ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2014 16:20 - 12 years ago

on SO LONG AS by mackit
MACK MAN!!! What a nice surprise to find this one this morning!!! As usual, absolutely flawless. I've said it before, and I'll say it again, your guitar work is just about as good as it gets....move over George Benson, there's a new sheriff in town.

Outstanding effort, and happily downloaded (thank you for that).

I hope the holidays were happy and here is to 2014 being a great year for you and your loved ones. I hope you are well.

Bear
mackit
mackit replied 8th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Thankyou Bear for the professional assesment of this track.I'm always glad to be reviewd by multi gifted musicians like yourself.Hopefuly I will one day get the opportunity to be deputised by MR.Benson. Thanks again Bear. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT. Have a GREAT NEW YEAR.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 4th Jan 2014 16:09 - 12 years ago

on Modnex - Sunny Life by Modnex
Great way to start out the new year....lots of good synth work going on in here. Love the dynamics you used....a lot of people could take a lesson from you on using dynamics to make a point in a song.

I really enjoyed this one. Another solid effort. Here's to 2014 being a great year for you. Hope all is well.

Bear
Modnex
Modnex replied 4th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks ShortBus! I hope this year turns into a great one. Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it and hope you have a wonderful year :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2014 17:25 - 12 years ago

on A Moment With You -take2- by cosmicinfluence
Overall, good work here.

Did you mix the vocals into a master of the instrumental, or were you able to get all of the individual stems of the instrumental and then mix in the vox? I have a hunch you were given the completed instrumental and then had to add/layer vocals over the top of an already mixed and mastered track. If so, you did a good job getting the vocals to sit where they needed to in the mix.

Great flow on the rap portion....the singing vocals seem to need a little more "texture" (maybe warm them up just a bit). Overall, a really nice effort and I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for posting.

Bear
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
spot on bear i was using a fully mastered track to record over. thanks for the input. i know what you mean about the chorus vox. i am yet to learn how to eq really well and use effects properly. things can only get better. cheers bro
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2014 16:20 - 12 years ago

on Uplift your mind by Polyfronetic
Like some of the others, I normally don't listen to trance. However, I might if all of it sounded this good. It really has some complex elements that you masterfully arranged into a beautiful cohesive mix.

I seriously enjoyed every minute of this one. A great way to start out my day. Well done.

Bear
Polyfronetic
Polyfronetic replied 5th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks for the feedback. Always look forward when I get some feedback from "not trance listeners". Glad you like it. :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 08:43 - 12 years ago

on Strong by janis71
Well hello young lady, it has been a while since I visited for a cup of coffee and a listen. A little like Annie Lennox in spots (and that's a great thing).

You never cease to amaze me. You literally could sing anything, any genre, and make it a hit record.

I loved everything about this one. Put a big smile on my face. And your vocal range is breathtaking.

I hope all is well and wish you and your family a very happy holiday season.

Bear
janis71
janis71 replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Happy New Year, my dear Bear !!
I wish all the best to you and your loved ones :D
Long live coffee, music sharing and friendship across the borders !
Take good care,
xoxoxo
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 08:29 - 12 years ago

on You Are The One by beerling1970
While your compositional skills are evident, I think what is most impressive is the attention to the mix. I see you've only been at this a few years, but you have obviously paid your dues because this one is really professional sounding.

Well contructed and well executed. Outstanding effort. Here's to a happy holidays to you and your family.

Bear
beerling1970
beerling1970 replied 16th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you Bear, I have been trying so hard to get something good up on here and all the feedback is so welcomed as without it I would be where I am now.

Thanks mate for you time and comment.

Steve
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 04:37 - 12 years ago

on Dont Look Back by brillbilly
Chris, you know what is great about your page? There is not one bad song in your entire list. Every last song is a great listen and this one is no exception. I'm way too old and feeble to dance, but I can bob my head like I know what I'm doing, hahaha.

Great mix, great production and a thoughtful creation. Well done my friend. I do hope all is well.

Bear
brillbilly
brillbilly replied 31st Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Awww bless ya snugg mountain boots.!

Thanks very much for your kind comments.!

So sorry i missed this comment.!

Thank you and may i wish you and your loved ones a very happy new years!

***chris***
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 04:28 - 12 years ago

on Stone Cold - Cold as Stone Mix - Feat Katie B by Maffin159
Wow Maff, you really took this one to a different plane, kind of a jazz/tribal/fusion vibe going on, and your arrangement is spot on. Love the addition of Katie B's vox on this...gives it just the right amount of dissonance. Like Ed said, I think I'd leave this one just as it is. Perfect work brother.

