Thanks. I may end up doing that. I was going to upload it as a loop, but discovered it didn't qualify as a loop and I don't have loop upload access yet. New here and still learning the guidelines.
Sorry to hear of your loss Mud.
I can empathise as I've lost them all over the last few years. Leaves me as the oldest male in my family now which I find a little odd.
I keep trying trance buit it has a habit of falling apart around my ears!
This sounds good to me for a comeback track.
I would go for a few louder bits here and there though.
All the best.
Thank you! The same is for me now as being the oldest male around in the family. It is definetly odd but thats life. Maybe there could be added somethings but wanted to keep it basic. I might change things in the future.
I pressed play and knew more or less there and then that I wasn't going to like this. The only thing that kept my interest was the Billy dragon sounding pella. Then it just suddenly blossomed and took me in! This is a great little track. Well put together great sound and excellent use of that short lyric.
billydragon1 by the way is a contributor to this place by way of tracks and pellas. I think you'll maybe like the quality of his voice and his meaningful lyrics.
Faved this one because it is so pleasant and has real commercial possibilities to my ears.
All the best with your stuff in the future.
I thoroughly enjoyed that and in fact will have to play it again.
It's raw dirty filthy ragged and atmospheric.
It's well put together.
Faved.
If you look on my profile you'll find my attempt at an industrial track I called ... The Factory.
The difference with my industrial effort was making a tune with just industrial sounds of tools and machines and trying to make them sound like there were synths guitars humans ... took me months! It was just as I was changing from Windows 98 to XP. Windows XP was a giant leap forward for home computer users. The stability seriously helped with my music making efforts.
This is a great sound great effort and I look forward to hearing more.
All power to you.
My wife isn't exactly a fan of this place but just arrived at my desk with a cuppa and said what's that you're listening to?
I had it on monitors and she absolutely loves it.
I think MG you should promote your country while promoting your music. A lot of people in the west don't give a damn about nuking such a desert dust hole. Seriously it's how the media depict Iran. I am forever showing people Google images of the streets of Tehran and the women and the snow capped mountains. All the best to you whatever you decide MG.
Streets of tehran ... Crowded city and so big . But I'm in neyshabur , the capital of culture and poetry in iran ... Right now , we have a heavy wind and rain in the summer !!!
Tom Waits and Keith Richards appeared in my minds eye!
Falling about trying to escape this madness because they couldn't follow it .... falling all over the place they were.
This is one weird piece.
This is another one I can feel physically.
Superb journey into the unknown for me.
Big wow factor with this one.
Unique.
Absolutely fantastic.
I don't listen to Tom Waits though I do love his song Heart Attack And Vine. That's brilliant.
Not sure why this makes you think of Keith Richards. Maybe it's the cello parts that sound like guitar playing?
"This is one weird piece."
Yeah, it's unusual but that's what I go for, along with melodic and grooving, epic and so on. And unique - that's always my aim. If I can't be the best or a virtuoso instrumentalist (I'm not), if I can at least make unique tracks, that means a lot.
"Superb journey into the unknown"
Yes, I think it's hard to know where the track is going.
I can't associate this with Ska at all Spiv.
Frantic track.
Very well put together.
This is a nervous breakdown!
This is madness!
This is assylum music and I'm loving it .....
Interesting comment. Like I've mentioned in other replies - I feel that if I were to replace the synths with a brass ensemble, and play the guitar (and possibly bass) myself, then it would sound very much in the ska style. Ska is such a variable genre though, so I have switched it to hardcore. Life, where I am at, is a nervous breakdown. I've never been to prison or an asylum, and I've never killed any one, so I suppose I can be proud... but for how long? Thank you for listening!
Thank you, Sliverman, for the review and the listen.In retrospect, I should have added another verse near the end. Maybe next time. Anyway, thanks, kind sir. Vic
This was entertaining which is the whole point.
Works great.
This sounds nothing like Frank Zappa.
Nothing remotely like Frank Zappa yet it reminded me of Frank Zappa!
Maybe I've had to much medication ....
I sometimes watch a kids thing called in the night garden with one of my grandchildren and the scenes from it came instantly to mind with this ... brilliant tv stuff. That is not a put down as some people seem to think when you put their music in the bracket of kids things ... some very very creative stuff going on there to capture those young minds .... and their grandpa.
