ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th May 2014 05:49 - 12 years ago

on Bhangratechno2 by clindsay
So, there is not a lot that will get me off my duff and up and moving around, but this track did exactly that. And something else, I felt GOOD listening to this...hard not to smile while moving to the beat.

I never pay much attention to genres, but I do pay attention to great music, and this track fits that category nicely. I loved the break at the 2:55 mark, gave me a few seconds to catch my breath, hahaha. I love this tune!!! Added to favorites and downloaded for those days when I don't get enough coffee (thank you for that). A whole lot of awesomeness right here. I hope all is well.

Bear
clindsay
clindsay replied 11th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Bear - thanks very much - the purpose of the track is exactly to put a smile on peoples faces and get people moving so I'm thrilled that you liked it. Thanks for your kind comments.
-clindsay
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th May 2014 05:40 - 12 years ago

on Of darkness and stars by johnnyproducing
Ah man, you are only 17 and you have such mad skills. This really is impressive work, and shows a great deal of knowledge on your part, specifically on the compositional side of things. You have a bright future ahead of you. Just keep doing what you are doing - brilliant work. I hope all is well.

Bear
johnnyproducing
johnnyproducing replied 11th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Hey bear, thanks a lot for the comment ;)
I am still looking to expand my knowledge but that's more the matter of trying over and over

Again a huge thanks for the comment
All is well with me, hope with you too

Greets
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th May 2014 05:02 - 12 years ago

on Hotbird by DESTERO
Really nice work here....I especially liked the way you morphed all of the vocals - nicely done. Great dance vibe on this one, mix sounds spot on. I think I preferred the second half of the song. Much better use of dissonance in the chord progressions. Overall a really well done tune. Congrats.

Bear
DESTERO
DESTERO replied 11th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks Mate,
I build it up that way cause i think it is a peace of Progression to surprise the Listener by a 2nd better half.
Nice to know that you like :)
Cheers,

DRO
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 9th May 2014 16:41 - 12 years ago

on regret buss by ElenaSatine
I enjoyed this Elena, very creative use of a whole bunch of different loops. It sounds like a lot of the jams we used to do late at night after we completed a show :) I definitely am impressed with the way you wove everything together. Added to favorites for sure. I hope all is well.

Bear
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine replied 10th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Hello Bear :)
this is nice to know you've liked it.
i've always tried so hard to make unique pieces
and your loops are awesome for me.
i appreciate your kind words and favorite sign.
Elena :)
ShortBusMusic
Well I know absolutely nothing about this genre. But I do know I liked it. Great vocal work and the music supported the vocals really well. I had it turned up so the neighbors got their motors running this morning as well, hahaha. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
radioilluminati
radioilluminati replied 9th May 2014 - 12 years ago
The genre is very new. It is Ethnic Swedish Power Party House.

Many people think ethnic music is made by people with darker skin playing an obscure instrument out in the jungle somewhere. But this is Swedish ethnic music. haha
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 8th May 2014 08:25 - 12 years ago

on Track 50 by FreeRadical
Catchy title FR :) You do have this way of weaving seamless transitions throughout your music. Mad skills. Maybe you should look into being a DJ. Hell, Paris Hilton is doing DJ work here in the US, and I know you could do way better than she does, haha. And they say being born into money doesn't have its advantages. Awesome work brother. Hope all is well.

Bear
FreeRadical
FreeRadical replied 8th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks, yeah this one turned out ok because i've finally resigned myself to the fact that posting tunes mixed on headphones damages your street cred (what there is of it)
I have since returned to using the sound system and the mix quality is just so much better. The trouble is that nobody ever tells you that your mixdown is crap, so you don't know until you listen to it on the sound system.
Anyway, thanks for dropping by and listening to my epic track.
FR
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Apr 2014 17:17 - 12 years ago

on Schnell by DouglasS
I would have to echo Static's comments. It is obvious that you are an accomplished keyboard player, but also a highly skilled composer and arranger. This one shows a great deal of thought and effort went into the production as well. Like SN said, I love the BALANCE on this one (something many on the Loop struggle to achieve).

I can see this one being a huge success in the many clubs here in Las Vegas. You would have them fully engaged. Hopefully some DJ is listening and will put this one on his track list. Really well done.
DouglasS
DouglasS replied 25th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks for the kind comments. I struggle with balance quite a bit with most of my tracks, so I am glad that it sounds balanced and well arranged. Thank you again for the high praise.

~Doug
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Apr 2014 15:46 - 12 years ago

on Saz Mandolla BagPipe attempt by deciBel
I know you have put your instruments away and parted company with music, but I am still so happy to find some of your work still posted here for all of us to enjoy. You truly have such marvelous abilities and it is such a shame that your circumstances don't allow for the expression of those talents. I listen with both a mix of sadness and happiness. Sad that you are no longer creating music, but happy that there are still gems like this one out there for us to all enjoy. I hope life is treating you well Behnam. All my best to you.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Apr 2014 20:06 - 12 years ago

on Have You Seen My Girl by Mykael
Mykael, outstanding vocal work. I suspect you are trying to mix your vocals into an already mixed track.....if so, it will be virtually impossible to get them to sit in the mix like you want them to.

