I like this one. If I had to describe it to someone who has never heard your work, I would tell them to imagine as if Nivek Ogre and Mothersbaugh founded RevCo. Not to minimize your creative talents by comparing, but rather to say your abilities sit in good company.
I like the sense of urgency in this. It's like a manic feasting, or compulsive consumption.
I'm still amazed at your abilities to use full analogue. I might be able to figure out how to produce a sound. (singular), but I'd definitely get lost trying to figure out routing, and patching. Therefore, I have a healthy respect for your work. I tip my hat to you, sir.
Hey there! It's good to hear from you! I've been slow in replying while on other projects lately. Trust me, the artist comparisons which you used are complimentary, and not taken as any sort of insult! What you describe is bit how it felt in practice and recording this song... it did feel quite urgent to make this song happen before it was too late.
It seems that I take things too literally. When people speak about me using "full analog," I get the urge to mention all the aspects of it which were not analog. Things are different these days, and it seems accepted that any hardware besides a computer is analog, so I am trying to adapt. I do appreciate your amazement though. This song was musically very about routing and patching... I hope to do many more in this fashion.
Seriously, man. This track spoke to me. It's the perfect amount of psych, space, and melody. It's droning sub, the slow movements. Your use of atmospheric synths are impeccable. They are placed so well, that you don't really notice all of them. But if you were to take them out, you would definitely miss them. It's super wide open, spaciously speaking. It's nice and mysterious. To me, it's like what I imagine being adrift in space without a ship is like. But, not one of those Major Tom mishap drifts. The kind you'd take if you could, just to be completely isolated from everything, while being totally at one with it all.
I had to download this. Funny thing is, it's over 4 minutes long, but it could easily be another 4.
Highest praises from ValveHalla on this one brother!
I'll tell you there has to be mysterious powers at work here because when I was posting this track I thought damn I wish my bro Aaron would pop back on here soon ! Its been a while dude, hope things are going well for you. Certainly glad to hear you like this. I kind of fell into a bit of a retro rut recently and found myself working on music that although it was cool, just wasn't what I really wanted to be doing. So I have abandoned a lot of tracks and material that I had spent months languishing with and hopefully this one will lead me in a more positive direction. As a matter of fact I intended to work this into more of a song with rhythm and drums but was having a bit of trouble getting something I felt did it justice and retained that mysterious/Other worldly vibe.
I'm super excited to see you back on the board bro. Would love nothing more than to see a new track from you sometime. Anyhow you certainly brightened up my day by popping in on this one. I humbly accept and highly regard all praises from ValveHalla !!!
This is like Primus fell into a Vat of Van Halen and used Edgar Winters' towel to dry off.
Funny thing is, if someone said, without telling me who it is, to "listen to this" I would have known right away that it was yours. You have a signature sound that you take with you on every track. That's a good thing. It makes it yours and yours alone.
Good lord, that ending is a heavy one. Bravo! Yes. this is definitely your heaviest one yet. At least of the ones that I've heard. I need to get caught up on everyone's new tracks. Link me the ones you think I need to hear for sure!
Did listening to this track explode all your valves? Maybe you shook them loose with all the headbanging at the end.
"Primus fell into a Vat of Van Halen and used Edgar Winters' towel to dry off"
An interesting comparison though I feel this one may be heavier than all three of those guys though I don't actually listen to any of them. Primus certainly is weirder and Edgar W much bluesier. There are actually some bits of blues guitar in here as this was begun with some leftover guitar parts from a blues track.
"You have a signature sound that you take with you on every track."
Damn, I hope so. Even so, I still have to make the track good. Distinctive but not very enjoyable isn't good enough.
Yes, awesome heavy ending, giving the track the conclusion it was crying out for. Yes, this is the heaviest thing you've ever heard from me. Let's hope I can sometime go even heavier.
This year has been all about the cello for me as I've made loads of music with it, taking in loads of genres. Here are some highlights for you to inspect:
This is good. It's not exactly my preferred style, but the mix is clean, and sounds nice and clear. The panning is good. Nothing overcrowds anything else, and the vocals sit well. The bass sounds a little heavy, but that might just be these headphones. They are a bit bass rich.
Overall, good work.
Often times, I begin a track with no idea where it's headed. A lot of the times, I try to build something similar to thi in the sense that it's a minimalist, drumless soundscape. But that creative force that lives in me always brings forth the driving beat. Just once, I'd like to create something as ethereal, and captivating as yours. Maybe you're much more at peace with yourself that I am. Which leads me to ask the question: Does the creativity reflect the state of mind, or does it influence it? When you create these pieces, do you let the music channel through you, or do you bend the ambiance to your desire? Myself, I believe that music has always been here. Long before we were, and it will be here long after we're gone. We are nothing more than a vehicle for it to be presented to us. We give it it's voice. But, there are those who simply let it flow through them, and then there are those, more like myself, who, although let it flow, bend it to fit my own agenda. Your pieces are almost always so calm, and reflective, where mine are always aggressive and driving. Even in the more "fluid" works. It's interesting that yours, and mine, evoke such strong emotions in the listener, but they are so far apart on the spectrum.
At first, I didn't really listen that deeply to your work. But much like a truly good cup of coffee, there are so many complexities, and elements that go into it, that it takes time to fully learn and appreciate everything involved. I'm glad I kept coming back.
