ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Feb 2015 16:05 - 11 years ago

on The Italian Job by ZankFrappa
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Just sayin'
ZankFrappa
ZankFrappa replied 4th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
And you are right!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Feb 2015 16:01 - 11 years ago

on What Bo Said by ZankFrappa
Most entertaining two minutes of my day (something my wife says on occasion). This was really well done. And representative of many hits from the past. Like TG said, it took some talent to assemble this one. Respect.

Bear
ZankFrappa
ZankFrappa replied 3rd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Actually it took more time than talent.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Feb 2015 15:49 - 11 years ago

on Modnex - CLUB X by Modnex
I think this sounds really good, but I know nothing about house music so I'm not one to ask about the commercial sound aspect. I do know I liked it, and it had my head bouncing to the beat...and that's about as close as this old guy gets to dancing, haha. So, from my standpoint this is a success. I'm sure some others will give you much better ideas on what to add/improve. I liked it a lot. In the end, that is all any of us can ask from a listener. Well done.

I hope all is well.

Bear
Modnex
Modnex replied 4th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks my friend! I'm happy you liked it. Hopefully someone can help with the commercial bit. Making commercial tracks seems to be so easy yet so hard. Perhaps commercial sounds are not as easy as I once thought it was. Thanks for your two cents and have wonderful day!
ShortBusMusic
Hey Mark, nicely done. Just the thing I needed to add to my coffee this morning to get the day started out right! Beautiful composition, well thought out, and perfectly delivered. Chilled as chilled can be :) Outstanding effort. I hope all is well.

Bear
larrywiggles1
larrywiggles1 replied 2nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Hi Bear,

Great to hear from you again, a big thank you and really pleased you enjoyed it. Even better that it went down well with your coffee!!
thanks again Bear,
Take care and my best wishes,
Mark
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Feb 2015 17:00 - 11 years ago

on JAweGuy - Earthly Love by JAweGuy
Beautiful work my friend. I wish it was a lot longer :) I also think it has a place in a film somewhere. Really well done (you might consider boosting the master by a decibel or two to get the tracks overall volume up a little). Those are my only two small critiques of this great piece of work. I hope all is well.

Bear
JAweGuy
JAweGuy replied 2nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Hey ShortBusMusic,

Thanks a lot for checking the track out, it's a pleasure to read your comments.

I'm so used to not having the volume too high as those who use my tracks usually put the volume up for me. I'll see what I can do in future works!

All the best,
JAweGuy
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Feb 2015 16:57 - 11 years ago

on Wont Stop Loving You by BradoSanz
Another chart topper from the vaults of EpicRecord. Man, you really do need to take this show on the road (need a Bus, haha). Seriously, there is nothing to critique in your work. You just need to record these in a proper studio environment, and then shop the demo for the best deal out there. Really, really well done man. I hope all is well.

Bear
BradoSanz
BradoSanz replied 2nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Haha, that bus reference made me lol :P And thanks man, you are very kind!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 28th Jan 2015 16:28 - 11 years ago

on Never Let You Go by BradoSanz
First off, great song. It has everything it needs to be a commercial hit...great vocals, great lyrics, great hook, great arrangement. The only thing missing is a recording done in a quality studio setting and some proper marketing (and a little luck).

I think it is pretty clear that you have the chops and talent to do this for a living. Do you perform live? If not, you need to get your azz out there and start playing in front of live crowds. Build yourself a fan base and see what happens. One thing is for sure, you've got all the ability in the world, now all you need is to put in the work to take it to the next level.

Outstanding job again, from start to finish. I really enjoyed this (as did my wife, and she's no bubblegummer, haha). I hope all is well.

Bear
BradoSanz
BradoSanz replied 28th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Haha, thanks SBM :) I do play live on occasion, but it's mainly just been a hobby for me at this point as I am pursuing my degree in Environmental Science at this point and have been kept pretty busy these past few years :P But music is still one of my first loves haha. Who knows what will happen? Maybe someday I'll make it big, get to share my message to the world. Until then, I am just another college student making music in his spare time :P Thanks SBM, if you wanna download it or any of my music, just message me and I'll get you a link to it!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Jan 2015 16:26 - 11 years ago

on What My Heart Needs--Instrumental by soundhound
Smooth guitar work TG. I keep forgetting my Zoom pedal has the volume pedal.....I always try to mess with the volume knob on the guitar - this was a great reminder to use the tools I have at my disposal, haha. Just a really nice transition there. I liked everything about this one. Great groove throughout. Well done! I hope all is well.

Bear
soundhound
soundhound replied 16th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Bear...Hi
And thanks for stopping in....

