Well, it looks like I arrived to the party just a little behind everyone else. Either way, I'm glad I found it!
I'm not exactly a Zeppelin fan. More of a Pink Floyd guy, myself. I am however a pretty big fan of the John Paul Jones and John Bonham rhythm section of Led Zeppelin. Bonham had such a loose, almost sloppy, but impeccable style, and Jones knew how to fill in the spaces to keep it pulled together. I've always felt like Page and Plant were doing their own thing in the band, while the Johns were busy being awesome. You've definitely channeled their rhythm on this track. The guitars aren't very Jimmy Page....but to me, that's a good thing. Honestly, what it sounds like to me is, The Johns on Drums and bass, early Gilmour on rhythm, and Billy Gibbons on lead. Damn...that would have been a sweet supergroup.
Generally, I agree with most of Statics reviews. Not this time. I don't think it's too long at all. This track is total jam band song, and that's what jam bands do. Jam. For long periods of time. When you find yourself grooving to good music, you don't want it to stop just about the time you're in full swing. For example...this song by Earthless. (link below) 21 minutes long and not once is it boring. I'd say you did a pretty good job of carrying this one for almost 7 minutes!
A few months ago I did a nod to Pink Floyd, (Red On The White) so I can totally relate to where you're coming from with wanting to do this track. I think you did a better job at just doing your own style based on their influence. Mine was a little more emulative, and I fear that it sounds like a ripoff. But, that's no matter, we're not talking about my track.
I like this one, and I added it to my fav file. Excellent work, as always. Here's the link to Earthelss- "Lost In The Cold Sun" I hope you like it.
I appreciate you taking the time to not only listen but to also leave a comment with such valuable feedback. I also appreciate the link to that awesome song. Really dug it and it fits with my take on music.
Every now and then, I like to pop in to see what's happnin' with the brighter side of music. This track is the polar opposite of my own work.
With that being said, excellent work on this. The production value is crystal. Your panning is spot on. Everything sits exactly where it should. It's a light and, dare I say, refreshing tune without going overboard. It's just a good solid track. You have every right to be pround of it.
Personally, I don't think it needs vocals. I think what you already have speaks for itself. Vocals would take away from the true heart of this song.
This is not my preferred genre, but I enjoyed it while I was here. Keep it up.
You know what? After reading comments like these, it really motivates me to do what I do. It really makes me recall why I even do all of this.
I really appreciate how you took your invaluable time to push some effort into the comment and notice the minute details I put in.
Also, after I'm done with the vocal version too, I'll make both the versions available for free(if the vocalists allows that, but surely my version). So you can have it your way.
A MASSIVE thank you form me. You really have no idea how much this means to me.
Generally, I do things dark, loud, and aggressive. So, when I hear other people do these chill out tunes, I really enjoy them. It's like taking a break from my own mind. This track provides an excellent backdrop for a temporary escape. To me, it has a very fluid, almost cool aquatic feel to it.
You said that you were thinking it's not finished. I agree with many of the others. There's really no need to do much else. I think the only idea I have, is to add forest noises. You know, Birds chirping, a stream, maybe an occasional buzz from a passing bee. But pan them all out to give them dimension.
I don't know. That may be a lame idea. Like I said, I usually do dark, loud and aggressive.
All in all, I like the track as it is. Excellent work.
The idea about the forest ambiance is cool, might use that actually. Wasn't going to add anything like that but now that i think of it, it could be quite cool... ill look into that.. thanks for the idea man! :D
"all in all, I like the track as it is"
yay :) lol im happy people seem to like this version.. it does have a few little quirks but ive fixed them in my working version (ill update soon)
I like this one quite a bit. It sounds like something that could easily fit into "Adventure Time". Mainly because on the surface it's all cotton candy and pretty colors, but get in there a little and it's actually a well thought out, intricate, and complex piece. Just like how Adventure Time is a colorful kids show about a post apocalyptic world filled with a broad array of characters that tie into the underlining arc.
I like the way you incorperated the guitar in a way that you don't fully notice it's there, but would definitely notice if it weren't. I don't need to say anything about the mix/master. Your's always comes out top notch. I think the only thing that stood out to me was the dryness of the vocals. But that's just personal preference, not so much a critique.