Hi Aaron...always good to hear from you, especially when you come up with such an interesting and thoughtful observation. You have put some questions on the table to which the answers can't be simple or one sided......I wouldn't say that I'm much more at peace with myself than you, cause I probably as well tend to the other side as you do, although in opposite direction. We are momentarily on different sides of the circle or if you want the analogy of an egg. We are taking different directions, but one day we might meet at one exact point. I would like to produce more rhythm based track, it's just that I still don't feel enough comfortable with it. "When you create these pieces, do you let the music channel through you, or do you bend the ambiance to your desire? " I think that the first option is there more frequently with me than the second one, although they might intertwin at times and I think it's the same with the creativity and the state of mind. I think the relation can be observed both ways. About evoking emotions I think we're dealing with the force which has a very broad range, so the strong impact can be achieved from totally different positions as is the case with our music. We'll see what future brings...
I can only express my gratitude and respect for your attention to detail in my music and ofcourse don't forget I have great admiration for yours!:)
This is a great track! I kept seeing comments about vocals. Personally, I don't think it's really set up for vocals. There's a lot of guitar in there! That's not a bad thing, either. Funny thing is, when it first started, my brain went to John Lennon, then to Iggy Pop, into Mick Jagger, and then finally Josh Homme. The music is such a perfect blend of all of them, that any of them could fit in perfectly.
I super appreciate the kind words...I wish I was buds with Josh and could get him to try and do something on here. :) I agree it can kind of stand on its own since it is guitar heavy. Thanks again for checking it out and for leaving the review. Much appreciated.
Your layering here is impeccable. It reminds me of an oncoming storm. I like the introduction of so many different instruments, as if they're all just waiting in line to perform their hearts out.
Honestly, Orlando, I think of all of your work that I've heard, which is quite a few, by the way, this one might just be my favorite.
The mix/mastering is super clean, spacious and rich. Excellent work. Keep it up, my friend!
My apologies for the late reply...to be honest I really didn't expect such a favourable and generous review on this one, but ofcourse I'm absolutely grateful and happy for it!
Moreso cause I have really put quite some effort into it
and when it receives such degree of recognition from an artist who is very high on my admiration list then the feel is even more inspiring !
Evan, Mister Evan. What's happnin' your way, man? How was your Thanksgiving? Pleasant, I hope.
Remember that time I said you're on the verge of breaking through into that sound that's all your own? Well, my friend, you are well past that threshold. Granted, this one still has some pretty hefty nods to those who's name shall remain unspoken, but it's like the equivalent of my "Red On The White" in that sense. It's got a strong Floyd vibe, but it's not intended to sound like them. Ya know?
I have to agree with Tumbleweed, man. This one is clearly your best yet. I kind of feel like saying this on damn near every track you put out cheapens the meaning, but when you come back with each track, it's improved far beyond the last. The composition, the mixing, the instrumentation, all of it is exactly how it should be.
I have no critiques, criticisms, or suggestions, man. You nailed it as far as I'm concerned!
I'd still love to do a collab one of these times. You know, put in my synths real Sloe like right into your Bass hole...er, uhhh....NO HOMO! I need to go wash off the filth now.
Mr. Aaron. We meet again, in notes on this pegboard in the hallway. Always just missing the other by moments.
The high praise is not easy for me to accept. It is appreciated. I'm wanting to create my music more closely to what I hear in my mind, and the longer I hold on to them and lay my thoughts upon them, the truer they are to their origin. I had a pretty busy spurt for about a year and a half. Now it's more about quality over quantity.
"put in my synths real Sloe like right into your Bass hole"
Just bring the valve oil, baby. You're in for a treat. I'm practiced in the art of Strobe-Clenching. You'll never be the same. I leave dongs looking like they have heat-sinks.
Since the dawn of human kind, when our ancestors first discovered the killing power of rock and bone, blood has been spilled in the name of everything: from God, to justice, to simple, psychotic rage."
-Ron Pearlman as the Narrator of Fallout3.
As frightening, and devastating as it is, war is necessary. While I don't welcome war, I welcome the potential it brings afterwards. It's like a forest fire. It may burn the forest down, but the ashes leave the soil enriched for a completely new growth of healthy life. We have reached a point in our time where our understanding of technology, and social equities have outgrown the primitive attitude toward them. Mentally, we still live in the dark ages wielding pitchforks and torches at anything that seems "different to the masses." The generation coming up now has an advantage that those of us born before 1980 don't have; Understanding. An understanding of fairness, simplicity in work ethics, technological advancement, and I believe, the ineffectiveness of the old world political beliefs. If we are truly on the brink of another world war, I have high hopes that the "millineals" will rebuild the human race as it was meant to be. With compassion, kindness, and peace at the forefront.
I've always said, "Times change. People don't." I'm hoping to be proven wrong."
Oh....wait, this is supposed to be a track review. Not a philosophical ranting platform. Let me just climb back down off of my soapbox.
Onto the track review.
The concept:
A good one. It's obviously thought provoking, and touching. Which is exactly what art is supposed to be. There is definitely a story told, and the music is fitting for the emotions you're trying to convey.
The composition:
You managed to pack in 75 years of war into under 5 minutes. It wasn't rushed, and everything played it's part well.
