ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic 27th Mar 2014 02:11 - 11 years ago

on Leaving The Shadow by MOONLYTE

Outstanding work EYEDYE. You have a nice quality to your voice. I think if you had an opportunity to sing this one in a studio you would be amazed at how good you would sound.

This one has huge potential, especially if you want to add instrumentation (strings, bass, guitar, and possibly some percussion). It has an epic feel to it as it stands, but a ton of potential as well if you want to take it to another level. Really sounds like something Coldplay would do (and I happen to really like Coldplay's music). Very nice job. I hope all is well.

Bear

MOONLYTE replied 27th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks! i had a really fun time doing time doing it, and would love to have it "Studiotized"

ShortBusMusic 6th Mar 2014 22:34 - 12 years ago

on U P S O L U T E L Y by GalanticMusic

Love the dynamics on this one....great transitions, mix is spot on as well. No critique here, just a great beat that leaves a lot of room for a vocalist to do their thing. Much respect my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 27th Feb 2014 18:38 - 12 years ago

on What am I to you featuring Pauline Wright by RichieWinn

Man Richie, you never ever disappoint....just stellar results time after time after time.

No critique here, just a big smile listening to real pros at work. You always set the bar so high....and set an example for the rest of us to try and emulate. Awesome track.

I hope the UK is treating you well.

Bear

RichieWinn replied 27th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Barry

Thanks for your very kind words. Always nice to have a good ear listen to my music. Thank you.

UK treating me well although in New Zealand visiting family at the moment. It's a tough life!! Back to UK middle of March and hopefully get some writing and recording done. Good to be back on the loop.

Richie

ShortBusMusic 24th Feb 2014 15:55 - 12 years ago

on Been Missing You - Featuring Patricia Edwards by ScottFranco

Well you two are in great form on this track. Great driving funk/blues/soul going on that wraps Patricia's voice like candy :) Nothing to critique here. Just keep cranking out the hits gents. I loved every minute of it. Hope all is well.

Bear

ScottFranco replied 24th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Thanks allot, Bear...You're too kind! Glad you like it and took the time to comment. It means allot to us.

Ciao,
Franco & Scott

ShortBusMusic 18th Feb 2014 17:58 - 12 years ago

on EXITUS by domr30

Bonjour DOMR. Chanson amusante. Il coule bien et le mélange semble assez bonne. Pas sûr de la dissonance de la protection, mais pour la plupart, il s'agit d'un effort solide. Bien fait.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 18th Feb 2014 17:52 - 12 years ago

on admiration of the nature by deciBel

I've always been a fan of the pan flute, and have listened to Zamfir for a long time. This song reminds me of some of his work. Beautifully arranged as always and such a joy to listen to Behnam. Like all of your work, this one is special indeed.

This went perfectly with my morning coffee. Thank you my friend for the peaceful interlude this morning. I hope all is well.

Bear

deciBel replied 19th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

! wonder to discover U haven'T check this one out earier Bear ! I thaughT U had listened this old trial ..anyway many thnx for attention & time Master ...& yes , there's a secundine naturam depth & dimension in sound of Native american & Afro & Zen flutes which sounds hypnotic for me ...this old trial of mine in Bb was my ever first collab in Vocal version feat Mariah Dawn .
& this has made it memorable for me Bear.glad if U've enjoyed iT ,& thnx for sharing your sense with me & us about it. all the best .___Behnam

ShortBusMusic 16th Feb 2014 16:36 - 12 years ago

on Precious Moments - Larry Wiggles aka Mark Jeffries by larrywiggles1

I have to agree with the others....this one definitely has "liquidity" to it, flows so nicely. Mix is really crisp as well. Great little track that's been produced nicely. Nothing to critique here, just a really enjoyable listen on a sunny Sunday morning. This song, plus my coffee, made my day start out just right. I hope all is well.

Bear

larrywiggles1 replied 16th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Bear,

Coffee and a sunny Sunday morning... a really nice combination and one we have been lacking over here for a while (the sun bit that is!!) As usual a real big thanks for listening and your very much valued comments, really glad you enjoyed it...hopefully as much as the coffee and sunshine!! a big thanks again Bear.