So, yeah...I really enjoyed this one, and your perseverance paid off. Excellent work, as always, mister.
Hi V! I'm doing pretty well over all. It's good to hear from you, and to have you listen this new version. To be honest, I had to look up "Adventure Time" as I had never heard of it. I haven't had television since 1996, so I'm a bit out of touch (in a good way I think). But the things you say about it as parallels to this song are taken well by me all the same. What you mention about the guitar is definitely what I was going for... I couldn't really finish the song until I got those guitar parts played well, because it was totally missing something up until then. I am really trying to make my mixes more powerful and my masters more gentle lately... I'm getting really tired of songs that are so loud you can't turn up your system. I will take heed to your mention of the dryness of the vocals, and I know what you mean. In reality, they are not as dry as they seem, though they are barely revebed. I wanted to keep the natural room impression on this one, as I changed microphone position for the later sections of the tracks. Goes with the stealth matriculation theme for me. Really the whole master is more dry than usual as well, so that may be throwing you a bit. The reverb on the master was at 1% wet this time! Thank you for telling me it was all worth it though, means a lot. I got myself an external hard drive so I'm not constantly worried about losing everything. Hope you are well, and thank you again!
So, this is a good tune. It seems to be more....complete. It's full, but not crowded. Everything sits where it should. It's got a good intro, body, and the outro is spot on. I think I only really have 1.5 complaints, and possible suggestions for them.
Domenico mentioned the missing low frequencies up until the :55 mark. I noticed that too. But when I listened to it, my brain anticipated the low end to open up and impact at 0:24. Like, big-#####, bass-y kick. I think if you boost the low end on your percussion, it would solve it.
The other thing, also with the drums, (which is the .5 part of the 1.5 complaint). To me, the tom work at 2:26-2:58 might be a bit too rapid for the winding down of the tune.
Now, as far as the guit-fiddlin' and the thunder-pluckin'. I have NO complaints. I've always loved the way you're able to pull such emotion out of an instrument that's typically just used for rhythm. Not a lot of people do that.
The tune itself is a good one. It's a consistent melody, that flows so nicely it made me forget I wasn't in an old Rolls taking a drive in the English countryside. That may sound like a sarcastic jab, but really, man. This is a pleasant piece that was super easy to enjoy.
You'll love this. Today was my wife's birthday,... and the water pump went out on my little Chevy S-10. Found out on the way to dinner. Aahh.... to paraphrase George Clooney in From Dusk Till Dawn, "Life loves to stick it in and break it off sometimes." I think he's talking about Harvey Keitel losing his wife, and calls them "Acts of god".
"my brain anticipated the low end to open up and impact at 0:24. Like, big-#####, bass-y kick"
I'm trying to get used to my new headphones, which have a much better low end response. I full agree that the bass is weak and unfittingly soft there. I intended to replace the bass guitar track as it is the scratch track. A rough-ish go-through of a riff so I won't forget it,... never got replaced. It's on my list of fixes. I shall try the kick first.
I will also work with the toms and try to get a more winding down feel. That's the kind of thing I would not have heard, so thank you.
Hope all is well with the V man and his clan! (not the Klan)
I'm pretty sure that from this point forward, there will be no hesitation on my part to click play whenever I see you guys have a new one up. So far, each one I've listened to has been nothing but high quality. This one is, without question, no exception!
Damn, dude. This is pretty cool! You keep puttin' out tracks even remotely like this one, and you may have found your niche. This is definitely different. But, good.
The quality of the mix makes it clear you put in some work on this badboy. It definitely paid off.
:D thanks man!
Yeah I used to make odd kinda songs like this, but
titles for example from a year back and stuff.. to be honest, sounded terrible in terms of production quality,
for example I put the bass on stereo xD and then put delays over it too, it pushed everything away, I had no idea xD
I am glad with what I have achieved with this song
And I'm even more glad that u like it :D
Tnxx
Alright. I got my HAZMAT suit back from the dry cleaners. I can do this now without spreading the death. But, I'm past the full on doom part of it, so it should be safe.