The mixing:
I think, mainly due to, what I assume is a lack of experience, the mix was a little crammed. Almost everything sits directly in the center. If you had panned them out it would have created a much more spacious, and dynamic sound. Which, let's face it, war is spacious and dynamic.
The laser sounds, some of the synths, and a few of the sound effects are, however, panned nicely.
I think some of the levels could be brought down a little. There are some things that overstep others. Remember, when mixing, it's always better to bring the volume of one thing down, than to raise the volume of everything around it.
Overall, man, I give this a thumbs up. You're doing good things here. Keep it up!
First of all
Thank you for your great comment Sloe
you are truely right because I putted everything in center (except a few effects) and I know it could be better if I had better panning
for the volume of the song, thanks for your feedback and I think its loud a bit too.
but about your first wrotes:
Yes, human wars can't be changed.
but everything has a way, I tried to help people to understand why we are here and what should we do here
actually, thats why Im here, on the earth
my dear friend and dear master, human changes, everything changes in this world, this is the reason why we are here, to be changed, for evolution, for being what we should be
every baby's born is the sign of that god is not frustrated from human
who knows what will be happened if we all die, human created from soil, and it will back to the soil, and it will be happen again and again until we become completed
a lot of people think we have no gods and we have been created by the nature, but question is, who created nature?
bigbang? but in bigbang theory we have an explotion happened in vacuum, but no explotion happens in vacuum
but most of people think we have a god which is watching us and and and and...
both of them can't be true because we actually dont know who is god?
what "GOD" means?
god is an energy and as you can think, feel and etc... energy can do it in the best way
energy doesnt need anything to be alive
and it can do everything
so... why should we prove in our evolution? thats the question that all should ask ourselves
thanks for your care Sloe (Handshake)
Kindest Regards
J_*
I think your definition of "heavy" and mine differ greatly. But, with all that low end going on, I can definitely agree that this is a heavy one.
This is a clean track. Everything is placed exactly where it should be. Nothing crowds anything else, and everything is buried in the mix. You have a great balance of sounds that cover the range. There's heavy low ends in the subs, good mids in the pads, and synths, and highs in the chimes/bells. There's actual melodies, not just a bunch of spliced wubs, growls, and screams. it almost reminds me of something I would do. Like Soundhound said, "This is musical..."
This is great. It's got a late 80's/early 90's industrial feel to it. Which was exactly the time I was into it, so I tend to like this one quite a bit.
It's definitely a pretty dark tune. The beat is solid and drives along nicely.
I agree with Cru. The phone samples are a nice touch.
As far as the mix itself, it's very clean, and everything is spaced perfectly. I don't hear anything crowding anything else.
I made a bunch of cinematic tunes so its was time for a "electronic" one. What i love with that one it its keep the cinematic aspect of telling a story or setting a environment.
so its what happened.
Well if we base on my description I think its normal for being dark :) and like you I love dark thing. Im agree with you the beat is awesome its like glitch (bugs).
Since Mobius 2.01b infect phones around the word I think its a good idea to put phone tones from UK, US and Canada :)
Like ER said this track is extremely wide so ... the space I had a lot XD
Seriously, I think im better for mixing than before and all that from all the feedbacks I got so far.
Again thanks for you to send me this feedback
I was a bit inspired by you from your dark electro industrial tune like "Cyclamen Laid In Stone - Say Goodbye"
Yeah. You may want to think about investing in licensed software. It generally doesn't come with the glitches that cause your projects to crash, or make things more difficult than they need to be. Oh, and the lawsuit stuff. It doesn't come with the threat of lawsuits, either. All that, plus, it's not looked too highly upon around here.
I'll swing by later to give a more indepth review. I use FL studios, too. So, I should be able to get pretty detailed.
Keep it. Just spend a little more time with it. It's not a bad track at all. It just needs a little more attention.
There's a lot of clipping in it. Which means it's too loud. I know loud is good in Dubstep, but too loud is not. I'm assuming you have your instruments, drums and synths assigned to their own mixer tracks. If not, do. From there you can adjust and balance out your levels. pay close attention to which frequencies are the loudest in each instrument. For example, if your kick drum and your sub bass are both peaking in the 30-50hz range, cut that range a little in your kick, You'll still get the kick drum pop, but it won't be competing with the sub bass. Ya know what I mean?
Also, from your mixer, you'll be able to play with the panning. Because, as it is now, everything sounds like it's just piled up in the center. Not only will individual panning and stereo separation give you some sweet dynamic movement, and fluidity, but it will create a more spacious mix. But most importantly, it will clear up some of the overlapping frequencies that contribute to a lot to that clipping.
I'm not going to go too far into detail on the specifics, because I don't know what kind of set up you're using, or if you'll even reply to this with anything more than, "Thanks bro. Laterz!" But, if you seem genuinely interested I'll add more.
