I'm on my third listen because I like this.
Is there a higher BPM sample you've put in on a slower BPM?
Something annoying me about this very enjoyable number.
1.2 seconds in awful sound!
On what is a great intro.
Although it's nothing remotely like a New Orleans funeral march it does put me in that place which is great.
1.18 there's that awful noise again!
It's not right doesn't belong or needs some compression.
I love the mood of this thing but there's something not quite right with the engineering production.
The vocoder sounds good but needs a bit of attention too.
There's a great mood and atmosphere to this but something needs cleaning up.
Not my jungle this but one criticism is the heart beat at the beginning ... I'd make that longer fading out and behind the piano. Sounds to abrupt just finishing like that. It's very well done very smooth and obviously way to short just being a snippet. Sounds cool though.
You have some great sounding tracks here and I see you have used Billy Dragon too ... same here on my black street blues track.
Keep at it because you have a very individual sound here and so well put together.
Just over half way through and I'm loving it!
Hang about ...... Sure enough from beginning to end had me by the balls.
I don't know what this is where it belongs but it's creepy as hell it's on the edge.
Put together extremely well I can't fault it.
My only criticism is it could have held me longer.
More please.
I'm not to familiar with the original so it's hard to comment. I've heard the lyrics for sure.I'd like to ask a couple of questions.
What exactly have you added taken away?
How do you do it not having the original individual tracks?
Where do you stand with the copyright situation?
Thanks for the comment,
What exactly have you added taken away?
The R&B singers are doing a cover of the song, it is not the original vocals. Also the structure and beat is different. The synth based drop is not in the original track, that is something I added. Also there is an added string and piano to accompany the melody.
How do you do it not having the original individual tracks?
As previously stated the vocals of the r&b singers are sampled from an acoustic video they did. The other vocals, Lukas', are artificially isolated from the original track so the original track cannot be heard, everything else is fabricated from other methods.
Where do you stand with the copyright situation?
As far as copyrights go I do not have permission for commercial use. I do not plan on doing anything commercial with this, just some casual work I do for my own personal gain and experience.
Sounds very well done but I agree with the other guy about editing some of this. There's ;loads of free software as well as paid for stuff that you can get the hang of fairly quickly.
It's people like you who put me off! Pack my bags and give it up.
This is brilliant and should be on vinyl somewhere with a great rattle snake cover.
Wow is my best critical comment.
Love the picture Spiv!
That is some dedication.
Clever too.
I really wouldn't know where to start with building my own gear like that!
Soon as I looked at the pic and read some of your to me meaningless technical talk about your machinery I thought ... you need to team up with the cigar box swamp music man.
Some of his guitar work on here and pictures of your stuff and you could end up on the cover of the Rolling Stone!
Hey buddy! This is a nice comment to read! Like I mentioned to SupaFreakshow, that picture is really just the "tip of the iceberg," and does not show most of my bent and modified gear, MIDI gear, rack gear, electronics lab, and really most of my instruments... which could not be captured in a single photograph. Been building stuff for about fifteen years now. Phatkatz (The one building all the CBG stuff lately) has said that I was one of the inspirations to get into the work he is doing, most especially my "parallel killer" guitar which was built last year. We have spoke about a new collaboration, though my studio time has been rare in the past month or two. Rolling Stone would be cool, though lately it seems more likely that I will end up on the side of a milk carton, having disappeared... or possibly pictured in the "most wanted." Thanks for taking a listen, and leaving a comment! Have a good day!
Grandparents are to be cherished ... I know because I am one ... a much loved one and it's wonderful!
Your track is a bit samey samey from beginning to end.
A little snare and high hat here and there maybe. A little burst of synth and base maybe.
Definitely some vocals.
Some vocals would lift this.
If I'd had a day like that someone would have been shot!
Not my style at all but .... I liked it ... a lot!
That is real banging madness.
That's I'm coming.
That's I want revenge!
Video game?
I agree about lengthening the intro.
Heck of a mix of bands in this one Joe.
I can even hear Jethro Tull and King Crimson!
Very late seventies early eighties dominate though and your quality voice never lets down an Englishman. Your voice is pure German synthrock.
Very well played and produced.
What a nice comment my dear Mr Silverman.
Good to know that i done it well in your eyes.
