ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic comments on tracks

ShortBusMusic has posted 1167 comments on other peoples tracks.

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ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 00:51 - 11 years ago

on Booyah - RAW Edit by Polyfronetic

Martin, I frequent Las Vegas, and I've been to several of the clubs there.....an old guy who loves all kinds of music. I can tell you this track, would do really, really well in any of those clubs. Great song, great mix, great master...top shelf material for sure.

Impressive work, and you had this old guy tapping his foot, hahaha. Outstanding effort. I hope all is well.

Bear

Polyfronetic replied 2nd Feb 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks for the detailed feedback Bear, I am very pleased! :)

ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 00:41 - 11 years ago

on sang av ensomhet by Prelude

Absolutely breathtaking! I can see this one could go in a cinematic direction quite easily....perhaps acoustic guitar playing something in a minor key, then add the pads, the strings, perhaps some light percussion and then fishish quietly with the acoustic guitar again.

Or as StaticNomad and Steve said, you could go in a more percussive direction. It will be fun hearing which way you end up going.

If you want to make this downloadable, I would be happy to give it a go on my end. Beautiful work, absolutely beautiful.

Bear

Prelude replied 10th Feb 2014 - 11 years ago

oh this is wonderfull if you compose for this .
i love to can work with a great artist like you.
please tell me how i can send this cong only for you ?
(ps :would be a wonderful dream if you may accept to work with Crucethus ! because i had told okay to him before you when
i didn't think you may accept to work on this.) (
thank you verymuch for stopping by and kind words .
peace .

ShortBusMusic 29th Jan 2014 00:29 - 11 years ago

on Indiantechno14 by clindsay

Yeah, I have to echo what Mark said, amazing how you were able to seamlessly put all of this together. Ethnitechno might just be the next new genre. If so, you will rule with pieces like this!!!

Outstanding effort.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 27th Jan 2014 22:54 - 11 years ago

on No More Waiting by srbrown7

Hey Steve, great track (I know I hate it when people say that...but it really is a great track, haha). Like Danke said, the bass line is really special, but I've got a soft spot for great pads and this one has some of the best sounding pads I've heard in a while. Mix is spot on and the master is stellar.

I think I'll join Danke in rising and applauding this one. Fantastic job. I hope all is well.

Bear

srbrown7 replied 28th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi Bear, really nice to hear from you again..I get your great track comment but I think it's ok when it heart felt! Nice to hear the mix is clean and balanced at your end but when I listen to professionally finished music its still needs "something"...soften the tone or remove certain frqeuencies? Not sure but its not bad for just a home PC. All is good here and looking forward to some of your new work?
Cheers
Steve

ShortBusMusic 27th Jan 2014 22:47 - 11 years ago

on Elahe by FaridHumanoid

Farid, first let me say thank you for introducing all of us to this marvelous instrument. It has a beautiful sound, especially in the hands of an expert :). Like Ed said, it is amazing that this was recorded on a webcam microphone....but also shows that you don't need a bunch of fancy equipment to make a great recording.

Really well done!!! Keep making beautiful music. I hope all is well.

Bear

FaridHumanoid replied 29th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

I'm too honoured because of toye kindness dear Bear, I have to thank you for listen to this and left a comment.
I'm so happy to see all of looperman users like my instrument, I am trying to introducing my instrument to all of the world, and in the world here is the best place I beleive, I'll too happy if can collab with other countries musicers and make fusion music by setar.

TanX
and
TanX Again
Farid

ShortBusMusic 21st Jan 2014 05:32 - 11 years ago

on Cold Nights Mark Jeffries aka Larry Wiggles by larrywiggles1

Candy to the ears.....not sure there is much to critique here. It really is an outstanding piece, almost what I would consider radio ready. Maybe massage the mix a tad, but this really is exceptional (300+ plays in 4 days, not too shabby). You have mad composing skills my friend. Really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

larrywiggles1 replied 21st Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi Bear,

Many thanks for taking the time to listen and comment on Cold Nights, I am really pleased you liked it and will try a slight massage as you suggest. Thanks for the compliments and again for your time.
take care,

Mark/Larry!

ShortBusMusic 20th Jan 2014 16:08 - 11 years ago

on we were supposed to be there instrumental by Tonality

Nicely done. Like the others I am anxious to hear this one when it is finished. And I agree on the great guitar tone. Keep it up!!!

Bear

ShortBusMusic 13th Jan 2014 16:36 - 11 years ago

on Starting todaY- Brandon Michelle ft Behnam Zandi by deciBel

There is not much to say here.....this is absolutely incredible. Mere words cannot describe the emotions I feel when listening to this. Your guitar work is so special, and than you add in Miss Brandon Michell's vocal work, and it is like something from heaven.

I'm on my third listen to this and it keeps getting better and better. This could and should be on radio. There is nothing better than an acoustic and a great vocalist. This track illustrates that.

Since I have no adequate words for this, I will simply stand and applaud both of your efforts.

Bravo Maestro, Bravo.