Ahhhhhh thats what I forgot! Panning. You're right, my sounds are all kind of piling up on each other, and I'll try and fix the peaking problems best I can, mixing and mastering is a concept I haven't quite grasped yet xD lol, but I do know my track levels are peaking, trust me. The only thing that really sounds gross to me is the risers in the build up. Every time I listen to that it makes my face cringe. I should have lowered the initial "in" volume output. My goal was to have it drown out the main synth, but not until the end. And I work with FL studio, so everything is on a separate mixer, but everything I use (all my software, plugins etc.) are all torrented lol shhh don't tell on me xD. But my main software is all messed up so if it errors out, like it did for this project (about 3 minutes into the song), it erases the project. I've been getting away with exporting mp3 stems for precautions but when I'm working with like 40+ different sounds all going on in one song, cmon whos really going to want to take the time to export all of that individually? hahaha I really need to buy the real thing. It doesn't error out too often, but when it does it's really frustrating :\ I'm just concerned about all the unlicensed plugins I'd lose if I do. But anyway, you're absolutely right, I need to improve my track cleanliness and fluidity. Thank you so much for the advice! I'll focus on that for my future tracks. I feel like that is whats going to take my producing skills to the next level! I'll send you a message on my next track post so that if you have the time, you can tell me if I've cleaned up my sounds a bit better. If you've got any other advice to give me, fire away man. I'm all ears! I can use anything I can get.
The Wah section is much better. It fits in there like it's supposed to now. Good job.
The ending seems to be more clean. The added guitar over the fade out works.
It's definitely much more solid now. Not that it wasn't before, though.
Thanks for the extra guit-fiddle tips. That's the kind of stuff most people don't think to tell you. They just say, "Get this pedal. Get that Pedal." or "Buy stuff for making the things do the stuff." or, "you don't already know how to play, so I can't help you." Assclowns.
Anyhow. It sounds like you enjoyed your 4th just fine. If I could still burn the green, I would. My wife can, and it kinda makes me envious sometimes. We had a decent time. We had a group of friends and family over for a big-##### BBQ and blowout bonananaza. Everyone went home full of food and beer, and with all their fingers still attached. So, I'd say it was a success.
Again, awesome reworking here, mister!
Take 'er as she comes. Easy, with any luck.
I'm glad you like the new ending. Much better than the odd wah and detuned solo. The wah's "wooka-chicka-wooka-chicka" Was better that what I had before. I appreciate the suggestions.
"Assclowns"
Yes. Guitar Center seems to hire them exclusively. I get everything from Sweetwater.com. I'll research online, then go to the stores to try something in person, then buy it through Sweetwater. 3 guitars, my pedal, and my MIDI controller have all come from there and 100 percent awesome service. Mandatory 2 year warranty on EVERYTHING. Free shipping over 50 bucks.
I don't expect you to get a pedal at all, really. Ampire, Amplitube and other amp sim software would be your best #####. Stomps are more for live playing. However, if you do, check out the Hardwire series from Digitech. Quality, and true bypass.
Again, a well set-up guitar, played with a gentle touch, offers the best results. Most music shops will do a full guitar set-up for around $70.
One thing you should never mess with yourself is the truss rod. There is a bowed rod in the neck of your guitar, and it can be loosened or tightened with an allen wrench. It adds or reduces the tension in the neck, counteracting the pull of the strings. When a neck starts to bow, that is the fix, but you can destroy the neck at the same time. Pay the guy, he'll do it.
You may be getting sick of the guitar talk. Sorry. A lot of people get discouraged because it sounds bad in the beginning. Just wanting to pass on what I've picked up.
Normally, I don't click on the Hip-Hop genres. But for some reason, I just decided to go ahead with this one. Totally at random. But, I'll tell ya what man, I'm glad I did. This is a pretty sweet tune. The panning of the pads and accents give it a lot of motion and dynamics. The mixing is crystal, and it's, overall, a pleasant tune. It's nice and bass heavy, but it's not aggressive. This could probably fit in the Atmospheric and Chill Out genres as well.
It would be interesting to hear this piece with some of Tumbleweeds fluid-like guitars weaving in and out of it.
It's kind of cool to see a horror based dubstep track other than mine floating around the ol' Loop. Your choice of horror samples is from an excellent source. I think there were about 3o zombie movies before Romero's Night Of The Living Dead, starting with "White Zombie" back in 1932. But, Romero's was the one that changed the face of Zombie flicks, though.
Not a bad little tune here. It needs a little work, but it's not bad at all. I think for me, the thing that stood out the most was the lack of variation and breaks in the drums. But I like the more laid back approach to Dubstep. It works for me, too.
Question: Are you creating this all from scratch, or are you using loops? Or, a little of both?
Yeah, I wanted to make a themed piece of music for once. I've never really done that before, so I was flying by the seat of my pants.
I make Dubstep that I like to listen to. I enjoy simple drum patterns that I can nod my head to and that allow me to focus on the wobbles a little bit more. But, yeah, I see where you're coming from.
First, I just want to say this is a solid track. Everything, so far, is quality. The composition, the mixing, the instruments used. I have quite a bit of good, (and a minor suggestion or two.) to say about this track on it's own, and a few opinions related to things covered in previous comments. But, as it is, I've been awake for about 20 hours now. To try to attempt any intelligible word usings with the brain and the face and the typing of the things that make words and stuff...would just lead to the equivalent of a literary version of a Jackson Pollock painting.
Or the musings of a schizophrenic.
I will be back in the very near future to construct a coherent review.
It be OK. It's the time of year when I teeter on the brink of dehydration. I lose SO much fluid throughout the day, it's impossible to catch up. Shirt is soaked to the waist by 10:00 a.m. on a good day. I have to drink Pedialite just to regain my electrolytes.
"a minor suggestion or two to say about this track on it's own, and a few opinions related to things covered in previous comments."