And you are right, i tried to sound as much as (for me)possible like a 80's synthrock(pop) singer ....
Didn't had Jethro Tull in mind at making but after you named him i got what you mean.
Thanks a lot for your friendly words
I'm going to download this one for my car driving cd's.
Where I live we have a four lane highway that skims the ocean in several places goes through mountain tunnels even under the sea at one point. The scenery is ocean forests hills mountains and it's my favourite road journey which I get to do often at day and night and I have to do it fast.
This is ideal, for those journeys.
Very professional finish to this Mud.
Thanks for the comment. I was on holidays so read your comment now. I love the scenery you describe. All the natures greatest in one drive :p. Hopefully it didnt get boring after a few listens. Still learning to get mixing right but it slowly gets better.
Repeating something so many times is usually too many times but ... we have to repeat breathing all the time or die.
This little piece has a life because of that repeated breathing. It's not relentless but necessary. There is life in the twelfth dimension. A life form that just is. It might never do anything but live. It doesn't sound malevolent in any way but neither does it sound generous.
Maybe the dimension itself is the life ... is a living force.
See what you've done to my head?
I like it when art of any kind upsets me lifts me confuses me makes me feel makes me wonder other wise it's not art for me.
Enjoyed very much thank you for sharing.
Thanks for your great comments...Sometimes life is just a journey into the unknown that keeps on Repeating itself..
That's what I think the 12th Dimension is...
I'd cut that fade out at the end and go for it ending on that beat.
That way this is powerful from beginning to end.
That weedy weak trickle at the end doesn't belong in such a thumping piece.
Go out with a bang.
Haha! No longest delay tail fade out of all time?! Yeah, that's the first thing to go. It was annoying just trying to find the end of it so I could render while I'm thinking "Oh, this is going to go over like a whore in church." Thanks for both of your comments. This was a very rough draft that I put out just to see if I could get a vocalist' attention. Will probably have to put some more work into though.
Power play!
Party in town tonight.
This sounds very very professionally put together.
I go with lyrics idea too.
Female raw randy and ready kinda sound.
This is a portal back to seventies for me ... I have long hair again!!
I have hair!!
Very nice guitar work.
Very nicely put together.
Lots of variation throughout this and it works.
Very light and airy sounding.
I know nothing of your language but it didn't stop me enjoying it .... maybe even helped who knows.
Sounds very well put together.
Takes me out into the sunshine.
Great voice.
Wow this is energetic!
Lot of energy coming dow the line here!
Very well put together.
Theres so much going on but you managed to get it all in place. I'll be coming back to this lunacy for sure!
on Dont Lie Ft Xsition by ExOblivione12
Is there a higher BPM sample you've put in on a slower BPM?
Something annoying me about this very enjoyable number.
on Dont Lie Ft Xsition by ExOblivione12
on Dont Lie Ft Xsition by ExOblivione12
On what is a great intro.
Although it's nothing remotely like a New Orleans funeral march it does put me in that place which is great.
1.18 there's that awful noise again!
It's not right doesn't belong or needs some compression.
I love the mood of this thing but there's something not quite right with the engineering production.
The vocoder sounds good but needs a bit of attention too.
There's a great mood and atmosphere to this but something needs cleaning up.
on Billion - When Im Gone by BillionaireExclusive
on Turned by swindla007
The word clever kept popping up in my head.
I'll be listening to that again and possibly again so in the faves it has to go.
on DMNSound - Your Mine by hcmf
Keep at it because you have a very individual sound here and so well put together.
on DMNSound - Madness by hcmf
Hang about ...... Sure enough from beginning to end had me by the balls.
I don't know what this is where it belongs but it's creepy as hell it's on the edge.
Put together extremely well I can't fault it.
My only criticism is it could have held me longer.
More please.
I wanted to do more but I had no time and I decided to end this way.
Maybe someday I'll do an extended version.
on 7 Years Piece by Piece Mashup Remix by 7venth12
What exactly have you added taken away?
How do you do it not having the original individual tracks?
Where do you stand with the copyright situation?
What exactly have you added taken away?
The R&B singers are doing a cover of the song, it is not the original vocals. Also the structure and beat is different. The synth based drop is not in the original track, that is something I added. Also there is an added string and piano to accompany the melody.
