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Tags : | Dance | 3.71 MB

Description : Third try with other drums - Acapella: Devyn Rose
Drums: Mmedia, Djwizzy, Mrrobot and Refl3xdubstep.
Sounding kind of okey in my headphones - no idea about how it sounds from speakers.
Thanks for all the feedback so far - I'm reworking this soon, and a million thanks to Steve(Crucethus).
His educational remix is found here: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/152484

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  1. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Fri 7th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    Hi SJ,
    I am listening on HP and it sounds very good!
    I have checked also Steve's version and of course his "touch" helped to bring out the song's potential.
    This is a very good track! (I hope it's already on Loopradio...)
    Ciao, Domenico

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Ciao Domenico!
    Thanks for taking your time to both check Steves version and mine - I have been resting my ears (!) for a couple of days but trying to catch up now and implement all the great additions and ideas that Steve came up with for this track. After I've done that maybe it is Loop Radio ready! =D

    Take care and see you around, talented guy!
    /SJ

  2. dachopdocta
    dachopdocta on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    Hi there. Well I haven't commented on anyone's tune for awhile here on Looperman. So I'm taking my time this week to go around and show some love.

    With that being said, this sounds really good thru my headphones and monitors. I love the fact you kept the dynamics natural and not pegging at a consistent level.

    There's just one small part where the vocals go a bit off between 1:40 and 1:53, but that can easily be fixed. Overall, I can hear a tune like this on the radio. Very moving and relaxing.

    Until then, take care.

    Steve aka Choppy

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hiya Steve!
    Thanks for pointing out the vocals being slightly off there - I'm hearing it too now. Fixing!

    Also thanks for the kind review!
    See you around/ SJ =)

  3. crucethus
    crucethus on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    hey you. so this is what I meant musically
    https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/152484
    and even I think I could do more with the percussion on this mix as well.
    go figure
    Steve
    (Mutt Lange..famous producer (shania twain-Def Leppard, ACDC) has a most famous quote for his artists he produced....do it again!)

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    I'm doing it again!!!

    Thanks again, Steve - I wish there was a way to return all your help.

  4. larrywiggles1
    larrywiggles1 on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    Hi, Sounding good through the speakers and I think you are on a winner here, vocals good and the whole track has a great vibe, just a couple of small things, between 0.48 and 1.00 could be built a little more and the addition of extra percussion as the track progresses would further enhance the sound, just my view. Still very much a banging tune and a big like, well done.
    Many thanks,
    Mark/Larry!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hello there and welcome to the Loop Mark/Larry!

    Yes, I agree about the build up - it needs some more impact so I'm going to continue working on the mix.
    Thanks for the advice and for listening!
    Cool to hear that it's to your liking.

    Cheers /SJ =)

  5. dansjoy4
    dansjoy4 on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    Hey SJ! I'm loving the new tune. Yeah hats and snares would sound nice.....but I like the drums like it is. Good mix you have here!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Dan!
    Hi ya, long time no see!
    I just noticed that you have a new tune up so goin there to check it out next.

    Thanks for listening and liking!
    /SJ =)

  6. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    I imagine my speakers with thumbs up!:)

    Orlando

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hi Orlando!
    Haha your speakers are being very kind, thanks for listening and for the comment!

    I Think I Heard some of your tracks the other day and liked what I was hearing but off to give it an other listen.
    Cheers/ SJ =)

  7. Polyfronetic
    Polyfronetic on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    A cool made dance song with a banging kick drum. Also the vocals are appealing. Well done!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Thanks, Polyfronetic! I managed to EQ that kick drum somehow, it's not perfect but better than without the tweaking, so maybe I'm slowly getting these things.

    Take care!

  8. crucethus
    crucethus on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    good start nice bass drops good mastering nice sounding vocals. Like the house bass beat but you need to build on that beat with high hats and snares. Go back and listen to Danny Tenaglia and how he builds his house beat.3:05 on is very eclectic nice bass run...it's getting better each mix.
    keep at it. The only additions I can think of are percussive at this point.
    Steve

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Now you are just killing me, Steve!
    No - seriously, I have to take a break from this tune but am coming back to fix those drums. Thank you so much for guidance. You are a great mentor!!
    /SJ

  9. brillbilly
    brillbilly on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 7 years ago

    Hi ya!

    Letting you know that its sounding fine coming out my sound system.!

    This has a nice oldschool feel about it!

    good work!

    SeriouslyJoking
    Reply by SeriouslyJoking

    Hiya!
    Good to hear, Brillbilly and thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

    Did I mention that I want to thank you?
    Oh, good.
    =)

    Take care!

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