I hope all is well and that you have a great holiday season.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 04:22 - 12 years ago

on Stranded in time by johnnyproducing
Man, you really have mad skills for someone so young. I would say the future is very bright for you....better buy yourself some sunglasses!!

Outstanding effort. Just keep cranking out the hits. Really well done.

Bear
johnnyproducing
johnnyproducing replied 18th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Haha Don't see myself walking yet like that. But thanks very much for the comment ;)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Dec 2013 06:04 - 12 years ago

on Happy Happy Merry Merry by JacVanBee
Extremely creative, lyrics are a 10, music is a 10, vocals are an 11...nothing to critique here. Just a great song performed really, really well. I look forward to your next posting, and welcome to the Loop.

Happy Holidays

Bear
JacVanBee
JacVanBee replied 31st Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you very much! I checked out some of your tracks, great guitarscapes :) I'm happy to be part of the Loop, very cool place to meet and collaborate with talented people.

Happy New Year!
JVB
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 23:22 - 12 years ago

on Big Reelin by Malfunk
The suggestion to add a few fillers is a good idea, but I would wait until you put vox on it before you do that. It is one hell of a foundation for any rapper who is looking for a great beat.

Very nice work. Hope you and your family have a great holiday season.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 23:16 - 12 years ago

on Caught Between A Rock by Spivkurl
Geez Pat, this is awsome. Since I have to travel north again for the holidays, I will play this one loudly as I sit in the congestion that is Interstate 15. I'll roll the windows down and just smile at the bastards as they stare at me while this is playing, hahaha. GREAT JOB!!! Thanks for the download and I look forward to your next rant :) Hope all is well and that you and the family have a great holiday season. Take care.

Bear
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied 14th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Hey my friend, thanks for the kind comment! Hope you scare your fellow drivers on the interstate! I'm glad you could enjoy this one. I appreciate the support!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 23:01 - 12 years ago

on Wobble by LividKicks
Well, let me first say I know absolutely nothing about this genre of music, but I do know it is fun to turn up the volume to 11 and watch the walls shake, hahaha. I've been to a few clubs in Vegas and this one would fit right in there. Definitely an interesting listen. Hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 22:28 - 12 years ago

on Dark Reign by Darkreine
Well, like Ed said, this gave the speakers a workout, and also sent a few paintings to the floor, hahaha. Never could find the volume button when I needed to. Oh well, got the old motor running this afternoon for sure.

I know absolutely nothing about this genre, but I don't need to when the music sounds this good. Great synth work and a really nice tight mix. Well done Kenny. Hope all is well.

By the way, every time I hear that speech I get inspired all over again. MLK was an amazing human.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 07:56 - 12 years ago

on My Way-Featuring Dj octx by CognacXE
Kind of a dub avante garde approach on this one. Nice crisp mix, some nice work done on it for sure. Nothing to critique here. An interesting approach and an interesting song. Very nice percussion elements throughout. I enjoyed it. Well done!

Bear
CognacXE
CognacXE replied 14th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Bear, I appreciate your input. I always enjoy feedback from a music enthusiast. I honestly am not sure what sound I was shooting for on this one but once we wrote the song we knew it was worth sharing. Thanks!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Dec 2013 04:44 - 12 years ago

on Ode to my mom by musiclover38
Søren, first let me say I'm so sorry for your loss. Words usually fall short in expressing the pain associated with those times. However, music always expresses the emotion.

This is a beautiful tribute and one I know your mother would be proud of.

Words fail me at times like this. I feel your pain. And appreciate the way you have expressed it. Thanks for sharing this emotional piece with all of us. Hang in there. It does get better.

I hope you are well my friend.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Dec 2013 04:35 - 12 years ago

on 100 Seconds spanish guitar dueT of Me ft Mysef by deciBel
My brother Benham, I hope this finds you well.

This is fantastic work, absolutely fantastic. You have magic in your fingers, a feeling that comes only with years and years of devotion to an instrument. This is as good as it gets.

I have been traveling quite a bit, and I downloaded this one to listen to in my car on those long trips (thank you so much for allowing us to download this).

There are times when it is good to simply sit back, close your eyes, and enjoy the show. That is what you have done for me today.

Bravo maestro, bravo! Extremely well done from start to finish. I will now stand and applaud your performance!!!

I hope all is well.