I'm really digging the hell out of this one. It's got a good strong energy to it. There's a lot happening, but it's never crowded. The Marimbas and the fiddles totally work.
You know what this is? This is what "rockin' country" would be if they actually had the rockin' balls they claim to have. It's almost borderline rock-a-billy. Which, honestly, there just isn't enough of on the ol' Looperman. Now that I think of it, I have never heard rock-a-billy on here. Hmm. Time for some electro-valve-a-billy.
No. No it isn't. It is not time for electro-valve-a-billy. That's a terrible idea. Stop it.
I think the only critique I have, and it's mostly just personal preference more than anything, is that the kicks stood out just a little more.
Overall, I thoroughly like this one. It's still exudes your trademark sound, but it's in a completely different arena than a good portion of your other songs.
A-A-Ron! Among the living! Past the contagious period! Happy for you.
Rock-a-billy? I guess the verse parts do seem like they could be taken in that direction, but I had no intention of doing that.
I was thinking recently of doing other genres like country and hip-hop, just to see if I even know enough about each to attempt it.
I decided not to. I'm not that bored,... yet.
I would like to do a whole track just piano, so I can get better at writing piano parts that sound natural and more like a real piano piece.
"It's still exudes your trademark sound, but it's in a completely different arena than a good portion of your other songs."
That is what I'm going for anymore. I've found my sound, it's keeping it fresh and not repeating myself, while not abandoning anything as well.
I figure, like most other heavy music, that my music will get less heavy over time. Less anger and frustrations in life. I just hope it keeps getting better. A few years ago, I would not have thought of writing a track like "Basso Continuo" or "Hangin Round Aceldama". Far too light and vaginal, but now I think that, whatever comes out is what needed to come out. So if it is an extension of myself, and I must be true to myself, then I will accept any change that comes about.
But I will try to steer the ship more towards the Lands Of Badassery.
Thanks for the feedback, Aaron. I'll work with the kick tonight. I got a lot of high-end in the cymbals too that I need to deal with.
Wow, man. Right out of the gate this one is different than your usual approach. I like it.
I'll be back to do a proper review later. I want to be able to leave an accurate one. Can't do that when getting ready for the ol' boneyard shift, ya know?
Hey, I never mind the quick drop-ins. I'm fixing stuff in this track tonight so there will be a better version up soon. Hope you kicked the flu,... I'll be wearing my particle-mask next time.
This is a sweet track. I really enjoyed the minimalist, yet very effective approach. I've always admired people who can take so few elements and make something that not only holds your interest for the duration, but even holds your mood as well.
The instrumental choices were spot on. The contrasting horn stabs over the ethereal melodies really shaped the dynamics well.
Overall, I'd say excellent work. Kudos
Wow, man. This IS funky! It's definitely not your style, and it's a good tribute to MrFunktastic. The whole time I listened I wondered if you were going to toss in some full on FreeRadical style. But you didn't. Just elements of your own style. I really liked this one, and the way you did it.
It's good to see that at least someone's already got a track in the game. Hopefully more will, too. This is exactly what that "game" is supposed to be.
Thanks V.
I just took one of MR F's loops and built around it. I would have liked to have put some sort of funky solo over the top of it but alas i don't have any of those funky VST's that joe uses so it is what it is. I might try another one as it's fun to try and make stuff a little different. I just hope a few more people hop on "the game" (and i don't mean turn to prostitution)
Thanks for dropping by, listening and sharing your thoughts.
FR
It does kind of an Asian sounding vocal melody, even though it's in English. That alone makes it pretty unique. The layering and panning on the vocals are good. There's plenty of dynamics. Sounds good.
The kick is nice and full without cutting out anything else. The hats are clean with a nice sizzle but not too bright for the mix. I think the only problem I have with this, other than being too short, is that the snares are a little buried in the mix. You could probably stand to boost them a little. But, not by much. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Oh yes now I understand what the others mean with the japanese stuff, indeed I am kinda in love with oldskool JRPG game music, so I guess I kinda always put something in my songs that sounds like that a bit :)
yes the song is indeed short, I was trying to challenge myself into making a song as short as posible, but still being able to fit a lot in it, you know?
though when I listen back to it xD I kinda want it to be longer haha. oh well, next time I will make my song a bit longer.