How do you do it not having the original individual tracks?
As previously stated the vocals of the r&b singers are sampled from an acoustic video they did. The other vocals, Lukas', are artificially isolated from the original track so the original track cannot be heard, everything else is fabricated from other methods.
Where do you stand with the copyright situation?
As far as copyrights go I do not have permission for commercial use. I do not plan on doing anything commercial with this, just some casual work I do for my own personal gain and experience.
I hope this answers your questions!
-7venthSense
on T-Law Feat Billion - Special by TLaw
on PUNK song no vocals by Deathbot
Give us more more more.
on Gone- Instrumental - Looking for Collab Singer by ajones2814
on El Muerto by Neomorpheus
This is brilliant and should be on vinyl somewhere with a great rattle snake cover.
Wow is my best critical comment.
Vinyl?
Haha, I return the joke! Pantera beat me to the rattlesnake cover though.
Hey man, I humbly accept all wows!
Thanks heaps for the comment.
on NextStep 13 by Spivkurl
That is some dedication.
Clever too.
I really wouldn't know where to start with building my own gear like that!
Soon as I looked at the pic and read some of your to me meaningless technical talk about your machinery I thought ... you need to team up with the cigar box swamp music man.
Some of his guitar work on here and pictures of your stuff and you could end up on the cover of the Rolling Stone!
on Dedicated 2 My Grind by TayaliJeffrey
Your track is a bit samey samey from beginning to end.
A little snare and high hat here and there maybe. A little burst of synth and base maybe.
Definitely some vocals.
Some vocals would lift this.
later on will add vocals
on Bloody Mary by SupaFreakshow
Not my style at all but .... I liked it ... a lot!
That is real banging madness.
That's I'm coming.
That's I want revenge!
Video game?
I agree about lengthening the intro.
on Jeden Tag - Power Version 2016 by joecramer
I can even hear Jethro Tull and King Crimson!
Very late seventies early eighties dominate though and your quality voice never lets down an Englishman. Your voice is pure German synthrock.
Very well played and produced.
Good to know that i done it well in your eyes.
And you are right, i tried to sound as much as (for me)possible like a 80's synthrock(pop) singer ....
Didn't had Jethro Tull in mind at making but after you named him i got what you mean.
Thanks a lot for your friendly words
stay tuned
joe
on Windrunner by mudhoen
Where I live we have a four lane highway that skims the ocean in several places goes through mountain tunnels even under the sea at one point. The scenery is ocean forests hills mountains and it's my favourite road journey which I get to do often at day and night and I have to do it fast.
This is ideal, for those journeys.
Very professional finish to this Mud.
on Ghostly Chills by ilikeham
on 12th Dimension by HunterFoxzAC
This little piece has a life because of that repeated breathing. It's not relentless but necessary. There is life in the twelfth dimension. A life form that just is. It might never do anything but live. It doesn't sound malevolent in any way but neither does it sound generous.
Maybe the dimension itself is the life ... is a living force.
See what you've done to my head?
I like it when art of any kind upsets me lifts me confuses me makes me feel makes me wonder other wise it's not art for me.
Enjoyed very much thank you for sharing.
Thanks for your great comments...Sometimes life is just a journey into the unknown that keeps on Repeating itself..
That's what I think the 12th Dimension is...
HunterFoxzAc..
on All Funked Up by SupaFreakshow
That way this is powerful from beginning to end.
That weedy weak trickle at the end doesn't belong in such a thumping piece.
Go out with a bang.
on All Funked Up by SupaFreakshow
Party in town tonight.
This sounds very very professionally put together.
I go with lyrics idea too.
Female raw randy and ready kinda sound.
on Choon Bi by Evisma
I have hair!!
Very nice guitar work.
Very nicely put together.
Lots of variation throughout this and it works.
on saha navavatu by clindsay
I know nothing of your language but it didn't stop me enjoying it .... maybe even helped who knows.
Sounds very well put together.
Takes me out into the sunshine.
Great voice.
on Terrorist by Tinka0
on Terrorist by Tinka0
Lot of energy coming dow the line here!
Very well put together.
Theres so much going on but you managed to get it all in place. I'll be coming back to this lunacy for sure!
I'm hoping to have it finished & crispy by next week.
Thanks for listening man, much appreciated.