##### Mary - SupaFreakshow

The Shift In Energy Between The Intro And Actual Song Really Gets This Beat Going. Releases A Strong, Aggressive Feeling. Extend The Flute Parts A Bit, Add Some Chop Ups Here And There & You'll Have A Masterpiece. Good Work!

- Billion

Also, If You Could Check Out My Track "When I'm Gone And Leace Some Feedback I'd Appreciate That

When the first note of the track is played one thinks that they are about to listen to an ChillOut Ethnic type of track,
Then BOOM..What you get is a really,very very, Good Drum & Bass Track. Enjoyed listening to it...

HunterFoxzAC..

I am with Metabolic on the breaks, especially the flute could be a tiny bit longer but I love this. Pure madness. Great work, if this is what you wrote then I hope you'll a lot more crazy days like these :)

If I'd had a day like that someone would have been shot!
Not my style at all but .... I liked it ... a lot!
That is real banging madness.
That's I'm coming.
That's I want revenge!
Video game?
I agree about lengthening the intro.

well,this is not a technical comment this is an emotional overview.,..

i can honestly say i've NEVER had a track make me wanna smash things, jump off the couch, throw my cat like a football, and drive my car on the highway REALLY REALLY fast in a high speed chase.....until now. you have pretty much turned me into a complete madman for the rest of the day...i thank you.
awesome....
i dont know if youll be able to top it but i'll keep listening just in case.
peace
Dj Swindla aka mike

Yo.

This is some pretty mental stuff. There's a clearly a massive stylistic jump from your gentle, sedate intro to the rapid craziness. But that intro flute needs to be longer eg twice or 4 times as long. That way, you'll have established that mood and then it'll be more shocking when you make the big leap into the new style. 1 sec of that flute isn't really long enough to establish the mood.

Then comes, tight, mental but well produced and controlled rapid pumping with fat bass. Reminds me a bit of punk, in some ways.

0:26 I like that weird lead and it has a tune you can kind of sing along to.

0:45 chord change rise is useful.

I think you could make more use of crash cymbals in this. They'd make things more exciting and more metal. There are hardly any! Otherwise, the drums are good.

1:38 you get the flute return just right. Same idea that doesn't work for the intro but does work here.

1:40 great, dynamic, vocal-like synth sound as everything crashes back in.

Sort that intro out (plus cymbals) and you'll have a cool, banging track.