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ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 23rd Oct 2014 03:53 - 11 years ago

on Falling Up by 15ludwicke
I had to listen to another tune while I was here. I see you are still in high school, and that means you have a really, really bright future ahead of you.

A little advice from an old guy who has been at this a while....make sure you keep working on your craft. You will hit some closed doors and get frustrated at times, but keep after it. You have an ear/knack for composition/arranging/engineering. Your sound is current and hip and cool and all of the other superlatives and different too (and that's what the music industry needs right now, an infusion of different). Props man, another great track. I hope all is well.

Bear
15ludwicke
15ludwicke replied 23rd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks man, your words of encouragement really mean a whole lot! Thanks for the support!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 23rd Oct 2014 03:47 - 11 years ago

on Otonoha by 15ludwicke
I see this is one of your first chill out tunes....well, I think you just may have discovered your groove. My God man, this is so lush with this wide beautiful mix. Everything in this is spot on, flawless work. I'm a sucker for great keys and this one is full of great synth and pad work. Definitely added to favorites. Chilled to perfection. Well done!!!!! I hope all is well.

Bear
15ludwicke
15ludwicke replied 23rd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks man! This track really started off with what I had saved as "deadmau5" progressive chords, so I it kinda just came out of nowhere. Who knows, I'm actually working on more chill out/chillstep tracks so maybe it'll take me somewhere. Thanks for supporting both of my tracks!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 22nd Oct 2014 16:20 - 11 years ago

on Mojave Sunrise by Orlando51
It is wonderful to stumble upon this wonderful song, especially since I live in the Mojave Desert and am now watching the sun rise in the east. You absolutely captured the magnificent essence of that moment when the sun tops the mountains. While the desert can be a hostile place, it also has its beauty. Spectacular use of pads my friend, mix is so tastefully done. Sometimes less is more, and this track illustrates that quite well. Definitely added to favorites and downloaded to have it to accompany tomorrow's sunrise. Thanks for that.

Beautiful work Orlando. I hope all is well.

Bear
Orlando51
Orlando51 replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Holy Jupiter, Bear...I remember from past comments that some desert was mentioned in connection with you, but I wasn't paying attention, so I had no idea till now, and..:) this was kind of a surprise..:)So in some way I composed a piece for you without knowing it...haha...it will now have much better
place in it's creator's opus..:)
Thanks alot my friend for this great comment and I wish you beautiful sunrise tomorrow...

All the best_____Orlando
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 21st Oct 2014 16:39 - 11 years ago

on F--- The Machine by failingtimes
One thing is for certain, nobody can ever call your music boring, hahaha. Damn, had the volume cranked and I think I took off the first two layers of paint on the walls of my studio. But I did get the neighbors off their collective asses this morning.

I know nothing about the hardcore genre, but I liked this craziness from start to finish. Well done FT!! I hope all is well.

Bear
failingtimes
failingtimes replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
I have no clue about hardcore either, just picked a genre that I thought would fit.

2 layers of paint, nice.

Thank you I appreciate the comments, I try to make things as crazy as possible, it's kinda my thing. Its even better when other people like crazy to.

Since you liked that cruise of to the old profile when you get a chance there should be something else in there that you might like.

Thanks Again. FT
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 21st Oct 2014 16:07 - 11 years ago

on why cant they stand the sunlight by doudei
As Alex said, your work on the keys is really nimble and smooth. Nice crisp clear mix...really nice. My only complaint was it needed to be another 3 minutes longer, haha. Great groove, executed flawlessly Doudei. I hope all is well and also hope the snows this winter keep you indoors in front of the keys making music :)

Bear
doudei
doudei replied 26th Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
hey Bear
many thanks for your kind words and wishes!

it is indeed getting cold here.
had to bring in some fire wood 2 days ago - we're still waiting for a truck to deliver some heating oil.
also in this kind of situation i always have to take a warm hand bath before attempting to play anything :D
hope all is well there too my friend, take care!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 21st Oct 2014 15:50 - 11 years ago

on Soul of the 70s by ScottB55
As usual, the basis for a great track is the percussion and you did not disappoint Scott. Great basis for the rest of the instruments....there is nothing better than having a great driving beat like this one. I enjoyed every last second of this one. Major props Scott for a job well done. And an add to favorites as well.