I'm not criticizing your mixing skills (it sounds pretty good), but I think this has a ton of potential if mixed and mastered properly. That's the nit picking part of the review.

Now for the fun - man you have such great vocal chops. You have the potential to really be a star, you just need the right material and the right studio. You find that and dude, you are going to go places. Just remember I've got a bus and I can play a little guitar and piano as well as haul your equipment, haha.

Very nicely done. I'll keep checking back for edits to this one. I hope all is well.

Bear
Mykael
Mykael replied 15th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
The reward goes out to you for making me laugh so hard, my dog woke up and took notice! (referencing "haul your equipment").

I am grateful for your comments and encouragement. You are among the best artists on this site(IMHO)whose thoughts matter to me, so trust me when I tell ya if there is ever a time when you do need to be "critical" of something of mine you've listened to, I'm ALL ears. With that said I'm VERY happy you enjoyed what you heard.

Love & Light,

Mykael
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Apr 2014 17:48 - 12 years ago

on EXOTIC INSTRUMENTAL by Timmons2
Man Timmons, you are bringing it with this one. As for getting a vocalist for it, I think Carole (if she has the time) would be perfect for this one. Not only does she write great lyrics, she sings like an angel. And she can sing in several languages so she's the perfect candidate for this one. Here's the link to her profile:

https://www.looperman.com/users/profile/855066

This one is a 10 the way it stands, adding vocals will take it up another notch. I'll check back to see what happens. As I always say with your work Timmons - OUTSTANDING!!! I hope all is well.

Bear
Timmons2
Timmons2 replied 16th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks again Bear, you always know how to lift spirits. I may look around for some talent for it. I've already sent it out to a broader spectrum to see if I could find someone professionally. But again, thank you for listening. It is always a pleasure to hear from you! I hope you and your family are doing well.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Apr 2014 16:49 - 12 years ago

on Evolution - ID - Colab Request by 500000
I'm no expert on house, but I like where you are headed with this one. Great intro, and the song has some really strong elements to it. I have a feeling when you add the vocals, things are going to change quite a bit to accomodate them. It will be interesting to revisit this one and see what happens to it. There are some great female vocalists on this site, so hopefully you can find the right "dance partner" for this one. I hope all is well.

Bear
500000
500000 replied 15th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank You !
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Apr 2014 16:43 - 12 years ago

on Acoustic Guitar with Talking African Drum by UChris
I miss Daniel around here, he's such a talented guitarist. You really added a whole new dimension to his track. Terrific work with the flute as always. As Zeerb said, this is nicely chilled - like iced tea on a hot afternoon. Beautiful tone and a beautiful song. Well done.

Bear
UChris
UChris replied 15th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks, ShortBusBear. I value your comments highly.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Apr 2014 16:38 - 12 years ago

on Might of Titans by SubFreq
Grotesk is one mad talented dude. My only complaint is why only 2 minutes long? I would have loved another verse and chorus. But that's a good thing, always leave them wanting a bit more.

Really well done and you received good advice from radioilluminati. People have volume knobs and they can use them - that's why I can crank all of my equipment to 11 hahaha. Seriously, really good work. I hope all is well.

Bear
SubFreq
SubFreq replied 15th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks man! After listening to this track hundreds of times I felt that if I made it 2 minutes long it would increase the chance people would re-play it again. Agreed, Grotesk is extremely talented, after hearing the original instrumental I knew SubHuman could bring out it's full potential.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Apr 2014 16:45 - 12 years ago

on I dont need you featuring Stephanie Kay by RichieWinn
Well, I guess senility has finally set in, not sure how I missed this one but I am glad I discovered it.

This is radio ready Richie, absolutely amazing from start to finish. Sublime piano work, and the guitars, holy cow, a master's class in how to play one.

Mix is perfect as is the whole song. Nothing here but a massive amount of respect for the great musician/producer/arranger that you are. Beautiful work Richie and Steve. I hope all is well.

Bear
RichieWinn
RichieWinn replied 14th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Hi Barry

Thank you so much for the comments - it really makes it all worthwhile when fellow musicians appreciate the efforts made. Steve is simply an amazing guitarist and arranger and class always shows.

Yes, I would love to hear this on the radio!!

Best

Richie
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Apr 2014 16:38 - 12 years ago

on No sleep tonight ft Bonnie Rabson by smallpaul
Now that is my kind of drum and bass! A combination of drum and bass and jazz fusion....I think you might be on to something here. Skillfully constructed, and a great mix. Piano work was spot on as well. Nothing to critique here, just a well done song. Hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Apr 2014 06:34 - 12 years ago

on Illusions by larrywiggles1
Hey Mark, really well done (except for that bass line, haha). Maybe if you still have all the pieces parts you can eliminate that short section through there until the 2:35 mark, then maybe line up that bass line through 3:02 (maybe chop it up a bit to make it fit the rhythm). Other than that I really enjoyed the effort. Hope the knee is better and all is well.