I agree on the snares, I couldn't get them quite right with my current skills :(
This one actually sounds like APC and Tool on stage together. You need to add some digital-electro elements to get some Puscifer in there now. Maybe get Milla Jovovich to do a cameo or two. Then, the triad will be complete, and world dominance shall begin! Or, at least...dominance on this cup of coffee shall begin, anyhow.
I like your idea of bringing the bass back to the front. Maybe you could do something where you have a super low end crunchy, heavy-##### bass chugging up the back ground rhythm, with your trademark polished bass running whimsical melodies, and a basic guitar weaving in and out of the two, keeping them pleasantly tied together, and filling in the gaps.
Like others have said, it can use a little improvement. It's good, but I have confidence that you can make it better.
I think the main thing for me is bringing the snare levels up just a touch.
The drops are okay, but they kind of fizzle out. Maybe use some crash and impacts, or downrisers to really make them hit.
The basslines are good, but a sub bassline would add that full bottom end to it, making it a bigger, richer overall sound.
The background percussion bits are good. They help fill in the spaces well, and the reverb on them works well.
The emotion of the music fits the vocals well. I think maybe a touch of EQ on the vocals just to brighten them up a little.
The panning is good.
Like I said, this is good. Just a little bit of minor improvements and it could be a lot better. Of course, these are just my opinions, so take them for what they're worth.
This is a nice little groove. It definitely has potential to become something much larger. I'm excited to see what TG does with it.
Good work, man! Keep it up!
This is definitely a darker, surreal track. It's like the Devil rode into town with the circus and the main attraction is a nightmare made real. (Coming from me, this is a compliment!)
I listened to the original at the Soundcloud link you gave us. It's not bad at all. That one, and this one, could use a couple of minor improvements, but still, there's quality in them. You should post the original here as well, if nothing else, for a comparison. Who knows, maybe you'll get some good constructive feedback to help you learn.
I'll check out more of your work once the Holiday buzz settles down. It's an interesting sound you have.
As soon as I saw "Pump Da Vibe" I had to click play. I was not let down. This is a good remix. Your use of the vocal samples fit in well with what you've done here. You've made it your own without losing the sweet upbeat, and forward vibe of the original.
on A Quercus Among Acers by Evisma
on After the levee broke Zepp Tribute by topvega
Well, it looks like I arrived to the party just a little behind everyone else. Either way, I'm glad I found it!
I'm not exactly a Zeppelin fan. More of a Pink Floyd guy, myself. I am however a pretty big fan of the John Paul Jones and John Bonham rhythm section of Led Zeppelin. Bonham had such a loose, almost sloppy, but impeccable style, and Jones knew how to fill in the spaces to keep it pulled together. I've always felt like Page and Plant were doing their own thing in the band, while the Johns were busy being awesome. You've definitely channeled their rhythm on this track. The guitars aren't very Jimmy Page....but to me, that's a good thing. Honestly, what it sounds like to me is, The Johns on Drums and bass, early Gilmour on rhythm, and Billy Gibbons on lead. Damn...that would have been a sweet supergroup.
Generally, I agree with most of Statics reviews. Not this time. I don't think it's too long at all. This track is total jam band song, and that's what jam bands do. Jam. For long periods of time. When you find yourself grooving to good music, you don't want it to stop just about the time you're in full swing. For example...this song by Earthless. (link below) 21 minutes long and not once is it boring. I'd say you did a pretty good job of carrying this one for almost 7 minutes!
A few months ago I did a nod to Pink Floyd, (Red On The White) so I can totally relate to where you're coming from with wanting to do this track. I think you did a better job at just doing your own style based on their influence. Mine was a little more emulative, and I fear that it sounds like a ripoff. But, that's no matter, we're not talking about my track.
I like this one, and I added it to my fav file. Excellent work, as always. Here's the link to Earthelss- "Lost In The Cold Sun" I hope you like it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HITHygbE_BA
Take care.
