Description : Not sure how to describe this one, a bit of a mix and crossover, again trying to be a little different. it is very very much still in a rough format and would really value opinions on this, again good, bad or get off!!

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  1. JoeFunktastic
    JoeFunktastic on Tue 11th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    For a minute there I thought my radio turned on. Nicely done. Great goodness! This is an amazing Peace of work! The vocals work very well with this. Guitars are so awesome! Very well Done! Joe

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Joe,

    Many many thanks for your time and comments and take them as a very big compliment, very much appreciated and thanks again.
    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  2. Diskonnect
    Diskonnect on Sun 9th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Theres not much to say that hasnt already been said, so I'll just say this... Cool track man, I enjoyed listening! :)

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    A big thanks for listening and glad you enjoyed. I hope you will stop by, listen and comment on the remixed version. thanks again.
    Mark/Larry!

  3. deciBel
    deciBel on Sun 9th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hello Mark & LarrY both & many thnX for sharing this beautifull & heartY music .I enjoyed all elements & materials.
    lyriX was cool & in the same time strenuous & imagery especially according to considered ping_pong of male & female vocals.a pleasurable package & welldone. best wishes.___Behnam

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Many thanks Benham, good to hear from you and glad you liked
    the track, and for enjoying all the elements in here. Many thanks also for your time and comments, very much appreciated.
    Best wishes,
    Mark/Larry

  4. Cestevens1783
    Cestevens1783 on Sun 9th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hello again! I really like this track. Would agree on a few adjustments that can be made on par with what's already been said, however, I think every track can always use something. I like the idea is what I am saying. I would listen to this on the regular. Kudos!!

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hiya,

    I really appreciate your time and positive and constructive comments, and I think I now know where to take this track.
    Thanks again,
    Very best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

  5. lukayzey
    lukayzey on Sun 9th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    in the begining i was like ummmmmmm ok lol but then listenning to it probly i really liked it , nice work ^_^

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Glad you liked and thanks for your comments. The start maybe needs looking at so thanks for that.
    Best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

  6. PDRakaJosephColumbo
    PDRakaJosephColumbo on Sat 8th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    there is alot potential with this track, you have alot of different elements to play with, the tansition are nice also. I think if you re arrange this correctly and reprogram some of the structure you could have a hit song

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    A big thanks for stopping by and listening. Once again some really positive and constructive comments, which will help me improve this track. thanks again for your time.
    Take care,
    Mark/Larry!

  7. aelmen
    aelmen on Sat 8th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I like this one. The song is experimental and surprise the listener through the whole song. Long time since I've heard something as good as this one. Nice arrangement and i really hope to here more like this from you!

    Cheers, Anders.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Anders,

    Thanks for listening and for your positive comments, hope you enjoy my next track as much.
    Very best wishes.
    Mark/Larry!

  8. VickyDan
    VickyDan on Sat 8th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hello Mark

    The concept is nice and neat .... There is much diversity in the composition, indicating a high perception of harmonies .... and the work of search performed. Congratulations.
    I would not go back on all that has been written here about wishes or reviews of each, sincerely it's a bit secondary, because the listening time is nice .... You are on the right way, keep it up.

    Dan

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Dan,
    Nice to hear from you and for listening. It's really good to have your fresh perception and take on this. Thank you for your sincere comments, and you have given me a fresh outlook on my work. thanks again.
    Really interested to know what bits we share from my bio!!!
    Very best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

  9. ShortBusMusic
    ShortBusMusic on Sat 8th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    First thing I want to know, is when this hits the big time, who do they write out the check to.....Mark or Larry, hahaha.

    Like the others have said, a few minor tweaks to the mix would take this one over the top. Just a suggestion, but maybe bring the acoustic/vocals up to the level of synths, etc. in the mix. While the acoustic and vocals in the beginning are nice and soft....and sitting a bit to the right in the mix (at least in my headphones), I think they are missing that stereo picture that would really benefit them. They seem a bit flat and mono compared to the rest of the piece.

    Anyway, I'm simply nitpicking here. It really is a great tune even if you leave it the way it is right now. Great job Mark...er Larry, haha. I hope all is well.

    Bear

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Bear,
    Great to here from you, and this alto-ego of mine sometimes has me wondering who would pick up the money!!! I suspect Larry would win!!!! thanks for your advice and will be taking it seriously, but it also really nice to know that you like it the way it is. Things are fine this end and hope all is well across the water.
    Take care,
    Mark/Larry!

  10. clindsay
    clindsay on Thu 6th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    OK - everyone has an opinion and I'm not anything more than a listener. My tracks have huge coherence issues so I'm not one to be throwing stones. I think you have to commit to one dominant genre or another. There are brilliant bits to this and in my opinion the dance or techno bits are better than the acoustic bits. I think you can cut the vocals and expand the bridges to complement them. I like this a lot but it has great potential if you kill some of the babies and strip it to its essence which in my opinion is a dance/techno track.
    -clindsay

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi clindsay,
    thanks for some very constructive comments, and will look at your suggestions. As I described it, I wasn't quite certain how it fitted myself, so a big thanks for taking the time to listen and your valued comments.
    Best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

  11. KAMPUTERA
    KAMPUTERA on Wed 5th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Awesome Work there Mister. Conceptually it's COOL :)

    Simple, elaborate and vibrant with Energy.

    To the TOP!!! BBBbbuuuoooyyyy!!!

    Some minor mixing and balanced cohesion would draw people to this. The idea and where you are going with it is GREAT!

