A Moment With You -take2- - Cosmicinfluence

23rd Dec 2013 15:25 - 12 years ago
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Description : Track Updated!2/1/2014..This is my second attempt at putting vocals on this track by DJ-SLT-UK. I have changed the arrangement and taken away some vocal layers. feedback welcome. Cheers

Comments (17)

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lazyeye1261
lazyeye1261 3rd Jan 2014 21:57 - 12 years ago
Nice old school rap sound to it.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 5th Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
thanks bro. thats the way i heard the instramental so thats the way i took.
anthonyabutler32
anthonyabutler32 3rd Jan 2014 18:31 - 12 years ago
For sure. Just let me know. I'm down to lay a verse on you track...
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
for sure
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 3rd Jan 2014 18:10 - 12 years ago
Last time I listened, I thought the layered vocals really interfered with each other so I applaud you removing some of those layers.

Definitely makes for a less cluttered mix.

I'll be more honest than I probably need to be and say I'm not keen on lots of the vocals though I guess that's just my taste so doesn't really matter. Lots of other people here seem to like them so don't worry about it.

Good work.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
hey static. thanks for the feedback. think it was way too cluttered aswel. and i wouldn't expect anything but honest feedback, otherwise what is the point. i did wonder what u weren't keen on though. was it just the production value or was it the words, or just the general vibe of the vocals.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2014 17:25 - 12 years ago
Overall, good work here.

Did you mix the vocals into a master of the instrumental, or were you able to get all of the individual stems of the instrumental and then mix in the vox? I have a hunch you were given the completed instrumental and then had to add/layer vocals over the top of an already mixed and mastered track. If so, you did a good job getting the vocals to sit where they needed to in the mix.

Great flow on the rap portion....the singing vocals seem to need a little more "texture" (maybe warm them up just a bit). Overall, a really nice effort and I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for posting.

Bear
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
spot on bear i was using a fully mastered track to record over. thanks for the input. i know what you mean about the chorus vox. i am yet to learn how to eq really well and use effects properly. things can only get better. cheers bro
anthonyabutler32
anthonyabutler32 3rd Jan 2014 15:00 - 12 years ago
You did a real nice job on this track. If you ever want somebody to master a track or add effects hit me. I've always wanted to master someone else.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
hey bro. thanks alot. at some point during my next hip hop track i will get in touch. would love to you get involved in taking the sound quality to the next level. hey you never know you might even feel like adding some of your own lyrical flow, i be down with that bro. cheers.
Polyfronetic
Polyfronetic 3rd Jan 2014 00:23 - 12 years ago
I'm no expert in this genre but I like your work.

Cool beats, very good rap and voices.

Really good!
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 3rd Jan 2014 - 12 years ago
thanks bro. working really hard to learn my craft. thanks for taking time out. graham
beerling1970
beerling1970 26th Dec 2013 11:44 - 12 years ago
Loving what you've done with it mate nicely done :)
FAVED

Steve
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 27th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks buddy. Glad you like it.
theHumps
theHumps 24th Dec 2013 11:08 - 12 years ago
The music itself is a bit trippy and when you add the layered vocals it really is a musical journey. I can certainly appreciate the effort that went into all the vocal tracks. Great job, interesting track!

Wayne
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 24th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
nice one thanks for the good comments. will be working this some more so please pop by again. graham
Danke
Danke 24th Dec 2013 08:07 - 12 years ago
This vocal part is super creative from you...DJ told everything about the technical backup (what I don't understand 50 %...this my amateur problem :-), so you have a chance for the pro prod...

Peace, Danke
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 24th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
like to think i am in with a chance but not getting ahead of myself. plenty more experienced than me puttin their take forward. however i like to think its sounds fairly origonal. the chorus atleast. thanks for the feedback. graham
lazyeye1261
lazyeye1261 24th Dec 2013 05:20 - 12 years ago
your on your way. nice
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 24th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
its a long journey though,thanks friend.
crucethus
crucethus 23rd Dec 2013 23:44 - 12 years ago
I like the reverse tape effects, nice rapping, agressive and yet accessible. And a Chorus..my oh my!
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
hi bro. thanks for the feedback. yes i am proud of the chorus. plenty people spittin out old school style rap but the chorus is origonal. thanks for the compliment bro.
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 23rd Dec 2013 21:04 - 12 years ago
well...you`re hearing it from a player who doesn`t know much about hip hop (even though I sometimes layer the beats with all kinds of genres)..and even less about rap....but sounds to me like the genre has evolved quite a long ways...I`m a musician even though I`ve worked on the production side for longet tnan I`ll admit (tape days)..so I cant help hearing what goes into the backing music..the instruments chosen...the way the mix is structured..and the playing...and this one def sounds like it out in front of the pack guys...Some good ideas from artists who know a lot more about than me..but I would be inclined to bring the vocals up a couple of dBs..they are good.....well done...Ed
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
thanks very much for those comments ed. those type of comments really make me want to push even harder. i have only been making music for a few weeks and comments like those ensure that i will be doing it for a long time to come. much love bro
benjizo
benjizo 23rd Dec 2013 20:47 - 12 years ago
I like this man.I can vibe to this.Old school feel for real
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
thanks bro. i am really pleased about all this good feedback. i am still working this one so watch this space.graham
Salook
Salook 23rd Dec 2013 20:01 - 12 years ago
hey bro...I really like the backing vocals you got going down here, the track is minimal enough to get away with all these layers.. great chorus too...well written and performed, yeah man, agree with spiv you re improving quickly...keep pushing bro!
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
thanks salook. chers for being one of my inspirations for starting this journey. dont worry i will keep pushing bro. cheerrs for the input. graham
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 23rd Dec 2013 19:57 - 12 years ago
Like the vocals crossing the tracks. I thought the idea approached with the instrumental worked for my listen. There is a lift vibe from this track that is strange but good. I see her sitting there looking at memories while on the opposite end you do the same. Vivid idea here and keep up the learning process. There is worth in it. Thanks for sharing. Peace.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
thanks for the feedback bro. glad you like it. i will keep working this to bring it to a higher standard so watch this space. cheers again.graham
cjchampion
cjchampion 23rd Dec 2013 18:02 - 12 years ago
I like the intro to the song a lot. This track flowed nicely and yes the old school feel was right on.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
thanks for the feed back my friend. i am a learner and it feels good to get nice comments. i will check out your work soon too bro. graham
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 23rd Dec 2013 16:57 - 12 years ago
Hey this is pretty sweet! I like the sort of old school vibe it represents! Nice style of vocals! You seem to be improving quickly! Pretty smooth!
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 23rd Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
thanks spiv. glad you like it.

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