Sounds very well done but I agree with the other guy about editing some of this. There's ;loads of free software as well as paid for stuff that you can get the hang of fairly quickly.
It's people like you who put me off! Pack my bags and give it up.
This is brilliant and should be on vinyl somewhere with a great rattle snake cover.
Wow is my best critical comment.
Love the picture Spiv!
That is some dedication.
Clever too.
I really wouldn't know where to start with building my own gear like that!
Soon as I looked at the pic and read some of your to me meaningless technical talk about your machinery I thought ... you need to team up with the cigar box swamp music man.
Some of his guitar work on here and pictures of your stuff and you could end up on the cover of the Rolling Stone!
Hey buddy! This is a nice comment to read! Like I mentioned to SupaFreakshow, that picture is really just the "tip of the iceberg," and does not show most of my bent and modified gear, MIDI gear, rack gear, electronics lab, and really most of my instruments... which could not be captured in a single photograph. Been building stuff for about fifteen years now. Phatkatz (The one building all the CBG stuff lately) has said that I was one of the inspirations to get into the work he is doing, most especially my "parallel killer" guitar which was built last year. We have spoke about a new collaboration, though my studio time has been rare in the past month or two. Rolling Stone would be cool, though lately it seems more likely that I will end up on the side of a milk carton, having disappeared... or possibly pictured in the "most wanted." Thanks for taking a listen, and leaving a comment! Have a good day!
Grandparents are to be cherished ... I know because I am one ... a much loved one and it's wonderful!
Your track is a bit samey samey from beginning to end.
A little snare and high hat here and there maybe. A little burst of synth and base maybe.
Definitely some vocals.
Some vocals would lift this.
If I'd had a day like that someone would have been shot!
Not my style at all but .... I liked it ... a lot!
That is real banging madness.
That's I'm coming.
That's I want revenge!
Video game?
I agree about lengthening the intro.
Heck of a mix of bands in this one Joe.
I can even hear Jethro Tull and King Crimson!
Very late seventies early eighties dominate though and your quality voice never lets down an Englishman. Your voice is pure German synthrock.
Very well played and produced.
What a nice comment my dear Mr Silverman.
Good to know that i done it well in your eyes.
And you are right, i tried to sound as much as (for me)possible like a 80's synthrock(pop) singer ....
Didn't had Jethro Tull in mind at making but after you named him i got what you mean.
Thanks a lot for your friendly words
I'm going to download this one for my car driving cd's.
Where I live we have a four lane highway that skims the ocean in several places goes through mountain tunnels even under the sea at one point. The scenery is ocean forests hills mountains and it's my favourite road journey which I get to do often at day and night and I have to do it fast.
This is ideal, for those journeys.
Very professional finish to this Mud.
Thanks for the comment. I was on holidays so read your comment now. I love the scenery you describe. All the natures greatest in one drive :p. Hopefully it didnt get boring after a few listens. Still learning to get mixing right but it slowly gets better.
Repeating something so many times is usually too many times but ... we have to repeat breathing all the time or die.
This little piece has a life because of that repeated breathing. It's not relentless but necessary. There is life in the twelfth dimension. A life form that just is. It might never do anything but live. It doesn't sound malevolent in any way but neither does it sound generous.
Maybe the dimension itself is the life ... is a living force.
See what you've done to my head?
I like it when art of any kind upsets me lifts me confuses me makes me feel makes me wonder other wise it's not art for me.
Enjoyed very much thank you for sharing.
Thanks for your great comments...Sometimes life is just a journey into the unknown that keeps on Repeating itself..
That's what I think the 12th Dimension is...
I'd cut that fade out at the end and go for it ending on that beat.
That way this is powerful from beginning to end.
That weedy weak trickle at the end doesn't belong in such a thumping piece.
Go out with a bang.
Haha! No longest delay tail fade out of all time?! Yeah, that's the first thing to go. It was annoying just trying to find the end of it so I could render while I'm thinking "Oh, this is going to go over like a ##### in church." Thanks for both of your comments. This was a very rough draft that I put out just to see if I could get a vocalist' attention. Will probably have to put some more work into though.
Power play!
Party in town tonight.
This sounds very very professionally put together.
I go with lyrics idea too.
Female raw randy and ready kinda sound.
This is a portal back to seventies for me ... I have long hair again!!
I have hair!!
Very nice guitar work.
Very nicely put together.
Lots of variation throughout this and it works.
Very light and airy sounding.
I know nothing of your language but it didn't stop me enjoying it .... maybe even helped who knows.
Sounds very well put together.
Takes me out into the sunshine.
Great voice.
Wow this is energetic!
Lot of energy coming dow the line here!
Very well put together.
Theres so much going on but you managed to get it all in place. I'll be coming back to this lunacy for sure!
I'm a third of the way in and this is awesome!