Yes...It's so much easier using a pedal more so then the Knobs
on the Axe...
I don't find that the transitions are as smooth, I've got lots of toys
that I've picked up along the way, 4 different crybaby's all kinds
of distortion pedals, Phasers and Chorus's...
All of those sounds and about 700 more are in the Digitech RP355
Guitar Processor... And all can be Modified another 40 ways, so all
that other stuff will end up in the pawn shop, trade them for some-
thing I can use today the easy way...
Glad you enjoyed it...

Peace..TG.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Jan 2015 16:17 - 11 years ago

on That old piano sound by FreeRadical
FR, this is exactly what I needed to get my azz moving this morning, haha. Got a bunch of leaves to rake up and I needed something more than coffee for inspiration. Really solid work as usual. Not sure why you have 40+ plays and only one review...where in the hell is the love people. Anyway, another great track from one of the Loops most creative people. Well done man. I hope all is well.

Bear
FreeRadical
FreeRadical replied 26th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Make that 40 plays and two reviews. I wasn't expecting much of a response on this really as it's just a bunch of loops really. My new years resolution is to get some better VST's and start making my own stuff again. Glad you could stop by and i hope all is cool with you as well.
FR
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Jan 2015 15:58 - 11 years ago

on 02 On n On by Eighteen
Very original and different, and definitely different in a good way. As Joe said, the music world is always on the lookout for something original, something new that we haven't heard before. This is very creative and like the others, I just wish it had been another two minutes longer, haha. I enjoyed this one. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 27th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
haha :D thanks man!
yeah I love to make diffrent things xD

Very maybe I will extend this song later on, now I am also a bit dissapointed about the lenght of the song, also the quality can be a bit better in my opinion.
tnx for the feedback :D

~Eighteen
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Jan 2015 15:50 - 11 years ago

on Paris-Raw Mix by 15ludwicke
Solid, solid, solid work here. It's funny, what you think is raw, most people would consider a finished product. Your attention to detail is probably what sets you apart from most producers of EDM. I normally don't listen to house, but if it all sounded like this, I would be a fan. A great way to start my morning. Well done!! I hope all is well.

Bear
15ludwicke
15ludwicke replied 26th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the continued support short bus! I worked hard on this track and am glad you enjoyed it! Be sure to checkout the finished mix on my sound cloud!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Jan 2015 15:59 - 11 years ago

on Razing Chronos by Byleth
Very nice cinematic track, something just weird enough that it would work for Q. Tarantino :) He loves this kind of approach to music. You've got a lot going on here and have done a nice job allowing each instrument the space it needs in the mix. Well done.

Bear
Byleth
Byleth replied 24th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
I like a lot of Q. Tarantino movies :D

Thanks Bear, Great feedback you created for me.

with all the other peply I did I think i have nothing to add

Good Succes

-ant4505
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 23rd Jan 2015 16:44 - 11 years ago

on Familiar Ground with ShortBusMusic by MWRatridge
Mark, once again you prove your skills as a musician, singer, arranger, and producer. You took something that was really raw and turned it into something really special. Thanks for all of the hard work bro. It means a lot to have you take these songs and make them into something really special. Awesome work. On to the next, haha. Hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2015 17:51 - 11 years ago

on All I Been Wating For by midiman007
Hahaha, not sure how I missed this gem, but I guess coming to the party a bit later isn't a bad thing, as long as I discovered it! Great slide work, and the harp is right on the money. This is one of those outstanding Southern rock songs, with all the chugs and pauses in just the right places. You have mad skills James, and this one illustrates just how talented you are. Well done!!! I hope all is well.

Bear
midiman007
midiman007 replied 13th Jun 2015 - 10 years ago
Shortbussmusic, Thanks for the kind compliments on this song. Sorry for the late reply I did not see you had commented on my track. You are dead on with Southern rock songs. Man those were the days Skynyrd, Molly hatchet, The Outlaws man and many, many more. It was a blast doing this track.
I really enjoyed trying my hand at some slide guitar.
I hope all is well with you and your family these days and if you are up to a collaboration hit me up with and email.
It is always a pleasure working with you.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Jan 2015 08:35 - 11 years ago

on AZZYKO - PUMP IT UP by AZZYKO
Well, I don't know anything about this genre, and after listening to this, I still don't, haha. But I enjoyed it, really creative use of a variety of sounds. Keep on making music. I hope all is well.

Bear
AZZYKO
AZZYKO replied 7th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
It's most important that you like it :) I appreciate you support!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Jan 2015 06:38 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
Evan, I think most of the areas of critique have been covered (personally I think this is really solid work and there isn't that much to critique). Your bass playing is your strong suit, but I think you have a future as a six string gun slinger, haha.