V.
Thanks again.
tv
on A Quercus Among Acers by Evisma
on Breeze by Paulynomial
With that being said, excellent work on this. The production value is crystal. Your panning is spot on. Everything sits exactly where it should. It's a light and, dare I say, refreshing tune without going overboard. It's just a good solid track. You have every right to be pround of it.
Personally, I don't think it needs vocals. I think what you already have speaks for itself. Vocals would take away from the true heart of this song.
This is not my preferred genre, but I enjoyed it while I was here. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.
I really appreciate how you took your invaluable time to push some effort into the comment and notice the minute details I put in.
Also, after I'm done with the vocal version too, I'll make both the versions available for free(if the vocalists allows that, but surely my version). So you can have it your way.
A MASSIVE thank you form me. You really have no idea how much this means to me.
on Xyilent - Gaia by XyIlent
Generally, I do things dark, loud, and aggressive. So, when I hear other people do these chill out tunes, I really enjoy them. It's like taking a break from my own mind. This track provides an excellent backdrop for a temporary escape. To me, it has a very fluid, almost cool aquatic feel to it.
You said that you were thinking it's not finished. I agree with many of the others. There's really no need to do much else. I think the only idea I have, is to add forest noises. You know, Birds chirping, a stream, maybe an occasional buzz from a passing bee. But pan them all out to give them dimension.
I don't know. That may be a lame idea. Like I said, I usually do dark, loud and aggressive.
All in all, I like the track as it is. Excellent work.
Take care.
V.
The idea about the forest ambiance is cool, might use that actually. Wasn't going to add anything like that but now that i think of it, it could be quite cool... ill look into that.. thanks for the idea man! :D
"all in all, I like the track as it is"
yay :) lol im happy people seem to like this version.. it does have a few little quirks but ive fixed them in my working version (ill update soon)
Thanks V for the awesome feedback! :)
on 9000 Years Too Young by StaticNomad
on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
I like this one quite a bit. It sounds like something that could easily fit into "Adventure Time". Mainly because on the surface it's all cotton candy and pretty colors, but get in there a little and it's actually a well thought out, intricate, and complex piece. Just like how Adventure Time is a colorful kids show about a post apocalyptic world filled with a broad array of characters that tie into the underlining arc.
I like the way you incorperated the guitar in a way that you don't fully notice it's there, but would definitely notice if it weren't. I don't need to say anything about the mix/master. Your's always comes out top notch. I think the only thing that stood out to me was the dryness of the vocals. But that's just personal preference, not so much a critique.
So, yeah...I really enjoyed this one, and your perseverance paid off. Excellent work, as always, mister.
Take care.
V
on Haunted Sunshine by Evisma
So, this is a good tune. It seems to be more....complete. It's full, but not crowded. Everything sits where it should. It's got a good intro, body, and the outro is spot on. I think I only really have 1.5 complaints, and possible suggestions for them.
Domenico mentioned the missing low frequencies up until the :55 mark. I noticed that too. But when I listened to it, my brain anticipated the low end to open up and impact at 0:24. Like, big-#####, bass-y kick. I think if you boost the low end on your percussion, it would solve it.
The other thing, also with the drums, (which is the .5 part of the 1.5 complaint). To me, the tom work at 2:26-2:58 might be a bit too rapid for the winding down of the tune.
Now, as far as the guit-fiddlin' and the thunder-pluckin'. I have NO complaints. I've always loved the way you're able to pull such emotion out of an instrument that's typically just used for rhythm. Not a lot of people do that.
The tune itself is a good one. It's a consistent melody, that flows so nicely it made me forget I wasn't in an old Rolls taking a drive in the English countryside. That may sound like a sarcastic jab, but really, man. This is a pleasant piece that was super easy to enjoy.
Til next time...
Latergator
Aaron.
"What's a happnin' dewd?"
You'll love this. Today was my wife's birthday,... and the water pump went out on my little Chevy S-10. Found out on the way to dinner. Aahh.... to paraphrase George Clooney in From Dusk Till Dawn, "Life loves to stick it in and break it off sometimes." I think he's talking about Harvey Keitel losing his wife, and calls them "Acts of god".