Haunting spooky full of dread.
I'm about half way in now and that wobbly base sound against the guitar creates a fantastic environment of suspense. Theres also something very biker oriented in this.
I'm half expecting a Hells Angel to step out any second holding a head with a bit of spinal cord attached in one hand and a blood knife in the other ......
6.18 and the anti hero has entered .... just ignore everything I've written because I've decided it's a load of bollox and not at all descriptive any longer of what's going on with this or with me.
I could actually have enjoyed this a bit longer. I know you're trying to shorten your pieces but this one .... which defies description could have kept me interested and contained a while longer.
This aint blues. This cannot to be put in a box.
This is sublime. Possibly my favourite from you.
I think you last favourite of mine was one called Great Leap Backwards though I've removed that from the site so you won't be able to go back and compare it with this one.
Yes, a nice, warm slightly wobbly bass that I like so much I've used in at least 20 tracks, though they're mostly quite different tracks.
No, this doesn't make me think of bikers at all. A bit spooky, I guess, but I find it more beautiful than being "full of dread". I guess that's the Eastern stuff creating that vibe for you.
Yes, I agonised over whether to make it go on for a couple of minutes more and I still could, fairly easily. But I am continually trying not to go over 10 mins unless I really, really have to.
"This aint blues."
If you remove the bluesy guitar, I agree. I wouldn't know what to call it then, apart from atmospheric groove chillout, I guess. But as there's quite a lot of that guitar playing, blues is the closest rough genre I can think (as a single genre label).
Thoroughly enjoyed this.
Well put together.
Great mood great space and place to be.
What defines hip hop I have no idea but I seem to be enjoying more and more of it.
This is one of those tracks for me to be driving along to at night.
Really appreciate your comment! What defines hip hop is more than just 1 sentence... but for me, it is a free use of mind and intelect.. Thank you again silverman! Peace
Wow loving this. Love that very smooth change of gear at around 1.30 where we move into power mode overdrive or summat!
I hope this doesn't offend you in anyway but I was transported back to the seventies for a moment there.
Not sure but I might have been having a slight Jefferson Air plane moment or two there.
You have a great voice for this.
You've slotted your voice into this instrumental excellently.
So I'm ten years late but this sounds great. Doesn't sound anything like the sea I live near. More like the sea of tranquillity and that's out there somewhere .... somewhere that way >>>>>>>>>>
First impression within seconds was ... a bit odd weird a bit desperate a bit sad a bit rough and still my lasting impression and I love it.
The voice is a killer!
So much emotion painting the canvass. Good choice of loop/guitar too.
The kind of minimalism in the overall creation of this helps the desperation.
The only suggestion I'm going to make is keep the emotion strong in your singing ... falling to your knees and sobbing screaming pleading if necessary.
Had to fave this one.
All poower to you in the future.
You pretty much summed up the emotions I was feeling at the time of singing this, but then I expect no less of an observation from a fellow Tom Waits fan :)
Thanks very much for stopping by to listen and comment, much appreciated.
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on PUNK song no vocals by Deathbot
Give us more more more.
on Gone- Instrumental - Looking for Collab Singer by ajones2814
on El Muerto by Neomorpheus
This is brilliant and should be on vinyl somewhere with a great rattle snake cover.
Wow is my best critical comment.
Vinyl?
Haha, I return the joke! Pantera beat me to the rattlesnake cover though.
Hey man, I humbly accept all wows!
Thanks heaps for the comment.
on NextStep 13 by Spivkurl
That is some dedication.
Clever too.
I really wouldn't know where to start with building my own gear like that!
Soon as I looked at the pic and read some of your to me meaningless technical talk about your machinery I thought ... you need to team up with the cigar box swamp music man.
Some of his guitar work on here and pictures of your stuff and you could end up on the cover of the Rolling Stone!
on Dedicated 2 My Grind by TayaliJeffrey
Your track is a bit samey samey from beginning to end.
A little snare and high hat here and there maybe. A little burst of synth and base maybe.
Definitely some vocals.
Some vocals would lift this.
later on will add vocals
on Bloody Mary by SupaFreakshow
Not my style at all but .... I liked it ... a lot!
That is real banging madness.
That's I'm coming.
That's I want revenge!
Video game?
I agree about lengthening the intro.
on Jeden Tag - Power Version 2016 by joecramer
I can even hear Jethro Tull and King Crimson!
Very late seventies early eighties dominate though and your quality voice never lets down an Englishman. Your voice is pure German synthrock.
Very well played and produced.
Good to know that i done it well in your eyes.
And you are right, i tried to sound as much as (for me)possible like a 80's synthrock(pop) singer ....
Didn't had Jethro Tull in mind at making but after you named him i got what you mean.