Wow!
Incredible piece of jazz country rock eastern market trader busking!
I'm a bit lost for words.
There cannot be any definitive description for this.
The mood the taste the flavours and aromas this evokes are absolute magic with some kind of eastern promise in a very western setting.
This is one of them I'm blown away moments.
Got to have a commercial worth as well as being artistically top end.
Hey there Sman, thank you for the kind review mate, I particularly like the fact that you got my eastern, western empathy drift, so often these days (myself included) it's easy to get swept away by media driven political agendas and overlook the normal everyday citizens of eastern countries who just want to live and love life like we all do.
cheers mate much appreciated....Dave :)
I've been thinking of getting a violin or cello for some time to experiment with electronically.
You might have just convinced me to go for it.
Brilliant heavy heavy sound there.
I warn you now that bowing is extremely complicated and fraught with error and bad sounds. At least it is for me. And I've been playing stringed instruments for well over 20 years (2 months on the cello).
Yes, I like the heavy sound here and I think it's unusual. It's still a surprise to me that all that heavy riffage comes from a cello.
This is clever and creative stuff.
I get it!
My kids would love this.
When I say kids the oldest is forty odd youngest thirty odd.
Their teenage kids would like this too but guess what .... this old fart likes it too.
So well rapped out.
Do you really rap that long without breath or have you edited it to sound that way?
It's clever and clean editing if so.
Like the ending.
Very good stuff top notch.
What's the word now ... this is sick bro ... the dope.
Thanks! Yeah, it was fun to write but when it came time to rap it i ran out of breath initially. I basically took a big breath before each verse and went off of the momentum until the hook. Appreciate your comment!
Yes I get the cold and the white and the snow!
Your target of the game scene is spot on too.
I'm not a gamer but I have kids and grandkids who are and I can well hear this in that place.
I feel like I'm listening to the radio here.
Very nicely put together piece this and you've worked around or within that voice so nicely.
Very enjoyable from a listeners point of view and as someone who struggles everytime to get the production right it's very enjoyable hearing how this think gels together so well.
Spot on kiddo and here's to good health.
I too am suffering health problems which take me away from this place which I enjoy so much thanks to people like you.
thank you for the review and kind thoughts much appreciated matey, I head in next tues OZ time for a couple of ops in hospital, hoping then all things will be good, fingers crossed...peace mosaic...
Nice refreshing blast!
Your voice could fit in a lot of places but I think rock would be your natural home. Fantastic getting your daughter in there with you.
She sounds fantastic too.
I think you have a very emotive voice and cinematic seems a very good place for this.
I could easily be sitting in a cinema watching the first few minutes of a film and this is the opening soundtrack.
My only criticism is as mentioned by someone else ... to short. I could do a five or six minute listen on this easily.
on Toes in the Deep End 77bpm by SupaFreakshow
https://soundcloud.com/user-631409578/doublecut-beats-countless-days-ft-yb
on Toes in the Deep End 77bpm by SupaFreakshow
Why don't you build on it make a full on track?
on Voltage by mudhoen
I can empathise as I've lost them all over the last few years. Leaves me as the oldest male in my family now which I find a little odd.
I keep trying trance buit it has a habit of falling apart around my ears!
This sounds good to me for a comeback track.
I would go for a few louder bits here and there though.
All the best.
on Change by zacvoos
billydragon1 by the way is a contributor to this place by way of tracks and pellas. I think you'll maybe like the quality of his voice and his meaningful lyrics.
Faved this one because it is so pleasant and has real commercial possibilities to my ears.
All the best with your stuff in the future.
on Inside - Demo by JuxtaMusic
on Inside - Demo by JuxtaMusic
I'm going to put it back now I've heard yours though.
on Inside - Demo by JuxtaMusic
It's raw dirty filthy ragged and atmospheric.
It's well put together.
Faved.
If you look on my profile you'll find my attempt at an industrial track I called ... The Factory.
The difference with my industrial effort was making a tune with just industrial sounds of tools and machines and trying to make them sound like there were synths guitars humans ... took me months! It was just as I was changing from Windows 98 to XP. Windows XP was a giant leap forward for home computer users. The stability seriously helped with my music making efforts.
This is a great sound great effort and I look forward to hearing more.
All power to you.
on ThaSuspect Rundown Feat NFMaster by NFMaster
Thisd is almost 1970's sound.