Very best wishes,

Mark/Larry!

ShortBusMusic 10th Feb 2014 16:57 - 12 years ago

on fairy tale by Prelude

It sounds like you are figuring out the usage of loops just fine :) But the real star of this show is your marvelous voice. You have some mad vocal talent and I look forward to more of your voice in the future. Thanks for sharing your talents with all of us. I hope you are feeling better.

Bear

Prelude replied 12th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

:)
oh yes I'm better .
i'm not a singer just sing what I hear in my head but promise to sing bette next time .
I'm a fan of opera and theatrical sound tracks
and composing a proper platfrom for that genre needs more knowledge and skills than mine .
I've just found many marvelous loops from you to create a classical composition.
I promise second will be better than this first attempt .
i am honoured to see your comment .
really appreciate your feedback and support.

ShortBusMusic 10th Feb 2014 16:52 - 12 years ago

on The Summer Of Minor Regrets by Orlando51

Just to echo the others, there is nothing to critique here...this one is ready for a film!!! It has a Celtic feel to it, maybe because of the haunting violin.

Beautiful piano work throughout as well.

Everything is spot on.

God what a beautiful piece of music Orlando, from start to finish. Absolutely flawless like a 20ct. diamond.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I hope all is well.

Bear

Orlando51 replied 10th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Bear!

Many thanks for your phenomenal and generous comment! You just have to read the newly written description to fully discover what is that Celtic feel all about!:)

Best wishes___Orlando

ShortBusMusic 8th Feb 2014 05:17 - 12 years ago

on I am Perplexed by laviathin

I see/hear what you mean....sometimes good to show warts and all, hahaha. I enjoyed this one and am not perplexed. Thanks for the feedback again, it is greatly appreciated.

Bear

laviathin replied 8th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

I am a channel for spirit energy was having a talk with the thing that is ? Listen to my other stuff you will get a feel for my nature

ShortBusMusic 8th Feb 2014 05:14 - 12 years ago

on Saxifonic by laviathin

Really nice work, like sitting in on a jam session. Sax is pretty realistic sounding so hats off to you for that...not an easy thing to do. Some of the best songs I've heard were jam sessions, and this is no exception. Hope all is well.

Bear

laviathin replied 8th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Best of luck finding your voice its what we aLL strive for and I am sure you will see your truth one of the days in your existence KEEP BANGIN

ShortBusMusic 8th Feb 2014 04:28 - 12 years ago

on Dont let me go - Larry Wiggles aka Mark Jeffries by larrywiggles1

First thing I want to know, is when this hits the big time, who do they write out the check to.....Mark or Larry, hahaha.

Like the others have said, a few minor tweaks to the mix would take this one over the top. Just a suggestion, but maybe bring the acoustic/vocals up to the level of synths, etc. in the mix. While the acoustic and vocals in the beginning are nice and soft....and sitting a bit to the right in the mix (at least in my headphones), I think they are missing that stereo picture that would really benefit them. They seem a bit flat and mono compared to the rest of the piece.

Anyway, I'm simply nitpicking here. It really is a great tune even if you leave it the way it is right now. Great job Mark...er Larry, haha. I hope all is well.

Bear

larrywiggles1 replied 8th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Bear,
Great to here from you, and this alto-ego of mine sometimes has me wondering who would pick up the money!!! I suspect Larry would win!!!! thanks for your advice and will be taking it seriously, but it also really nice to know that you like it the way it is. Things are fine this end and hope all is well across the water.
Take care,
Mark/Larry!

ShortBusMusic 8th Feb 2014 04:22 - 12 years ago

on Needle and the Damage Done Cover by Darkreine

Hey, when are you guys going to hit the road....I've got a bus I can take you around the country in, hahaha. Excellent work, beautiful vocals, great instrumentation and a perfect job on a really great song.

No critique here Kenny, just massive amounts of respect for all of you and a huge thanks for sharing this one with all of us. I hope all is well.

Bear

Darkreine replied 23rd Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Hey Bear, I might take up on that tour bus!! All credit to Sam and Bobby for a great soundtrack.

ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 03:46 - 12 years ago

on NO to child labour Behnam ZanDi deciBel by deciBel

Behnam, you my friend are a genius....absolutely a genius. I would like to echo Steve's sentiments about you taking up a great cause, and this song absolutely captures the gut wrenching emotion that comes from thinking about all of those kids being forced into slave labor.

This song demands a video!!!! Man, this is so good on so many different levels....and that guitar is just fantastic.

Nothing to critique here, just massive amounts of respect Behnam. And a huge thank you for allowing the download.

And for all of the links.

EPIC work brother, absolutely EPIC

\m/ \m/

Bear

ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 00:51 - 12 years ago

on Booyah - RAW Edit by Polyfronetic

Martin, I frequent Las Vegas, and I've been to several of the clubs there.....an old guy who loves all kinds of music. I can tell you this track, would do really, really well in any of those clubs. Great song, great mix, great master...top shelf material for sure.

Impressive work, and you had this old guy tapping his foot, hahaha. Outstanding effort. I hope all is well.

Bear

Polyfronetic replied 2nd Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

Thanks for the detailed feedback Bear, I am very pleased! :)

ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 00:41 - 12 years ago

on sang av ensomhet by Prelude

Absolutely breathtaking! I can see this one could go in a cinematic direction quite easily....perhaps acoustic guitar playing something in a minor key, then add the pads, the strings, perhaps some light percussion and then fishish quietly with the acoustic guitar again.

Or as StaticNomad and Steve said, you could go in a more percussive direction. It will be fun hearing which way you end up going.

If you want to make this downloadable, I would be happy to give it a go on my end. Beautiful work, absolutely beautiful.

Bear

Prelude replied 10th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago

oh this is wonderfull if you compose for this .
i love to can work with a great artist like you.
please tell me how i can send this cong only for you ?
(ps :would be a wonderful dream if you may accept to work with Crucethus ! because i had told okay to him before you when
i didn't think you may accept to work on this.) (
thank you verymuch for stopping by and kind words .
peace .

ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 00:29 - 12 years ago

on Indiantechno14 by clindsay

Yeah, I have to echo what Mark said, amazing how you were able to seamlessly put all of this together. Ethnitechno might just be the next new genre. If so, you will rule with pieces like this!!!

Outstanding effort.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 27th Jan 2014 22:54 - 12 years ago

on No More Waiting by srbrown7

Hey Steve, great track (I know I hate it when people say that...but it really is a great track, haha). Like Danke said, the bass line is really special, but I've got a soft spot for great pads and this one has some of the best sounding pads I've heard in a while. Mix is spot on and the master is stellar.

I think I'll join Danke in rising and applauding this one. Fantastic job. I hope all is well.

Bear

srbrown7 replied 28th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Bear, really nice to hear from you again..I get your great track comment but I think it's ok when it heart felt! Nice to hear the mix is clean and balanced at your end but when I listen to professionally finished music its still needs "something"...soften the tone or remove certain frqeuencies? Not sure but its not bad for just a home PC. All is good here and looking forward to some of your new work?
Cheers
Steve

ShortBusMusic 27th Jan 2014 22:47 - 12 years ago

on Elahe by FaridHumanoid

Farid, first let me say thank you for introducing all of us to this marvelous instrument. It has a beautiful sound, especially in the hands of an expert :). Like Ed said, it is amazing that this was recorded on a webcam microphone....but also shows that you don't need a bunch of fancy equipment to make a great recording.

Really well done!!! Keep making beautiful music. I hope all is well.

Bear

FaridHumanoid replied 29th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

I'm too honoured because of toye kindness dear Bear, I have to thank you for listen to this and left a comment.
I'm so happy to see all of looperman users like my instrument, I am trying to introducing my instrument to all of the world, and in the world here is the best place I beleive, I'll too happy if can collab with other countries musicers and make fusion music by setar.