Thanks a lot for your friendly words
stay tuned
joe
on Windrunner by mudhoen
Where I live we have a four lane highway that skims the ocean in several places goes through mountain tunnels even under the sea at one point. The scenery is ocean forests hills mountains and it's my favourite road journey which I get to do often at day and night and I have to do it fast.
This is ideal, for those journeys.
Very professional finish to this Mud.
on Ghostly Chills by ilikeham
on 12th Dimension by HunterFoxzAC
This little piece has a life because of that repeated breathing. It's not relentless but necessary. There is life in the twelfth dimension. A life form that just is. It might never do anything but live. It doesn't sound malevolent in any way but neither does it sound generous.
Maybe the dimension itself is the life ... is a living force.
See what you've done to my head?
I like it when art of any kind upsets me lifts me confuses me makes me feel makes me wonder other wise it's not art for me.
Enjoyed very much thank you for sharing.
Thanks for your great comments...Sometimes life is just a journey into the unknown that keeps on Repeating itself..
That's what I think the 12th Dimension is...
HunterFoxzAc..
on All Funked Up by SupaFreakshow
That way this is powerful from beginning to end.
That weedy weak trickle at the end doesn't belong in such a thumping piece.
Go out with a bang.
on All Funked Up by SupaFreakshow
Party in town tonight.
This sounds very very professionally put together.
I go with lyrics idea too.
Female raw randy and ready kinda sound.
on Choon Bi by Evisma
I have hair!!
Very nice guitar work.
Very nicely put together.
Lots of variation throughout this and it works.
on saha navavatu by clindsay
I know nothing of your language but it didn't stop me enjoying it .... maybe even helped who knows.
Sounds very well put together.
Takes me out into the sunshine.
Great voice.
on Terrorist by Tinka0
on Terrorist by Tinka0
Lot of energy coming dow the line here!
Very well put together.
Theres so much going on but you managed to get it all in place. I'll be coming back to this lunacy for sure!
I'm hoping to have it finished & crispy by next week.
Thanks for listening man, much appreciated.
on The Mythical Gates by StaticNomad
Haunting spooky full of dread.
I'm about half way in now and that wobbly base sound against the guitar creates a fantastic environment of suspense. Theres also something very biker oriented in this.
I'm half expecting a Hells Angel to step out any second holding a head with a bit of spinal cord attached in one hand and a blood knife in the other ......
6.18 and the anti hero has entered .... just ignore everything I've written because I've decided it's a load of bollox and not at all descriptive any longer of what's going on with this or with me.
I could actually have enjoyed this a bit longer. I know you're trying to shorten your pieces but this one .... which defies description could have kept me interested and contained a while longer.
This aint blues. This cannot to be put in a box.
This is sublime. Possibly my favourite from you.
I think you last favourite of mine was one called Great Leap Backwards though I've removed that from the site so you won't be able to go back and compare it with this one.
Yes, a nice, warm slightly wobbly bass that I like so much I've used in at least 20 tracks, though they're mostly quite different tracks.
No, this doesn't make me think of bikers at all. A bit spooky, I guess, but I find it more beautiful than being "full of dread". I guess that's the Eastern stuff creating that vibe for you.
Yes, I agonised over whether to make it go on for a couple of minutes more and I still could, fairly easily. But I am continually trying not to go over 10 mins unless I really, really have to.
"This aint blues."
If you remove the bluesy guitar, I agree. I wouldn't know what to call it then, apart from atmospheric groove chillout, I guess. But as there's quite a lot of that guitar playing, blues is the closest rough genre I can think (as a single genre label).
Thanks again for the feedback.
on Borat by Bindanox
Great little piece.
Is it okay for granddads to dance because I did?
Nice change and well done.
It's important to have fun my friend.
I'm proud of this track i have to confess,it's silly but catchy.
Thank you for taking the time.
ps-grandads rule so...
Nelson
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on Wise11 - Right Ways by 1Phantom1
Well put together.
Great mood great space and place to be.
What defines hip hop I have no idea but I seem to be enjoying more and more of it.
This is one of those tracks for me to be driving along to at night.
on The End Is The Beginning collaboration with Evisma by JuxtaMusic
I hope this doesn't offend you in anyway but I was transported back to the seventies for a moment there.
Not sure but I might have been having a slight Jefferson Air plane moment or two there.
You have a great voice for this.
You've slotted your voice into this instrumental excellently.
on Acid De La Playa by SerialChiller
on Tumulus by Denyjanuary ft mildperil by T0mmyy
The voice is a killer!
So much emotion painting the canvass. Good choice of loop/guitar too.
The kind of minimalism in the overall creation of this helps the desperation.
The only suggestion I'm going to make is keep the emotion strong in your singing ... falling to your knees and sobbing screaming pleading if necessary.
Had to fave this one.
All poower to you in the future.
Thanks very much for stopping by to listen and comment, much appreciated.