    Good Job :)

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Kamputera,

    Your comments are much appreciated, and you have summed up what I was trying to achieve. Point taken with the mixing.
    Thanks again,
    Mark/Larry!

  12. Evisma
    Evisma on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I like the acoustics. Not a fan of auto tune. This one was impressive. Liked it more and more as it went on. Vocal outro is awesome!!!

    Evan

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Evan,
    A big thanks for listening and for your positive comments, especially about the outro.
    Thanks again,
    Mark/Larry

  13. LeeVoorhees
    LeeVoorhees on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I was entertained.Very dynamic approach, I love the variety. Simple to the point lyrics with a heart-full groove dadio yea.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Thanks for listening and a big thanks for liking, your time and comments are very much appreciated.
    Take care,
    Mark/Larry!

  14. brillbilly
    brillbilly on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I really enjoyed this!

    Loved the vocals

    Great beats n strings n keys.!

    Yeah mate bloody nice track!

    ***bb***

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Many thanks bb, glad you liked it and a big thanks for faving as well.
    Best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

  15. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Basicaly nothing wrong with this piece...on the contrary..It's pretty good work again, Mark! But yes, mix needs a proper balance and everything should be just fine...so cheer up, my friend.:)

    To new musical challenges___Orlando

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Orlando,
    thanks for your positive comment, and bringing a smile to my face! very much appreciated.
    Take care,
    Mark/Larry!

  16. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    geeez...here I am calling you larry again mark...its early out here...haha...keep on...Ed

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    No worries Ed, I sometimes struggle to know if its me or my alto-ego!!

  17. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey Larry...you`ve good a nice poppy "Now: sounding mix going here...I`m biased of course so I particularly like the little acoustic rhythm guitar bits (haha)..the whole thing is really well constructed so kudos to you on the composing...Guess I am another who is not a fan of autotune when its been used to the point that you can hear it...however, you used it as an effect here and thats a different story...I just read an article on autotune where the writer was comparing its current prevalance to that gated reverb drum sound that was the rage for a while in the 80s...but for now its a common part of whats happening in pop music etc...There was one little part at .20 sec in to the mix where I thought that high synth line was a bit distracting...maybe it could be pulled waaay back there...works better where it is in the mix with more compant....Anyway...you`re off to a good start...keep it going...Ed

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Ed, thanks for taking the time out to listen, and as usual for your valued comments, which I will be taking notice of. As you rightly say, autotune was used for effect, but probably a bit overdone! So I will be revisiting these areas when I revise the track. Really pleased that you like the composition though, and will keep it going. Thanks again for your time Ed.
    Best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

  18. crucethus
    crucethus on Sun 2nd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I like some of the auto tune elements, but get rid of them at 1:45 on and keep the mix clean there. Also Maybe a defined chorus somewhere, all in all it has good potential as a song. I agree with the others about the mixing and volumes but i understand this is a rough mix. Look forward to hearing the progress on this one!
    Ciao
    Steve

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Steve,
    Your comments and those of the others so far are the reason why looperman is so refreshing, I had really stalled with this one and decided to put it up for critique and valued opinions, which I really appreciate. I am very disappointed with the sound quality though...the final take will be better!! thanks for you time and valued comments.
    All the very best,
    Mark/Larry!

  19. Polyfronetic
    Polyfronetic on Sun 2nd Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Refreshing pop song, really like the vocals, was fun to listen! :)

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Thanks a lot for that, despite the messy bits my ultimate aim was to produce a fun (ish)! pop song! thanks for listening and hopefully you will like the revised version too.
    Take Care,
    Mark/Larry!

  20. Neomorpheus
    Neomorpheus on Sat 1st Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey Mark, I like the tune a lot, the vocals, instruments and arrangement is all real good but as mentioned the volumes are a bit off especially on the vocals.
    Nothing that a bit of eq adjustment couldn't fix.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Great to hear and thanks for taking the time to listen, I did cock up on the rough mix and should have paid more attempt to the vocal mix.... I will sort though.
    Take care,
    Mark/Larry!

  21. beerling1970
    beerling1970 on Sat 1st Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    it a great track but the volumes need looking at ithink but awesome tune mate

    Steve

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Steve,
    Many thanks for that and really happy that you think its a great track. Volume is a let down and I will address that. thanks again though.
    B

  22. danke
    danke on Sat 1st Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey Larry...

    Overall, it's a good song, but in my opinion there are some small mistakes...(for me)...2.12 the short synth is too harsh...the vocs is too low in the whole number...agree with SN, autotune is not my friend, too...
    Though,it easily could be a top hit with a little more worh on it...

    Danke

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Danke, thanks for your very constructive comments, and absolutely accept everything you say, but on the positive side I will address these points and hopefully the balance will then be right. So pleased that you liked in general though.
    Many thanks,
    Mark/Larry!

  23. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Sat 1st Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I quite like it though, again, you've said nothing about how it was made, who's doing the vocals (it could be you for all I know) whether it's all loops etc

    I definitely don't like the autotune on the vocals and would remove all of that (it's used as an effect here, not as a correctional tool). But I'll give a better review once you've given me some idea of what I'm listening to.

    1:03 I like the busy change and rapid guitar and maybe also arpeggiated synth.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Thanks SM for some very constructive comments again. Firstly the track was put together with loops and samples from dance 6 with some additions by myself. I know you are not a fan of this, but believe me a lot of work and effort goes into arranging and producing my tracks , although on this occasion I decided to upload earlier than I would normally because I wanted some feedback on which direction to take it, as I had become to close to it. I take on board everything you have said and will endeavour to improve the final take.
    A big thank you and best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

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