Bear

deciBel replied 15th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Bear no matter how many comment I recceive ,I'm always honoured to read your positive idea about my trials .
& by the way did U know fisrt time your faved mark below her only uploaded track made me curious to listen seriouslY to Bradnon Michelle when she has commented for me & I still didn't know her ? master BrandY is a wonderfull singer , & working ith her was a grat pleasure , for ure she will be glad to see captain of American team here .
& Bear,althoughT no doubT it's so great to see U've called me mastereo,buT beyond everything I'm still too young to deserve to be called anything like Master & maestro...if U remember , I never called master neither of U & Ed & Franco ,befpore I know U're all grand fathers..I think a master should have white hair...otherwise there are just few studenT here ...
buT bear U know ? I really feel I don't like to continue music anymore...having no guess if I can be called master someday in future...anyway U deserve to be called master not only for your musical level & knowledge,for your personalitY & expriences all ...so thnX Maestro,thanX ..& best wishes.___Behnam

ShortBusMusic 13th Jan 2014 16:16 - 11 years ago

on Fool if you think its over - cover by ScottFranco

I'm definitely old enough to remember this one, and you guys did it justice :) Put a big smile on my face and made the coffee taste great this morning. Really well done (especially the drums, haha). Outstanding effort gentlemen. Hope 2014 is full of hits for both of you.

Bear

ScottFranco replied 26th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Hey Bear,

Sorry for not replying sooner. I got kinda backed up.

Thanks allot for your comment. Glad you liked it and thanks for the drums comment. Guess you read Midiman's comment. Sometimes he busts my balls, but he uses my drums for some of his songs, in fact, we just finished one that he should be posting, soon.

Cheers,
Scott

ShortBusMusic 13th Jan 2014 16:09 - 11 years ago

on Farisha and BigPete Military Zone by BigPete

Big Pete, I forgot just how good you are at this music business....extremely creative and executed to perfection. Loved that driving bass line and the snare work. Major creative genius at work here. And Farisha is pretty darn good too, haha. Awesome bro. Hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2014 16:41 - 11 years ago

on Tears Of My Heart by beerling1970

Hey Steve, great job on this one. I know the guy who played the guitar on the Magix loops and he would be pleased with what you have done here. You gave his guitar plenty of room to breathe. You might not know how to play an instrument, but you definitely know how to arrange a great song. Terrific effort.

I've put together a zip file with over 500 of my loops (all royalty free and yours if you want). It's a big zip file - 1.2gb - but you might find something you can use in there. Here is the link to pick them up:

https://www.nortonzone.com/pickup/47701?key=C1GQYpWTGi2BesrdVV3qnzBV-UjsYRJnjHhxCvYKdWjqel2lZV52PSUtYmkaIqjO&src=url

Bear

Bear

beerling1970 replied 10th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

WOW that's so cool, I really hope I do your loops some justice Bear, thank you so much mate

ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2014 16:20 - 11 years ago

on SO LONG AS by mackit

MACK MAN!!! What a nice surprise to find this one this morning!!! As usual, absolutely flawless. I've said it before, and I'll say it again, your guitar work is just about as good as it gets....move over George Benson, there's a new sheriff in town.

Outstanding effort, and happily downloaded (thank you for that).

I hope the holidays were happy and here is to 2014 being a great year for you and your loved ones. I hope you are well.

Bear

mackit replied 8th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Thankyou Bear for the professional assesment of this track.I'm always glad to be reviewd by multi gifted musicians like yourself.Hopefuly I will one day get the opportunity to be deputised by MR.Benson. Thanks again Bear. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT. Have a GREAT NEW YEAR.

ShortBusMusic 4th Jan 2014 16:09 - 11 years ago

on Modnex - Sunny Life by Modnex

Great way to start out the new year....lots of good synth work going on in here. Love the dynamics you used....a lot of people could take a lesson from you on using dynamics to make a point in a song.

I really enjoyed this one. Another solid effort. Here's to 2014 being a great year for you. Hope all is well.

Bear

Modnex replied 4th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks ShortBus! I hope this year turns into a great one. Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it and hope you have a wonderful year :)

ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2014 17:25 - 11 years ago

on A Moment With You -take2- by cosmicinfluence

Overall, good work here.

Did you mix the vocals into a master of the instrumental, or were you able to get all of the individual stems of the instrumental and then mix in the vox? I have a hunch you were given the completed instrumental and then had to add/layer vocals over the top of an already mixed and mastered track. If so, you did a good job getting the vocals to sit where they needed to in the mix.

Great flow on the rap portion....the singing vocals seem to need a little more "texture" (maybe warm them up just a bit). Overall, a really nice effort and I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for posting.

Bear

cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

spot on bear i was using a fully mastered track to record over. thanks for the input. i know what you mean about the chorus vox. i am yet to learn how to eq really well and use effects properly. things can only get better. cheers bro

ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2014 16:20 - 11 years ago

on Uplift your mind by Polyfronetic

Like some of the others, I normally don't listen to trance. However, I might if all of it sounded this good. It really has some complex elements that you masterfully arranged into a beautiful cohesive mix.

I seriously enjoyed every minute of this one. A great way to start out my day. Well done.