I've had my eye on a PRS Custom 24 for a while, but I just can't justify the big bucks they are asking for it. So maybe I'll hit the lottery at some point and not feel bad about dropping $3,000.

I have a little secret to share with you concerning guitar chords. Instead of using standard tuning - E, A, D, G, B, E...try using drop D tuning (just tune the low E string to D) and then just bar the E, A, and D strings for your chords. Open would be a D chord (works as a major or minor chord), first fret is an Eflat chord, 2nd fret is an E, 3rd fret is an F and so on. You can pound some pretty intense rhythm work just using those 3 strings in drop D tuning. Maybe give it a try and see what you think.

Anyway, stellar work as usual. I really enjoyed it. Here's to a great 2015. Hope all is well.

Bear
Evisma
Evisma replied 3rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the kind words on the track. It is appreciated.

The PRS I got is an SE Custom 24, (tobacco sunburst), and sells for around $800. I got mine from Sweetwater on Black Friday for $400! Not a lot different from the USA made ones besides the tuners and pick-ups, which are easily upgradable, and I think the body thickness. Still, it is smooth and buzz-less, goes from single-coil to humbuckers, just really, really happy. I guess the PRS' are supposed to be the cross between a Strat and a Les Paul? They are scale-wise.

Thank you for the input on rhythm playing. I know drop D very well. Everything I do is in drop C#. Drop D with everything(including low D) down a half step. I think everything I have on this site is in that tuning.

I shall take your advice and put it to good use. Thank you for the help and taking the time to write something.

Take care.

Evan
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 30th Dec 2014 15:31 - 11 years ago

on Moon Cave Rave by GramoChopin
Hey Neo, I'm no expert on rave, but I do have a pretty good ear for quality music and this is really well done. There is an awful lot going on, but you manage to weave it all together skillfully. I liked that change at the 2:00 mark as well...a "happier" feeling through that section, not quite as dark.

I can tell you all of the crazies in Las Vegas would be jumping away to this one. Well done my friend. Mix is special as well.

Happy holidays Neo to you and your family. Here's to a great 2015. I hope all is well.

Bear
GramoChopin
GramoChopin replied 31st Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Well...I hope it sounds good to you SB. I only deal with truth and honesty but it seems like your being honest. Especially with your past reviews. And I'm no expert at rave either, I just love music. Interesting fact about my productions, I rarely ever create by traditional standards. Meaning, I kind of just do my own thing. But of course I still try to implement essential elements with different types of music. Like the constant kick drum hit in a track like this. Or the slower bpm of hip hop. Or the fast pace and roll to a dnb track. Anyways, I keep blabbing on. Really appreciate the listen and feedback. Happy holidays and happy new years to you too! peace
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Dec 2014 17:05 - 11 years ago

on A Lullaby by EazyBeatz
EB, like Pete said so well, you really are amazing. You move from genre to genre with ease, always composing such powerful pieces of art. Truly chilled to perfection. Nothing to critique here, just a massive amount of admiration for your skills. I hope you and your family have a safe and happy holiday season.

Well done!

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Dec 2014 16:26 - 11 years ago

on Slow Grind by ronabo
Hey Robert, I heard TG's version of this, but thought I would stop by to let you know how much I enjoyed your composition. This is tasteful RnB, done exactly as it should be, with just a touch of jazz. Great piano licks, and the strings are like the cherry on top of a sundae. Beautiful work man, really beautiful. Here's to a happy holiday season to you and your family. Thanks for sharing this gem with all of us.

Bear
ronabo
ronabo replied 20th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Awesome comment and feedback. Thanks Bear. Happy Holidays to you and yours too.

Robert
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Dec 2014 16:16 - 11 years ago

on Exit Countdown by Orlando51
Wow, how the heck did I miss this one? I always know when I hit play that I am going to hear a professional mix, and you did not disappoint. But you did something else, you managed to compose one of the best songs I've heard in quite some time. I think TG said this was a highway song, and that is my thought exactly. Since I travel quite a bit to see our granddaughter, I will download this one (thanks for that) to help all those miles pass by enjoyably. FANTASTIC WORK!!! This track belongs in a movie my friend. Happy holidays to you and your family Orlando.