Bear
deciBel
deciBel replied 23rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
Bear first of all excuse me for latency in replY , althoughT I had put this in hidden traX when I felt busy to can answer comments.master if U look to my reply to first comment , and as for sure U remember that clearly , I never didn't call neither of U , or Ed or Franc by this word '' master'' untill I underestood U're a grandpa,Ed& Franco too cause particulary I think beyond skillfull fingers & musical mind , master needs to have more than 60 years old , having white hair & many expriences that I haven't them to can deserve to be called as maestro , or master

Bear first of all excuse me for latency in replY , althoughT I had put this in hidden traX when I felt busy to can answer comments.master if U look to my reply to first comment , and as for sure U remember that clearly , I never didn't call neither of U , or Ed or Franco by this word '' master'' untill I underestood U're a grandpa,Ed& Franco too cause particulary I think beyond skillfull fingers & musical mind , master needs having white hair & many expriences that I haven't them to can deserve to be called as maestro , or master and such great words ... & Bear I'll do my decission about stoping and so will never deserve to be called mastreo as I told U , but me & this track both will remember your generous ecouragements & motivator comments & attempts .the rest in mail..& here just thnx,appreciation & all synonyms...all the bests.___Behnam
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Nov 2013 18:10 - 12 years ago

on 2 Faces of an Hour by deciBel
My friend Behnam, I hope you are well. I finally have a few moments to spare so I can catch up with some of my favorite musicians.

Wonderful track, jazz/fusion at its best. I love your use of dynamics and tempo changes. This is fabulous work....my only critique is the abrupt ending, but that is just being picky :) You continue to perform at such high levels. This is stellar work my friend.

I hope all is well with you. I will return soon. Take care.

Bear

I hope all is well with you.
deciBel
deciBel replied 12th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago
Master ,Hi I was looking to lloperman buT was not online,
when I saw who has commented for me , I was convinced to come to appreciate exclusivelY your critique .
it's very good to see your mastership carefull attention.
yes , I'm agree with U , generallY as U can see in my reply to other friend like Domenico & BrandY my friends or master cunningham,personalY I categorize this as a subordinate level of my trials.and reason is 2 things :
1_usage of loops=nothing is written in this trial , all are loops..not from looperman maybe..but royalty free loops.
2_issues like that true critque of yours + if we think musical form of this trial is ( A _ B + A' _ B' } I don't like the way Part A goes to B or B goes to A or as U say the way trial is going to finish(abrupt was the proper word_and thnX for teaching me a new english word).that still doesn't convinces me . but these reasons made me upload this cause I was sure between U,Ed,Franco,or Dan at last someone will tell me what to do.Bear do U remember when We got friend?when U had written '' not sure if anyone care ''.
I feel the same ..but also I feel'' who is important to care..''?...''what is importance & why there should be any importance ''?...why there is a what and what is whY in our head? ...and I've changed to someone who doesn't enjoy ovations in looperman anymore..even don't feel that mood to
want express myself by music...why we should express ?...why
music should express our subjective world?..why sometimes ''never mind'' doesn't work ?
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Nov 2013 17:54 - 12 years ago

on The Fool by theHumps
Hey Wayne, I really enjoyed this one. Living out here in the middle of the desert, not too far from some pretty cool gold mines and ghost towns, this song fits perfectly. I'm going to download it (thanks for that) and then play it on the IPod as I wander through the ruins trying to imagine what the old towns looked like in their heydays.

Outstanding effort. Hope all is well down in sunny Florida.

Bear
theHumps
theHumps replied 13th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago
You should get a metal detector and find lost gold in all your travels through those old towns and mines like those guys on that Diggers show, lol!

Hi Bear! Glad you liked the track, has a bit of that western feel, guess the electric git has the tremolo and reverb to help with that feel. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on this one.

Wish you allowed comments on your tracks, see you have a new cinematic track, nice dubby, glitchy, cinematic track. Sounds great. So you're on a cinematic fix, can't wait to hear more. I guess I just gave you a review on your track!! I beat the system!!

Wayne
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 22nd Oct 2013 04:34 - 12 years ago

on 100 seconds pianO for thinking to deaf people by deciBel
My dear friend,

First let me say I have not received any of your emails. The only message I got was the one just now through Looperman. I believe my government (or perhaps yours) or perhaps both governments have intercepted our attempts to communicate. So, unfortunately, we may have to only communicate through Looperman. I do hope you have been well. I have been extremely busy and limited in the amount of time I have here on Looperman. Please know that I would never forget my friend, or what you have taught me these past years.

I truly enjoyed this piece, as I do all of your work. You have much talent, and it is my hope, that with your new leadership in your country that our two countries can become friends in the future. Until then know that I will always call you a friend and a brother.

I tried to send a message through your profile but the contact is turned off. Again, my apologies for any discomfort I may have caused in my absense. Take care of yourself, and it was good to hear from you. And keep making music my friend. It makes our world a smaller and better place. All my best.

