middle and outro. I try to do as much as I can with just the bass guitar , trying to learn what sounds and textures it can create.
Though way too much of my stuff has sounded the same. I have about 10 tracks on here at 120bpm, don't know why I never thought to change it in the beginning of each track, just went with it.
Let me know how it it as of 1/2/14, the part I did that you and EA83 suggested needs a guitar present, a good lead line that is not in existence at the moment.
Thanks again for the listen and feedback, and don't be afraid to say "No! Dumbass!! That's not what I meant! Put the C# chorus thing HERE, and the jangling nonsense THERE! LISTEN TO ME!!".
Remember, my friend,... I'm married too. Abuse like that is like water on a duck. Beads up, Rolls off.
hi bro. thanks for the feedback. yes i am proud of the chorus. plenty people spittin out old school style rap but the chorus is origonal. thanks for the compliment bro.
Nice deep hard sound! drums could be equed' a little better in the mid range. bass is outstanding. Have you tried reductive eq at the 200hz level to get the beat to snap better? that could help, but a monster of a sound(beat) you have going on
well i master none of my joints i have someone do that who has the correct ear for that i try my best to take some of the load off but when i put it up it was after i finished it. but its done correctly now im just a producer not a engineer lol i let someone else do that tedious work. but thank you for the comment and for taking the time to listen.
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Steev
Thanks for the feedback and kind words.
Evan
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the art of putting a string of loops together is musical in the sense of a composer or arranger. I do both..loops and play my instruments and both give me great satisfaction. You have a great talent for mixing loops and that should not be diminished by any stretch of the imagination. Why? because it's pure creativity that you can immerse yourself in without the limitations of musical playing talent. I enjoy your work..and look forward to more compositions.
from your friend and the best name in the universe
Steve
Thanks again mate
Steve
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Downloads...that's easy for us in the know of the web..
I'm glad your dad likes this as it's important to include your family in the process.
What I would like to see from you is more diversity in the song. It's just the one theme that can get boring after a while. Change keys, make a new melody line.. you want to stand out against the competition make it really really diverse...in my humble opinion ;-)
Steve
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Steve
this is my first project but reading your comment
can cheer me up for second .
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Beautiful piece in CMinor. One of my fav keys to write in. and then the F makes it very interesting and eighties eclectic. I think. I was jamming to this on the keys tonight. nice work. good percussion.
Steve.
Cheers
Steve
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Steve
Though way too much of my stuff has sounded the same. I have about 10 tracks on here at 120bpm, don't know why I never thought to change it in the beginning of each track, just went with it.
Let me know how it it as of 1/2/14, the part I did that you and EA83 suggested needs a guitar present, a good lead line that is not in existence at the moment.
Thanks again for the listen and feedback, and don't be afraid to say "No! Dumbass!! That's not what I meant! Put the C# chorus thing HERE, and the jangling nonsense THERE! LISTEN TO ME!!".
Remember, my friend,... I'm married too. Abuse like that is like water on a duck. Beads up, Rolls off.
Evan
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