I would love to hear them! I've got a few issues with the wah and the ending solo-ish line,... that is actually a higher guitar line transposed down. I'm up for suggestions.
This is a quality piece. Mostly. I would suggest bringing the volume down just a touch. I sounds like I can hear some clipping throughout the whole piece. Super easy fix, though.
As far as everything else goes, excellent work. I would absolutely vote against additional vocals. The choral work that's in it now is powerful enough to carry it through. Adding anything else would completely take away from that power, and end up minimizing the rest of the track.
If you don't mind me asking, what are you using for the choral samples? Is that a Soundiron product?
on FiveCar SmileUp by Spivkurl
I like this one. If I had to describe it to someone who has never heard your work, I would tell them to imagine as if Nivek Ogre and Mothersbaugh founded RevCo. Not to minimize your creative talents by comparing, but rather to say your abilities sit in good company.
I like the sense of urgency in this. It's like a manic feasting, or compulsive consumption.
I'm still amazed at your abilities to use full analogue. I might be able to figure out how to produce a sound. (singular), but I'd definitely get lost trying to figure out routing, and patching. Therefore, I have a healthy respect for your work. I tip my hat to you, sir.
Take care.
Aaron.
It seems that I take things too literally. When people speak about me using "full analog," I get the urge to mention all the aspects of it which were not analog. Things are different these days, and it seems accepted that any hardware besides a computer is analog, so I am trying to adapt. I do appreciate your amazement though. This song was musically very about routing and patching... I hope to do many more in this fashion.
Thanks much!
on Primordial by Neomorpheus
Dude.
Seriously, man. This track spoke to me. It's the perfect amount of psych, space, and melody. It's droning sub, the slow movements. Your use of atmospheric synths are impeccable. They are placed so well, that you don't really notice all of them. But if you were to take them out, you would definitely miss them. It's super wide open, spaciously speaking. It's nice and mysterious. To me, it's like what I imagine being adrift in space without a ship is like. But, not one of those Major Tom mishap drifts. The kind you'd take if you could, just to be completely isolated from everything, while being totally at one with it all.
I had to download this. Funny thing is, it's over 4 minutes long, but it could easily be another 4.
Highest praises from ValveHalla on this one brother!
Take care.
Aaron
I'll tell you there has to be mysterious powers at work here because when I was posting this track I thought damn I wish my bro Aaron would pop back on here soon ! Its been a while dude, hope things are going well for you. Certainly glad to hear you like this. I kind of fell into a bit of a retro rut recently and found myself working on music that although it was cool, just wasn't what I really wanted to be doing. So I have abandoned a lot of tracks and material that I had spent months languishing with and hopefully this one will lead me in a more positive direction. As a matter of fact I intended to work this into more of a song with rhythm and drums but was having a bit of trouble getting something I felt did it justice and retained that mysterious/Other worldly vibe.
I'm super excited to see you back on the board bro. Would love nothing more than to see a new track from you sometime. Anyhow you certainly brightened up my day by popping in on this one. I humbly accept and highly regard all praises from ValveHalla !!!
Take it Sloe brother.
on Fist Bumps Of Fury by StaticNomad
This is like Primus fell into a Vat of Van Halen and used Edgar Winters' towel to dry off.
Funny thing is, if someone said, without telling me who it is, to "listen to this" I would have known right away that it was yours. You have a signature sound that you take with you on every track. That's a good thing. It makes it yours and yours alone.
Good lord, that ending is a heavy one. Bravo! Yes. this is definitely your heaviest one yet. At least of the ones that I've heard. I need to get caught up on everyone's new tracks. Link me the ones you think I need to hear for sure!
Talk to you later, Dewd.
Valv...er, uhhhh. Sloe.
Did listening to this track explode all your valves? Maybe you shook them loose with all the headbanging at the end.
"Primus fell into a Vat of Van Halen and used Edgar Winters' towel to dry off"
An interesting comparison though I feel this one may be heavier than all three of those guys though I don't actually listen to any of them. Primus certainly is weirder and Edgar W much bluesier. There are actually some bits of blues guitar in here as this was begun with some leftover guitar parts from a blues track.
"You have a signature sound that you take with you on every track."
Damn, I hope so. Even so, I still have to make the track good. Distinctive but not very enjoyable isn't good enough.
Yes, awesome heavy ending, giving the track the conclusion it was crying out for. Yes, this is the heaviest thing you've ever heard from me. Let's hope I can sometime go even heavier.
This year has been all about the cello for me as I've made loads of music with it, taking in loads of genres. Here are some highlights for you to inspect:
Cellometallo:
Nuance is Futile http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/176620
Grooving psychedelic cellout:
The Warm Glow Of Yesterday http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/176476
Cello hip hop, jazz, rock etc:
Everything Where It Should Be http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177063
Psychedelic, Eastern, dark dance/jazz/fusion:
Navigating The Neversphere http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177970
Psychedelic techno cello:
Dangerous Spaces http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/180406
Psychedelic Eastern shuffle blues (no cello):
The Mythical Gates http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177482
I've made other tracks since you've been on here but those should do for now.
Take care.
on Six Feet Under 2016 Ft Kyle Monroe by Pixxlexia
Overall, good work.
Welcome back to producing!
Take care.