Bear
Orlando51
Orlando51 replied 19th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Haha, Barry...you didn't miss just this one...you actualy missed
quite alot of my newest stuff (with Ed on board) like for example this one: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/161805 or maybe this one: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162598...ofcourse I'm joking and I don't blame you for that because I know myself how hard is to keep the track on all those tons of material here on LM...there's just not enough time for everything..^^
But foremost I'm here now to say big thank you for your generous feedback and I'm really happy that you appreciate the track so much.:)Just drive carefully if you put that thing in your car stereo...I also wish you and your family happy holidays.:)

With much appreciation_____Orlando
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Dec 2014 16:00 - 11 years ago

on Disko DisWay by ScottB55
I'm definitely old enough to remember the days of Earth, Wind and Fire and Tower of Power, and this one would fit nicely in either of their wheelhouses. The percussion on this is top notch (but all of your drum work is so, so good). You also managed to skillfully weave the other instruments around the percussion.

An enjoyable listen, Scott, added to favorites, and a huge thank you for getting my day started off the right way. Well done. Happy holidays to you and your family.

Bear
ScottB55
ScottB55 replied 19th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
And a big thank you for your kind words, Bear, and getting my day started nicely with those words.

Also, thanks for your comment on my drumming. Being a drummer, it's always a very integral of my music, so thanks for noticing.

And a Happy Holidays to you and family, as well.

Cheers,
Scott
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 18th Dec 2014 18:10 - 11 years ago

on Sunday Morning by Musicante
M, terrific work here. This one is one part jazz, one part rock, and one part fusion, stirred up and blended nicely to give all of us a terrific listen. When you have a great collection of musicians such as the ones gathered here, you will always end up with a great track.

Enjoyable from the very first note to the very last. Well done by all of you. I hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday season.

Bear
Musicante
Musicante replied 18th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi Bear,

Thank you so much for your kind words. It really help after getting an upsetting bullying session from another member.

I know you've been here awhile and was wondering how you handle these nasty people. This is my first time. Do you just ignore them or stick up for yourself and your friends? I want to be friends with the members here. I've met some really nice people and musicians who, as you see, I work with.

Anyway, it's my problem, not yours. Just wondering what route to take from an experienced member.

Ciao,
M.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 18th Dec 2014 18:02 - 11 years ago

on Contradiction by RealProblemShuckers
R.P.S., you are a force of nature. I still cannot believe you aren't some experienced 35 year old producer who has been at this for a long time. I had no idea what moombahton is, so I'm glad I stopped by - got to hear a great song, and also a lesson on genres. I like the structure on this one, well thought out, and well delivered. I think the length is just fine, especially since it is a tune that could be playing in clubs.

Well done young Jedi, really well done. Man, by the time you get into your 20's you are going to be dangerous. Outstanding effort. I hope you and your family have a great holiday season.

Bear
RealProblemShuckers
RealProblemShuckers replied 19th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Wowwww, thank you! A warm Christmas welcome to your family as well! Cheers.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 18th Dec 2014 17:45 - 11 years ago

on Claws In Me by Spivkurl
Pat, I think you are a freaking genius, haha. You are like this mad scientist, building instruments, equipment, then applying your inventions in your work. The mix is special, especially with all that you have going on. I love this song. Innovative, avant garde, artistic fusion at its best. Well done my friend. I hope you and your family have a great holiday season. Added to favorites.

Bear
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied 9th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Hey friend, thank you for your kind comment! I have always fancied myself as a bit of a mad scientist, and I can definitely lay claim to the mad part... scientist though, I don't have the college degree. This one was a bit tough to mix, with 40+ channels and all, but the real challenge was being satisfied with the vocals. Had to capture the perfect moment, and I'm thinking it was as close as I could get. You have made me happy with your words, and I appreciate it! Sorry for the late reply. Hope that you had a fine end of the year!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 9th Dec 2014 17:25 - 11 years ago

on Stay featuring Farisha Haque by RichieWinn
Richie, I always know when I hit play on any of your tracks, I am going to get an auditory treat, and a master's class on composition and production. This track continues to meet and exceed the high standards you have set for all of your music. I am constantly and continually awed by your musical prowess. This is beautiful work (it always helps to have such great vocals to work with).

Fabulous from the very first note. Really well done my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear
RichieWinn
RichieWinn replied 9th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi Barry

Good to hear from you and thank you very much for your comments. I always like reading your views on my productions. So rewarding to have one's work appreciated.

Well I think by now you know my game plan with all of this. Keep it simple and let the vocal shine. It's an ongoing challenge every time I put a track together and I always find it challenging to achieve that goal. In this particular case Farisha's vocal is amazing and requires a very sympathetic treatment. Glad you liked the end result.

All good with me. Chester getting colder but off the New Zealand and Australia next February for a couple months and enjoy some winter sunshine. What a life eh?

Best regards

Richie
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