Bear

Polyfronetic replied 5th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. Always look forward when I get some feedback from "not trance listeners". Glad you like it. :)

ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 08:43 - 11 years ago

on Strong by janis71

Well hello young lady, it has been a while since I visited for a cup of coffee and a listen. A little like Annie Lennox in spots (and that's a great thing).

You never cease to amaze me. You literally could sing anything, any genre, and make it a hit record.

I loved everything about this one. Put a big smile on my face. And your vocal range is breathtaking.

I hope all is well and wish you and your family a very happy holiday season.

Bear

janis71 replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 11 years ago

Happy New Year, my dear Bear !!
I wish all the best to you and your loved ones :D
Long live coffee, music sharing and friendship across the borders !
Take good care,
xoxoxo

ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 08:29 - 11 years ago

on You Are The One by beerling1970

While your compositional skills are evident, I think what is most impressive is the attention to the mix. I see you've only been at this a few years, but you have obviously paid your dues because this one is really professional sounding.

Well contructed and well executed. Outstanding effort. Here's to a happy holidays to you and your family.

Bear

beerling1970 replied 16th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago

Thank you Bear, I have been trying so hard to get something good up on here and all the feedback is so welcomed as without it I would be where I am now.

Thanks mate for you time and comment.

Steve

ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 04:37 - 11 years ago

on Dont Look Back by brillbilly

Chris, you know what is great about your page? There is not one bad song in your entire list. Every last song is a great listen and this one is no exception. I'm way too old and feeble to dance, but I can bob my head like I know what I'm doing, hahaha.

Great mix, great production and a thoughtful creation. Well done my friend. I do hope all is well.

Bear

brillbilly replied 31st Dec 2013 - 11 years ago

Awww bless ya snugg mountain boots.!

Thanks very much for your kind comments.!

So sorry i missed this comment.!

Thank you and may i wish you and your loved ones a very happy new years!

***chris***

ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 04:28 - 11 years ago

on Stone Cold - Cold as Stone Mix - Feat Katie B by Maffin159

Wow Maff, you really took this one to a different plane, kind of a jazz/tribal/fusion vibe going on, and your arrangement is spot on. Love the addition of Katie B's vox on this...gives it just the right amount of dissonance. Like Ed said, I think I'd leave this one just as it is. Perfect work brother.

I hope all is well and that you have a great holiday season.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 16th Dec 2013 04:22 - 11 years ago

on Stranded in time by johnnyproducing

Man, you really have mad skills for someone so young. I would say the future is very bright for you....better buy yourself some sunglasses!!

Outstanding effort. Just keep cranking out the hits. Really well done.

Bear

johnnyproducing replied 18th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago

Haha Don't see myself walking yet like that. But thanks very much for the comment ;)

ShortBusMusic 15th Dec 2013 06:04 - 11 years ago

on Happy Happy Merry Merry by JacVanBee

Extremely creative, lyrics are a 10, music is a 10, vocals are an 11...nothing to critique here. Just a great song performed really, really well. I look forward to your next posting, and welcome to the Loop.

Happy Holidays

Bear

JacVanBee replied 31st Dec 2013 - 11 years ago

Thank you very much! I checked out some of your tracks, great guitarscapes :) I'm happy to be part of the Loop, very cool place to meet and collaborate with talented people.

Happy New Year!
JVB

ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 23:22 - 11 years ago

on Big Reelin by Malfunk

The suggestion to add a few fillers is a good idea, but I would wait until you put vox on it before you do that. It is one hell of a foundation for any rapper who is looking for a great beat.

Very nice work. Hope you and your family have a great holiday season.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 23:16 - 11 years ago

on Caught Between A Rock by Spivkurl

Geez Pat, this is awsome. Since I have to travel north again for the holidays, I will play this one loudly as I sit in the congestion that is Interstate 15. I'll roll the windows down and just smile at the bastards as they stare at me while this is playing, hahaha. GREAT JOB!!! Thanks for the download and I look forward to your next rant :) Hope all is well and that you and the family have a great holiday season. Take care.

Bear

Spivkurl replied 14th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago

Hey my friend, thanks for the kind comment! Hope you scare your fellow drivers on the interstate! I'm glad you could enjoy this one. I appreciate the support!

ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 23:01 - 11 years ago

on Wobble by LividKicks

Well, let me first say I know absolutely nothing about this genre of music, but I do know it is fun to turn up the volume to 11 and watch the walls shake, hahaha. I've been to a few clubs in Vegas and this one would fit right in there. Definitely an interesting listen. Hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 13th Dec 2013 22:28 - 11 years ago

on Dark Reign by Darkreine

Well, like Ed said, this gave the speakers a workout, and also sent a few paintings to the floor, hahaha. Never could find the volume button when I needed to. Oh well, got the old motor running this afternoon for sure.

I know absolutely nothing about this genre, but I don't need to when the music sounds this good. Great synth work and a really nice tight mix. Well done Kenny. Hope all is well.

By the way, every time I hear that speech I get inspired all over again. MLK was an amazing human.

Bear

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