Sloe.
on Abandoned Sanctuary by Orlando51
Often times, I begin a track with no idea where it's headed. A lot of the times, I try to build something similar to thi in the sense that it's a minimalist, drumless soundscape. But that creative force that lives in me always brings forth the driving beat. Just once, I'd like to create something as ethereal, and captivating as yours. Maybe you're much more at peace with yourself that I am. Which leads me to ask the question: Does the creativity reflect the state of mind, or does it influence it? When you create these pieces, do you let the music channel through you, or do you bend the ambiance to your desire? Myself, I believe that music has always been here. Long before we were, and it will be here long after we're gone. We are nothing more than a vehicle for it to be presented to us. We give it it's voice. But, there are those who simply let it flow through them, and then there are those, more like myself, who, although let it flow, bend it to fit my own agenda. Your pieces are almost always so calm, and reflective, where mine are always aggressive and driving. Even in the more "fluid" works. It's interesting that yours, and mine, evoke such strong emotions in the listener, but they are so far apart on the spectrum.
At first, I didn't really listen that deeply to your work. But much like a truly good cup of coffee, there are so many complexities, and elements that go into it, that it takes time to fully learn and appreciate everything involved. I'm glad I kept coming back.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
Take care.
Aaron.
I can only express my gratitude and respect for your attention to detail in my music and ofcourse don't forget I have great admiration for yours!:)
Peace & take care______Orlando
on When the Queens Come Marching Home by topvega
This is a great track! I kept seeing comments about vocals. Personally, I don't think it's really set up for vocals. There's a lot of guitar in there! That's not a bad thing, either. Funny thing is, when it first started, my brain went to John Lennon, then to Iggy Pop, into Mick Jagger, and then finally Josh Homme. The music is such a perfect blend of all of them, that any of them could fit in perfectly.
Excellent work, man.
Take care.
Sloe.
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on Elephant by Orlando51
Your layering here is impeccable. It reminds me of an oncoming storm. I like the introduction of so many different instruments, as if they're all just waiting in line to perform their hearts out.
Honestly, Orlando, I think of all of your work that I've heard, which is quite a few, by the way, this one might just be my favorite.
The mix/mastering is super clean, spacious and rich. Excellent work. Keep it up, my friend!
Take care.
Aaron.
My apologies for the late reply...to be honest I really didn't expect such a favourable and generous review on this one, but ofcourse I'm absolutely grateful and happy for it!
Moreso cause I have really put quite some effort into it
and when it receives such degree of recognition from an artist who is very high on my admiration list then the feel is even more inspiring !
Big thank you, my friend.
Orlando
on Roar Stone by StaticNomad
on Constellation by Evisma
Remember that time I said you're on the verge of breaking through into that sound that's all your own? Well, my friend, you are well past that threshold. Granted, this one still has some pretty hefty nods to those who's name shall remain unspoken, but it's like the equivalent of my "Red On The White" in that sense. It's got a strong Floyd vibe, but it's not intended to sound like them. Ya know?
I have to agree with Tumbleweed, man. This one is clearly your best yet. I kind of feel like saying this on damn near every track you put out cheapens the meaning, but when you come back with each track, it's improved far beyond the last. The composition, the mixing, the instrumentation, all of it is exactly how it should be.
I have no critiques, criticisms, or suggestions, man. You nailed it as far as I'm concerned!
I'd still love to do a collab one of these times. You know, put in my synths real Sloe like right into your Bass hole...er, uhhh....NO HOMO! I need to go wash off the filth now.
Later, man.
Aaron.
The high praise is not easy for me to accept. It is appreciated. I'm wanting to create my music more closely to what I hear in my mind, and the longer I hold on to them and lay my thoughts upon them, the truer they are to their origin. I had a pretty busy spurt for about a year and a half. Now it's more about quality over quantity.
"put in my synths real Sloe like right into your Bass hole"
Just bring the valve oil, baby. You're in for a treat. I'm practiced in the art of Strobe-Clenching. You'll never be the same. I leave dongs looking like they have heat-sinks.
Take care.
Evan
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
Since the dawn of human kind, when our ancestors first discovered the killing power of rock and bone, blood has been spilled in the name of everything: from God, to justice, to simple, psychotic rage."
-Ron Pearlman as the Narrator of Fallout3.
As frightening, and devastating as it is, war is necessary. While I don't welcome war, I welcome the potential it brings afterwards. It's like a forest fire. It may burn the forest down, but the ashes leave the soil enriched for a completely new growth of healthy life. We have reached a point in our time where our understanding of technology, and social equities have outgrown the primitive attitude toward them. Mentally, we still live in the dark ages wielding pitchforks and torches at anything that seems "different to the masses." The generation coming up now has an advantage that those of us born before 1980 don't have; Understanding. An understanding of fairness, simplicity in work ethics, technological advancement, and I believe, the ineffectiveness of the old world political beliefs. If we are truly on the brink of another world war, I have high hopes that the "millineals" will rebuild the human race as it was meant to be. With compassion, kindness, and peace at the forefront.
I've always said, "Times change. People don't." I'm hoping to be proven wrong."
Oh....wait, this is supposed to be a track review. Not a philosophical ranting platform. Let me just climb back down off of my soapbox.
Onto the track review.
The concept:
A good one. It's obviously thought provoking, and touching. Which is exactly what art is supposed to be. There is definitely a story told, and the music is fitting for the emotions you're trying to convey.