"my brain anticipated the low end to open up and impact at 0:24. Like, big-#####, bass-y kick"
I'm trying to get used to my new headphones, which have a much better low end response. I full agree that the bass is weak and unfittingly soft there. I intended to replace the bass guitar track as it is the scratch track. A rough-ish go-through of a riff so I won't forget it,... never got replaced. It's on my list of fixes. I shall try the kick first.
I will also work with the toms and try to get a more winding down feel. That's the kind of thing I would not have heard, so thank you.
Hope all is well with the V man and his clan! (not the Klan)
Evan
on The Farcical Aquatic Ceremony by Evisma
on Zoe Youre Going To Brazil by Musicante
You guys have done a great job, here.
Take care.
V.
We're really happy you like our music and will continue to listen. Our music is our passion and it's always nice to be appreciated. Many thanks!
Ciao,
M.
on 03Enter Code F U N K ft Venuslove and MrFunktastic by Eighteen
The quality of the mix makes it clear you put in some work on this badboy. It definitely paid off.
Excellent work, man.
Take care.
V.
Yeah I used to make odd kinda songs like this, but
titles for example from a year back and stuff.. to be honest, sounded terrible in terms of production quality,
for example I put the bass on stereo xD and then put delays over it too, it pushed everything away, I had no idea xD
I am glad with what I have achieved with this song
And I'm even more glad that u like it :D
Tnxx
~Eighteen
on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
I'm really digging the hell out of this one. It's got a good strong energy to it. There's a lot happening, but it's never crowded. The Marimbas and the fiddles totally work.
You know what this is? This is what "rockin' country" would be if they actually had the rockin' balls they claim to have. It's almost borderline rock-a-billy. Which, honestly, there just isn't enough of on the ol' Looperman. Now that I think of it, I have never heard rock-a-billy on here. Hmm. Time for some electro-valve-a-billy.
No. No it isn't. It is not time for electro-valve-a-billy. That's a terrible idea. Stop it.
I think the only critique I have, and it's mostly just personal preference more than anything, is that the kicks stood out just a little more.
Overall, I thoroughly like this one. It's still exudes your trademark sound, but it's in a completely different arena than a good portion of your other songs.
Here, let me Lysol the place before I go.
Take care, man.
Aaron.
Rock-a-billy? I guess the verse parts do seem like they could be taken in that direction, but I had no intention of doing that.
I was thinking recently of doing other genres like country and hip-hop, just to see if I even know enough about each to attempt it.
I decided not to. I'm not that bored,... yet.
I would like to do a whole track just piano, so I can get better at writing piano parts that sound natural and more like a real piano piece.
"It's still exudes your trademark sound, but it's in a completely different arena than a good portion of your other songs."
That is what I'm going for anymore. I've found my sound, it's keeping it fresh and not repeating myself, while not abandoning anything as well.
I figure, like most other heavy music, that my music will get less heavy over time. Less anger and frustrations in life. I just hope it keeps getting better. A few years ago, I would not have thought of writing a track like "Basso Continuo" or "Hangin Round Aceldama". Far too light and vaginal, but now I think that, whatever comes out is what needed to come out. So if it is an extension of myself, and I must be true to myself, then I will accept any change that comes about.
But I will try to steer the ship more towards the Lands Of Badassery.
Thanks for the feedback, Aaron. I'll work with the kick tonight. I got a lot of high-end in the cymbals too that I need to deal with.
Take care.
Evan
on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
I'll be back to do a proper review later. I want to be able to leave an accurate one. Can't do that when getting ready for the ol' boneyard shift, ya know?
Take care, mister.
Aaron.
Evan
on The Last Stand by GalanticMusic
The instrumental choices were spot on. The contrasting horn stabs over the ethereal melodies really shaped the dynamics well.
Overall, I'd say excellent work. Kudos
Take care. V.
on Mr Funk by FreeRadical
It's good to see that at least someone's already got a track in the game. Hopefully more will, too. This is exactly what that "game" is supposed to be.