Bear
ScottB55
ScottB55 replied 23rd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks so much, Bear. It's always nice receiving kind words from members, but it's a plus when they come from a fine musician as yourself.

Cheers,
Scott
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Oct 2014 16:33 - 11 years ago

on So Deep ft KnowKontrol by RealProblemShuckers
I keep having to remind myself that you are only 11 years old (maybe you turned 12 now). You have a better grasp on music composition than many people who are 2, 3 or 4 times your age. Great mix as well. Nothing to critique here, just a huge amount of respect for you and all that you do. Keep at it - you have a huge future in this business. I hope all is well.

Bear
RealProblemShuckers
RealProblemShuckers replied 20th Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Awww thank you soooo much. And no, I turn 12 in December 30th lol
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Oct 2014 16:28 - 11 years ago

on Memories by AZZYKO
I've always been a sucker for classical piano pieces. Nicely done. I will bet you more than one hip hop beat maker downloads this and incorporates it into a beat or two. Here's hoping they ask first and get your permission. I hope all is well.

Bear
AZZYKO
AZZYKO replied 21st Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Yeah that would be nice. I will make in future piano loops for hip-hop so that's good idea. Thank you for listening and leaving comment! :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Oct 2014 16:21 - 11 years ago

on Masterful Kill vs The Loud Assassins by NativeBrotha
Michael Stokes said it would be good to stop by and give you a listen and I'm glad I did. Definitely a cool mix of oriental flavor with a really nice hip hop groove. Chilled nicely too. Nice crisp mix allowing things to breathe. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Oct 2014 01:33 - 11 years ago

on 31 DAYZ - - Cinematic Halloween Instrumental by JodyJames
I would call this one cinematic hip hop and actually think it would work really well in a film Jody. Definitely has an suspenseful dark vibe to it. Like Dan said, you really did an outstanding job mixing all of the different elements into the music....seamless, flawless execution. Another terrific effort by one of Loops best groove makers. I hope all is well.

Bear
JodyJames
JodyJames replied 20th Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
What's the word Mr Bear...I took your advise on the Cinematic/HipHop...I luv doin these kinda track lol. gets the creative juices flowin...and thanks for the words means a lot...Hope all is well with you and yours also..

Peace Brotha !!

Jody
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Oct 2014 18:05 - 11 years ago

on Peace in you by OrdinaryDude
I have to agree, the violin is the star of this show. Beautiful work throughout. The whole song has a great driving vibe to it, not only good for dancing, but also a great song to plug in the CD player and take a drive literally.....you could cover a lot of miles with this one on a continuous loop. I also like the way you were able to push the mix....not to the point of clipping, but getting everything you could out of it. Nicely done. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Oct 2014 16:47 - 11 years ago

on Looking For You by Spivkurl
You know the bass in a song is good when you can feel it, in addition to hearing it. I love the feeling when the vibrations in your body, haha. And by having the volume up when I hit play I was also able to remove some of the paint on the walls, haha.

Your music is always so innovative, but the secret to what you accomplish is your attention to detail. Once again, you display not only your musical abilities, but your tremendous skills as an audio engineer. Well done Pat. Really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied 7th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Bear, it makes me really happy that you enjoyed listening to this track! It's still really special to me, though it has a very different emotional effect on me than at first, which is okay... I too like to feel a bass, and in a song like this, it's so important for the neurological healing properties. Interesting that you mention details, as it still feels really simple. Thank you so much for all your support recently, and over the years!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 30th Sep 2014 16:34 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity Memphis Style by MemphisB
Nice touch on the bass....different treatment than others have done. Fx is also treated a bit differently. It is amazing how just a small adjustment here and there can really make a track sound completely different.

Very innovative approach to this, and a lot of ideas in here I certainly haven't thought about using. Terrific clarity on the instruments....sounds like you shoveled out all of the mud that was caused by the mids competing for space. Big bold stereo field as well.

The only thing missing for me was the flute at the end....not sure if that was intentional or not. Perhaps you just lowered the volume quite a bit on it? Anyway Memphis, well done. Welcome to the Loop and thank you for entering. I hope all is well.