The composition:
You managed to pack in 75 years of war into under 5 minutes. It wasn't rushed, and everything played it's part well.
The mixing:
I think, mainly due to, what I assume is a lack of experience, the mix was a little crammed. Almost everything sits directly in the center. If you had panned them out it would have created a much more spacious, and dynamic sound. Which, let's face it, war is spacious and dynamic.
The laser sounds, some of the synths, and a few of the sound effects are, however, panned nicely.
I think some of the levels could be brought down a little. There are some things that overstep others. Remember, when mixing, it's always better to bring the volume of one thing down, than to raise the volume of everything around it.
Overall, man, I give this a thumbs up. You're doing good things here. Keep it up!
Take care.
Sloe.
Thank you for your great comment Sloe
you are truely right because I putted everything in center (except a few effects) and I know it could be better if I had better panning
for the volume of the song, thanks for your feedback and I think its loud a bit too.
but about your first wrotes:
Yes, human wars can't be changed.
but everything has a way, I tried to help people to understand why we are here and what should we do here
actually, thats why Im here, on the earth
my dear friend and dear master, human changes, everything changes in this world, this is the reason why we are here, to be changed, for evolution, for being what we should be
every baby's born is the sign of that god is not frustrated from human
who knows what will be happened if we all die, human created from soil, and it will back to the soil, and it will be happen again and again until we become completed
a lot of people think we have no gods and we have been created by the nature, but question is, who created nature?
bigbang? but in bigbang theory we have an explotion happened in vacuum, but no explotion happens in vacuum
but most of people think we have a god which is watching us and and and and...
both of them can't be true because we actually dont know who is god?
what "GOD" means?
god is an energy and as you can think, feel and etc... energy can do it in the best way
energy doesnt need anything to be alive
and it can do everything
so... why should we prove in our evolution? thats the question that all should ask ourselves
thanks for your care Sloe (Handshake)
Kindest Regards
J_*
on Fear Itself by EphyMusic
I think your definition of "heavy" and mine differ greatly. But, with all that low end going on, I can definitely agree that this is a heavy one.
This is a clean track. Everything is placed exactly where it should be. Nothing crowds anything else, and everything is buried in the mix. You have a great balance of sounds that cover the range. There's heavy low ends in the subs, good mids in the pads, and synths, and highs in the chimes/bells. There's actual melodies, not just a bunch of spliced wubs, growls, and screams. it almost reminds me of something I would do. Like Soundhound said, "This is musical..."
Excellent work, my friend.
Take care.
Sloe.
on Worst track ever by FrozenStick
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
This is great. It's got a late 80's/early 90's industrial feel to it. Which was exactly the time I was into it, so I tend to like this one quite a bit.
It's definitely a pretty dark tune. The beat is solid and drives along nicely.
I agree with Cru. The phone samples are a nice touch.
As far as the mix itself, it's very clean, and everything is spaced perfectly. I don't hear anything crowding anything else.
Good job, man!
Take care.
V.
I made a bunch of cinematic tunes so its was time for a "electronic" one. What i love with that one it its keep the cinematic aspect of telling a story or setting a environment.
so its what happened.
Well if we base on my description I think its normal for being dark :) and like you I love dark thing. Im agree with you the beat is awesome its like glitch (bugs).
Since Mobius 2.01b infect phones around the word I think its a good idea to put phone tones from UK, US and Canada :)
Like ER said this track is extremely wide so ... the space I had a lot XD
Seriously, I think im better for mixing than before and all that from all the feedbacks I got so far.
Again thanks for you to send me this feedback
I was a bit inspired by you from your dark electro industrial tune like "Cyclamen Laid In Stone - Say Goodbye"
See ya and peace
on Story Of Us MELODIC DUBSTEP by MaurStylin
I'll swing by later to give a more indepth review. I use FL studios, too. So, I should be able to get pretty detailed.
Again, Take care.
V.
on Story Of Us MELODIC DUBSTEP by MaurStylin
There's a lot of clipping in it. Which means it's too loud. I know loud is good in Dubstep, but too loud is not. I'm assuming you have your instruments, drums and synths assigned to their own mixer tracks. If not, do. From there you can adjust and balance out your levels. pay close attention to which frequencies are the loudest in each instrument. For example, if your kick drum and your sub bass are both peaking in the 30-50hz range, cut that range a little in your kick, You'll still get the kick drum pop, but it won't be competing with the sub bass. Ya know what I mean?
Also, from your mixer, you'll be able to play with the panning. Because, as it is now, everything sounds like it's just piled up in the center. Not only will individual panning and stereo separation give you some sweet dynamic movement, and fluidity, but it will create a more spacious mix. But most importantly, it will clear up some of the overlapping frequencies that contribute to a lot to that clipping.
I'm not going to go too far into detail on the specifics, because I don't know what kind of set up you're using, or if you'll even reply to this with anything more than, "Thanks bro. Laterz!" But, if you seem genuinely interested I'll add more.
Take care.
V.
Much appreciated! :]
- Maur
on Comanchera by Neomorpheus
on Star Forge by Evisma
The Wah section is much better. It fits in there like it's supposed to now. Good job.
The ending seems to be more clean. The added guitar over the fade out works.
It's definitely much more solid now. Not that it wasn't before, though.