TanX
and
TanX Again
Farid

ShortBusMusic 21st Jan 2014 05:32 - 12 years ago

on Cold Nights Mark Jeffries aka Larry Wiggles by larrywiggles1

Candy to the ears.....not sure there is much to critique here. It really is an outstanding piece, almost what I would consider radio ready. Maybe massage the mix a tad, but this really is exceptional (300+ plays in 4 days, not too shabby). You have mad composing skills my friend. Really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

larrywiggles1 replied 21st Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

Hi Bear,

Many thanks for taking the time to listen and comment on Cold Nights, I am really pleased you liked it and will try a slight massage as you suggest. Thanks for the compliments and again for your time.
take care,

Mark/Larry!

ShortBusMusic 20th Jan 2014 16:08 - 12 years ago

on we were supposed to be there instrumental by Tonality

Nicely done. Like the others I am anxious to hear this one when it is finished. And I agree on the great guitar tone. Keep it up!!!

Bear

ShortBusMusic 13th Jan 2014 16:36 - 12 years ago

on Starting todaY- Brandon Michelle ft Behnam Zandi by deciBel

There is not much to say here.....this is absolutely incredible. Mere words cannot describe the emotions I feel when listening to this. Your guitar work is so special, and than you add in Miss Brandon Michell's vocal work, and it is like something from heaven.

I'm on my third listen to this and it keeps getting better and better. This could and should be on radio. There is nothing better than an acoustic and a great vocalist. This track illustrates that.

Since I have no adequate words for this, I will simply stand and applaud both of your efforts.

Bravo Maestro, Bravo.

Bear

deciBel replied 15th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

Bear no matter how many comment I recceive ,I'm always honoured to read your positive idea about my trials .
& by the way did U know fisrt time your faved mark below her only uploaded track made me curious to listen seriouslY to Bradnon Michelle when she has commented for me & I still didn't know her ? master BrandY is a wonderfull singer , & working ith her was a grat pleasure , for ure she will be glad to see captain of American team here .
& Bear,althoughT no doubT it's so great to see U've called me mastereo,buT beyond everything I'm still too young to deserve to be called anything like Master & maestro...if U remember , I never called master neither of U & Ed & Franco ,befpore I know U're all grand fathers..I think a master should have white hair...otherwise there are just few studenT here ...
buT bear U know ? I really feel I don't like to continue music anymore...having no guess if I can be called master someday in future...anyway U deserve to be called master not only for your musical level & knowledge,for your personalitY & expriences all ...so thnX Maestro,thanX ..& best wishes.___Behnam

ShortBusMusic 13th Jan 2014 16:16 - 12 years ago

on Fool if you think its over - cover by ScottFranco

I'm definitely old enough to remember this one, and you guys did it justice :) Put a big smile on my face and made the coffee taste great this morning. Really well done (especially the drums, haha). Outstanding effort gentlemen. Hope 2014 is full of hits for both of you.

Bear

ScottFranco replied 26th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

Hey Bear,

Sorry for not replying sooner. I got kinda backed up.

Thanks allot for your comment. Glad you liked it and thanks for the drums comment. Guess you read Midiman's comment. Sometimes he busts my balls, but he uses my drums for some of his songs, in fact, we just finished one that he should be posting, soon.

Cheers,
Scott

ShortBusMusic 13th Jan 2014 16:09 - 12 years ago

on Farisha and BigPete Military Zone by BigPete

Big Pete, I forgot just how good you are at this music business....extremely creative and executed to perfection. Loved that driving bass line and the snare work. Major creative genius at work here. And Farisha is pretty darn good too, haha. Awesome bro. Hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2014 16:41 - 12 years ago

on Tears Of My Heart by beerling1970

Hey Steve, great job on this one. I know the guy who played the guitar on the Magix loops and he would be pleased with what you have done here. You gave his guitar plenty of room to breathe. You might not know how to play an instrument, but you definitely know how to arrange a great song. Terrific effort.

I've put together a zip file with over 500 of my loops (all royalty free and yours if you want). It's a big zip file - 1.2gb - but you might find something you can use in there. Here is the link to pick them up:

https://www.nortonzone.com/pickup/47701?key=C1GQYpWTGi2BesrdVV3qnzBV-UjsYRJnjHhxCvYKdWjqel2lZV52PSUtYmkaIqjO&;src=url

Bear

Bear

beerling1970 replied 10th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago

WOW that's so cool, I really hope I do your loops some justice Bear, thank you so much mate

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