Bear
larrywiggles1
larrywiggles1 replied 16th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Hi Bear,

Great to hear from you, and thanks for your honest comments, glad you liked in essence and spot on with the bass line!! I appreciate your constructive comments and will definitely have a go with what you suggest, a big thanks for that. Knee now full recovered ( unlike me!! ) and things are fine. Hope all is well your end.

Very best wishes,

Mark/Larry!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 31st Mar 2014 17:13 - 12 years ago

on Gentle Persuasion by Tatiacha
Pretty incredible the way you assembled all of those loops and made such a great cohesive piece of music. Great cinematic value on it as well.

I lived in Brookings for several years, and Gold Beach was always a great place for a lunch stop :)

Really good effort on this piece. Keep up the great work.

Bear
Tatiacha
Tatiacha replied 1st Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
I bet Gold Beach hasn't changed a bit! I've only been here a couple years,I am kind of a gypsy
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 30th Mar 2014 06:44 - 12 years ago

on On the Road by MisterAllea
MisterAllea, this is a great composition, that shows a lot of thought - and talent. Beautiful piano work, I always love a piano in minor keys, but when you add the strings, that's where the true emotion of the piece comes into play. I can definitely see this one working in a film.

Stellar work my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 28th Mar 2014 05:05 - 12 years ago

on Here I Am by Holly
Hey Holly, it's Bear here (Barry Morgan). Your voice is better than ever, but you illustrate your mad compositional skills with this one as well.

I figured you would be famous by now (wake up record companies, she's a star waiting to be discovered). Your voice is simply as good as it gets, it really is radio ready.

This song is definitely a "add to favorites" and it really is good to see/hear you again. Beautiful track. I hope all is well. Welcome back.

Bear/Barry
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 27th Mar 2014 02:11 - 12 years ago

on Leaving The Shadow by MOONLYTE
Outstanding work EYEDYE. You have a nice quality to your voice. I think if you had an opportunity to sing this one in a studio you would be amazed at how good you would sound.

This one has huge potential, especially if you want to add instrumentation (strings, bass, guitar, and possibly some percussion). It has an epic feel to it as it stands, but a ton of potential as well if you want to take it to another level. Really sounds like something Coldplay would do (and I happen to really like Coldplay's music). Very nice job. I hope all is well.

Bear
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE replied 27th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks! i had a really fun time doing time doing it, and would love to have it "Studiotized"
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 6th Mar 2014 22:34 - 12 years ago

on U P S O L U T E L Y by GalanticMusic
Love the dynamics on this one....great transitions, mix is spot on as well. No critique here, just a great beat that leaves a lot of room for a vocalist to do their thing. Much respect my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 27th Feb 2014 18:38 - 12 years ago

on What am I to you featuring Pauline Wright by RichieWinn
Man Richie, you never ever disappoint....just stellar results time after time after time.

No critique here, just a big smile listening to real pros at work. You always set the bar so high....and set an example for the rest of us to try and emulate. Awesome track.

I hope the UK is treating you well.

Bear
RichieWinn
RichieWinn replied 27th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Hi Barry

Thanks for your very kind words. Always nice to have a good ear listen to my music. Thank you.

UK treating me well although in New Zealand visiting family at the moment. It's a tough life!! Back to UK middle of March and hopefully get some writing and recording done. Good to be back on the loop.

Richie
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Feb 2014 15:55 - 12 years ago

on Been Missing You - Featuring Patricia Edwards by ScottFranco
Well you two are in great form on this track. Great driving funk/blues/soul going on that wraps Patricia's voice like candy :) Nothing to critique here. Just keep cranking out the hits gents. I loved every minute of it. Hope all is well.

Bear
ScottFranco
ScottFranco replied 24th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks allot, Bear...You're too kind! Glad you like it and took the time to comment. It means allot to us.

Ciao,
Franco & Scott
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 18th Feb 2014 17:58 - 12 years ago

on EXITUS by domr30
Bonjour DOMR. Chanson amusante. Il coule bien et le mélange semble assez bonne. Pas sûr de la dissonance de la protection, mais pour la plupart, il s'agit d'un effort solide. Bien fait.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 18th Feb 2014 17:52 - 12 years ago

on admiration of the nature by deciBel
I've always been a fan of the pan flute, and have listened to Zamfir for a long time. This song reminds me of some of his work. Beautifully arranged as always and such a joy to listen to Behnam. Like all of your work, this one is special indeed.

This went perfectly with my morning coffee. Thank you my friend for the peaceful interlude this morning. I hope all is well.

Bear
deciBel
deciBel replied 19th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
! wonder to discover U haven'T check this one out earier Bear ! I thaughT U had listened this old trial ..anyway many thnx for attention & time Master ...& yes , there's a secundine naturam depth & dimension in sound of Native american & Afro & Zen flutes which sounds hypnotic for me ...this old trial of mine in Bb was my ever first collab in Vocal version feat Mariah Dawn .
& this has made it memorable for me Bear.glad if U've enjoyed iT ,& thnx for sharing your sense with me & us about it. all the best .___Behnam
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