Take care.
V.
I just took one of MR F's loops and built around it. I would have liked to have put some sort of funky solo over the top of it but alas i don't have any of those funky VST's that joe uses so it is what it is. I might try another one as it's fun to try and make stuff a little different. I just hope a few more people hop on "the game" (and i don't mean turn to prostitution)
Thanks for dropping by, listening and sharing your thoughts.
FR
on 02 On n On by Eighteen
It does kind of an Asian sounding vocal melody, even though it's in English. That alone makes it pretty unique. The layering and panning on the vocals are good. There's plenty of dynamics. Sounds good.
The kick is nice and full without cutting out anything else. The hats are clean with a nice sizzle but not too bright for the mix. I think the only problem I have with this, other than being too short, is that the snares are a little buried in the mix. You could probably stand to boost them a little. But, not by much. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Take care.
V.
yes the song is indeed short, I was trying to challenge myself into making a song as short as posible, but still being able to fit a lot in it, you know?
though when I listen back to it xD I kinda want it to be longer haha. oh well, next time I will make my song a bit longer.
I agree on the snares, I couldn't get them quite right with my current skills :(
Anyhoo thanks for ur kind words :D cheers!
~Eighteen
on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
on Vespertide by Evisma
This one actually sounds like APC and Tool on stage together. You need to add some digital-electro elements to get some Puscifer in there now. Maybe get Milla Jovovich to do a cameo or two. Then, the triad will be complete, and world dominance shall begin! Or, at least...dominance on this cup of coffee shall begin, anyhow.
I like your idea of bringing the bass back to the front. Maybe you could do something where you have a super low end crunchy, heavy-##### bass chugging up the back ground rhythm, with your trademark polished bass running whimsical melodies, and a basic guitar weaving in and out of the two, keeping them pleasantly tied together, and filling in the gaps.
Just a thought.
Laters, mang.
Aaron
on Endless by Riest
Your levels are good, your mix is clean. It is a nice chill piece. Good work.
Take Care.
V
-Riest
on I Dont Despise -Derelict Pumping Station Remix by D3RELICT
I think the main thing for me is bringing the snare levels up just a touch.
The drops are okay, but they kind of fizzle out. Maybe use some crash and impacts, or downrisers to really make them hit.
The basslines are good, but a sub bassline would add that full bottom end to it, making it a bigger, richer overall sound.
The background percussion bits are good. They help fill in the spaces well, and the reverb on them works well.
The emotion of the music fits the vocals well. I think maybe a touch of EQ on the vocals just to brighten them up a little.
The panning is good.
Like I said, this is good. Just a little bit of minor improvements and it could be a lot better. Of course, these are just my opinions, so take them for what they're worth.
Take care.
V.
on Ghosts Of Glencloy by Orlando51
Again, excellent work!
Take care.
V.
With appreciation____Orlando
on no more tears instrumental by larrybarrow31
Good work, man! Keep it up!
Take care.
V.
on Stringor by Byleth
I listened to the original at the Soundcloud link you gave us. It's not bad at all. That one, and this one, could use a couple of minor improvements, but still, there's quality in them. You should post the original here as well, if nothing else, for a comparison. Who knows, maybe you'll get some good constructive feedback to help you learn.
I'll check out more of your work once the Holiday buzz settles down. It's an interesting sound you have.
Take care, and happy holidays.
V.
Maybe maybe maybe I will post Stringer in looperman but this will not be featured. Still could hurt my ego
let me guide you for my best tune I did and im not too shy to invite you to lisent it and maybe write me a feedback
Kings, Tournament, Ginette, Alternative Waves, TCk II(aka Static Waves).
And if you have some nerve: Maximum Overtime and Ultima.
sorry for this late comment and Happy Holidays for you
P.s its atmost all my track in looperman lol
on DJ The Observer FT MORPHEUSD FT WedLocK -PumP That by djtheobserver01
Nice work.
Take care.
V.
thanks for listening and your comment!
glad you liked it !
i was suprised too , how the track builds up ..
Tnx for stop by and see you arround !
greetz
on Loops And Stuff by FreeRadical