Bear
MemphisB
MemphisB replied 30th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi Bear
Many thanks for the comments it definitely was a task in EQ . The Flute I had a bit louder to my ears until I mixed it down but maybe as I have played it so much to tune it I sense its there . Its definitely a tweak I would make to bring it out.
Thanks for a great challenge

Memphis
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 28th Sep 2014 16:55 - 11 years ago

on Noi doi - Behnam Zandi featuring Corina Ruxandra by deciBel
My friend, while I understand why you decided to leave music behind, I am saddened by this. Now knowing that Corina is also leaving it behind, well this truly is a sad day indeed. You are both so talented, and two of my favorite artists.

So, I respect your decisions, but hope that someday the muse in both of you will awaken and return to us here at Looperman. Until then, I will download this song and play it again and again and remember the days when Behnam and Corina made beautiful music together. All my best my brother. Thanks to both of you for sharing this wonderful song.

Bear
deciBel
deciBel replied 28th Nov 2014 - 10 years ago
master first of all please excuse me for late responce .
and beyond everythings me & Corina both are honoured to read your positive feedback .
Bear , your kindness is so nice & respectfull to me & I'm gratefull of your attention & all words .
highest respects & greatest appreciations .
___B
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 28th Sep 2014 16:42 - 11 years ago

on ShortBusMusic - Proximal Vicinity - DaveDaG mix by DaveDaG
Dave, really well done mix and master. While it seems close to the original, it is much, much better because you cleaned up all of the mud and muck that was happening in the mid frequencies. Beautiful crisp mix and like Joe said it has a really wide feel to it. Huge sound!!! Extremely well done.

I'm still not sure what is going on with the player here on Looperman....but thankfully I was able to listen to it by downloading and then playing it on ITunes. Thanks for entering and best of luck. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 28th Sep 2014 16:37 - 11 years ago

on ShortBusMusic - Proximal Vicinity - DaveDaG mix by DaveDaG
Man, this is too weird. For some reason I can't get any sound when I play this track. I thought it might be my computer, but I went to my site and clicked on some of my tunes and I heard them just fine. For some reason, nothing but silence here. I will keep checking back to see if I can hear something. In the meantime I will download it and see if I can listen on ITunes or something. I'll get back to you.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Sep 2014 15:37 - 11 years ago

on Money On My Mind -2 by JodyJames
I've listened to your music for a long time Jody, and this one is about as good as it gets. You are a monster dude!!! Tight mix, great composition....cannot believe some great rapper doesn't jump all over this one (maybe EYEDYE did something for you).

Added to favorites for sure. Great example to all the "wannabes" on how to construct a killer hip hop track. Well done Jody. I hope all is well.

Bear
JodyJames
JodyJames replied 30th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Mr. Bear!! I appreciate the kind words bro!!...your 1 of my favs here on Looperman....your a great talent...so it means a lot coming from you. thanks friend

Peace !!

Jody
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Sep 2014 15:27 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity-SBM-EPYKmuzik Remaster by ThaEpyk1
Sometimes simple and using basics can be really effective, and in this case you did a really nice job. For someone who has only been focusing on mixing and mastering for a few months.....you flat nailed it :) Stellar work on this one. All of the instruments can be heard really well in this mix, there is no mud in the mids, and I love the way you emphasized the flute in the final stanza. Great job my friend. This is going to be tough to pick a winner. I hope all is well.

Bear
ThaEpyk1
ThaEpyk1 replied 26th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you so much!! I was really nervous uploading this, and then listening to the other entries..I didn't think I stood a chance at first, so thank you very much! It means a lot! and also, thanks for a great starting point! you can't get a great mix without great instrument tracks to start from!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 25th Sep 2014 03:28 - 11 years ago

on House Full Of Lonely by Twanna1
I just had to stop by and grab a copy of this amazing song (thank you so much for the download) and once again tell you that the world is a better place because of your music. My wife sends her best and thanks you for a great track for the two of us to dance to :) I hope all is well.