Thanks for the extra guit-fiddle tips. That's the kind of stuff most people don't think to tell you. They just say, "Get this pedal. Get that Pedal." or "Buy stuff for making the things do the stuff." or, "you don't already know how to play, so I can't help you." Assclowns.
Anyhow. It sounds like you enjoyed your 4th just fine. If I could still burn the green, I would. My wife can, and it kinda makes me envious sometimes. We had a decent time. We had a group of friends and family over for a big-##### BBQ and blowout bonananaza. Everyone went home full of food and beer, and with all their fingers still attached. So, I'd say it was a success.
Again, awesome reworking here, mister!
Take 'er as she comes. Easy, with any luck.
Aaron.
I'm glad you like the new ending. Much better than the odd wah and detuned solo. The wah's "wooka-chicka-wooka-chicka" Was better that what I had before. I appreciate the suggestions.
"Assclowns"
Yes. Guitar Center seems to hire them exclusively. I get everything from Sweetwater.com. I'll research online, then go to the stores to try something in person, then buy it through Sweetwater. 3 guitars, my pedal, and my MIDI controller have all come from there and 100 percent awesome service. Mandatory 2 year warranty on EVERYTHING. Free shipping over 50 bucks.
I don't expect you to get a pedal at all, really. Ampire, Amplitube and other amp sim software would be your best #####. Stomps are more for live playing. However, if you do, check out the Hardwire series from Digitech. Quality, and true bypass.
Again, a well set-up guitar, played with a gentle touch, offers the best results. Most music shops will do a full guitar set-up for around $70.
One thing you should never mess with yourself is the truss rod. There is a bowed rod in the neck of your guitar, and it can be loosened or tightened with an allen wrench. It adds or reduces the tension in the neck, counteracting the pull of the strings. When a neck starts to bow, that is the fix, but you can destroy the neck at the same time. Pay the guy, he'll do it.
You may be getting sick of the guitar talk. Sorry. A lot of people get discouraged because it sounds bad in the beginning. Just wanting to pass on what I've picked up.
All the best!
Evan
on Star Forge by Evisma
on Eminent Bound By EazyBeatz by EazyBeatz
Normally, I don't click on the Hip-Hop genres. But for some reason, I just decided to go ahead with this one. Totally at random. But, I'll tell ya what man, I'm glad I did. This is a pretty sweet tune. The panning of the pads and accents give it a lot of motion and dynamics. The mixing is crystal, and it's, overall, a pleasant tune. It's nice and bass heavy, but it's not aggressive. This could probably fit in the Atmospheric and Chill Out genres as well.
It would be interesting to hear this piece with some of Tumbleweeds fluid-like guitars weaving in and out of it.
All in all, excellent work, mister. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.
on Zombies by SikNoiz
It's kind of cool to see a horror based dubstep track other than mine floating around the ol' Loop. Your choice of horror samples is from an excellent source. I think there were about 3o zombie movies before Romero's Night Of The Living Dead, starting with "White Zombie" back in 1932. But, Romero's was the one that changed the face of Zombie flicks, though.
Not a bad little tune here. It needs a little work, but it's not bad at all. I think for me, the thing that stood out the most was the lack of variation and breaks in the drums. But I like the more laid back approach to Dubstep. It works for me, too.
Question: Are you creating this all from scratch, or are you using loops? Or, a little of both?
Take care.
V.
I make Dubstep that I like to listen to. I enjoy simple drum patterns that I can nod my head to and that allow me to focus on the wobbles a little bit more. But, yeah, I see where you're coming from.
I'd say this is about 70% original and 30% loops.
on Star Forge by Evisma
on Star Forge by Evisma
on Star Forge by Evisma
First, I just want to say this is a solid track. Everything, so far, is quality. The composition, the mixing, the instruments used. I have quite a bit of good, (and a minor suggestion or two.) to say about this track on it's own, and a few opinions related to things covered in previous comments. But, as it is, I've been awake for about 20 hours now. To try to attempt any intelligible word usings with the brain and the face and the typing of the things that make words and stuff...would just lead to the equivalent of a literary version of a Jackson Pollock painting.
Or the musings of a schizophrenic.
I will be back in the very near future to construct a coherent review.
Take care, Amigo
Aaron
"Mr. Evan. How it be, man?"
It be OK. It's the time of year when I teeter on the brink of dehydration. I lose SO much fluid throughout the day, it's impossible to catch up. Shirt is soaked to the waist by 10:00 a.m. on a good day. I have to drink Pedialite just to regain my electrolytes.
"a minor suggestion or two to say about this track on it's own, and a few opinions related to things covered in previous comments."
I would love to hear them! I've got a few issues with the wah and the ending solo-ish line,... that is actually a higher guitar line transposed down. I'm up for suggestions.
Evan
on When The Fight Starts by MOONLYTE
This is a quality piece. Mostly. I would suggest bringing the volume down just a touch. I sounds like I can hear some clipping throughout the whole piece. Super easy fix, though.
As far as everything else goes, excellent work. I would absolutely vote against additional vocals. The choral work that's in it now is powerful enough to carry it through. Adding anything else would completely take away from that power, and end up minimizing the rest of the track.
If you don't mind me asking, what are you using for the choral samples? Is that a Soundiron product?
Take care.
V.
on A Quercus Among Acers by Evisma