Very nicely done.
Really enjoyed this.
I'm glad you like it:)
Peace
on No Love No Trust Feat Lily und Wolf by 7venth12
I had it on monitors and she absolutely loves it.
on No Love No Trust Feat Lily und Wolf by 7venth12
Very very nice.
This is so well put together.
Top notch sound and mood.
on Mercede by MGproduct
on Everything Where It Should Be by StaticNomad
Falling about trying to escape this madness because they couldn't follow it .... falling all over the place they were.
This is one weird piece.
This is another one I can feel physically.
Superb journey into the unknown for me.
Big wow factor with this one.
Unique.
Absolutely fantastic.
Not sure why this makes you think of Keith Richards. Maybe it's the cello parts that sound like guitar playing?
"This is one weird piece."
Yeah, it's unusual but that's what I go for, along with melodic and grooving, epic and so on. And unique - that's always my aim. If I can't be the best or a virtuoso instrumentalist (I'm not), if I can at least make unique tracks, that means a lot.
"Superb journey into the unknown"
Yes, I think it's hard to know where the track is going.
Good to hear you enjoyed it.
on Easy For Me by Spivkurl
Frantic track.
Very well put together.
This is a nervous breakdown!
This is madness!
This is assylum music and I'm loving it .....
on Mercede by MGproduct
A happy sunny good vibe feel.
on Kingsford Edge Will Do by vigwig
The whole thing has a great mood to it.
Very well put together.
on Funny how by Deathbot
Works great.
This sounds nothing like Frank Zappa.
Nothing remotely like Frank Zappa yet it reminded me of Frank Zappa!
Maybe I've had to much medication ....
on Still Alive by MGproduct
on Something You Said by Planetjazzbass
Incredible piece of jazz country rock eastern market trader busking!
I'm a bit lost for words.
There cannot be any definitive description for this.
The mood the taste the flavours and aromas this evokes are absolute magic with some kind of eastern promise in a very western setting.
This is one of them I'm blown away moments.
Got to have a commercial worth as well as being artistically top end.
cheers mate much appreciated....Dave :)
on Raster - Ace Smith Remix by acesmith
Very well put together I think and an enjoyable 5minutes.
on Nuance Is Futile by StaticNomad
You might have just convinced me to go for it.
Brilliant heavy heavy sound there.
I warn you now that bowing is extremely complicated and fraught with error and bad sounds. At least it is for me. And I've been playing stringed instruments for well over 20 years (2 months on the cello).
Yes, I like the heavy sound here and I think it's unusual. It's still a surprise to me that all that heavy riffage comes from a cello.
on Relentless by KnightHeir
I get it!
My kids would love this.
When I say kids the oldest is forty odd youngest thirty odd.
Their teenage kids would like this too but guess what .... this old fart likes it too.
So well rapped out.
Do you really rap that long without breath or have you edited it to sound that way?
It's clever and clean editing if so.
Like the ending.
Very good stuff top notch.
What's the word now ... this is sick bro ... the dope.
on Icy World by Byleth
Your target of the game scene is spot on too.
I'm not a gamer but I have kids and grandkids who are and I can well hear this in that place.
My mission is completed :p
also thanks for your kind words about the fact this track fit well for a video game.
Anyway best of fun with your future work :p
Peace.
on Cried A Million Tears by Mosaic
Very nicely put together piece this and you've worked around or within that voice so nicely.
Very enjoyable from a listeners point of view and as someone who struggles everytime to get the production right it's very enjoyable hearing how this think gels together so well.
Spot on kiddo and here's to good health.
I too am suffering health problems which take me away from this place which I enjoy so much thanks to people like you.
thank you for the review and kind thoughts much appreciated matey, I head in next tues OZ time for a couple of ops in hospital, hoping then all things will be good, fingers crossed...peace mosaic...
on Open your eyes from Run right past you by cyberbugBOB
Your voice could fit in a lot of places but I think rock would be your natural home. Fantastic getting your daughter in there with you.
She sounds fantastic too.
on Melancholy by denyjanuary ft mildperil by T0mmyy
I could easily be sitting in a cinema watching the first few minutes of a film and this is the opening soundtrack.
My only criticism is as mentioned by someone else ... to short. I could do a five or six minute listen on this easily.