Bear
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 26th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
You two are so lovely...you always touch my heart:-)

Much love to you both!!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Sep 2014 15:59 - 11 years ago

on joes real final minimal master - SBM comp by joecramer
I meant to say "playing a Dminor" instead of "playing Da minor", hahaha.
joecramer
joecramer replied 24th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Yo bro, play da minor! :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Sep 2014 15:58 - 11 years ago

on joes real final minimal master - SBM comp by joecramer
Hey Joe, I would have to agree with Orlando and say that this is your best effort to date. The approach was different and I think the mix is really nice and crisp. I think the harmonic dissonance that Alex mentions is actually in the stems itself and was intentional. The one electric guitar is playing Da minor progression while the acoustic is playing a Dmajor. It sounds like a wrong note, but was intentional. To eliminate it, you could remove the third note in the Dminor chord, or pitch it up a half step to a major. My suggestion would be to remove the note each time that guitar plays the Dminor. Other than that, this is a stellar job by you. Thanks for the interest and for working so hard on this. I hope all is well.

Bear
joecramer
joecramer replied 24th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Bear

This wasnt real hard working. Sure it was a lot of work but i enjoyed it.

But this -kill the 3rd note- sounds like a lot of hard work ....

I´m not sure what i will do

stay tuned
joe
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 23rd Sep 2014 15:54 - 11 years ago

on Sapphire On Silk by MWRatridge
Hey Mark, tasty little combination of jazz and blues my friend. Guitar work is stellar as usual, and your vocal work is always special....a combination of ministry, gin, and cigarettes - you are one of the greatest blues vocalists around.

Really nicely done Mark. Definitely added to favorites. I hope all is well brother. Here's to a mild winter packed with a ton of music.

Bear
MWRatridge
MWRatridge replied 29th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Bear,
Long time old friend. I'll bet you are embracing Grandparenthood like a champ.
TY for the kind words my man. Respect.
In February I had an accident with my table saw on my left hand. 3 surgeries and 7 months later (with endless practise) I am actually better now than I was before it happened. It scared the crap outa me. Middle finger has a screw now - titanium…so does that make me a legitimate cyborg?
My man, Jesus got me through it.
Peace out.
Mark.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 23rd Sep 2014 15:43 - 11 years ago

on PROXIMAL VICINITY zombmix by zombieme
Ahhh, another really solid job. Beautiful wide mix, with great clarity on the instruments. All of them have room to breathe......bass is good and solid as well. Nice use of dynamics at 3:10 to transition into the final segment, and the work you did with the ending as well.

Not a lot to critique on this one. It is a really good mix. You overcame the majority of the "problems" presented with the stems. Terrific effort. Thanks for entering. I hope all is well.

Bear
zombieme
zombieme replied 23rd Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
hey thanks man, it was a good exercise for me and the fact that you like the mixdown has reaffirmed to me that I'm actually getting quite good at mixing.

I did my usual standard mixdown on this. My own stuff is a lot more minimal and less musical electronica so it's easier to mix. This was quite challenging but it's nice to know that my technique kinda works.

Thanks for the opportunity and the lesson. Z
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 22nd Sep 2014 15:52 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity Mix Comp by Livingsoulsdie
Hey Kevin, first let me say thank you for jumping in the competition with both feet. I would have to echo what Orlando and Alex said. Perhaps a bit too much reverb and a focus on the higher end leaves the bottom end a little light for my tastes. Some of the stems in this one had quite a bit of reverb on them (the acoustic guitars), so it is easy to muddy things up with them.

As Orlando stated, it isn't about winning, but about trying something different and seeing what happens. For this to be only your second attempt at mixing and mastering, I would say you did really well. It truly is an artform in itself, and something that all of us struggle with on a daily basis. I think overall you did a good job considering the many challenges this track presented. Well done my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
I don't know much about dubstep, but I do know a well constructed, well mixed and well mastered song when I hear one. Dubstep is not easy to mix and master, due to the usual focus on dominating bass and huge dynamics. You managed to focus on each element, allow them plenty of room to breathe, and then put them all together in a marvelous cohesive way.

You flat nailed this one. All of the hours you spent on it truly paid off with a terrific result. Outstanding effort. I hope all is well.

Bear
Livingsoulsdie
Livingsoulsdie replied 12th Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks short bus for listening to the track. I always appreciate your feedback.
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