Your brother Bear
deciBel
deciBel replied 24th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
dear Bear , U know your words all are appreciated and worthwhile for me . and hyour presence makes me honoured
as usual .and I wanted to answer U here , buT I thaught It's not logicall to I share my opinions opposit to Islamic regime of Iran here & as U too have told me many times I should be carefull althought there' ain't happen any thing,but anyway ,I thaught it's better sent U an email and a private message.just here I want to add for sure Iranian nation have greatest respects for all oter nations and American and europe and Asian all are brothers and sister and human kind is totally a unit existance for our nation and nation donoT follow what islamic murder regime tries to
say about many of other countries .
personalY I think human kind is a unit existance and human is beyond his passport , and no heart and no brain have no borderlines like countries and nationality is a subordinate factor for definition of us (humans all) which can never define who we are in facT ..and personally I know many American who I really love them , and many Iranians who I have hated them ...and personalitY & perception are somethings beyond where we born ...and for sure We all know it's not Barry Morgan's choice to attack to Afghanistan...and it's noT Behnam Zandi's choice to support terrorist groups like hezbollah in lebanon & palestine...otherwise Iran & America was calling eachther '' Hello Brother ''......thank U veryvery much for your attention and worthy comment and words which means aloT for me . Bear beynd music , I appreciate your prsonalitY & thaught and perception.best wishes brother.sincerelY.___Behnam
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Oct 2013 07:08 - 12 years ago

on The City Never Sleeps With WEKILLTHEBEAR by Darkreine
Wow Kenny, it's been a while but it looks like you are doing some really great stuff......this is fantastic work. Great band, great vocals, everything about this one says "HIT RECORD" all over it.

Man, there is nothing to criticize here. Just a great track to enjoy my friend. I hope all has been well with you.

Bear
Darkreine
Darkreine replied 20th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Hey Bear

Thanx for stopping by, it's been a while indeed, I hope you and your family are all well.

I got a great vibe from the music when I first heard it, much like your Sandy Hook track when I first heard that.

Thanx for your time bro, appreciate it.

K;)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Oct 2013 06:54 - 12 years ago

on Turpitudes by janis71
Ah, I've been away for a while, and saw you had a new one up. Love the instrumentation....almost as much as I love your vocals. The instrumentation is really playful and skillfully combines (loved those guitar screaches). Really nice mix. There are a couple of places where I would love to have your voice a bit more forward in the mix, but those are minor things.

Absolutely beautiful work. I do hope all is well.

Bear
janis71
janis71 replied 21st Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Very glad to see you back, Bear ! :D
I'm really happy and honoured you liked this and said the mix is nice, cause I know I'm bad at mixing most of the time ( usually do it by instinct ) .
I spent a long time on this song, not really knowing where I was going, just feeling things . And though it's particular and still sounds awkward, my heart is glad with the result .

Yeah, thx Bear, all is well here, despite the gloomy atmosphere of this, haha . Dunno why music and words often draw the darkest side of me .
What about you, my dear friend ? Hope you and yours are in great shape !

Thx a lot for your precious words,
xo

Carole
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Oct 2013 03:48 - 12 years ago

on MY STAIRWAY INSTRUMENTAL by milly
Wow, impressive work all the way around. Drums are outstanding and the lead work is really, really good. Not sure if you guys are in a band, but if not, you just might need to all get together and start one. Some major talent right here. Impressive work. Hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 25th Sep 2013 06:22 - 12 years ago

on Song For A Sister by ScottB55
Scott, what a beautiful tribute to your sister. I'm sure she is smiling as she listens to it (I know I am). You have mad skills my friend, and this track shows them off nicely.

Thanks for sharing this with all of us. Sensational in every way possible.

I hope all is well.

Bear
ScottB55
ScottB55 replied 25th Sep 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks so much, Bear. I appreciate your kind words and compliment to me. It's high praise coming from you. I have been following your talents for quite some time. I also have tons of your loops from here.

Cheers,
Scott
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 18th Sep 2013 08:36 - 12 years ago

on Sandy Hook Elementary Memorial by yalcster1
Sometimes the best songs end up being the most obvious....not sure why none of us thought to put the different versions together.

But I am sure glad you do. Excellent work. It is always an honor to play alongside such greats as Patricia and Marty. Thanks for putting this one together. Beautiful work. I hope all is well.

Bear
yalcster1
yalcster1 replied 19th Sep 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks Bear, I'm Glad You Liked It, As I Said To Dan All The Versions Stand Alone. I Don't Have A Real Audio Mixing Program, So I Used My Video Editing Software...Sony Vegas Pro12 To Mix This. I Think Some Publisher Should Pick This One Up, You All Did So Great!!! Keep Up The Excellent Music

Clay
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